Module 11 Photos 同步作文讲解练习（含答案）

Module 11
Writing
话题分析
本模块以“photos”为话题，通过介绍摄影比赛的作品，让学生学会如何对某一张照片进行描述。摄影是我们日常生活中常谈论的话题。本模块常见的命题形式：描述某张照片，如它的来源、照片上的人物、关于这张照片的故事等。当然，也可和“看图作文”结合起来考查。通过本模块的学习，学生应能就某一张照片用简单的who，which或that引导的定语从句进行描述，包括照片上的人物、该照片背后的故事等。
常用表达
1. It’s subject is... 它的主题是……
2. How nice the photo is! 多么精彩的照片啊！
3. Compared with other photos, this one is more interesting. 和其他照片相比，这张更有趣。
4. The photo shows the different colours on the hill. 这张照片展示了山的不同颜色。
5. The photo shows a person who is... 这张照片展示了一个……的人。
6. The photo was taken by... 这张照片是由……所拍。
7. The photo was taken in 2016. 这张照片拍摄于2016年。
8. I like the photo because... 我喜欢这张照片是因为……
9. Though..., I like it very much. 尽管……，我仍然非常喜欢它。
实例分析
典型例题
假设你去年到长白山旅游时，拍到了许多照片，其中就有一张是你最喜欢的相片。请以“My favourite photo”为题，写一篇90词左右的英语短文。
参考词汇：天池Heavenly Lake；展览exhibition。
思路点拨
1. 体裁：记述文；2. 人称：第一人称；3. 时态：一般现在时+一般过去时。
写作模板
交代背景 Last summer I went to...
点明内容 The photo which I like best shows…
说明理由 I like it because…
连句成篇
My favourite photo
Last summer I went to Changbai Mountain which is famous in the whole world. I went there with my parents. I took many photos there. The photo I like best shows the water of Heavenly Lake. I like it because the water in it looks very clean. You can even see some stones clearly in the water. I had never seen such clean water before. The scenery in the photo is very beautiful.
The photo makes me remember the trip forever. From the photo, I know how great our country is. I’m proud of my country. What a nice photograph it is!
【好题在线】
你校学生会决定举行一次学生摄影比赛。假设你是此次比赛的策划人员之一，请根据以下提示写一份通知，告知同学们比赛的具体情况。80～100词(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
提示：1.作品主题：寻找最美丽的校园风景(campus scenery)；
2．作品要求：
①每人最多提交六张尺寸为9cm×13cm的照片；
②参赛作品必须原创且有创意；
3．上交日期：10月31日之前；
4．奖项设置：一等奖 3名，二等奖 5名，三等奖 10名。所有获奖作品(prize winning works)都会在11月12日展示出来。
NOTICE
Dear boys and girls，
Our school has decided to hold a students' photo competition.Here is some information about the competition.
We're looking forward to your great works!
Students' Union
【话题分析】
本模块的话题为“学校生活”，其中着重讲照片、摄影等方面。其常见的命题形式有：1.描述最喜爱的照片及理由；2.谈论有关摄影的话题。
【佳作欣赏】
NOTICE
Dear boys and girls，
Our school has decided to hold a students' photo competition.Here is some information about the competition.
First，① we need photos that can show the most beautiful campus scenery.② Second，① the competitors can hand in at most six photos，and the size should be 9cm×13cm.③ Third，① the photos must be taken by yourself and they should be creative.④ Fourth，① all the photos must be handed in before 31st October.Finally，① we will choose three best photos as first prize，five as second prize and ten as third prize.⑤ All the prize winning works will be on show on 12th November.
We're looking forward to your great works!
Students' Union
【精彩点评】
①文章涉及作品主题、作品要求、上交日期和奖项设置等方面，但通过使用first、second、third、fourth和finally等副词，使得文章层次清晰。
②that引导的定语从句使文章结构紧凑；形容词最高级的使用提升了文章的档次；need和show两个动词的使用准确恰当，巧妙地将“寻找最美丽的校园风景”转化为that引导的定语从句，符合英语表达中多用长句的习惯。
③丰富的词汇和多变的主语是本文最大的亮点：competitor意为“参赛者”，与题设中的“每人”相比，更加具体准确。hand in意为“提交”，at most意为“至多”，此处将题设拆分成and连接的两个并列句，语意更加清晰明了。
④by oneself意为“独自”，此处使用被动语态和“by oneself”结构准确地表达了“原创”的含义。表示要求建议时通常会用到情态动词，如：can、should、must等，从而使说话人的语气更加明确。
⑤choose…as…意为“把……选作……”，此句是一个省略句，省略了重复的choose和photos，使文章读起来自然流畅。
范文欣赏
（一）
艾米 金（Amy Kim）是当今世界上最出名的中国摄影师之一，她的一些作品将于近日在丽都画廊（Lido Gallery）展出。假如你是《学英语》的小记者，请你根据下面的提示就这次摄影展写一段评论报道。词数：80左右。
提示：1. 这次将展出她的部分最受欢迎的摄影作品；2. 有许多优秀的人物照和乡村照；3. 每个人都能从中找到自己喜欢的摄影作品；4. 艾米 金的少数城市题材摄影作品，人们不是非常感兴趣；5. 这是世界级别的摄影大师的一次展出。
There will be an exhibition at the Lido Gallery. Be sure to see it. Amy Kim is one of the best known Chinese photographers in the world today, and some of her most famous photographs are on display in this exhibition. She really has something for everyone. There are many great photos of people and of the countryside. The few city photographs are less successful and they don’t interest visitors as much. But this is a great show from a world-class photographer. Whatever you do, don’t miss this exhibition.
（二）
假设你们学校将在12月21日举行一次学生摄影比赛，你是此次比赛的策划人。请根据以下要点提示写一份通知，告知学生们比赛的具体情况。80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要点提示：1. 作品主题：我们的美丽校园(campus)；2. 作品要求：每位学生最多(at most)提交两张尺寸为9cm×13cm的原创照片；3. 作品投稿截止日期：12月1日；4. 奖项设置：一等奖2名，二等奖3名，三等奖5名，所有获奖作品(prize－winning works)将会在12 月25日展示出来。
Dear boys and girls,
Our school has decided to hold a students' photo competition on 21st December. Here is some information about the competition. First, the photos should show our beautiful campus. Second, every one of you can hand in at most two photos that should be taken by yourselves, and the size of the photos should be 9cm×13cm. Third, the last date that you should send your photos on is 1st December. Finally, we will choose two photos as first prize, three as second prize and five as third prize. All the prize winning works will be on show on 25th December.
We’re looking forward to your great works！
（三）假设你在学校举办的摄影比赛中获得了最佳摄影奖，并将在颁奖典礼上发言。请根据下列提示写一篇80词左右的英文发言稿，内容可以适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
提示：1. 你对这次获奖感到非常幸运；2. 你想感谢你的老师们，他们鼓励你参赛并教给你许多拍照技巧；3. 你想感谢你的叔叔，他在你13岁生日时送给你一台照相机。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good afternoon! I am lucky to have won the photo competition in our school. First, I’d like to thank my teachers. They encouraged me to enter the competition and also taught me many skills in taking photos. Then, I’d like to thank my uncle. At the age of 12, I became interested in taking photos. When I was 13, he gave me a camera as my birthday present. Since then, I have become more and more interested in taking photos.
Thanks!
三
现在的学生大部分都喜欢旅游拍照。假设你去年暑假去了杭州西湖旅游，拍了许多美丽的风景照，请以“My Favourite Photo”为题，详细描述其中最喜欢的一张照片。词数80左右。
内容包括：1. 照片拍摄的日期、地点、人物；2. 详细描述照片内容；3. 表明自己是否喜欢摄影，并说明理由。
Last summer holiday, I paid a visit to the West Lake which is very famous in China. I stayed there for four days and took a lot of beautiful photos.
The subject of the photo that I like best is about nature. It shows the water is very clean and the sky is quite blue and nice. There is a lovely girl who is sitting on the stone bench and smiling happily.
The photo is so beautiful that it makes me think of the travel there. The West Lake in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province, is one of the most beautiful sights in China, and Hangzhou is a clean and comfortable city for living and traveling.
I love taking photos because it can make me remember the wonderful trip forever. According to the photos, I know how great our country is and how happy my life is!