2023年中考英语万能黄金作文模板
(通用版)
第一部分
应用文之申请信体裁解读及写法点拨
①申请信是在求职或申请留学时常用的一种信件。
②申请信应该简洁明了,如实地反映你的才能、成绩、愿望和目标。
③一封英文申请信必须表明写信的目的、原因以及对自身情况的介绍。
④申请信的语气要诚挚、友好,在表达自己的愿望时应礼貌而自信。
第二部分
应用文之申请信万能黄金模板
Dear ,
①I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of (工作、职位等)./I write to express my interest in (工作、职位等)./In reply to your advertisement in (地方),I write the letter..
② My name is .One of my reasons for applying is that (原因一)The other reason is that (原因二)Besides, .(原因三)
③l hope you will be kind enough to consider my application.Thank you for your consideration.
Best regards for your health and success.
Sincerely yours,
(署名)
注:
①点明写信目的
②介绍自己,说明能胜任的原因
③表达期望
模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
第三部分
必备词汇与套用句型
必备亮点词汇
imagination n.想象力 creativity n.创造力 strength n.长处,优点
interesting adj.有趣的 answer n.&v.回应,答复 hard-working adj.勤奋的,努力的
offer v.提供 application n.申请 advertisement n.广告
especially adv.尤其 reply n.&v.回复,回应 convenience n.方便
interest n.兴趣 activity n.活动 volunteer n.志愿者
major in...主修······ in one's spare time 在某人业余时间 have a good command of掌握,精通
经典套用句型
闪亮篇首句
I write to express my interest in..我写信是为了表达我对······的兴趣。
In reply to your advertisement in..., I write the letter.我写这封信是为了回应您在······的广告。图解
I am writing to tell you that I am suitable for the job you are advertising.我写信是告诉您我符合您招聘广告中的要求。
I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of...我写这封信是想询问一下能否·.....
出彩篇中句
I learned from the newspaper that your company needed a part-time English secretary.
我从报纸上看到您的公司需要一名兼职英语秘书。
I have a good command of...我······掌握得很好。
In my spare time,I read a lot.我在闲暇时经常读书。
If I get the job, I am sure that I can live up to your expectation.
如果我能得到这份工作,我肯定我不会辜负您的期望。
精彩篇尾句
I hope you will consider my application.希望您能考虑我的申请。
I shall be very grateful if you will offer me an opportunity to an interview.如果您能给我提供一个面试机会,我将不胜感激。
Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you.感谢您考虑我的申请,期待得到您的回复。
I hope you'll let me join your volunteer group.我希望您能准许我加入您的志愿者团队。
I'm looking forward to your reply.期待您的回复。
第四部分
模板范文演练
(温州)美中文化交流中心(ACCEC)暑假将组织学生来华学习、交流,现正在中国招募志愿者,帮助他们学习中文。假如你是扬帆中学的学生李平,请按要求给该项目负责人Mr.Miller写一封申请信。
内容包括:
1.申请担任志愿者;
2.说明自己乐于助人、擅长中文;
3.谈谈学好中文的方法;
4.······
参考词汇:volunteer,be good at,improve,culture
注意:
1.申请信需要涵盖以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3.词数:110词左右。开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr.Miller,
I'm Li Ping from Yangfan Middle School.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours truly,
Li Ping
万能模板套用分析
首先,说明写作目的,点明主题。→主题
其次,陈述胜任该岗位的原因。→原因
最后,表达感谢。→感谢
满分范文
Dear Mr.Miller,
I'm Li Ping from Yangfan Middle School.Hearing that ACCEC wants some volunteers in this summer vacation,I'm writing to express my interest in the position.①
One of my reasons for applying for the position is that I have a good command(短语优先原则。)of Chinese,especially Chinese writing.(句式多变原则,that引导表语从句。)②Last month, I attended the New Concept Composition Contest as the representative of our school and won the second prize.The first step to learn Chinese well is getting to know the rules of pinyin.Learning basic Chinese characters and daily words also helps master the language quickly.③ If I get the job, I am sure that I can live up to(短语优先原则。)your expectation.④
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours truly,
Li Ping
你也可以这样表达
①I'm writing to apply for the position.
②I have a good command of Chinese, especially Chinese writing,and that is why l apply for the position.
③ It is also helpful to learn basic Chinese characters and daily words.
④I will not let you down if I get the job.
范文译文
亲爱的米勒先生:
我是李平,来自扬帆中学。听说美中文化交流中心正在招募暑期志愿者,我写信表达我对这个职位的兴趣。
我申请这个职位的一个原因是我很擅长中文,特别是中文写作。上个月,我代表我们学校参加了新概念作文大赛,并获得了二等奖。学好汉语的第一步是了解拼音的规则。学习基本的汉字和日常用语也有助于尽快掌握这门语言。如果我能得到这份工作,我肯定我不会辜负您的期望。
谢谢您的考虑。
您真诚的,
李平
第五部分
热点话题满分叙事记叙文必背
一
假如你是李华,你的美籍朋友Peter得知北京奥组委正在招募2022年北京冬奥会(Beijing 2022 Winter Olympic Games)志愿者,他发邮件邀你共同申请。请你写一封邮件回复:是否同意,以及你的理由。
提示词语:apply(申请),be good at, communicate, have a try
提示问题:·Will you join Peter in applying for a volunteer position
·Why or why not
Dear Peter, It’s always great to hear from you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua
【答案】[例文]
Dear Peter,
It’s always great to hear from you. I’m more than happy to join you in applying for a volunteer position in Beijing 2022 Winter Olympic Games. You know, I’m good at English, which makes it possible for me to communicate with people from other countries. I’m really looking forward to the unique experience.
Let’s have a try. And I can’t wait to discuss the application details with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本题为电子邮件写作,要注意标准的电子邮件格式。题目已给出问题提示,要求以提示为思路,写出回复彼得关于冬奥会志愿者申请邀请的邮件。
2.写作指导:写作时人称应用第一人称,时态应用现在时。写作内容大致分为两部分,即你是否接受他关于冬奥会志愿者申请的邀请,以及你对此的理由。文章应层次分明,思路清晰,态度鲜明,不要出现单词拼写及语法错误。
二
今年,学校延时服务将开办各种俱乐部,丰富中学生课余生活。假设你是张华,想申请加入其中的DIY俱乐部,并草拟了申请信的流程图。请根据下图写一封英语申请信。
注意事项:
1. 申请信须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 词数80个左右,申请信的首尾已在答题卷给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
4. 文章内容必须写在答题卷指定的位置上。
Dear chairperson,
I’m Zhang Hua in Grade 8. I’d like to join the DIY Club.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’ m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear chairperson,
I’m Zhang Hua in Grade 8. I’d like to join the DIY Club.
I’m friendly and helpful. I like making things by myself in my free time. I want to join the club because I’m crazy about DIY and hope to make more friends. I made a sandwich for my mum on her birthday. First, I picked a piece of bread. Then I put some tomato sauce, ham and vegetables on it. At last, I put another piece of bread on it. Mum liked the sandwich very much and I felt happy.
I’ m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:这是一篇图表类提纲作文,写作时要按邮件格式写,文章已经给出开头结尾,题目要求围绕提示内容写作,第一段已经给出,进行简要的自我介绍,以及说明来意。第二段需详细介绍自己的性格、爱好以及想要加入的原因,最后讲述关于自己的DIY故事。第三段已经给出,表达希望得到对方的回复。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来写作,时态采用一般现在时为主,描述自己的DIY故事时需运用到一般过去时,并注意描述步骤时需用到相关连接词,使得行文更加流畅。
三
假设你是王刚,在网上看到了Wild Animals Club (野生动物俱乐部) 招募志愿者的广告。请你用英语写一封信给俱乐部主席Mr. Black,申请加入该俱乐部。请根据表格信息和提示完成申请信。
学校 Sunshine Secondary School
年级 Grade 9
品德 hard-working , helpful
爱好 basketball , travelling
申请理由 ……
联系方式 025—87654321,wanggang@sunshinetown.com
注意:1. 文章中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 申请信须包括表格中所有要点,申请理由2至3条,可适当发挥;
4. 词数80左右,信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Black,
I read your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to join the Wild Animals Club.
Yours sincerely,
Wanggang
【答案】
Dear Mr. Black,
I read your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to join the Wild Animals Club. I am a student in Grade 9 at Sunshine Secondary School. I am very hard-working and helpful.
I love playing basketball and traveling. I love animals all the time. I would like to learn more about them. Also, I hope to do something for them because I think animals are our friends. It’s important for us to get on well with each other.
I hope to be a member of your club. You can call me on 025-87654321 or email me at lihua@ sunshinetown. com.
Yours sincerely
Wanggang.
【解析】这是一篇图表,要求介绍自己。动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称,一般现在时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
hard-working努力工作的;hope to do希望做某事;each other互相
四
在京某大学的部分留学生将要来你校访问。学校英语社团正在招募志愿者承担接待工作。 假如你是李华,请用英语给社团负责人 Peter 写一封申请信,介绍你的个人优势,以及你申请的理由。
提示词语: speak English well, help, get along well with, improve, bring
提示问题:
● What are your strong points
● Why do you want to do the work
Dear Peter ,
I’m writing to apply for the volunteer. My name is Li Hua , from Class 1, Grade 3
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours ,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to apply for the volunteer. My name is Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 3.
I think I’m the right person because I have many strong points. First of all, I do well in English and my oral English is quite good. Besides, I’m always ready to help others and good at working with people and I have been a volunteer before. What’s more, I’m outgoing and it will be no problem for me to get along well with foreigners.
I want to do the work because it’s a great chance to improve my English. Most importantly, I think it’s my honor to introduce Miyun and our school to the foreign friends. I want to bring happiness to them, too.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,在京某大学的部分留学生将要来你校访问。学校英语社团正在招募志愿者承担接待工作。假如你是李华,要求你根据提示词语及问题用英语给社团负责人Peter 写一封申请信,介绍你的个人优势以及你申请的理由。首先要注意申请信的格式,然后认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。
2.例文点评:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点:
短语:write to,do well in,be ready to,get along well with,want to do,look forward to。
句型:I think I’m the right person because I have many strong points. 我认为我是合适的人选,因为我有很多优点。I think+宾语从句;because引导原因状语从句。
I think it’s my honor to introduce Miyun and our school to the foreign friends. 我认为向外国朋友介绍密云和我们的学校是我的荣幸。it’s one’s honor to do sth做某事是某人的荣幸。
五
假设你是李华,你想参加暑假学校组织的“走进美国家庭”的夏令营研学活动,请你用英语写一份申请。
内容包括:1、你参加这次夏令营的目的;
2、你的特长及兴趣爱好;
3、你希望住在什么样的美国家庭,申请的开头和结尾已给出。
写作要求:1、80-100词左右;
2、文中不得出现真实人名和学校。
Dear Sir / Madam,
Thanks for your attention. I am writing to apply (申请) for joining the summer camp._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir / Madam,
Thanks for your attention. I am writing to apply for joining the summer camp. It's a good way to improve myEnglish and can help me know more about the American culture.
I often surf on the Internet for something new. I love sports and pop music. I do quite well in English and can talk with foreigners freely. I'm very proud of it.
I hope to stay in a large American family with three or four children. I'm sure we will have a great time together.
Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。假如你是李华,你想参加学校组织的“走进美国家庭”的夏令营研学活动,请你用英语写一份申请。注意时态的使用,并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型,使文章更加生动形象。
2.例文点评:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点:
短语:the summer camp;a good way ; improve my English;on the Internet ;do quite well in; talk with;be very proud of ;have a great time together. 等。
句型:it固定句型It's a good way to improve my English and can help me know more about the American culture.;宾语从句I'm sure we will have a great time together.
六
假如你是李华, 是大唐学校国际部的学生,你们学校正在招收体育俱乐部人员。请你给俱乐部美方负责人Mr. Cave写个申请书,申请加入俱乐部,内容包括:
1. 你想加入什么俱乐部;
2. 说说你喜欢的运动故事和你喜欢的运动带给了你什么;
3. 简要说明你加入俱乐部后的打算。
注意:
1. 90词左右
2. 文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息
Dear Mr. Cave,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lihua
【答案】参考例文:
Dear Mr. Cave,
I am a seventh grade student. My name is Li Hua. I’m 13 years old. I want to join the basketball club. I like basketball very much. I often play basketball with my classmates after school. On the weekend, I also go to the basketball club to practice, in order to improve my basketball level. Yao Ming is my idol. I want to win glory for my country like Yao Ming. Through playing basketball, I understand the importance of teamwork. If I can join the basketball team, I will train actively and prove myself.
I am eagerly looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:这是一篇材料作文,要求根据所提示的内容,从三方面写一封申请书申请加入俱乐部,注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导:文章应采取第一人称,一般现在时和一般将来时来行文,写作前,可根据所给要点罗列出需要用到的词汇和句型,适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡,注意上下文语句通顺、衔接自然,保证无单词和语法上的错误。
七
假如你是李华,你校的手拉手国际学校的学生下周末将要来访。你校正在招募接待国际学生的志愿者,陪他们度过周末。你想成为志愿者,请用英语给活动负责人李老师写一封申请信,在信中说明你的申请理由,以及你打算为他们安排哪些周末活动。提示词语:friendly, climb the Great Wall, Chinese culture, traditional food 提示问题:
● Why would you like to be a volunteer
● What do you plan to do during the weekend
Dear Mr. Li,
I’d like to be the volunteer. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m sure to be right person and I’d be thankful if I could get this chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Li,
I’d like to be the volunteer. Here are two reasons. I’m friendly and outgoing and I can get on well with the foreign students. Also, I’m good at English, so it’ll be easy for me to communicate with them.
In order to help them enjoy the weekend, I’d like to take them to climb the Great Wall because it’s famous all over the world. I also plan to invite them to enjoy Chinese culture at Lao She Teahouse. Besides, I will take them to try some traditional food, such as Peking Roast Duck. I think they will have a good time.
I’m sure to be the right person and I’d be thankful if I could get this chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。向老师写一封申请信,说明想申请做志愿者的理由和安排。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时和一般将来时。分为三段式:第一段说明申请的理由;第二段陈述计划安排;最后一段表达自己可以胜任的决心。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
八
假设你叫李华,是无锡市阳光中学(Wuxi Sunshine Middle School)的一名初三学生,近日,看到无锡市图书馆Kids English Reading Club 招募暑期志愿者的一则广告。你打算结合自己的经历和特长写信申请。广告如下:
注意事项:
1. 申请信要求符合情境、语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当增加细节;
2. 词数在 90 个左右,申请信的首尾已在答题卷上给出,不计入总词数;
3. 申请信不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
4. 申请信内容必须写在答题卷的指定位置上。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Mr Wang
I’m Li Hua, a Grade 9 student from Wuxi Sunshine Middle School. I’m writing to you because I want to be a volunteer in your library.
For one thing, I’ll have a freer summer vocation since I’m leaving middle school soon. I think I’ll have enough spare time for the job. For another, I have been interested in reading English books since I was little. I know perfectly well which books are suitable for little kids. What’s more, I’m patient enough to work with children. I will devote myself to the work. In general, I’m confident to serve as a good volunteer.
I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本题要求写一则申请信。写作时注意书信的格式,提取广告中的关键信息。以第一人称为主;注意语义的连贯性。
2.例文点评:例文采用三段式;第一段开门见山,直入主题;第二段讲明自己适合当志愿者的三个理由;最后用书信格式结尾。全文合理运用连接词,层层递进,句意连贯畅通。
3.高分亮点:
短语:for one thing;spare time;be interested in;be suitable for;what’s more;work with;devote oneself to;in general;be confident to;serve as。
句型:because引导的原因状语从句;宾语从句;since引导的时间状语从句。