2014中考英语书面表达(1)及参考范文

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2014中考英语书面表达(1)及参考范文
该精品搜集了历年的联考、竞赛,中考模拟、真题中的以及2013年9月以后的一些书面表达,都有参考范文,该精品共56篇文章,共69页。
中考书面表达(1)
【2014福建省南安市英语模拟试题(1)】
书面表达(15分)
众所皆知,节约是一种美德。但是如今,校园浪费也成为一个越来越严重的问题。粮食的浪费,资源的浪费,时间的浪费……同学们,让我们从小养成勤俭节约的好习惯,从我做起,抵制浪费。
请你以“Stop Wasting at School ”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文,说说我们在校园里怎样减少浪费,制止浪费。
温馨提示:1、所给词不计入总词数。
2、语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯。
3、文中不能出现真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称等相关信息。
参考词汇:serious, resources (资源), save, reduce…
Stop Wasting at School
As we know, saving is a good behavior. But nowadays, wasting has become a


【参考范文】
Stop Wasting at School
As we know, saving is a good behavior. But nowadays, wasting has become a more and more serious problem.
When I pass the school dining hall, I can see there’s so much food left on the plates. Some students forget to turn off the tap after washing hands. Lots of paper which can be used is seen on the ground. Also, some students waste time playing computer games…
All these are harmful to us. As a student, we should have good habits of saving resources. We must set a good example to reduce waste at school. It’s our duty to let everyone know our country is lack of resources. So stop wasting from now on!
评分原则:
本题总分为15分,其中内容和语言占13分,词数占1分,书写占1分。按五个档次给分。
评分时,先根据短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。不少于70个单词,不多于100个单词,加1分。书写清晰、规范,加1分。
各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档:(14-15分)能扣紧主题,语言基本无误;行文连贯;表达清楚。
第四档:(11-13分)能扣紧主题,语言有少量错误;行文基本连贯;表达基本清楚。
第三档:(8-10分) 语言有一些错误或较多错误;但仍能达意;行文不够连贯。
第二档:(4-7分) 离题,语言错误多或很多,影响意思表达或只有个别的句子可懂。
第一档:(0-3分) 词不达意,不能写出一个完整的句子;或只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词;
说明:若写出自己和老师的真实姓名或学校的真实名称酌情扣分。
中考书面表达(2)
【2012山东济宁】书面表达(共1小题,计15分)
假如你叫李华,市第三中学初三的学生。星期天你和班里的同学去康乐敬老院(old folk’s home) 参加了社区活动。请根据下面的图画的提示词语,用英语写一篇100词左右的日记。可合理想象,适当发挥。句首已给出,不计入总词数。
(一)审题
本篇作文考查的为记叙文。要求利用所给的信息列举在星期天去往敬老院的经过。然后写出你个人的观点。
(二)列举写作要点
1. 乘坐的交通工具,去往敬老院。老人见到我们的心情。
2. 在敬老院,我们为老人做的事情。我们的感受。
3. 总结:作为学生我们很喜欢参加社区活动。帮助老人是我们的职责。
(三)列举重点短语和句型
重点短语:take the school bus, help sb do sth, sweep the floor, clean the windows, clean the desk, enjoy oneself , have lunch
重点句型:We swept the floor for them, we cleaned the windows and we also cleaned the desk.
And I think it’s our duty to help the old people.
【参考范文】
Sunday Fine
Today, we took the school bus to Kang Le old folk’s home. The old people greeted us warmly and they were very pleased to see us. We helped them do a lot of things in the old folk’s home. We swept the floor for them, we cleaned the windows and we also cleaned the desk. Some girls danced for them and we enjoyed ourselves that day. Finally, we had lunch together with the old people and the dishes were very delicious. As the students in Grade Nine in No.3 Middle School, we like the activity very much. And I think it’s our duty to help the old people, do you think so?
中考书面表达(3)
【2012重庆】书面表达。(15分)
假如你校有几位来自美国的交换生,他们打算周末步行去翠湖公园。请根据提示为他们写出前往的路线,并简介公园情况。
要点提示:
1.路线(见右图);
2.公园环境优美、凉爽,
还可游泳、野餐等;
3.……
要求:
1.词数:80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight
参考范文One possible version:
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight and return at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant.
The park is really a good place to have fun. It’s beautiful and cool with the trees and flowers. You can swim and play games or have a picnic there. It’s very relaxing. You my also get a good chance to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.
【2014福建省泉州市英语模拟试题(1)】书面表达(15分)
好习惯成就美好的未来。你养成了什么样的好习惯呢?是坚持阅读,还是坚持锻炼?是助人为乐,还是关爱弱者?请你以“__________ is a good habit”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的想法。词数:80左右。
温馨提示:1、短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。
2、这些词汇也许对你有帮助:helpful, meaningful, care for, share
____________ is a good habit
_______________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Reading is a good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. In my opinion, reading can not only improve our knowledge but also help us think over things more carefully. I often read books in my spare time. It makes my life colorful. What I like most are novels, because most of them are quite meaningful and interesting. I also like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates.
Since reading can help us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!
评分原则:
本题总分为15分,其中内容和语言占13分,词数占1分,书写占1分。按五个档次给分。
评分时,先根据短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。
各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档:(14-15分)能扣紧主题,语言基本无误;行文连贯;表达清楚。
第四档:(11-13分)能扣紧主题,语言有少量错误;行文基本连贯;表达基本清楚。
第三档:(8-10分) 语言有一些错误或较多错误;但仍能达意;行文不够连贯。
第二档:(4-7分) 离题,只写出一、两个句子;语言错误多或很多,影响意思表达或只有个别的句子可懂。
第一档:(0-3分) 词不达意,不能写出一个完整的句子;或只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词;
说明:若写出自己和老师的真实姓名或学校的真实名称酌情扣分。
中考书面表达(4)
【2012恩施】书面表达(共1题,计15分)
父爱如山!假设父亲节即将来临,请你借此机会给你父亲写封信,和他谈谈心里话。
写作要点: 1.父亲辛勤工作,让我受到更好的教育,过上更好的生活;
2.父亲在学习上对我严格要求;考试失利时,他鼓励我不放弃;遇到困难时,父亲鼓励我笑对生活;表达对父亲的感谢和祝福。
温馨提示:
1. 短文内容应包含所提示的要点,语言流畅,不要逐字翻译,可适当发挥;
2. 短文字数不少于80词,短文开头和结尾已替你写好,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear father,
Father’s Day is coming, I’d like to say something to you. ________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
【参考范文】One possible passage :
Dear father,
Father’s Day is coming. I,d like to say something to you.
You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave and smile at life.
You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever!
Happy Fathers Day!
Yours, LiHua
中考书面表达(5)
【2012山东东营】书面表达(共1题,计20分)
你在求学的过程中肯定遇到过很多好老师,你最喜欢哪位呢?请你以The Teacher I Like Best为题, 用英语写一篇短文,参加美国杂志Weekly Reader的征文活动。
内容可涉及:他(她)是谁、教什么学科;你喜欢他(她)的原因。可以适当发挥。
要求:1、80-100词;
2、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名,老师姓名统一使用Mr./Mrs./Miss XX,例如:Mr. Ma。
【参考范文】A possible version:
The Teacher I Like Best
Of all my teachers, I love Mrs. Li best. She taught us English in junior middle school.
She had many ways of making her classes interesting and exciting. She always taught us something new in easy ways. She helped us use English by doing interesting activities, such as, making surveys, playing games, etc.
Mrs. Li was a strict but kind teacher. She often asked us to be on time for class and do homework by ourselves. When we had trouble, she often helped us out.
Thanks to Mrs. Li, I started to love English. I love Mrs. Li and her class.
中考书面表达(6)
[2014福建省泉州市英语模拟试题(2)]书面表达(15分)
学会善待他人,用理性、善意、爱心和责任去面对生活的现实;善待他人,才能融入人群,获得友谊、信任、谅解和支持, 拥有充满快乐的感觉,踏入充满机遇的境界,走向充满希望的未来。请以“Be kind to others”为题,写一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
温馨提示: 1.短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。
2.这些单词也许对你有帮助:Learn , respect[尊重] others, Communicate with each other; feel happy, understand, share.
Be kind to others
_______________________________________________________________________________


[参考范文:]
Be kind to others
As we know, students should learn how to be kind to others.But in what ways? First of all, we should respect others.Everybody has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other.Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.What's more, we should offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.Then we will feel very happy.
In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way.Only in these ways can we win other's respect and friendship. My dear friends, try to be a kind person, the world will be nicer and nicer.
.评分原则:
本题总分为15分,其中内容和语言占13分,词数占1分,书写占1分。按五个档次给分。
评分时,先根据短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。不少于70个单词,不多于90个单词,加1分。书写清晰、规范,加1分。
各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档:(14-15分)能扣紧主题,语言基本无误;行文连贯;表达清楚。
第四档:(11-13分)能扣紧主题,语言有少量错误;行文基本连贯;表达基本清楚。
第三档:(8-10分) 语言有一些错误或较多错误;但仍能达意;行文不够连贯。
第二档:(4-7分) 离题,只写出一、两个句子;语言错误多或很多,影响意思表达或只有个别的句子可懂。
第一档:(0-3分) 词不达意,不能写出一个完整的句子;或只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词;
说明:若写出自己和老师的真实姓名或学校的真实名称酌情扣分。
中考书面表达(7)
【2012陕西】书面表达
你年级决定本周日进行一次外出活动(have a school trip),请你负责将此消息传达给来自英国的交换生。
要求:
1. 参考提示语,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现真实地名和姓名;
4. 词数:60-80词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Hello, everyone!
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all.
【参考范文】One possible version
Hello, everyone!
May I have your attention, please? Have you ever had a hard but exciting trip? Now I've got good news to tell you. This Sunday, we are going to have a school trip like this. We'll walk to Fenghuang Mountain, It's about 10 kilometers away from our school. As we'll be away for the whole day, please remember the following things, Take enough food acid drinks with you and wear comfortable shoes. The most important thing is to keep safe and behave yourselves on the way. I think we'll have a nice trip.
That's all.
Thank you!
中考书面表达(8)
【2012四川乐山】书面表达(满分15分
今年的3.15晚会曝光了北京一麦当劳店将过期食品改换包装再次出售一事,引来舆论哗然,食品卫生安全再次成为人们关注的焦点。作为一名中学生消费者,该如何维护自己的权益,吃到放心的食品?请你根据下面提供的要点,给校报英语专栏写一篇80词左右的短文,并谈谈自己的看法。
1. 买食品前检查生产日期,查看是否过期;
2. 识别食品是否新鲜或变质;
3. 购物以后索取并保管好发票;
4. 发现问题食品以后,拨打12315或向当地消费者协会寻求帮助。
注意:
1. 词数:80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 应覆盖所有要点:可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 参考词汇:date日期;overdue过期的;go bad变质;invoice发票;Consumer Association消费者协会。
Since the CCTV program exposed the wrongdoings by a McDonald’s restaurant in Beijing, the safety of food has become a hot topic. What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests?
【参考范文】One Possible Version:
Since the CCTV program exposed the wrongdoings by a McDonald’s restaurant in Beijing, the safety of food has become a hot topic. What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests?
First, before buying food, we need to check the date and see whether it is overdue. Then we should study carefully what we buy and decide if it is fresh or it goes bad. After we pay for the food, we should get the invoice and take good care of it. Last but not the least, if we find there’s a problem with the food, call 12315 or go to local Consumer Association for help.
Food safety is of great importance in our daily life. In my opinion, the government should take action to punish the producers and companies that went against consumers’ rights. On the other hand, we should learn to be wise consumers.
中考书面表达(9)
【2014浙江省英语模拟试题(1)】
书面表达(本题有2小题,76小题5分,77小题15分,共计20分)
76、在中华民族进入第六个千年的21世纪,伴随中国快速发展的势头,国内外悄然兴起了“中国梦”这一话语。最近,你和朋友就“我的梦想--职业”展开了讨论。根据下表讨论结果,完成以下句子。
Mary
时装设计师(fashion designer)
喜欢漂亮衣服,擅长绘画
Mike
作家
愿意与别人分享精彩故事
Tom
厨师
为别人煮健康美味的食物


Mary wants to be a fashion designer, because she like beautiful clothes and is good at painting.
Mike wants to be _________ , because ___________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
梦想总是美好的,那么你该如何向着你的“梦想”前进呢?请根据下表提示,向朋友们说说你的梦想之路。
Dream
I want to ...
Reasons
be interest in it
...
Ways to achieve my dream
Work hard at school
find out how successful people did it
...
注意:短文必须包括三部分内容,需陈述理由(2条)和方式(3条);表中右栏的信息仅供参考,也可自由发挥;词数80左右。
76 【参考答案】
1) Mary wants to be a fashion designer, because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at painting.
Mike wants to be a writer, because he likes sharing interesting stories with others.
Tom wants to be a police, because he likes cooking delicious and healthy food for others.
I want to be a teacher, because I like students very much.
本大题总分为15分,按五个档次给分
My Dream
I want to be a writer when I grow up. Writing has been part of my life. Through writing I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others.
I can achieve my dream by reading widely and by working hard at school to learn as much as possible. It’s also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them. I’m determined to hold on to my dream till one day it comes true.
第一档(14—15分)能写明全部要点,语言基本无误,行文连贯,表达清楚。
第二档(11—13分)能写明大部分要点,语言有少量错误,行文比较连贯,表达比较清楚。
第三档(8—10分)能写明部分要点,语言有较多错误,行文不太连贯,但尚能表达意思。
第四档(5—7分)能写明少部分或个别要点,语言错误较多,只有个别句子可读、可看懂。
第五档(0—4分)基本上没有写出内容要点,语言错误多,只有一些词汇堆积, 不知所云。
中考书面表达(10)
【2012十堰】初级写作 (本题一节,计l5分)
亲爱的同学们,初中生活即将结束!在此离别之际,恰逢《中学生英语》征稿,请你以“A(n)——(Lucky/Unusual/ Excitin9/Proud/Regretful(遗憾的)/…)Thing”为题,简要描述一件你亲身经历的、印象深刻的事情,并谈谈你从这件事中所获得的启示。
要求:
1.写短文前,请用一个恰当的形容词补全下面的标题,所用形容词可以从上面括号中选
取,也可以另外选择;
2.语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名:
4.词数:80-100词。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。www.zxxk.com精校
A(n) Thing
In the past three years, the life of middle school has impressed me deeply. Many stories happened. The following is one of them.


【参考范文】One possible version:
A Regretful Thing
In the past three years, the life of middle school has impressed me deeply. Many stories happened. The following is one of them.
Xiao Ming was one of my good friends. One day, a little thing caused a serious quarrel between us. From then on, we didn't talk to each other. I had hoped to make peace with him, but I finally failed to do that because of my being afraid of losing face. Not until when he moved to another city
with his parents did I know I lost my friend forever.
The lesson I learnt from this is that if you realize your mistakes, you should correct them at once, or you may leave yourself lasting regrets. (96 词)
中考书面表达(11)
【2012潍坊真题】写作(满分15分)
假设你是大明,你的笔友给你来信了。请阅读以下来信,并根据内容写一封回信。
要求:1.80词左右;2.文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。
Dear Daming,
I’d like to tell you something about my “important gift”.It was a beautiful smile.
When I was nine years old,I went to a new school.As a result,no one knew who I was.I felt lonely.Then one day when I sat at my desk unhappily as usual,a girl walked to me and smiled.
Though she said no words,I felt the touch of something bright and friendly and it made me feel happy and warm again.After that she became my good friend.
As we all know,everybody may feel lonely or be in trouble.Could you tell me something about your “important gift” that touched you or changed your life?
Yours,
Susan
Dear Susan,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Daming
【参考范文】
Dear Susan,
I’m glad to read your letter and your “important gift” really touches me. As for me, my “important gift” was my mum’s sad tears.
Two years ago, I became a “problem child”, and I was tired of everything. I did everything that was against my parents. That made my mum very sad, but she still loved me as usual.
One night, I lost my reason and broke a glass, which caused my mum to burst into tears. All at once, her sadness touched my deep heart. Since then, I have completely changed myself.
Best wishes,
Daming
中考书面表达(12)
【2014中考英语模拟试题(1)】
书面表达(本题有2小题,76小题5分,77小题15分;共20分)
学校为了丰富学生假期生活,决定成立志愿者、旅游、音乐、运动等俱乐部,以下是志愿者俱乐部的招聘广告,请用英语帮助完成该则广告。相关内容如下:
①时间:一星期两小时 ②最后写一句话呼吁大家参加
Volunteer wanted
Do you want to do something meaningful to change your life? Would you like_________________ a volunteer? It will take you___________________________________.
There are many sick kids in the hospital. They need you to__________________________.
Volunteering is great! ____________________________________________________________.
77.我们班同学就“参加哪种俱乐部”进行了讨论,不同的同学有不同的想法,请你根据下表内容的提示,用英语写一篇短文,陈述同学们喜欢参加的俱乐部以及他们的理由,并谈谈你想要参加的俱乐部和理由。
俱乐部
理由
Jim
旅游俱乐部
◆开阔眼界,学习不同地方的文化
◆放松自己,有利于学习
Mary
志愿者俱乐部
◆把自己的爱好加以利用
◆认为成为一名志愿者很伟大
Lily
音乐俱乐部
◆喜欢音乐,欣赏不同类型的音乐
◆与喜欢音乐的人交朋友
I
…… (不要重复以上俱乐部)
……(至少两点)
注意:1. 文章必须包括表中全部内容,可适当增加细节;
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数,你只需接着写;
3. 词数:80—100。
Recently, we have discussed what kind of club to join. Here is the result. Jim would like to join the travel club. ______________________________________________________________
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【参考答案】76. to be/become, two hours a week, cheer them up(合理即可), Don’t put it off. Become a volunteer today!/Come and join us!/…(合理即可)
【参考范文】77.
Recently, we have discussed what kind of club to join. Here is the result. Jim would like to join the travel club. He believes traveling can open up his eyes and help him learn the culture in different places. At the same time, he can relax himself while traveling and it’s good for his study. Mary is a girl who always wants to put her love to good use. So she hopes to join the volunteer club. Also, she thinks being a volunteer is great. Lily loves music a lot. Therefore, she decides to join the music club, so that she can enjoy different kinds of music more often. The most important thing is that she can make friends with people who also like music.
As for me, I want to join the sports club. I like doing sports very much and it's a good way to keep healthy.
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【2012达州】书面表达(满分10分)
目前中学生学习任务重,压力大。而丰富多彩的业余生活,有利于开拓视野,调节身心,提高学习效率。请结合下面的提示词,以My Spare Time为题写一篇80词左右的短文,谈谈你的业余生活。看书、看电视、玩电脑、做运动、参加社会活动等。你喜欢做什么?你是如何合理安排的呢?说说你的想法和理由。
提示词语:busy, play, healthy, knowledge, houswork, relax,volunteer, colorful
要求:
1. 短文内容应包括以上提示的内容,可适当发挥。
2. 书写工整,句式规范,条理清楚。有表达自己观点的句子。
3. 不得出现真实的姓名和地名。
My Spare Time
【参考范文】. One possible version:
My Spare Time
I am a middle school student. Though I’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful.. After school I usually play sports. I like basketball and football very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and study better. I often do some reading in the evening. I think books are our best friends. They give us much knowledge that we can’t learn at school. So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time. Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet. I find it’s a good way to relax myself. At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world. At the weekends I often help my parents with the housework. I clean the house, wash clothes and learn to cook. Duing the summer or winter vacation, I have enough time to do things like volunteering. I help those people who are in need.It’s a good experience for me. I enjoy myself in my spare time.
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【2012山东日照】书面表达 (共1题,计10分)
三年的初中生活就要结束,崭新的高中学习即将到来。回顾过去,你一定有许多成功的喜悦与失利的遗憾;展望未来,你肯定有美好的憧憬和实实在在的打算。请你以“Unforgettable Memories ”为题,给英文报纸21st Century “青春校园”栏目写一篇80词左右的征文。
注意:1. 内容要包含对过去的回忆(学业有成、爱好特长、师生情谊以及最大的遗憾)和对未来的憧憬。
2. 文中不要出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Unforgettable Memories
How time flies! Three years passed
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【参考范文】One possible version:
Unforgettable Memories
How time flies! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories left in my head. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much. With their help I’ve made great progress. But I’m a careless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided. Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings. As it is said, “It is not our abilities that show what we truly are, it is our choice.” The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.
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【2012黔西南】.书面表达。(共30分)
假如你是Jane,你的好友Mary在微博上说最近很累很不开心, 而且很担心即将到来的期末考试,请你在Mary的微博中回复, 给她一些建议,使她振作起来。(注意:文中不能出现姓名和学校等相关信息)
   提示:
1. 分析Mary 不开心的原因;
2. 给她一些建议使她减少压力;
3. 给她美好的祝福。
Dear Mary,
  Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. I know you are under too much pressure. You can’t get on well with your classmates; you may worry about your exams.
  I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.
  Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with your parents is necessary to solve the problem.
  Less pressure, better life! Best wishes to you!
Your,
Jane
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【2012重庆】书面表达。(15分)
假如你校有几位来自美国的交换生,他们打算周末步行去翠湖公园。请根据提示为他们写出前往的路线,并简介公园情况。
要点提示:学科网校对
1.路线(见右图);
2.公园环境优美、凉爽,
还可游泳、野餐等;
3.……
要求:
1.词数:80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight
【参考范文】.One possible version:
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight and return at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant.
The park is really a good place to have fun. It’s beautiful and cool with the trees and flowers. You can swim and play games or have a picnic there. It’s very relaxing. You my also get a good chance to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.
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【2012株洲】中考马上要结束了,考完后你就可以做你喜欢的事哦。假如你是David,你的美国笔友Fred来信询问考后你想做什么。请给他写封回信,告诉他你喜欢做的两、三件事情,并说明理由。
注意:1. 60词左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息;
3.不要把已给出部分再抄写在答题卡上。
Dear Fred,
I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David
【参考范文】A possible version:
Dear Fred,
I am so glad to get your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it.
You can’t imagine how happy I am! At first, I will have a good sleep because I often stayed up in the past two months. Next, I am going to watch TV. I like playing basketball very much, so I will enjoy some basketball matches on it. I will also go to the bookstore and buy a few interesting books so that I can spend a good summer vacation. How about you? Please write to me soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
David
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【2012苏州】书面表达(共1题;满分20分)
假设你是名初三毕业生,考上了理想的学校。今天是开学第一天,请你根据下表所列的 内容要点,用英语写一篇日记,写下这一天的感受。.
去校前
兴奋(原因自拟) 担忧(原因自拟)
到校后
发现老师、同学友好 忘了紧张、感觉自在
离校时
不会再担心 相信会快乐
注意:
1. 词数90左右;
2. 日记的开头已为你写好,不计人总词数;
3. 日记须包括所有内容要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;
4. 日记中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Monday, Sept. 3 Fine
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year. I was excited as well as worried.___________________
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【参考范文】One possible version :
Monday, Sept. 3 Fine
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year, I was excited as well as worried.
I was excited because I am a student of senior middle school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers, students in this school. I was afraid that I couldn’t fit in well.
When I got to school, I found everyone was really sweet to me. Teachers were kind and ready to help us. I soon forgot my nervousness. 1 felt at home.
At the end of today, I felt no more fear and I believe I will have lots of fun at this new school.
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【2012十堰真题】初级写作 (本题一节,计l5分)
亲爱的同学们,初中生活即将结束!在此离别之际,恰逢《中学生英语》征稿,请你以“A(n)——(Lucky/Unusual/ Excitin9/Proud/Regretful(遗憾的)/…)Thing”为题,简要描述一件你亲身经历的、印象深刻的事情,并谈谈你从这件事中所获得的启示。
要求:
1.写短文前,请用一个恰当的形容词补全下面的标题,所用形容词可以从上面括号中选
取,也可以另外选择;
2.语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名:
4.词数:80-100词。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。www.精校
A(n) Thing
In the past three years, the life of middle school has impressed me deeply. Many stories happened. The following is one of them.


【参考范文】One possible version:
A Regretful Thing
In the past three years, the life of middle school has impressed me deeply. Many stories happened. The following is one of them.
Xiao Ming was one of my good friends. One day, a little thing caused a serious quarrel between us. From then on, we didn't talk to each other. I had hoped to make peace with him, but I finally failed to do that because of my being afraid of losing face. Not until when he moved to another city
with his parents did I know I lost my friend forever.
The lesson I learnt from this is that if you realize your mistakes, you should correct them at once, or you may leave yourself lasting regrets. (96 词)
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【2012南京】书面表达(满分15分)
上周日在秦淮河便发生了张明救落水小男孩的事情,请根据以下四幅图所描述的事情经过,为校刊的英语园地写一篇题为“A Brave Young Man”的英文稿件。
注意:
1、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2、语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3、词数80左右,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday.






【参考范文】One possible version:
A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday. Zhang Ming was fishing by the Qinhuai River when a little boy went to play nearby. Suddenly, Zhang Ming heard someone shouting for help. He looked around and found that the little boy was falling into the water. It was very dangerous. Zhang Ming jumped into the river immediately. He tried his best to pull the boy out of the river. At that time other people came to offer help. Finally, the boy was saved and he was very grateful. People all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful. We should learn from him.
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【2012温州】书面表达(本题有1小题,共20分)
某英文网站提出“走路去上学”的倡议,请你就这一话题写一篇约100词的英语文章:内容包括,走路有利健康,和朋友结伴有利于……让父母节省……使城市……等等;可适当发挥。
注意:文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:be good for, with friends, save
【参考范文】
I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for health. Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What’s more, if we walk, our parents won’t have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving helps to make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.
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【请假条】
(注意:文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名,否则不赋分)
假如你叫张强,在昨天下午的篮球比赛中不小心伤了左臂,医生建议你在家休息两天,因此你要向班主任赵老师请假。请根据以上信息,写一则40词左右的请假条。
【参考范文】One possible version:
Asking for leave
May 10th
Dear Miss Zhao,
I am sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today. I hurt my left arm (1分) in the basketball match yesterday afternoon. The doctor told me to have a rest at home for two days, so I will /have to ask for two days/two-day leave. I hope I will get well and return to school soon.
Thank you!
Your student,
Zhang Qiang
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【2012衢州】假设你是李华,上周末你参加了一次郊游(outing)。请根据下面表格中的提示信息写一篇题为“A pleasant outing”的英语短文,参加某英文报纸的征文比赛。
?
A pleasant outing
时间
上周末
参加者
你和……
地点
北山公园(the North Hill Park)
活动
骑自行车、爬山、野餐、做游戏……
感受
……
?
要求:(1)不要逐条翻译表格中的信息,可适当增减内容;
(2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、人名和校名;
(3)词数: 80~110个。
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参考词汇:go for an outing; climb the hill; have a picnic
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A pleasant outing
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【参考范文】One Possible version
A pleasant outing
Last weekend, I went for an outing with my classmates. At 7:30 in the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didn’t go back until 4:00 p.m.. We were tired but very happy.
What a pleasant outing it was!
(106 words)
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【2012陕西】书面表达
你年级决定本周日进行一次外出活动(have a school trip),请你负责将此消息传达给来自英国的交换生。
要求:
1. 参考提示语,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现真实地名和姓名;
4. 词数:60-80词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Hello, everyone!
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all.
【参考范文】One possible version
Hello, everyone!
May I have your attention, please? Have you ever had a hard but exciting trip? Now I've got good news to tell you. This Sunday, we are going to have a school trip like this. We'll walk to Fenghuang Mountain, It's about 10 kilometers away from our school. As we'll be away for the whole day, please remember the following things, Take enough food acid drinks with you and wear comfortable shoes. The most important thing is to keep safe and behave yourselves on the way. I think we'll have a nice trip.
That's all.
Thank you!
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【演讲稿】
学校将要举行演讲比赛,请以My Dream为题写一篇参赛演讲稿。注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校。 2.词数:80歌左右。 3. 开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
My dream
Hi, everyone___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】One possible version:
Hi, everyone。Everybody has his dream job. I also have my dream job. My dream is to work for foreign tourists as a tour guide.
Why do I want to be a tour guide? First of all, I‘m an outgoing girl, and I like doing some exciting things. Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice. If I become a tour guide, I can travel all around China, and know more about our country. Then I will tell the foreign tourists about our colorful history. Second, I like making friends. If I work as a tour guide, I can make a lot of friends all over the world. This may be great. Perhaps someday my foreign friends will ask me to visit their countries. I really like to go to their countries to know something about their culture. What’s more, I like singing. Singing English songs is my favorite. I believe I will be popular with foreign tourists. Their trip will be excellent.
Now, I am still a middle school student. My job now is to work hard in school. Then I’ll go to university to learn something about being a tour guide. I’m sure I can be a qualified tour guide in the future
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【2012黑河】书面表达 (共计15分)
(本题共15分,A题5分,B题10分)
(注意: 文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名,否则不赋分)
( A ) 6月1日,张丽莉老师班级的学生组织召开了“为老师祈福”的主题班会,会后由你(张佳岩)代表班委会给老师发一封E-mail。询问她的身体状况,表达感激与思念,并告诉她同学们一定会努力学习,同时祝她早日康复。要求:字数30—50词。
Dear Ms Zhang,
How are you?____________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Jiayan
【参考范文】(A) One possible version:
Dear Miss Zhang,
How are you? We all miss you very much (1分). Thank you for teaching us so well (1分). Don’t worry about us. We must try our best to study hard (1分). Are you feeling better now (1分) ? We all hope you’ll get well soon (1分).
Yours,
Zhang Jiayan
( B ) 今春我省部分地区发生干旱,水资源严重短缺。请你以Saving Water为题用英语写一篇短文。(参考词 tap 水龙头 reuse 再利用 recycle 再循环 drought 干旱)
内容包括:1.水的重要性 2.人们浪费水的不良现象 3.提出几条建议
要求:1.词数:80—100词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
2.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰。
Saving Water
As we all know, water is important to us all.





【参考范文】
Saving Water
As we all know, water is important to us all. People can’t live without water. Plants and animals will die if there is no water in the world.
But there are still some people wasting water. For example, some students often forget to turn off the taps; some people take showers for a long time.
Then what should we do to save water? First, we should turn off the taps after we use it. Second, we’d better recycle and reuse the water. Third, we should take a bath instead of having a shower.
Water is really important to man. Let’s save water from now on.
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【2012 山东滨州】书面表达(共1题,计15分)
规划人生,成就未来。请以“My Dream”为题写一
篇英语短文,描述你梦想的工作。
要求:
1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
2.词数:80—100。标题和短文开头已给出,不计
入总词数。
3.参考词汇:be friendly to…,help,study hard,
come true
My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be ______________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】One possible version:
My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctor were very friend to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I'm very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. I will study hard to get more knowledge in order to achieve my dream. I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.
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提示作文【时事热点】
目前中学生早餐问题已经引起社会关注,你所在学校的学生会在5月20日“全国学生营养日”开展问卷调查,其结果令人担忧。请你根据调查结果写一篇短文,倡导营养早餐。
学生比例
早餐情况
健康状况
55%
有规律地吃早餐
身体健康,精力充沛
25%
吃垃圾食品
营养不均衡
20%
没有吃早餐
感到饥饿,上课无法认真听讲,容易生病
提示词:regularly, active, junk food(垃圾食品), a balanced diet, as a result
要求:
1. 所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息,并发表自己的看法。
2. 所给的提示词必须全部用上,可适当发挥。
3. 字数80词左右。文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Breakfast Is Important
Breakfast is important. But not all the students have realized its important. Here’s the result of our survey. About 55 percent of the students ____________________________________
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【参考范文】
Breakfast Is Important
Breakfast is important. But not all the students have realized its important. Here’s the result of our survey. About 55 percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day. They keep healthy and look active. 25 percent of them just have junk food instead. They don’t have a balanced diet. (It is bad for their health.) 20 percent (of the students) go to school without breakfast. As a result, these students often fell hungry in class and can’t listen to teachers carefully. What’s worse, they get ill easily.
It’s necessary/important (for us) to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast.
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【2012新疆阜康】书面表达(满分15分)
在阳光雨露里,我已长高、长壮,但这还不是全部,长大还应包括什么?是关心、帮助同学?是体贴、理解父母?是感恩、回报亲朋师长?还是……,成长的点点滴滴,久久不能忘记。请以I Am Not a Child Any More为题,记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事,表明你已经不再是一个下孩子。
要求:1.请根据所给题目,用英语写一篇短文,不少于80词;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计算
I am not a child any more
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【参考范文】
I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.
It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.”
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.
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【2012福州】提示作文(12分)
2011年12月20日,福州市被评为“全国文明城市”(National civilized city)。你学校的English club正在举办以“文明福州,持续文明”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下的内容提示及要求写一篇应征稿。
内容提示:◆尊敬师长,明礼诚信 ◆友善待人,乐才助人
◆遵守交规,不闯红灯 ◆保护环境,(写2—3个例子)
要 求:1)词数80左右,不包含已给出的句子的词数;
2)内容完整,意思连贯,语句通顺,书写规范。
参考词汇:respect (v. 尊敬), polite, honest, obey, traffic lights, protect the environment

Civilized Fuzhou going on
We are glad that Fuzhou is now among the national civilized cities. As students, what shall we do to keep up the good work? First of all, we ..._________________________________
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In short, if everyone makes contributions, our city will be better and better.
【参考范文】
Civilized Fuzhou going on
We are glad that Fuzhou is now among the national civilized cities. As students~ what shall we do to keep up the good work? First of all, we should respect our teachers, parents and the old. Also, we ought to be polite and honest. Second, it's always good to be kind, friendly and helpful to others. Third, we must obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the streets when the traffic lights are red. Last but not least, it's important and necessary to help protect the environment. For example, we shouldn't spit here and there or throw litter about. We'd better not pick flowers or step on the grass. In short, if everyone makes contributions, our city will be better and better.
中考书面表达(31)
【原创】书面表达
一家英文杂志社正在调查中考后学生不同的放松方式。假如你是陈林,请结合表格中的信息并结合自身的看法,给杂志社写一封信。
Names
Ways
Reasons
Lihong
go on vacation
1.dream of it for a long time
2.relaxing
Zhenming
read more books
1. favorite hobby
2. get more knowledge
Chenlin
…..
1…..
2……
注意:1. 内容必须包括表格中的信息;
2. 开头已经为你写好,你只需接着写;
3. 词数:70个左右。开头和结尾部分的内容不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about how different middle school students relax themselves in the coming summer vacation after high school entrance examination._________________________-
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________-
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Chen Len
【参考范文】
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about how different middle school students relax themselves in the coming summer vacation after high school entrance examination._Lihong would like to go on a vacation. Because she has dreamed of it for a long time and it is really relaxing. She believes that she will have a good time during the coming summer vacation. As for Zhenming, he will just stay at home and read more books. Reading is his favorite hobby and he wants to get more knowledge. I’m Chenlin. I hope I can play with my best friends. As we all know, we pay more attention to our study so that we don’t have more time to spend with our friends. Besides, we may go to different high schools. So we can remember each other forever.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Chen Len
评分标准******评分原则:
按5个档次给分。中档属于第三档(9分---7分)。
按学生所写内容和所用语言确定档次(内容分和语言分各占一半)。
总词数不足40个可在本题总得分中扣去1分;如书写整齐美观,可在本题总得分中加1分。
本题有一定的开放性,所以只要言之有理,就应给分。
内容要点:
1.存在的环境问题2方面(3分);
3.,采取怎样的保护措施,举例2—3方面 (4分)
(二)各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档(很好):(15分-13分)完全完成试题规定的任务。
①问题和措施的信息全。②语言可读性强,语言结构基本正确,有少量错误。
第四档 (好):(12分-10分)完全完成试题规定的任务。
①有主要信息。②语言基本正确,有一些错误。
第三档 (还好): (9分-7分)基本完成试题规定的任务。
①有主要信息。②语言尚可读,有一些错误,但尚达意。
第二档 (较差): (6分-4分) 未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。
①信息不全。②只有个别句子可读,语言错误较多,且不能达意。
第一档 (差): (3分-1分) 未能完成试题规定的任务。
①不能表达有关信息。②只有几个有关单词,语言错误很多,不能达意。
注意: 凡不写任何内容、抄袭其他内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分.
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【2012 桂林】C书面表达(共15分)
假设Susan是你的好朋友,下面是Susan的个人信息,请你根据以下提示,以“My good friend”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点提示:
Name
Susan
Age
14
Country
America
Appearance
tall , blue eyes , golden hair
Character
lovely , helpful
Favourite sports
swimming, running
Hobbies
reading , listening to music
Interests
Chinese history and culture
要求:
(1)内容包括所提供的信息及要点,可适当发挥,但不必逐条翻译;
(2)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
【参考范文】One possible version
My good friend[www.@z&zstep.#^c%om]
I have a good friend. Her name is Susan. She is 14 years old. She’s from America. She’s a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair. She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running. She enjoys reading books and listening to music. What’s more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture. So she often reads books about China. She’s lovely and friendly. She gets on well with her friends. She’s also helpful. She often helps me learn English. With her help, I made much progress in English. I’m lucky to have such a good friend.
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【2012 宿迁】书面表达(满分15分)
江苏省教育厅5月7日公布的2011年学生体质健康调查结果显示,学生近视率仍维持在高位水平,且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容,用英语写一篇短文,并发表自己的观点。
现 状
大约70%学生眼睛近视

主要原因
1. 睡眠不足
2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
预防方法
1. 做眼睛保健操,多进行体育活动
2. 养成正确的用眼习惯
你的观点
… ….(至少一条)
注意:
1. 词数80左右。开头已经写好,不记入总词数;
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点,可作必要的发挥;
3. 条理清楚、语句连贯;
4.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息。
(参考词汇:近视的 shortsighted)
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,


【参考范文】One possible version:
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
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书面表达
下面是Linda 的申请 。假如你是Linda,请根据表格信息,写一封信介绍你自己,申请参加暑假美国交换学生项目。
要求:
必须包括表格内容,可适当发挥。
词数80—100,书信开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Application Form(申请表)
Name
Linda
Age
16
Nationality
Chinese
Grade
Junior 3
School
No.2 Middle School
Personality
Outgoing and friendly
Favorite subjects
English and music
Hobbies
Collecting coins, playing the violin and dancing
Plan
Learn English and make many friends

Dear Sir,
I wish to be an exchange student in America this summer vacation. My name is Linda.
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Yours, Linda
【参考范文】
Dear Sir,
I wish to be an exchange student in America this summer vacation. My name is Linda. I’m a 16-year-old Chinese girl. I’m a student from No.2 Middle School and I’m in Junior 3. My favorite subjects are English and music because they are really interesting. But I find math is so difficult for me. In fact, I’m outgoing and friendly, and I have lots of friends here. In my spare time, I enjoy collecting coins and I have hundreds of coins from different countries. I also enjoy playing the violin and dancing. If I could join the project, I would learn more English and make more friends.

Yours,
Linda
评分标准    (一)评分原则:   1. 本题总分为15分,按5个档次给分。   2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言的表达初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求   来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。   3. 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点,参考词汇的应用和语法结构的数量和正确性、   上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。   4. 拼写、书写、标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响度予以考虑。   5. 英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。   (二)各档次的给分范围和要求:   第五档:(13—15分)包含内容要点;语言基本无误;行文连贯,能使用修饰词或表示顺序、逻辑关系的连接词,表达清楚。文字优美,语言精彩,略有拼写等错误的,可不扣分。   第四档:(10—12分)基本包含内容要点,语言有少量错误,行文基本连贯,表达基本清楚。   第三档:(7—9分)包含部分要点;语言虽有较多错误,尚能达意。   第二档:(3—6分)语言错误多,影响意思表达;错误百出,不知所云。   第一档: (0—2分)白卷或文不对题,只抄了提示词。
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【2012 梅州】书面表达。(本题共15分)
目前,我国实施城市化进程中,给从乡村(镇)迁入城市的大多数孩子带来诸多的问题,特别在交朋友方面尤为突出。假如你是Know,你的朋友Tony 发电子邮件请教你关于如何交朋友的问题,请你给他回复一封电子邮件提几点建议,词数约80左右。
内容包括如下:
在小区内玩耍时,你可以主动与他们交流成为新朋友,并告知家长;
请求父母带你去图书馆或一些公共场所,既可认识更多伙伴又可参加文体活动;
在星期天,可外出郊游等。
总之,多参加交流活动,克服困难,保持耐心。
要求:1、涵盖所有要点,意思连贯,符合逻辑。
2、卷面整洁、书写规范工整。不得逐字翻译。
(可能用到的词:First, Second, Third,In conclusion)
Dear Know,
I need some advice on how to make friends! I have just moved to a new city. I am 13. I don’t know anybody here and I want to make some friends. What’s the best way? Where can I meet people?
Yours,
Tony
Dear Tony,
There are lots of things you can do.
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It takes time and patience(耐心). I hope you will find a best friend soon!
Yours,
【参考范文】One possible version:
Dear Tony,
There are lots of things you can do. First, you can ride your bike in your neighbourhood and try to find some kids. When you find some, you can go up and talk to them. You should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you. Second, you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some(public) places where there are lots of kids. You could try joining an art class or a sports club. These are all great ways to meet people. Third, you can try making friends in it if you go outing to take part in activities on Sundays.(you can try making friends at churches(教堂) too if you go to church on Sundays.)In conclusion(What’s mre),try to be active wherever you are, but just be yourself and don’t try so hard. It takes time and patience(耐心). I hop you will find a best friend soon!
Yours,
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【2012 黄冈】书面表达(1 题,满分10 分)
随着网络的发展,人们消费观念的转变,购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚,越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示,写一篇网上购物的文章。
注意:①所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面;
②文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息,否则不予评分;
③词数:80 词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词汇:网购shopping on line; 避免做某事avoid doing sth;商品goods; 导致cause With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line.
【参考范文】One possible version:
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.
That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping on line.
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中考英语作文-------卫生健康饮食:
健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。 保持健康的重要性 保持健康的方法 保持健康的结论9 (你的看法?) ***1.多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物
***2.多锻炼健身强体;
***3.鄙弃不良习惯 (你的看法?)
How to stay our health /fit? 【参考范文(一)】
Dear boys and girls : I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle school student first you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子). Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit. Third you need enough sleep or rest. Next keep yourself happy. As people often say smiling makes younger. Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health. That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life. Thank you bye! 【参考范文(二)】
Dear boys and girls: I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise eat more junk food isn’t enough time to sleep. If we keep fit we must keep taking exercises every day .Eat lots of fruit and vegetables .Sleep for about 8 hours a night. Stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs毒品 .Early to bed early to rise/get up .Breathe (呼吸)the fresh air in the open air. Keep happy every day. That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.
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【2012南昌】书面表达(15分)
某中学生英文报为了了解中学生的购物习惯与喜好,向广大中学生作调查。请你根据下面图表提供的信息,写一篇短文,介绍自己的购物习惯与喜好。(学科网精校)
提示:1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I 'm a junior high school student from Jiangxi. ______________________________
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【参考范文】One Possible Version:
I'm a junior high school student from Jiangxi. In my spare time, I like shopping. There is a supermarket in my town. Lots of things are being sold there. So I often go there with my mother to buy school things, food and drinks.
Of course, sometimes I want to buy something expensive. An MP4 player is what I want most, but I can't afford it now. I'm going to work for an English club during this summer holiday and make some money for it. We teenagers should not always ask our parents for money.
As for shopping online, I like it, because things there are much cheaper and I don't need to walk to the shops, which helps me save time. No matter where to shop, I enjoy it because it's really relaxing.
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【2012黔西南】.书面表达。(共30分)
假如你是Jane,你的好友Mary在微博上说最近很累很不开心, 而且很担心即将到来的期末考试,请你在Mary的微博中回复, 给她一些建议,使她振作起来。(注意:文中不能出现姓名和学校等相关信息)
   提示:
1. 分析Mary 不开心的原因;
2. 给她一些建议使她减少压力;
3. 给她美好的祝福。
【参考范文】
Dear Mary,
  Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. I know you are under too much pressure. You can’t get on well with your classmates; you may worry about your exams.
  I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.
  Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with your parents is necessary to solve the problem.
  Less pressure, better life! Best wishes to you!
Your,