牛津译林版七年级下册Unit 1 Dream Homes单元话题满分范文必背(含范文)

Unit 1 Dream homes.
单元话题满分范文必背
1．根据所给提示以“My dream house”为题，写一篇短文。80词左右。要点如下：
1. 房子很大，是一个有花园和游泳池的三层房屋。花园里长满了花，很好看。
2. 底楼有一个大的厨房和餐厅，我可以邀请20多个朋友来吃饭。
3. 二楼有电脑房，和一个大客厅，可以和朋友在客厅聊天、看电视。
4. 我有自己的卧室，大又干净。
My dream house
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【答案】My dream house
My dream house is very big. It has three floors with a garden and a swimming pool. The garden is full of flowers and looks very beautiful.
On the ground floor，there is a big kitchen and a dining room. I can invite over twenty friends to have dinner. On the first floor，there is a computer room and a big living room. My friends and I can chat and watch TVin the living rom. I have a bedroom of my own. It is big and clean.
【详解】这是一篇话题作文。以“My dream house”为题，写一篇短文。80词左右。时态主要为一般现在时。人称主要为第三人称。本文较简单，所给词汉语提示，就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点列出提纲，所写内容必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。尽量使用高分句型。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
我梦想的房子
我梦想的房子很大。它是一个有花园和游泳池的三层房屋。花园里长满了花，很好看。
底楼有一个大的厨房和餐厅，我可以邀请20多个朋友来吃饭。二楼有电脑房，和一个大客厅，可以和朋友在客厅聊天、看电视。我有自己的卧室。它又大又干净。
【点睛】书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
2．根据所给内容提示，以My home为题，写一篇80~100词的短文。
提示：
1) 120-square-metre flat on the fourth floor
2) three bedrooms (for my parents, grandparents and me)
3) a study, a computer
4) a bathroom and a shower, a large balcony, a kitchen
My home
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【答案】例文
My home
My family live in a 120-square-metre flat on the fourth floor. It has three bedrooms-one is for my grandparents, one is for my parents and another is for me. There is a study in our flat. It is small but comfortable for me to study in, and I have a computer in it. We have a bathroom and a shower. It’s easy for us to take a bath or shower. Our balcony is very large. There is also a kitchen. Look! My mother is busy cooking lunch for us.
【详解】题干解读：题目要求以“My home”为题写一篇介绍自己家的短文，要求包含提示的所有内容，字数在80~100词之间。
写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时，采用第一人称口吻。主要具体介绍自己家有多大，几个房间以及房间的用途是什么。作文可多利用“there be结构”。
3．房间是个人的私密空间，反映一个人的兴趣和日常爱好。请以“My room”为题，写一篇短文。需要写出你房间物品的位置及特征。
注意：
1. 紧扣主题，语言通顺，书写规范。
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名或校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike, Gina等英文名，校名统一用Guangming Middle School。
3. 词数不少于50词。
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【答案】例文：
My room
I am going to talk about my room. There is a bookcase, a chair, a desk, a bed and a piano in my room. There are lots of books and some notebooks in the bookcase. My bookcase is purple and white. It’s very beautiful. My chair is purple, too. There is a star and a moon on it. It’s very cute. My desk is white. It’s very big. I can do anything on it. There is a lamp on the dresser. My bed is purple and white. And there are two pillows on it. There is a piano in front of my bed. It’s black. I love it.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是话题类书面表达，根据题目要求，以“My room”为题完成短文。
2.写作指导：该题目人称主要使用第三人称，时态主要使用一般现在时；内容包括：房间物品位置以及特征，同时注意结构清晰条理，无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误。
4．书面表达
假设你是Millie, 刚搬进新家，想邀请Simon来你家。根据表格提示写一篇题为Welcome to My New Flat 的短文。
新家环境 1.离姜堰中学(Jiangyan High School )不远，周围有…… 2.邻居乐于助人，……
新家介绍 1.新房子在十二楼,三个卧室，一个餐厅，一个客厅，其中一个是自己的卧室。 2.可以在卧室里……
交通路线 1.沿人民路(Renmin Road)一直往前走，在第二个路口向左拐，你将会见到姜堰中学，我家就在姜堰中学东面。
要 求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）词数：80词左右
Welcome to My New Flat
I have moved into a new flat. It is ……
【答案】例文：
Welcome to My New Flat
I have moved into a new flat. It is not far from Jiangyan High School. There are many shops around it. We can go shopping at weekends. The neighbours are friendly and helpful. They often help each other. We all live a happy life.
My new flat is on the twelfth floor. There are two bedrooms, a dining room and a living room. I have a bedroom of my own. I can read books or listen to music in it.
It’s easy for you to find my new flat. Walk along Renmin Road and go straight on, then take the second turning on the left, and you will see Jiangyan High School. My new flat is to the east of Jiangyan High School.
I am looking forward to meeting you in my new flat.
【详解】本文属于材料作文，邀请西蒙来你家，向西蒙介绍你的家以及来你家的交通路线。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如far from, go shopping, there be, of one’s own, look forward to以及it is adj for sb to do sth，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
5．China Daily报社正在举行题为“My Dream Home”的征文活动，请根据下面的思维导图描述你的梦想家园。要求必须包括所有要点提示，并作适当发挥；词数：80词左右；不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Where is it What’s around it What’s in it What can you do in it
My Dream Home
What are your neighbours like (Give an example) How far is it from the city centre How can people get there
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【答案】
My Dream Home
My dream home is a big house at the foot of a hill. There are many trees and flowers around it. Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. It is far from the city center so people can take a bus or drive there.
There are two floors in my house. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen and a house cinema. I can have meals and watch films at the same time. On the first floor, there are six rooms. My friends can come and stay with me together at the weekend. I have many neighbours and they are friendly and helpful. They often help me with my housework.
This is my dream home. It is a good place to enjoy life.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作；写作时按说明文的格式来写。根据题目要求可知，这篇文章要包括至少四个要点：一、地理位置，周边环境；二、内部设施，活动内容；三、邻里关系；四、离市中心多远，如果邀请朋友来，他们来的交通方式是什么。
2. 写作指导：本文采用第一人称描写我拥有的事物和所做的事情，用第三人称描述其他事物；文章主要采用一般现在时。写作时，按照题干要点可分成三部分来写。第一部分：开篇点题，介绍我梦想中的家，包括地理位置，周边环境以及交通方式。第二部分：介绍房子的内部设施及日常活动内容以及邻里关系。第三部分：总结全文，再次点题说明我梦想中的家是一个好地方。
6．以My Room或者My Classroom为题，写一篇作文。
提示：
（1）Talk about the things in your room/classroom.
（2）Talk about where they are.
要求：
（1）语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。
（2）文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）词数不少于60词。
Hi, everyone! This is my
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【答案】例文：
Hi, everyone! This is my classroom. Some chairs and desks are in the classroom. A bookcase is in the classroom, too. Some books are in the bookcase. A blackboard is on the wall and a map is beside the blackboard. My schoolbag is on my desk. What’s that It’s my teacher’s desk. An English dictionary is on it. My classroom is big and tidy. I like my classroom.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于一篇材料作文，要求以My Room或者My Classroom为题，介绍一下你自己的房间或者教室。选取其中一个写一篇短文即可。
2.写作指导：文章在介绍的时候时态用一般现在时，人称用第三人称，注意主谓一致的问题。主要描述空间内的物品以及物品位置，句子结构主要为主系表结构和动宾结构，写作时尽量结合使用学过的短语和句型来表达。
7．假如下面是你房间的图片，请你根据这幅图片写一篇英语短文，描述一下你房间里物品的位置。
要求：1、短文应包括图片中的全部内容(可适当发挥)、条理清楚、行文连贯；
2、词数60左右、开头已给出、不计入总词数。
My Room
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【答案】高分范文
My Room
This is a picture of my room. There is a desk and a bed in the room. My black computer is on the desk. My books are on the desk, too. Where is my schoolbag It is on the bed. A photo of my family is on the wall. My father, my mother and I are in the picture. My room is small but tidy.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这是一篇看图作文。主要是描写自己的房间，按照图中展示，用正确的英语把所描述的内容表达出来，要选用恰当的词汇和短语进行描写。
2.写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时展开介绍。文章主要通过图片介绍自己房间的摆设情况，注意文章描写要具体，思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当，意思通俗易懂。
8．假如你是吴琳，你刚搬进了位于中心街的新房子。请根据下面的提示，向你的英国朋友（Julie）介绍一下你的新房子及其周边的环境。
提示：
1.新房子位于中心街；
2.新房子很大而且干净；
3.新房子左边是一个饭店，右边是一个邮局，对面是一个超市，后面是一个公园（park），附近还有银行和图书馆；
4.你经常去公园散步，喜欢花儿和干净的空气；
5.最喜欢的地方是图书馆，周末常去那里看书。
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯；
2.介绍要包括所有的提示信息；
3.不少于60词。
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【答案】参考范文
Dear Julie,
Let me tell you something about my new house.
My new house is on Center Street. It’s very big and clean. There is a restaurant on its left. A post office is on its right. There is a supermarket across from my new house. A park is behind it. I often take a walk there because I love the flowers and the clean air. There is a bank and a library near my house. My favorite place is the library. I enjoy reading there on weekends.
I love my new house very much.
Yours,
Wu Lin
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据所给提示给英国朋友介绍一下新房子及其周边的环境。
2.写作指导：人称以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态用一般现在时。本文可运用“三步三段法”介绍作者的新房所在街区的情况。第一步：引入话题（第一段）；第二步：介绍新房的位置及周围情况（第二段）；第三步：总结并表达对新房的喜爱之情（第三段）。写作时要包含所有的提示信息，合理组织语言。
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