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Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7.
人教新目标版 九年级上
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Learning objectives
1. 让学生学会描写过去的回忆和经历。学会运用句型:
I remember doing sth. I used to do sth. 正确运用词汇和语法结构，适当使用连接词和主从复合句。
2.用英文描写自己对学校生活的回忆，并谈论对未来生活的展望，通过小组活动培养合作精神，共同完成学习任务。
3.和大家分享初中生活的记忆和经历，懂得珍惜友情，学会感恩，并展望美好未来。
Warming-up
dreams
discoveries
failures
tears
laughter
sorrows
joys
excitement
challenges
successes
school days
What do you think you can get when you experience your school days
Free talk
What’s your special memories
being a volunteer
having New Year's parties
winning a prize.
having a sports meeting
morning readings
What words can describe your teacher
teachers
...
patient
knowledgable
caring
cooperative
understanding
humorous
thankful
classmates
...
brave
friendly
openminded
cooperative
creative
helpful
energetic
What words can describe your classmates
Who is the person / What is the event
When and where did you first meet this person / When and where did this event happen
How did you feel when you met this person / How did you feel when this event happened
How did this person help you / What happened later
How has this person’s advice / event changed your life
Think of a person or an event from junior high school that you will never forget. Make some notes about how this person or event changed your life in some way.
3a
Write a passage about the person or event you thought about in 3a.
3b
Describe the person/event.
Explain how you feel about this person/event.
Describe how this person/event has changed your life.
1. 体裁：记叙文
2. 话题：难忘的人或事件
3. 时态：一般过去时为主
4. 人称：以第一人称为主
Writing tips:
写作指导
写中学生活中难忘的人/事
事件要有六要素
最后阐述这件事对自己所产生的影响
when
where
who
what
how
why
If you want to write about a person …
The first time you met
Person
Appearance & personality
Things happened to you
How he / she helped you
How you’ve changed
Your judgement of him / her
方法：
1. 对人物的出场、肖像进行描写。简要介绍该人物。
2. 选择一个角度，通过对某些事情的叙述，更加生动地描写人物，描写该人物如何对你产生了影响。
3. 总结自己对人物的评价、情感等。
How to write a person who you’ll never forget
Presentation
Words preparation
Appearance：
good-looking, pretty, lovely, slim, overweight, fit, wear,
middle-aged, glasses, always smile…
Personality:
brave, self-confident, warm-hearted, patient, easy-going, outgoing, energetic, forgetful, generous, hardworking, helpful, humorous, optimistic, punctual, talented, honest,
good-tempered, straightforward, considerate…
If you want to write about an event …
When and where
Event
What happened
What’s the result
How you feel about the event
How you’ve changed
Your judgement of the event
方法：
交代清楚时间、地点和人物，一般用过去式。
2.详细描述事情发生的经过和结果。
3.发表对此事的看法和感受。
How to write a thing which you’ll never forget
Presentation
1. I once had an experience…
2. It was the most unforgettable experience that has ever happened in my life.
3. The most unforgettable experience in my memory was that one day my classmates and I went to the park.
4. I will never forget the military training.
5. There are a lot of memories in my heart that I can’t forget. When I was … years old, I ...
You may begin like this：
6. As we all know, everyone has something special in his life.
I think I will never forget … because on that day …
7. I think my junior high was wonderful, because it taught
me to be …
8. Whenever I open the book full of photos, I always look
back when I …
9. I still remember the most valuable time that I have ever
had.
10. Everyone has a different junior high. It may be
wonderful, exciting or hard. I have a …junior high.
1. I think this is the most unforgettable experience in my memory.
2. On that day, I began to feel that I have the duty for my life. And I must be stronger.
3. I felt that I was growing up, and I should be responsible for myself.
4. How exciting and unforgettable the experience was!
Your feelings
5. It’s really an important day to me and I’ll learn to be … all the time.
6. Junior high is a precious memory without pressure, competition and lots of homework.
7. From this experience, I learnt that I should be careful. If I am careless, I will lose a lot of chances.
The one person from my junior high school days that I will never forget is Mrs.Wang, my English teacher in Grade 7.
When I first started Grade 7, I was shy and did not dare to speak to anyone. My English was not very good and I felt nervous when I had to answer questions in class. I would have problems speaking even though I knew the answer. I felt quite unhappy with myself.
Sample writing:
时态用一般过去时，以第一人称为主，叙述事情
开头点题，叙述难忘的人
One day Mrs. Wang spoke to me after class. She encouraged me to speak slowly. She also told me that she believed I could speak well if I practiced more. I was touched by what she said and it made me work harder on my speaking skills.
Mrs. Wang continued to encourage me and I became even more confident. I improved so much that I won an English speech contest that year! I will always be thankful to Mrs. Wang for her advice and support.
叙述这个重要的人对自己产生的影响
用一般过去时叙述事件
Group work
级别 项目 A (正确) B （1—2处错误） C （3—4处错误） D
（>4处错误）
格式
时态
连接词
句式
拼写
书写
Check your composition in your group.
Share your stories!
Exchange your passage with your partner, then correct mistakes you made.
Post-writing
Feelings Memories/Experiences
excited
happy
worried
sad
tired
proud
shy
1. What happened in junior high that made you have these
feelings Complete the chart.
Self Check
Feelings Memories/Experiences
excited
happy
worried
Suggested answers:
I felt most excited when I won the first prize in the speech competition.
I was happy when our math teacher praised me and I worked harder than before.
I felt worried when our teacher told us that she was giving us a surprise test.
Feelings Memories/Experiences
sad
tired
proud
shy
I was sad when I had a fight with my best friend and we didn’t talk to each other for a week.
I was tired after staying up late at night to study.
I felt proud when our class won the first prize in the school sports meet.
I felt shy on the first day of Grade 7 and did not dare to talk to anyone.
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets.
I can’t __________ (believe) that today is the last day of junior high school. I still ___________ (remember) the first day of Grade 7 like it was yesterday. I used to _____ (be) a really shy person, so on the first day of junior high, I _______ (be) so scared and nervous. I _________ (think) that I would never make any friends.
believe
remember
be
was
thought
But now, I ____________(realize) that I was just being silly. Since then, I __________ (make) so many good friends and I ________________ (share) so many good memories with them. Even though I ________ (be) sad that junior high is over, I _____________ (look) forward to new experiences in senior high!
realize
have made
share/have shared
am
look/am looking
Homework
（2021黑龙江齐齐哈尔中考 改编）初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去，你是否感到充实和快乐？展望未来，你是否对高中生活充满期待？请结合以下提示写一篇毕业班会演讲稿。
提示：1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获；
2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；
3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。
要求：1. 80~100词，格式正确；
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
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