人教新目标(Go for it)版九年级全册Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark. Section B (3a-self check) Writing课

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Unit 4
I used to be afraid of the dark
Section B (3a-self check) Writing
To know how to write their changes by using the sentence structure “...used to..., but now...”
To describe the biggest change and explain how it happened.
To encourage students to improve themselves.
Objectives
How I have changed!
5 years ago
now
Lead-in
Where can we find our changes
appearance
(外貌)
personality
（性格）
hobby
（爱好）
shy--
serious--
clever--
silent--
careful--
polite--
lazy--
my changes
outgoing
short--
fat--
young--
ugly--
have short hair--
wear glasses
tall
expressions to describe appearance
expressions to describe personality
expressions to describe hobby
like/hate/dislike doing sth.
be interested in sth.
thin
old
beautiful
have long hair
humorous
noisy
stupid
careless
impolite
hard-working
How to describe our changes
...used to..., but now....
Words
The biggest change in my life is that_____________
my biggest change
I’m not shy anymore.
I made it by_______________________________
speaking in public.
我对英语的兴趣更浓厚了。
I’m more interested in English.
joining the English club and having conversations with others
我再也不是一个小胖子了。
I’m not fat anymore.
doing exercise and eating less food
Sentences
Thanks to…/ ... advised me to.../ ...had a great influence on me...
Group work
Talk about your biggest change with your partner and explain how it happened.
(讲述你最重要的一个变化及其它是如何发生的)
The biggest change in my life is that_____________
I’m not …. anymore
I become much thinner/heavier/more outgoing...
I do better/worse in...
I'm more/less interested in …
….
I made it by doing…./ Thanks to…/ ... advised me to.../ ...had a great influence on me...
Sentences
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be very shy and quiet, but now I am outgoing and popular. I used to like sleeping all the time, but now I am interested in swimming. Besides, I used to fail the exams, but now I get good scores on my exams.
The biggest change in my life is that I am not a fat boy any more. In the past, I was very heavy. My parents were very worried about me. My best friend John had a great influence on me. He advised me to swim with him every day. Athough the journey was long and painful, I finally succeeded in losing weight. How I am proud of myself!
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be very shy and quiet, but now I am outgoing and popular. Besides, I used to like sleeping all the time, but now I am interested in swimming.
The biggest change in my life is that I'm not fat any more. In the past, I was very heavy. My parents were very worried about me. Thanks to my best friend Kate, she advised me to swim with her every day. Although the journey was long and painful, I finally succeeded in losing weight. How I am proud of myself!
In a word(总之), I have become much better than before. I will keep improving myself.
主旨句
Change in personality
Change in hobby
How did it happen
the biggest change
Meaning of the changes
Stucture
How I have changed!
Structure
Lead in your topic
Beginning
Body
Ending
Set examples to show how you have changed.
Summarize your passage.
My
change
Stucture
Divided passages
Grammar mistakes
Clear hand-writing
Attention!!
Writing Practice
While writing
How I have changed!
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中考模拟训练
2019中考英语作文预测：（满分20分）
初中生活中，你有些什么改变？最大的变化是什么，你是怎样改变的？请以“How I Have Changed” 为题写一篇英语小短文，描述你生活中发生的变化，写作内容可以包括外貌性格、兴趣爱好和行为习惯等方面。
要求：1. 要求80-120词；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名。
what
how
Polish your writing
1. 小组合作，按照《中考英语作文评分标准》互相评分，并用红笔改出错误，给出评分意见;
2. 每组挑选最佳的作文上台展示。
Group work
中考作文评分标准
Structure:divided passages, coherence
Contents: complete
Language：spelling, grammar, accuracy
Hand-writing: beautiful
Show your writing
Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.
Words: Appearance/ Personality/Hobbies...
Sentence : used to do…...but now……
Passage: Divided passages/Grammar
mistakes/Clear hand-writing
summary
遣词
造句
成文
People sure change!
Let’s improve ourselves to be a better man.
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be very shy and quiet, but now I am outgoing and popular. I used to like sleeping all the time, but now I am interested in swimming.
The biggest change in my life is that I'm not fat any more. In the past, I was very heavy. My parents were very worried about me. .Thanks to my best friend Kate, she advised me to swim with her every day. Although the journey was long and painful, I finally succeeded in losing weight. How I am proud of myself!
In a word, I have become much better than before. I will keep improving myself.
How I have changed!
知识迁移
she has
My mother
She
she’s
She
she’s
her
she’s
she
her
her
her
her
herself
herself
she
she
She
she
homework
Make a survey on how your family member/friend
has changed.
2. Write a passage according to your survey.
People sure change!
Let’s improve ourselves to be a better man.
Thank you!