Unit 3 Welcome to Sunshine Town单元话题满分范文必背（含解析）

Unit 3 Welcome to Sunshine Town!
单元话题满分范文必背
1．Mary是一位来自英国的交换生，她将在你们学校待半个月，你打算趁“五一”假期带她参观一下苏州。请根据下面所给的要点介绍苏州：
要点：
①苏州占地8000多平方公里，离上海不远，乘火车需要一个小时左右；
②这里空气新鲜，能闻到花香，听到鸟叫；
③在这里你可以参观园林，吃到美味的食物，还能欣赏精彩的昆曲（Kunqu opera）；
④人们喜欢生活在这里，我觉得……
要求：
①文章内容要包括所有要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
②对第4要点的省略号部分作1 - 2句话的合理发挥；
③词数在90词左右，开头给出的内容不算字数。
I am very glad to tell you something about Suzhou. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I am very glad to tell you something about Suzhou. Suzhou is an old city. It is near Shanghai. Suzhou covers an area of more than 8000 square kilometers and is not far from Shanghai. It only takes about an hour to go to Shanghai by train.
There’re a lot of parks in it. The air here is fresh, you can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. A lot of visitors come to visit Suzhou every year and they have great fun here. You can visit the gardens. You can enjoy all kinds of delicious food. You can also enjoy wonderful Kunqu opera.
People all enjoy living here. I think you will like staying here too. I hope Suzhou will get more and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要在文中介绍自己的家乡苏州的相关信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍苏州的地理位置和面积；
第二步，介绍苏州的景点、环境、美食以及特色昆曲；
第三步，总结全文，讲述自己对苏州的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①cover an area of... 占地……
②It takes sb time to do sth 花费某人多少时间做某事
③all kinds of 许多种
④have great fun 玩得开心
[高分句型]
①It only takes about an hour to go to Shanghai by train.（动词不定式作主语）
②I think you will like staying here too.（think后跟省略that的宾语从句）
2．你的笔友Amy想要来你家乡参观。请你按照下面提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的文章，向她介绍你的家乡。
要点：
1.我的家乡是一个离江阴不远的小镇。每天都有去市中心的公交车。
2.当地人乐意随时帮助别人，一些人可以帮忙设计家，另一些人可以帮忙修理洗衣机或者冰箱。
3.沿着街道走，在第二个十字路口，有一个美丽的公园，公园里鸟语花香，我们……
4.每年有许多游客来参观我的家乡。我期盼着……
要求：
1.文章内容必须包括所有要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，词数在80个左右。
2. 对第3, 4要点的省略号部分作1—2句话的合理发挥；
3.作文内容必须写在答题卷指定的位置，写在试卷上其他位置无效。
Hi, Amy, I’m glad to hear that you like my hometown.
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【答案】例文：
Hi, Amy, I’m glad to hear that you like my hometown. My hometown is a town not far away from Jiangyin. There are buses to the city center every day. Local people are ready to help others at any time. Some people can help design homes, others can help fix washing machines or fridges. Walk along the street. At the second crossing, there is a beautiful park. We can smell the flowers and hear the birds. We can row boats on the lake and fly kites. Every year, many visitors come to my hometown. I look forward to showing you around my hometown some day.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据内容提示向笔友Amy介绍自己的家乡，学生需要围绕题目所给的四点提示从不同的方面展开介绍。必须要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时使用第一人称和第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。正文根据提示内容逐步展开介绍，并对第三第四点进行适当补充，同时注意选用合适的连词、短语和句型来将内容进行串联和拓展；文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
3．请以“My hometown”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点如下：
1. 我的家乡是一座美丽的现代化城市，占地约26万平方英里；
2. 开车到上海只需1个小时，每天都有公交车到市中心；
3. 安静，空气新鲜，能听到鸟叫，闻到花香；
4. 这里的博物馆有许多艺术品可看，游客可以全面了解中国历史；
5. 我很幸运能够住在这个城市，如果你来，我将会很开心地带你参观家乡。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语言规范；
2. 80词左右
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【答案】例文
My hometown
My hometown is a modern and beautiful city. It has an area of about 260,000 square miles. It takes us only one hour to drive to Shanghai. There are buses to the city centre every day.
It is quiet and has fresh air. We can hear the birds sing and smell the flowers. There are lots of works of art to see in the museums here. Visitors can learn all about China’s history.
I am lucky to live in this city. I will be very happy to show you around my hometown if you come here.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My hometown”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍家乡的概况，包括面积和交通等；第二段介绍家乡的环境，景点等；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
4．假如你是王林，想要邀请李平来你的家乡镇江游玩。请根据以下表格中所提供信息，写一封英文信并向他介绍你的家乡。
概况 占地面积超过3800平方公里。
环境 青山绿水，鸟语花香，是一座美丽且现代化的城市。
风土人情 1. 有许多名胜古迹，如金山、焦山和北固山。 2. 市中心有许多大型购物中心、电影院等。 3. 也以美食而闻名，……
个人住所 一个城镇的小区里，高楼耸立，邻里友好。
附近设施 一个公园，几家超市和餐馆。
闲暇活动 散步、购物、享受美食。
个人感受 ……（一至两点）
注意事项：
1. 信中需包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数在80字左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Ping,I’m writing to invite you to my hometown. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope to see you soon.
Yours
Wang Lin
【答案】参考范文：
Dear Li Ping,
I’m writing to invite you to my hometown. I live in a city named Zhenjiang. It has an area of more than 3,800 square kilometers. Also, it is a beautiful and modern city with green mountains and clear water. And there are many colorful flowers and all kinds of birds. Besides, there are many famous places of interest such as Jinshan mountain, Jiaoshan Mountain and Beigu Mountain. There are also many big shopping malls and theatres in it. The food here is famous too, especially the vinegar which is famous around the country.
I live in a community of a town, where there are many tall buildings and neighbors here are very kind. There is a park, several supermarkets and some restaurants. When I’m free, I often go for a walk in the park, go shopping in the supermarket and enjoy nice food in the restaurants.
It is really a good place to live and I feel happy to live here.
I hope to see you soon.
Yours
Wang Lin
【详解】题干解读：题目要求给李平写一封信介绍你的故乡——镇江，要求包含表格中所有要点，可适当发挥。
写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主，采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用4段落格式，第一段：介绍家乡的环境和风土人情；第二段：介绍自己居住环境和平时的休闲活动；第三段：讲述自己的感受；第四段：客套话语，期盼很快见到李平。
5．根据下面的汉语提示，写一篇短文介绍你的家乡，70词左右，包含以下要点。
要点：1．我的家乡离徐州市不远，很美丽；
2．我家离市中心乘公交车约40分钟的路程，我家周围有许多建筑物；
3．市中心有购物商场、电影院；
4．我的家乡空气清新，家乡的人友好、善良。
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【答案】One possible version:
My hometown is not far from Xuzhou. It is very beautiful. It takes about 40 minutes to go to the city centre from my home by bus. There are many buildings around my home. In the centre of the city, there are shopping malls and cinemas. The air is fresh in my hometown. People here are kind and friendly. I love my hometown.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容写一篇短文介绍自己的家乡。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍家乡的位置、周边环境、配套设施以及家乡的人等内容。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
6．假定你是吴江，你的英国笔友John计划来你的家乡南京游玩，给你发了封电子邮件，想详细了解你的家乡南京。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，并根据邮件内容用英语回信。
To: JangWu@chin. com
From: John2021@
Subject: your hometown
Dear Wu Jiang, How are you Glad to hear from you. I am planning my trip to China these days. I’m thinking about travelling to your hometown—Nanjing. Would you please tell me these things 1. What do you think of the environment（环境）in your hometown 2. What are people in your neighbourhood like Way do you think so （至少举两个例子） 3. What can I do when I travel in Nanjing Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes John
注意：
1. 回信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数80个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数.
Dear John:I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown-Nanjing. It is a good place to visit.
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I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Nanjing!
All the best
Wu Jiang
【答案】例文
Dear John:
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown-Nanjing. It is a good place to visit.
Nanjing is a beautiful city in Jiangsu. Green trees are on each side of the city streets, which makes the whole city green and clean.
The people in Nanjing are nice. My neighbors are friendly and helpful. If I forget my keys, Uncle Ming, one of my neighbors, will invite me to his house to wait for my parents. What’s more, if I have no time to walk my dog, there will be warmhearted neighbors to give me a hand.
If you come to Nanjing, you can go to different kinds of museums to learn Chinese history. And you can have a good time in Xuanwu Lake.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Nanjing!
All the best
Wu Jiang
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。向John介绍自己的家乡南京。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。分为五段式：第一段和最后一段已给出；第二段介绍南京的环境；第三段介绍社区的人民；第四段介绍南京的旅游胜地。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
7．假设你是Daniel，你的英国笔友John计划来你的家乡泰州游玩，并给你发了封电子邮件，想详细了解你的家乡。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，并根据邮件内容用英语回信，短文开头和结尾已给出，词数80左右。
To: daniel@
From: john2021@
Subject: your hometown
Dear Daniel, How are you Glad to hear from you. I am planning my trip to China these days. I’m thinking about travelling to your hometown-Taizhou. I have some questions here. Would you please tell me 1.What do you think of the environment（环境）in your hometown 2.What are people in your neighbourhood like Why do you think so （至少举两个例子） 3.What can I do when I travel in Taizhou Please write back. Best wishes, John
Dear John,I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Taizhou. It’s a good place to visit.
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Hope to see you soon.
Yours.
Daniel
【答案】例文
Dear John,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Taizhou. It’s a good place to visit.
The air is fresh in Taizhou. There are many trees and rivers. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. The people here are kind and helpful. In my community, people often help each other with problems. In the car, they always take the initiative to give up their seats to others, and they are especially enthusiastic to some outsiders who ask for directions. They always tell them how to get there very carefully. When you come to Taizhou, you can go to different parks and eat Chinese food. If you go to different places in Taizhou, you can take a bus. There are buses to different places every day.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours.
Daniel
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件，向John介绍了自己的家乡。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段先介绍家乡的环境，邻居的热情好客以及自己能做的事情。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
8．假如你是Dustin，打算向你的朋友Lily介绍你的家乡苏州。请根据下面内容提示和要求，写一篇英语书信，词数约90词，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
1. 介绍家乡苏州的地理位置和风土人情。
2. 赞美苏州的自然和人文环境。
3. 分享你在苏州可以做的一些有意义的事情。
4. 可以适当发挥，信中不得提及个人真实姓名及校名。
Dear Lily,
I'm glad to tell you something about my hometown.
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Welcome to my hometown!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Dustin
【答案】 Suzhou is my hometown. It’s one of the biggest cities in Eastern China. It is in the southeast of Jiangsu Province. It has over 2,500 years of rich history. It is a famous ancient capital, where people live by rivers with the bridges everywhere. So it’s called “Venice of the East” or “Venice of China”. It’s famous for the canals, stone bridges and beautiful scenery. It has also been an important center for China’s silk industry. You can come here to visit Suzhou Museum and Taihu Lake. You can also enjoy Kunqu Opera here. Suzhou is a good place to go shopping. There are many big supermarkets and famous e here and enjoy yourself. I am looking forward to your coming and I will show you around it.
【详解】题干解读：本文需要介绍苏州的地理位置、风土人情、以及自然和人文环境。一定抓住它的特点。本文还要写出苏州可以做的一些有意义的事情。这些有意义的事情也要结合它的上述特点。
写作指导：1. 明确文章结构。先介绍苏州的地理位置、风土人情、以及自然和人文环境，再介绍可以做的一些有意义的事情。2. 明确人称时态。介绍苏州用第三人称“it”，介绍在苏州可以做的一些有意义的事情时，可以用第二人称。时态就用一般现在时。3.常用的短语或句式：in the southeast of, it’s called…, It’s famous for…, You can+动原。
9．五一劳动节快到了，假如你是Sandy，想要给你的朋友Amy写一封信，介绍你的家乡情况，并邀请对方到你的家乡来玩。根据下面提供的信息，用英语写一篇邀请信。
要点：
地理位置 在中国的东南部
环境 环境优美，空气清新，鸟语花香。
邻居们友好善良，...(发挥1-2点)
活动 很多好玩地方——瘦西湖公园(The Slender West Lake )、大明寺(The Daming Temple)等。 可以吃到各种美食。
交通 可以乘飞机到杨泰机场。 离上海不远，乘高铁(high-speed train)只要 1个多小时。
希望 …… …… (用两句话表达你的看法)
要求：1)表达清楚，包含所有要点，上下文连贯，可以适当发挥；
2)词数：80词左右。
3)参考词汇：环境 environment
Dear Amy,May Day is coming and I would like to invite you to visit my hometown. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Sandy
【答案】例文：
Dear Amy,
May Day is coming and I would like to invite you to visit my hometown.
It’s in the southeast of China. The environment in my community is very nice. Every morning, I can smell the beautiful flowers and hear the birds singing. My neighbors are friendly and kind. They often help people with all kinds of problems. People here are like a big family. There are many interesting places here, for example, the Slender West Lake, the Daming Temple and so on. We can also enjoy all kinds of delicious food. We have very convenient transportation here. You can fly to Yangtai Airport. It is not far from Shanghai, just over an hour by high-speed train.
I hope you will like it and have a good time here. I can’t wait to meet you soon. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Sandy
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据表格中的要点提示从“地理位置、环境、活动、交通、希望”五方面来介绍你的家乡情况，并邀请你的朋友Amy到你的家乡来玩。可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：信的开头已给出，写作时应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
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