2023届高考英语一轮复习专题：读后续写微技能之情感描写学案(无答案）

读后续写微技能之为微专题------情感描写(学案)
〖学习主题〗
读后续写情感线是贯穿于整个续写续写的一条主线，本课将从多角度指导学生进行续写微技能----情感描写训练。（两课时）
〖课标要求〗
根据语篇中的事实进行逻辑推理；
批判性地审视语篇的价值取向、语篇的结构和语篇的连贯性；
在理解语篇的基础上，提取关键要素，运用准确语言，进行创造性写作；
使用衔接手段有效提高语篇的连贯性；
使用准确词汇、语法进行创造性地表达；
〖学习目标〗
1. 感知情感描写的生动表达；
2.总结归纳直接和间接生动描写情感的写作方法；
3.总结归纳直接和间接描写情感的句式；
4.结合情境，表达喜悦、感激、紧张、担心和惊讶等情感。
〖评价任务〗
能根据直接和间接情感描写方法正确、多元地进行句子仿写。
能根据情感描写地5大句式进行句子仿写
结合情境，进行知识迁移，能在片段描写中综合运用描写方法和5大句式。
〖学习过程〗
〖探究1〗
Compare the following underlined expressions and discuss in group about which one is more vivid(生动的) and sensible(可感知的). Why
a) Seeing Chinese athletes were ahead, I was very happy.
b) Seeing Chinese athletes were ahead, I was floating in an ocean of happiness.
2. a) A strong sense of tension took hold of me when the Hungarian athlete got ahead.
b) I became tense when the Hungarian athlete got ahead.
3. a) A delighted expression flashed over Ren when he came first.
b) Ren was overjoyed when he came first.
〖总结1〗
直接情感描写可以通过_______、________等修辞手法或富有________的动词，直接向读者展示人物内心情感的强弱变化，生动形象，富有动感，更易于打动读者。常用的表达句式有：
Sb ________________________ +情感名词
be overcome with ..被..征服
be __________________________ by... 被控制/侵袭
(A surge/ sense/ wave / ripple of) +情感名词+ ___________________ sb
+ ______________ sb
+ crept (creep -crept-crept) on sb 爬上心头
A +情感形容词+ expression _____________ one’s face. 掠过, 浮现
4）Much _____________________+情感名词， sb... 令某人非常的是....
5)_____________+情感（动词）+ sb. was that 从句 让某人...的是
〖探究2〗
1.Which of the following description shows Ren Ziwei’s emotion better Why
a) A smile spread over Ren’s face and he waved to the crowd delightedly and shed tears when he came first.
b) Ren Ziwei was overjoyed when he came first.
〖总结2〗
间接情感描写还可以通过人物的_________，如__________和手、脚、眼、嘴、口、心、胃、呼吸等________动作描写，栩栩如生地向读者展现人物的情感、形象。
〖Practice 1〗Try to add emotion, facial expression and body movement to make the following description more vivid.
1) 他很害怕：
At the sight of the wolf , he ____________________________________________________
At the sight of the wolf , he ____________________________________________________
2) 他很开心：
When he was informed that he got the chance to sing in the contest ,he ____________________
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When he was informed that he got the chance to sing in the contest ,he ____________________
____________________________________________________________________________
3) 他很伤心：
When hearing he lost the game ,he__________________________________________________
When hearing he lost the game ,he__________________________________________________
4)他很愤怒
When his sister refused his request for shoveling the snow together again ,he ______________
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When his sister refused his request for shoveling the snow together again ,he ______________
___________________________________________________________________________
5)他很惊讶
When he found behind his friend crept a snake, ______________________________________
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When he found behind his friend crept a snake, __________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
6) 他很紧张，焦虑
Knowing that the result would be annouced , ____________________________________
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Knowing that the result would be annouced , ______________________________________
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〖探究3 〗 Read out the sentences and try to summarize the strucutre of the following sentences .
Nervous and anxious, he sat there and waited for the result.
2.Seized by/Floating in an ocean of tension, he sat there and waited for the result.
3,With his heart pounding wildly ,he sat there and waited for the result.
4.His heart pounding wildly,he sat there and waited for the result.
5. So anxious did he feel that his palms sweated and his heart pounded wildly
〖总结3〗
情感描写可以直接描写和间接描写或者多个肢体动作相结合，常用的语言结构有：
_____________________，+句子；
______________________, +句子 ；
______________________, +句子
______________________, +句子
5._____________________________
〖Practise 2 〗
Try to describe the following emotion using the sentence structure above to make it vivid and sensible to readers.
___________________________________, the boy widened his eyes.
2..___________________________________, the boy widened his eyes.
3___________________________________, the boy widened his eyes.
4.___________________________________, the boy widened his eyes.
5..___________________________________ the boy widened his eyes.
〖Practise 3 〗
1______________________________, he shouted, “I entered the competition.”
______________________________, he shouted, “I entered the competition.”
3______________________________, he shouted, “I entered the competition.”
4______________________________, he shouted, “I entered the competition.”
5.______________________________, he shouted, “I entered the competition.”
〖practise 4 〗综合运用: ( 直接描写和间接描写或者多个间接描写相结合+ 常用的句式结构）
Try to use the expressions or sentence patterns learned (at least 2) to describe emotions based on the following situations.
I stepped onto the stage.___________________________________________________
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I took a deep breath and began my speech. At first, I couldn’t speak fluently but I remembered what my teacher, Mr. Li instructed(指导) me to focus on my speech during my practice. I did so and gradually it went smoothly. In the end, the audience gave me a big applause and Mr. Li gave me a thumb-up. Then we waited for the result.
After what seemed like ages, the judge announced the result and I came first.________
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