Section Ⅳ Writing —— 旅游报告
[题目要求]
假如你上周去北京旅游，参观了长城，请根据以下信息要点写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍该景点并谈谈你的参观感受。
历史 有两千多年的历史。
特点 1.世界上最长的城墙，长6 000 多千米；2．建筑材料主要为石头、砖头，修建工作都是人工进行；3．主要用于防御外来入侵者，沿墙每隔几百米就有烽火台(watchtower)。
现状 世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多国内外的游客到长城观光旅游。
第一步：准确审题保基本分
1．体裁：本文为__________；
2．时态：介绍长城时主要用__________；
3．人称：本文的主要人称为__________。
第二步：写对词块保要点分
1．参观长城 ____________________
2．有……的历史 ____________________
3．由石头和砖头制成 ____________________
4．建设 ____________________
5．防御外来入侵者 ____________________
6．吸引许多游客 ____________________
第三步：写美句子赢靓点分
(一)完成句子(先写对)
1．如果没有参观长城，北京之行就不算完整。
No visit to Beijing is complete ____________________the Great Wall.
2．长城长6 000多千米。
The Great Wall is ________________________________________.
3．它是世界上最长的城墙。
It is ____________________ in the world.
4．长城是世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多国内外的游客到长城观光旅游。
The Great Wall is ________________________________________ in the world and it ________________________________________ every year.
(二)句式升级(再写美)
1．使用非限制性定语从句把句2和句3合并为复合句
___________________________________________________________________________ 2．用“such ... that ...”句型改写句4
___________________________________________________________________________第四步：衔接成文创高分
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作话题——景点介绍
一、背话题词汇
1．geography n． 地理
2．capital n. 首府；省会
3．attractive adj. 迷人的；有吸引力的
4．state n. 州
5．stream n. 小河；溪流
6．mountainous adj. 多山的
7．tourist n. 旅行者；观光者
8.journey n. 旅行；路程
9.outing n. 郊游；远足
10.museum n. 博物馆；博物院
11.crowded adj. 拥挤的
12.abroad adv. 到(在)国外
13．go on/make a trip 去旅行
14．be located/situated in 坐落在
15．with a history of 有……的历史
16．with/have a population of 有……人口
17．cover an area of 面积有……
18．be rich/abundant in 盛产
19．be well known for/as 因为/作为……而出名
20．beautiful scenery 美丽的风景
21．places of interest 名胜
22．a tourist destination 旅游胜地
二、背话题佳句
1．It is rich in natural sources such as coal and gold, and has mild climate.
它的自然资源得天独厚，有丰富的煤和金矿，而且气候温和。
2．It is so famous that every year thousands of Chinese and foreign friends pay a visit to it.
它如此著名以至于每年成千上万的中国游客和外国朋友慕名而来。
3．As we can enjoy, the scenery is beautiful and the air is fresh, attracting a number of tourists from all over the world.
正如我们所喜欢的，这里风景优美，空气新鲜，吸引着一些来自世界各地的游客。
4．Canada, which is the second largest country in the world，covers an area of 9.97 million square kilometres.
加拿大，世界第二大国，占地 997万平方公里。
5．Once on the top of the hill, we were deeply attracted by the beautiful scenery.
一到达山顶，我们就被这里美丽的风景深深吸引了。
6．When we reached the farm, we were given a warm welcome.
我们一到达农场，就受到了热烈欢迎。
7．In Beijing, there are many places of interest and historical spots, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and so on.
在北京有很多名胜古迹，如长城、颐和园等。
8．As is known to us all, Mount Huashan is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and its unique characteristics.
正如大家所知道的，华山以它险峻的悬崖和它独一无二的特征而出名。Section Ⅳ Writing —— 旅游报告
[题目要求]
假如你上周去北京旅游，参观了长城，请根据以下信息要点写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍该景点并谈谈你的参观感受。
历史 有两千多年的历史。
特点 1.世界上最长的城墙，长6 000 多千米；2．建筑材料主要为石头、砖头，修建工作都是人工进行；3．主要用于防御外来入侵者，沿墙每隔几百米就有烽火台(watchtower)。
现状 世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多国内外的游客到长城观光旅游。
第一步：准确审题保基本分
1．体裁：本文为记叙文；
2．时态：介绍长城时主要用一般现在时；
3．人称：本文的主要人称为第一人称。
第二步：写对词块保要点分
1．参观长城 visit_the_Great_Wall
2．有……的历史 have_a_history_of
3．由石头和砖头制成 be_made_of_stones_and_bricks
4．建设 construction
5．防御外来入侵者 defend_..._against_foreign_invaders
6．吸引许多游客 attract_many_visitors
第三步：写美句子赢靓点分
(一)完成句子(先写对)
1．如果没有参观长城，北京之行就不算完整。
No visit to Beijing is complete without_a_visit_to the Great Wall.
2．长城长6 000多千米。
The Great Wall is more_than_6,000_kilometers_long.
3．它是世界上最长的城墙。
It is the_longest_wall in the world.
4．长城是世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多国内外的游客到长城观光旅游。
The Great Wall is one_of_the_most_famous_places_of_interest in the world and it attracts_many_visitors_from_home_and_abroad every year.
(二)句式升级(再写美)
1．使用非限制性定语从句把句2和句3合并为复合句
The_Great_Wall,_which_is_more_than_6,000_kilometers_long,_is_the_longest_wall_in_the_world.
2．用“such ... that ...”句型改写句4
The_Great_Wall_is_such_a_famous_place_of_interest_in_the_world_that_it_attracts_many_visitors_from_home_and_abroad_every_year.
第四步：衔接成文创高分
Last week, I went to Beijing and visited the Great Wall. It's so wonderful that people often say no visit to Beijing is complete without a visit to the Great Wall.
The Great Wall, which is more than 6,000 kilometers long, is the longest wall in the world. It has a history of more than 2,000 years. It is made of stones and bricks and almost all the construction was done by hand without any machine. As the wall was built to defend the country against foreign invaders, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall. Now, the Great Wall is such a famous place of interest in the world that it attracts many visitors from home and abroad every year.
If you have a chance to visit it, you will be delighted with the great tourist attraction.
写作话题——景点介绍
一、背话题词汇
1．geography n． 地理
2．capital n. 首府；省会
3．attractive adj. 迷人的；有吸引力的
4．state n. 州
5．stream n. 小河；溪流
6．mountainous adj. 多山的
7．tourist n. 旅行者；观光者
8.journey n. 旅行；路程
9.outing n. 郊游；远足
10.museum n. 博物馆；博物院
11.crowded adj. 拥挤的
12.abroad adv. 到(在)国外
13．go on/make a trip 去旅行
14．be located/situated in 坐落在
15．with a history of 有……的历史
16．with/have a population of 有……人口
17．cover an area of 面积有……
18．be rich/abundant in 盛产
19．be well known for/as 因为/作为……而出名
20．beautiful scenery 美丽的风景
21．places of interest 名胜
22．a tourist destination 旅游胜地
二、背话题佳句
1．It is rich in natural sources such as coal and gold, and has mild climate.
它的自然资源得天独厚，有丰富的煤和金矿，而且气候温和。
2．It is so famous that every year thousands of Chinese and foreign friends pay a visit to it.
它如此著名以至于每年成千上万的中国游客和外国朋友慕名而来。
3．As we can enjoy, the scenery is beautiful and the air is fresh, attracting a number of tourists from all over the world.
正如我们所喜欢的，这里风景优美，空气新鲜，吸引着一些来自世界各地的游客。
4．Canada, which is the second largest country in the world，covers an area of 9.97 million square kilometres.
加拿大，世界第二大国，占地 997万平方公里。
5．Once on the top of the hill, we were deeply attracted by the beautiful scenery.
一到达山顶，我们就被这里美丽的风景深深吸引了。
6．When we reached the farm, we were given a warm welcome.
我们一到达农场，就受到了热烈欢迎。
7．In Beijing, there are many places of interest and historical spots, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and so on.
在北京有很多名胜古迹，如长城、颐和园等。
8．As is known to us all, Mount Huashan is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and its unique characteristics.
正如大家所知道的，华山以它险峻的悬崖和它独一无二的特征而出名。
