山东省枣庄市2022-2023学年高三上学期第一次调研质量检测英语试题英语作文解析课件(共15张PPT)
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(共15张PPT)
英语 枣庄高三一调考试
写作分析
写作高分技巧
第三部分 写作(共两节；满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
假定你是李华。你校英文报正在开展“The Sports I Like”征文比赛。请用英语写一篇 短文投稿。内容包括：
1.喜爱的体育运动；
2.喜爱的原因；
3.运动的收获。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【解析】
本题要求介绍一种喜爱的体育运动，可知以现在时为主，主语多用第一人称。
根据题目要求，本文可分三段来写：
第一段，直接说明自己喜欢的体育运动。
第二段，喜爱此运动的原因以及此运动的吸引人的地方。
第三段，总结自己从此运动中获得的进步及益处。
【参考范文】
The Sports I Like
Different people may love different sports. Basketball is my favorite sport.
I love this sport for several reasons. First of all, playing basketball can build me up, preventing me from getting too fat so as to stay healthy.Besides,playing basketball is a good discipline for relaxation after my brain works for a day. At last, it is also very useful for my character-training.
I have benefited a lot from playing basketball.I am stronger and full of energy every day. Also, I have learned the great importance of working with others and I have made many good friends through the sport.
【解析】
本篇范文使用了三段式结构，涵盖了题目所给的全部要点：
文章第一段开门见山，点明自己最喜欢的运动是打篮球；
第二段介绍了自己喜欢打篮球的原因；
第三段介绍自己的收获。整篇文章条理清晰，表达准确连贯。
作者在文中使用了first of all，besides，at last和also 等过渡衔接词汇，同时还在文章中使用了多个高分句型，现在分词短语作状语"First of all，playing basketball can build me up,preventing me from getting too fat so as to stay healthy."；after引导的时间状语从句"Besides，playing basketball is a good discipline for relaxation after my brain works for a day."。这些词语和句型的使用展示了作者深厚的语言功底和较强的驾驭语言的能力。
【素材拓展】
兴趣爱好
运动项目
1.【竞走】Walking is the easiest and simplest form of exercise to stay healthy and lose
weight. Besides, walking is of great convenience. All you need may be only a pair of comfortable sneakers（一双 舒适的运动鞋）. Most importantly，you can avoid some unnecessary injuries which often occur in other sports.
2.【羽毛球】Of all the sports，badminton ismy favorite. I like playing badminton for several reasons. Firstly, it is an exciting game and I will feel relaxed after playing it if I am depressed or tired of school work. Secondly， it contributes to（有助于）building up my body，and keeping a good shape（保持良好的体形）is a part of nurturing a positive attitude to life. Besides.I have always been inspired by the spirit of this sport,which helps me overcome difficulties in life.
Continuation Writing
读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My parents grew up poor. But as a family,we were comfortable,though we didn't have much what would be considered luxuries. One year, my father went on a trip to Italy and brought my mother an opal ring. It was her favorite stone,and she cherished that ring. It represented Dad's love for her.Dad died at the age of 53 in 1980 after a grueling battle with cancer. Mom was working at Burlington Coat Factory Department store. She usually wore the ring to work. Over the years,the ring became impossible for my Mom to wear because of her swollen knuckles( 指关节).Ihad the ring fitted with a clasp so that Mom could wear it again. She took great pride in the frequent compliments as she got on that ring.
One day during her shift,the ring slipped off. She didn't realize it until the following day.Mom was sad.The ring did not have a high monetary value,but it meant as much to her as life itself. I decided to go and look for it.
I encountered Chloe,one of my Mom's co-workers at my Mom's workplace. She led me to the store where Mom worked,and then left. It was packed with clothes,racks and tables. I started row by row crawling on the floor to see if I could find the ring underneath all the clothes. When I got to the last row and hadn't found the ring,the thought occurred to me that it might have fallen into the pocket of a coat as my Mom was hanging or rearranging the clothes. I started feeling around in the pockets of some of the coats,but quickly abandoned. There were at least 20,000 pieces of clothing in that department. Theattempt seemed useless.
Before-writing
Activity 1: Do a mind map about six elements of a story.
A story
who
when
beginning
development
ending
where
story
mountain
development
climax(高潮)
development
plot line
conflict
resolution
how？
positive
Activity 2: Read for the story mountain and predict the story.
Activity 3: Read for the development line.
I encountered Chloe,one of my Mom's co-workers at my Mom's workplace. She led me to the store where Mom worked,and then left. It was packed with clothes,racks and tables. I started row by row crawling on the floor to see if I could find the ring underneath all the clothes. When I got to the last row and hadn't found the ring,the thought occurred to me that it might have fallen into the pocket of a coat as my Mom was hanging or rearranging the clothes. I started feeling around in the pockets of some of the coats,but quickly abandoned. There were at least 20,000 pieces of clothing in that department. The attempt seemed useless.
What touched my mum
when&where
the main character(who)
the development
Did I find the ring
Did I give up in finding the ring？
What did chloe do
How did I feel
高分作文展示 I stood by a small table in disappointment when Chloe came in. When Chios Chloe asked what had happened, I told the truth to her,tears rolling down my cheeks.She was touched by me, offering to help me find this ring. After a while, she gathered many of her friends to find. Passionate and energetic, we searched every clothes, almost digging into a hole to find. Eventually, the ring was found in the pocket of a coat. I cried again because of the happiness.
I called my Mom and now I was choking back tears. Hearing the news , she went as fast as she could. When I gave the ring to her, she stared at it, as if lost in an ocean Of happiness. Knowing what I had done, a sense of warmth overwhelmed her like endless tides. I was rooted to the spot, my heart almost leaping from my throat. Suddenly, she gave me a big hug I was so happy that I put my arms around her s neck.
THANKS
英语 应用文写作
英语 枣庄高三一调考试
写作分析
写作高分技巧
第三部分 写作(共两节；满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
假定你是李华。你校英文报正在开展“The Sports I Like”征文比赛。请用英语写一篇 短文投稿。内容包括：
1.喜爱的体育运动；
2.喜爱的原因；
3.运动的收获。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【解析】
本题要求介绍一种喜爱的体育运动，可知以现在时为主，主语多用第一人称。
根据题目要求，本文可分三段来写：
第一段，直接说明自己喜欢的体育运动。
第二段，喜爱此运动的原因以及此运动的吸引人的地方。
第三段，总结自己从此运动中获得的进步及益处。
【参考范文】
The Sports I Like
Different people may love different sports. Basketball is my favorite sport.
I love this sport for several reasons. First of all, playing basketball can build me up, preventing me from getting too fat so as to stay healthy.Besides,playing basketball is a good discipline for relaxation after my brain works for a day. At last, it is also very useful for my character-training.
I have benefited a lot from playing basketball.I am stronger and full of energy every day. Also, I have learned the great importance of working with others and I have made many good friends through the sport.
【解析】
本篇范文使用了三段式结构，涵盖了题目所给的全部要点：
文章第一段开门见山，点明自己最喜欢的运动是打篮球；
第二段介绍了自己喜欢打篮球的原因；
第三段介绍自己的收获。整篇文章条理清晰，表达准确连贯。
作者在文中使用了first of all，besides，at last和also 等过渡衔接词汇，同时还在文章中使用了多个高分句型，现在分词短语作状语"First of all，playing basketball can build me up,preventing me from getting too fat so as to stay healthy."；after引导的时间状语从句"Besides，playing basketball is a good discipline for relaxation after my brain works for a day."。这些词语和句型的使用展示了作者深厚的语言功底和较强的驾驭语言的能力。
【素材拓展】
兴趣爱好
运动项目
1.【竞走】Walking is the easiest and simplest form of exercise to stay healthy and lose
weight. Besides, walking is of great convenience. All you need may be only a pair of comfortable sneakers（一双 舒适的运动鞋）. Most importantly，you can avoid some unnecessary injuries which often occur in other sports.
2.【羽毛球】Of all the sports，badminton ismy favorite. I like playing badminton for several reasons. Firstly, it is an exciting game and I will feel relaxed after playing it if I am depressed or tired of school work. Secondly， it contributes to（有助于）building up my body，and keeping a good shape（保持良好的体形）is a part of nurturing a positive attitude to life. Besides.I have always been inspired by the spirit of this sport,which helps me overcome difficulties in life.
Continuation Writing
读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My parents grew up poor. But as a family,we were comfortable,though we didn't have much what would be considered luxuries. One year, my father went on a trip to Italy and brought my mother an opal ring. It was her favorite stone,and she cherished that ring. It represented Dad's love for her.Dad died at the age of 53 in 1980 after a grueling battle with cancer. Mom was working at Burlington Coat Factory Department store. She usually wore the ring to work. Over the years,the ring became impossible for my Mom to wear because of her swollen knuckles( 指关节).Ihad the ring fitted with a clasp so that Mom could wear it again. She took great pride in the frequent compliments as she got on that ring.
One day during her shift,the ring slipped off. She didn't realize it until the following day.Mom was sad.The ring did not have a high monetary value,but it meant as much to her as life itself. I decided to go and look for it.
I encountered Chloe,one of my Mom's co-workers at my Mom's workplace. She led me to the store where Mom worked,and then left. It was packed with clothes,racks and tables. I started row by row crawling on the floor to see if I could find the ring underneath all the clothes. When I got to the last row and hadn't found the ring,the thought occurred to me that it might have fallen into the pocket of a coat as my Mom was hanging or rearranging the clothes. I started feeling around in the pockets of some of the coats,but quickly abandoned. There were at least 20,000 pieces of clothing in that department. Theattempt seemed useless.
Before-writing
Activity 1: Do a mind map about six elements of a story.
A story
who
when
beginning
development
ending
where
story
mountain
development
climax(高潮)
development
plot line
conflict
resolution
how？
positive
Activity 2: Read for the story mountain and predict the story.
Activity 3: Read for the development line.
I encountered Chloe,one of my Mom's co-workers at my Mom's workplace. She led me to the store where Mom worked,and then left. It was packed with clothes,racks and tables. I started row by row crawling on the floor to see if I could find the ring underneath all the clothes. When I got to the last row and hadn't found the ring,the thought occurred to me that it might have fallen into the pocket of a coat as my Mom was hanging or rearranging the clothes. I started feeling around in the pockets of some of the coats,but quickly abandoned. There were at least 20,000 pieces of clothing in that department. The attempt seemed useless.
What touched my mum
when&where
the main character(who)
the development
Did I find the ring
Did I give up in finding the ring？
What did chloe do
How did I feel
高分作文展示 I stood by a small table in disappointment when Chloe came in. When Chios Chloe asked what had happened, I told the truth to her,tears rolling down my cheeks.She was touched by me, offering to help me find this ring. After a while, she gathered many of her friends to find. Passionate and energetic, we searched every clothes, almost digging into a hole to find. Eventually, the ring was found in the pocket of a coat. I cried again because of the happiness.
I called my Mom and now I was choking back tears. Hearing the news , she went as fast as she could. When I gave the ring to her, she stared at it, as if lost in an ocean Of happiness. Knowing what I had done, a sense of warmth overwhelmed her like endless tides. I was rooted to the spot, my heart almost leaping from my throat. Suddenly, she gave me a big hug I was so happy that I put my arms around her s neck.
THANKS
英语 应用文写作