9年级人教版全一册 Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. Writing 课件(共24张PPT)

(共24张PPT)
Unit 11
Sad movies make me cry.
Writing
Task
初中三年的校园生活精彩纷呈, 总有一些经历是令你难以忘怀的。学校英语English Learning 正在以“My Unforgettable Experience”为主题向应届毕业生征文。请写一篇80—100词的英语短文，叙述你的一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你在其中的感悟和收获。短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。文中不得出现真实的人名和校名)
Look back at the past three years,there is one thing that I'll never forget……
Tip1: Your experience should include
“What, Who, When, Where and How”
Let's share and learn!
Bob
It happened when I was in Grade 7. One day, my math teacher made me correct my homework in the classroom. At first, I finished it quickly and handed it to him soon. When he saw my bad handwriting, he said, “Correct it again!” Then I went back to my seat. This time, I did it carefully. Later, I handed it to him again. After he checked it, he said, “Well done! Please try your best and you can be better.” After that, I worked much harder and made great progress.
Tip2: Use the first person narration.
It happened when I was in Grade 7. One day, my math teacher made me correct my homework in the classroom. At first, I finished it quickly and handed it to him soon. When he saw my bad handwriting, he said, “Correct it again!” Then I went back to my seat. This time, I did it carefully. Later, I handed it to him again. After he checked it, he said, “Well done! Please try your best and you can be better.” After that, I worked much harder and made great progress.
Tip3: Use the simple past tense.
It happened when I was in Grade 7. One day, my math teacher made me correct my homework in the classroom. At first, I finished it quickly and handed it to him soon. When he saw my bad handwriting, he said, “Correct it again!” Then I went back to my seat. This time, I did it carefully. Later, I handed it to him again. After he checked it, he said, “Well done! Please try your best and you can be better.” After that, I worked much harder and made great progress.
Tip4: Use linking words to make the event clearer
It happened when I was in Grade 7. One day, my math teacher made me correct my homework in the classroom. At first, I finished it quickly and handed it to him soon. When he saw my bad handwriting, he said, “Correct it again!” Then I went back to my seat. This time, I did it carefully. Later, I handed it to him again. After he checked it, he said, “Well done! Please try your best and you can be better.” After that, I worked much harder and made great progress.
effect
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It happened when I was in Grade 7. One day, my math teacher made me correct my homework in the classroom. At first, I finished it quickly and handed it to him soon. When he saw my bad handwriting, he said, “Correct it again!” Then I went back to my seat. This time, I did it carefully. Later, I handed it to him again. After he checked it, he said, “Well done! Please try your best and you can be better.” After that, I worked much harder and made great progress.
effect
结果
cause
起因
process
过程
Let's discuss!
From this experience,I've learned that……
Let's discuss!
From this experience,I've learned that we should study hard and take our study seriously. If we try our best to do everything,we can succeed at last.
If you are Bob,what would you learn from this experience
Let's compare
When he saw my bad handwriting, he said, “Correct it again!” Then I went back to my seat. This time, I did it carefully. Later, I handed it to him again. After he checked it, he said, “Well done! Please try your best and you can be better.”
When he saw my bad handwriting, he said angrily, “Correct it again!” Then I went back to my seat. This time, I did it carefully. Later, I handed it to him again, feeling afraid and nervous. After he checked it, he said with a smile on his face, “Well done! Please try your best and you can be better.”
Tip5: Use descriptive words(修饰语)
When he saw my bad handwriting, he said angrily, “Correct it again!” Then I went back to my seat. This time, I did it carefully. Later, I handed it to him again, feeling afraid and nervous. After he checked it, he said with a smile on his face, “Well done! Please try your best and you can be better.”
Let's practice
Then I went back to my seat.
Then I went back to my seat
sadly.
Then I went back to my seat,
feeling upset and down.
Then I went back to my seat
with tears in my eyes
Let's enjoy!
Peter kept his eyes on the ground. He felt like there was a heavy weight on his shoulders… . Peter's feelings were written all over his face. … Then he went into his room without another word. (九P86)
Let's enjoy!
His face was always pale as chalk. He often cried for no reason. (九P83)
Let's enjoy!
The erhu sounded so sad that I almost cried along with
it… (九P70)
When he saw my bad handwriting, he said angrily, “Correct it again!” Then I went back to my seat. This time, I did it carefully. Later, I handed it to him again, feeling afraid and nervous. After he checked it, he said with a smile on his face, “Well done! Please try your best and you can be better.”
Let's practice
Then I went back to my seat.
Then I went back to my seat sadly
I was so ashamed that
my face turned red / I kept my head down
I was so sad that
I cried sadly
/silently/in slience
/without a word
with my head down.
Let's enjoy!
When the babies see the keepers, they run over to them with excitement. (八下P54)
Let's enjoy!
At5:00 a.m., we got to the top! Everyone . (八上P8)
jump up and down in excitement.
Let's enjoy!
The new couple were so happy that they when they got married.(八下P44)
couldn't stop smiling
Three years' school life
Let's talk!
● winning /losing a competition
● getting good/bad grades on an exam
● performing something well/badly in front
of a big group of people
● getting into a fight with your best friend
● your first trip outside your hometown
Let's write!
outline(提纲)
Let's check!
HOMEWORK
1.Polish your article and hand it to me tomorrow.
2. Share your experience with your classmates.
Let’s remember!
uBe thankful to every experience.
uEven a small experience can make a big difference.
uExperiences make us grow up.