人教版九年级全一册 Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7. 课件 (共23张PPT)

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Unit14I remember meetingallof you in Grade 7.writing
初中生活即将结束,在过去的三年里,校园生活的点点滴滴一定给你留下了许多回忆,请以 My Memories in Junior High为题和我们分享你初中生活中的难忘记忆。请根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文。
参考要点:1.在实验室里……
2.学校运动会上……
3.……
要求:1.要点充分,内容完整。
2.词数:80-120词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Memories in Junior High
How time flies! I can’t believe it’s been three years since I went to junior high. I have many unforgettable memories. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Writing Task
审题小贴士
1.体裁____________
2.话题____________
3.人称____________
4.时态____________
5.要点____________
6.词数____________
Tip:认真审题。
How time flies! I can’t believe it’s been three years since I went to junior high. I have many unforgettable memories.
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Tip:列提纲。
Beginning
introduction
memories
Body
Ending
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3
Outline
memories
Tip1:词汇准备。
wonderful performance
walking into your classroom for
the first time
Complete the mind map according to the video.
the excitement of the school sports day
lovely smiles
cheering for your basketball game
discussing the questions
together
singing English songs
good handwriting
Read and Think
I remember cheering for your basketball game.
I remember the excitement of the school sports day.
We used to discuss the questions together.
You have improved your English level since you came here.
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观察思考
remember doing sth.
remember sth.
used to do sth.
have done sth.
since+从句(过去时) since+过去的时间点
for+时间段 in the past/last+时间段
Tip2:句型准备。
Group Work
Describe the picture in a group. (One picture, one sentence.)
Tip3:把握要点,写句子。
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1
3
5
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Show and Share
评价小贴士
1.Right
2.Creative
3.Moving
4.Handwriting
Total__________
Show your sentence and make it correct.
Tip4:句子语法结构和词汇运用准确。
Since I was in Grade 9, I have made some successful
experiments with my classmates in the lab.
2. I remember trying to run for the honor of our class in
the school sports meeting two years ago.
3. I remember performing well in the new year
performance in Grade 7.
4. In Grade 8, I used to practice playing basketball
with my friends after school.
5. I still remember the birthday cake on my fifteenth
birthday last term.
Since I was in Grade 9, I have made some successful
experiments with my classmates in the lab.
2. I remember trying to run for the honor of our class in
the school sports meeting two years ago.
3. I remember performing well in the new year
performance in Grade 7.
4. In Grade 8, I used to practice playing basketball
with my friends after school.
5. I still remember the birthday cake on my fifteenth
birthday last term.
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2
3
4
5
Tip5:注意句子的逻辑顺序.
Put the sentences in the correct order.
I remember performing well in the new year performance in Grade 7. I remember trying to run for the honor of our class in the school sports meeting two years ago. In Grade 8, I used to practice playing basketball with my friends after school. Since I was in Grade 9, I have made some successful experiments with my classmates in the lab. I still remember the birthday cake on my fifteenth birthday last term.
Put the sentences into a paragraph.
Tip6:连句成段。
Is it good
Make the sentences better.(添加连接词)
Since I was in Grade 9, I _______ have made some successful experiments with my classmates in the lab, _______ have learned
a lot from them.
but also
Tip7:有效使用语句间的连接成分, 结构紧凑。
not only
Beautify the Sentences
Since I was in Grade 9, I have made some successful experiments with my classmates in the lab. I have learned a lot from them.
Beautify the Sentences
Make the sentences better.(把两句合并成一句)
I remember trying to run for the honor of our class in the school sports meeting two years ago __________________ I was tired.
even though/even if
/though/although
I remember trying to run for the honor of our class in the school sports meeting two years ago.
I was tired. (改为让步状语从句)
Tip8:适当运用复合句。
Beautify the Sentences
Make the sentences better.(把两句合并成一句)
I remember performing ____ well in the new year performance in Grade 7 ____ we won the first prize.
I remember performing well in the new year performance in Grade 7. We won the first prize. (改为结果状语从句)
so
Tip8:适当运用复合句。
that
Beautify the Sentences
Make the sentences better.(把两句合并成一句)
In Grade 8, I used to practice playing basketball with my friends after school. ________ it’s a good way to develop our team spirit.
I think
In Grade 8, I used to practice playing basketball with my friends after school.
It’s a good way to develop our team spirit. (改为宾语从句)
Tip8:适当运用复合句。
Beautify the Sentences
Make the sentences better.(把两句合并成一句)
I still remember the birthday cake on my fifteenth birthday.
The birthday cake was delicious. (改为定语从句)
I still remember the birthday cake __________ was delicious on my fifteenth birthday last term.
that/which
Tip8:适当运用复合句。
I remember performing well in the new year performance in Grade 7. I remember trying to run for the honor of our class in the school sports meeting two years ago. In Grade 8, I used to practice playing basketball with my friends after school. Since I was in Grade 9, I have made some successful experiments with my classmates in the lab. I still remember the birthday cake on my fifteenth birthday last term.
I remember performing so well in the new year performance that we won the first prize in Grade 7. I remember trying to run for the honor of our class in the school sports meeting two years ago even though/if I was tired. In Grade 8, I used to practice playing basketball with my friends after school. I think it’s a good way to develop our team spirit. Since I was in Grade 9, I not only have made some successful experiments with my classmates in the lab, but also have learned a lot from them. I still remember the birthday cake which/that was delicious on my fifteenth birthday last term.
Better
Compare the two parts.
How time flies! I can’t believe it’s been three years since I went to junior high. I have many unforgettable memories.
I remember performing so well in the new year performance that we won the first prize in Grade 7. I remember trying to run for the honor of our class in the school sports meeting two years ago even though I was tired. In Grade 8, I used to practice playing basketball with my friends after school. I think it’s a good way to develop our team spirit. Since I was in Grade 9, I not only have made some successful experiments with my classmates in the lab, but also have learned a lot from them. I still remember the birthday cake which/that was delicious on my fifteenth birthday last term.
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Tip9:组段成篇。
Free Talk
what you
want to write
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02
03
04
feelings about
school life
be thankful
to sb.
cherish the
friendship
wishes/ plans
for the future
Tip10:写结尾点题，内容完整。
Tip11 :适当使用美句。
e.g.
A friend in need is a friend indeed. (患难朋友才是真朋友。)

All good things come to an end. (天下无不散的宴席。)
Where there is a will, there is a way. (有志者事竟成。)
Summary
Tips
1.含有所有要点,布局合理。
2.应用较多的语法结构和词汇。
3.句子语法结构和词汇运用准确。
4.有效使用语句间的连接成分, 全文结构紧凑。
5.适当使用美句。
How to make the writing better
examine
list
write
correct
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2
3
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beautify
copy
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连接词
复合句
What have we learned today
Practice
List your own memories on the paper and practice writing by yourselves.
Homework
1. Practice writing and make your article perfect.
(在批改网上完成作文,作文号907553,并根据批改网上的提示修改。)
2. Sum up useful phrases and important sentences.
Thank
you!