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Book 3 Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations
---Reading for Writing
Write about your
festival experience
In our last lesson, we can talk about our festival experiences.
Can you share a recent festival
experience with us
1. What festival or celebration have you
experienced recently
2. What activities did you do during that
festival or celebration
3. What were your feelings during and after
the festival or celebration
Date:
Falls on the 15th day of the eight month of the lunar calendar
Activities:
· Have a family get-together
· Admire the bright full moon
· Enjoy moon cakes
· Hang up the lanterns
· Watch the Tidal Bore(观潮) …
Feelings:
delighted; excited; tired …
Now, can you write about your festival experience
Today, let's read the article
My Amazing Naadam Experience to learn how to write your festival experience.
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What impresses you most in this video What’s the name of the relevant festival
Horse Racing
Wrestling
Robes
Archery
Chinggis Khaan Square
Read for basic information
Read for Basic Information
Naadam
Festival
Where: .
When: .
How long: .
in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region
falls on the 4th day of the sixth month of the lunar calendar
usually lasts (for) 3 days
内蒙古自治区
The meaning of “Nadaam”: .
“games”
Events of the festival:
.
.
horse racing, wrestling
and archery
The author’s favorite event: .
the horse races
Read for basic information
Read for structure
My Amazing Naadam Experience
Opening Paragraph
First body paragraph
Second body paragraph
Third body paragraph
Closing Paragraph
Body
Give a brief of the experience.
Describe .
.
.
State .
festival and the surroundings
the topic
Describe in detail
.
the festival activities
summary
the start of the
when
where
with whom
main feelings
How many parts can this diary entry be divided into
Read for Language Features
In what order did the author write the diary
And how do you know that
Time order
On the first day….
After the opening ceremony
and performances….
I’m finally back home now…
Tip1: To make our article more organized, we can
follow the time order when writing.
What activities did the author experience
Time order
On the first day…
After the opening ceremony and
performances…
I’m finally back home now…
1.Set off …with …
2.Saw people wearing…some feeding...
some practising…others chatting or taking
1. The wrestling competition was different...
2. I absolutely enjoy the archery, too, but the horse racing were my favorite part.
Tip2: To make our article more vividly and attractive,
we can describe some activities in detail.
How different
Why favorite
Time order
On the first day….
After the opening ceremony and
performances…
I’m finally back home now…
1.Set off …with …
2.Saw people wearing…some feeding...
some practising…others chatting or taking
1. The wrestling competition began.
2. I absolutely enjoy the archery, too, but the horse racing were my favorite part.
amazing
moved
surprised
worried
Tired but totally worth it
understandable
I can’t wait
Exciting to watch
Tip3: To hold readers’ attention, we can add sensory
(感觉的) details and our feelings to our article.
What’re the author’s feelings during and after the festival
Summary: When writing a narrative essay about a festival or
celebration experience, we should: .
1. Follow certain passage structure.
3. Describe detailed activities & add feelings and emotions.
2. Follow the time order.
Use what you have learnt to write about a festival or a celebration you have experienced recently.
1 Make notes of your ideas in the table and then draw a mind-map.
Outline
The name of the festival/celebration: _____________
Main idea of each paragraph Details Feelings
1. The topic and my feeling
2. How I prepared for the festival/celebration
3. The festival/celebration activities
4. A summary of my festival/celebration experience
Draw Your Mind Map
Practice makes perfect
Please write a short English passage of about 100 words to introduce your most unforgettable festival or celebration experience.
It’s a time when…/ I’ll never forget …when…
I saw a lot of people wearing…and …
People were busy preparing…, sending their best wishes…
I was really moved by… /I was surprised to see that…
It was really a … experience!
Exchange drafts with a partner. Use the checklist to give feedback on your partner’s draft.
Is the writing well-organized
Is there an opening sentence in the first paragraph
Does each paragraph include the necessary details
Does the writer describe his/her feelings and emotions
Does the writer use the –ing form correctly in the writing
Are there any grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors
Present and Evaluate
Get your draft back and revise it. And then put up you writing in your classroom or read it to the class.
一、审题定调
本写作任务要求记述一次自己的节日经历,属于记叙文。在介绍节日经历时,可以按照时间顺序或事件发展的顺序对节日经历或庆祝活动展开叙述。
二、谋篇布局
第一部分:点明节日并表明自己的感受;
第二部分:具体叙述节日前的准备和节日中的活动;
第三部分:总结节日经历。
My Experience During the Double Ninth Festival
As one of the most popular traditional festivals in China, the Double Ninth Festival is observed on the 9th day of the 9th lunar month, which is a great occasion to show respect for the elderly.
I still remember my family climbing Mount Songshan to celebrate the Double Ninth Festival last year. It took us an hour to get there by car. We stopped at the foot of the mountain and started climbing.
Since our grandfather is in his sixties, we walked slowly to make sure he was not too tired. We relaxed ourselves along the way by chatting with each other and taking photos. After we reached the top, we had a good rest. Then we took the cable cars (缆车) down the hill, which allowed us to enjoy the amazing sights.
The trip to Mount Songshan helped me to realize that it is important to have family trips so that we can communicate with each other and have fun together.
Thank You!