(新课标) Unit 1 What's the matter Section B 3a-Self check 写作课优质课课件(共33张)

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Unit 1 What’s the matter
Period 6 SectionB 3a-Self check
写作课优质课
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Learning aims
1.能够综合运用本单元的知识就朋友的健康问题或安全问题提出合理的建议。
3. 通过展示本单元两个核心话题 (health problems and accidents & advice)复习词汇和句型,为写作做好基础知识储备
3.角色扮演(the school nurse and a student),提高学生话题口头表达兴趣，创设帮助Linda的语境,落实学生作文信息输出。提升写作难度,能根据思维导图进行综合作文写作。
4.通过本单元系统学习，写作应用，进一步帮助学生树立健康意识。
Presentation
Pre-writing
Look and say.
Revision
Do you have these healthy problems or accidents
have a fever
hurt your arm
have a toothache
cut your finger
fall down
have a runny
nose
get hit on
your head
have a
stomachache
hurt your foot
have a headache
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Revision
Pre-writing
Look and say.
1) Talk about health problems and accidents；
短语积累
Talk about health problems
感冒
发烧
咳嗽
牙疼
胃疼
头疼
背疼
喉咙疼
have a cold
have a fever
have a cough
have a toothache
have a stomachache
have a headache
have a sore back\backache
have a sore throat
Presentation
Revision
Pre-writing
Look and say.
1) Talk about health problems and accidents；
短语积累
Talk about accidents
摔膝盖
流鼻血
伤后背
击中头
切到手
摔倒
cut his knee
have a nosebleed
hurt his back
get hit on the head
cut one’s finger
fall down
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Revision
Pre-writing
Look and say.
2) Give advice.
Health problems and accidents
feel sick/ bad/ terrible
have a sore throat/ back/ leg
have an accident
have problems breathing
fall down
cut one's knee
hurt one's back
hurt/ cut himself herself
Advice and treatments
should\
shouldn’t
lie down and rest
drink some hot tea with honey
see a dentist and
get an X-ray
take one's temperature
take some medicine
put some medicine on it
take breaks away from..
go to a doctor
take.. to the hospital
Presentation
Revision
Pre-writing
Look and say.
1.现在她喉咙非常痛。
2.我牙痛/头痛/发烧/感冒。
3.我不能转动我的脖子。
4.我割到我自己了。
5.我被一辆小汽车撞了。
6.我感觉不舒服。
回顾教材中出现的相关句型:
She has a very sore throat now. I have a toothache\headache....
I can't move my neck.
I cut myself.
I got hit by a car.
I don't feel well.
事故
健康问题
Presentation
Revision
Pre-writing
Look and say.
1.你应该躺下来休息。
2.你应该喝一些加有蜂蜜的热茶。
3.你应当去看牙医，并照X光。
4.你应当量一下你的体温。
5.你应当在上面涂一些药。
6.你需要远离电脑，休息一下。
7.你下次不要吃太多了。
You shouldn’t eat so much next time.
You should drink some hot tea with honey.
You should see a dentist and get an X-ray.
You should take your temperature.
You should put some medicine on it.
You need to take breaks away from the computer.
You should lie down and rest.
建议或劝告
其他向型拓展:
我从自行车上摔了下来。
如果你感冒了，你应当…
他在体育课上伤着他自己了。
当我们做运动时，事故或疾病有时会发生。
I fell down from the bike.
If you have a cold, you should …
He hurt himself in P.E.class.
Accidents or problems can
sometimes happen when we do
sports.
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Discussion
Pre-writing
Discuss and fill.
Health problems
or accidents should shouldn’t
have a headache go to bed early, have a rest stay up late
cut the finger
When you have the health problems or accidents, what should you do
Discuss and try to fill in the form.
wash the cut, put some medicine on it
touch the water
have a toothache
see a dentist
eat hot food
…
Reading
Pre-writing
Read and answer.
Recently Peppa’s friends Suzy and Danny had different problems too. They asked their best friend Peppa for help.
Read the passage Peppa writes and fill in the blanks.
Recently, Suzy and Danny had different problems.
Suzy had a fever and didn’t feel well. I think she should go to see a doctor and take some medicine. She shouldn’t go out or be too tired. Danny fell down and hurt his arm when playing basketball with his classmates. He should get an X-ray and lie down to rest. He shouldn’t exercise more.
It is important for us to keep healthy. I hope Suzy
and Danny can be better soon.
Name Suzy Danny
Health problem had a 1. _____
Accident fell down and
hurt
his 2. _____
Advice should 3. _______
_______
take some
medicine get an X-ray
5. ______
to rest
shouldn’t 4. ________
be too tired exercise more
fever
arm
go to see
go out
lie down
a doctor
Presentation
Reading
Pre-writing
Read and answer.
Read the passage again and answer the questions.
Recently, Suzy and Danny had different problems.
Suzy had a fever and didn’t feel well. I think she should go to see a doctor and take some medicine. She shouldn’t go out or be too tired. Danny fell down and hurt his arm when playing basketball with his classmates. He should get an X-ray and lie down to rest. He shouldn’t exercise more.
It is important for us to keep healthy. I hope Suzy
and Danny can be better soon.
1. What’s the matter with Suzy
She had a fever.
2. What happened to Danny
He fell down and hurt his arm.
3. What should Suzy do
She should go to see a doctor and take some medicine.
4. Should Danny get an X-ray
Yes, he should.
5. What shouldn’t Danny do
He shouldn’t exercise more.
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Discussion
Pre-writing
Read and say.
What's the format(格式) of the passage
Recently, Suzy and Danny had different problems.
Suzy had a fever and didn’t feel well. I think she should go to see a doctor and take some medicine. She shouldn’t go out or be too tired. Danny fell down and hurt his arm when playing basketball with his classmates. He should get an X-ray and lie down to rest. He shouldn’t exercise more.
It is important for us to keep healthy. I hope Suzy and Danny can be better soon.
Ending
Beginning
Problem
Advice
Body
Presentation
How to offer advice on health problems or accidents
Discussion
Pre-writing
Look and say.
How to offer
advice on health
problems or accidents
Beginning
Body
Ending
Advice
Problem(s)
Accident(s)
Person
or
Importance ＆Hope
My friend(s)/classmate(s)…
had…
…had…/fell down/hurt…
I think he/she should…
He/She shouldn’t…
It is important/necessary for us to…
I hope… will be better soon.
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3a
Making notes
Pre-writing
Look and write.
Imagine you are the school nurse and a student just had an accident or a health problem. Make notes about what he/she should and shouldn’t do.
Accident or health problem He / She should He / She shouldn’t
have a sore back
lie down and rest
do sports
have a fever
take some medicine
have a sore throat
cut myself
drink some hot tea
put some medicine on it
have a toothache
see a dentist
do sports
eat hot food
touch the water
eat hot food
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Writing
Write-writing
Look and write.
3b
Write a conversation between the nurse and the student using the notes in 3a. Use the questions and phrases below to help you.
Nurse: ___________________________________________________________
Student: _________________________________________________________
Nurse: ___________________________________________________________
Student: __________________________________________________________
What’s the matter / What happened / Are you OK
No, I don’t feel well./ I feel…/ I have a …/ Should I…
You should…/ You shouldn’t…
fell down/ got hit by…/ cut myself / hurt my…
Presentation
Writing
My best friend, Linda has a bad cold now.
What should\shouldn’t she do
Can you give her some advice
话题小作文：help Linda
She should …\She shouldn’t …
She should take more exercise.
\ wear warm clothes.
\ drink hot water.
Linda 现在感冒了，很难受，请你给她写一封信提些建议
Write-writing
Look and write.
Presentation
Writing
Write-writing
Look and write.
话题小作文—发送微信
分析一位学生写的作文
I'm sorry to hear that you have a cold.
I think you should go to see the doctor and take some medicine. You should drink more hot water. You should wear warm clothes. You shouldn't go to school. You shouldn’t study too late every night.
I hope you’ll feel better soon.
The sentences should try to be various (句式要多样化)
Presentation
Writing
Write-writing
Look and write.
话题小作文
Can you say it in different ways
1. You should go to see the doctor.
You can\must ….
go to see the doctor.
You had better (你最好) + V原形…
Why not + V原形…
It’s ___________ to ______________________.
good\best
Doing sth. is ________ for you.
The sentences should try to be various (句式要多样化)
go to see the doctor
Presentation
Writing
Write-writing
Look and write.
话题小作文
I hear you have a cold these days.
I think it's best for you to go to see the doctor and take some medicine, and it’s important for youto drink more hot water. You must wear warm clothes and You'd better not go to school. Going to bed early is good for vou. You shouldn't study too late.
I believe you’ll be better.
You can\must\ …
You had better\ …
Why not …
It’s …(for you) to do sth.
Doing sth. is …(for you).
参照此文，
修改自己的作文。
Presentation
Writing
Write-writing
Look and write.
话题大作文
请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇短文，
从良好的生活习惯，适当的体育锻炼以及健康的
饮食习惯等方面提出良好的建议。
要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
3.词数：80左右。
文章的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Presentation
Writing
Write-writing
Look and write.
思路点拨
How to Keep Healthy
Beginning:观点
Body:建议
Ending:祝愿
It’s important for
us to keep healthy.
do exercise
have a healthy diet
not spend too much
time going online
go to bed early
be happy
I believe …
Presentation
Writing
Write-writing
Look and write.
例文：
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy. Here are three main ways to keep healthy. Firstly, it is necessary to keep a balanced diet. We shouldn’t eat too much junk food. It is better for us to have more fruit
and vegetables every day. What’s more, we should have meals regularly.
Secondly, we shouldn’t stay up late . Getting enough sleep is also necessary. Finally, it is important to take regular exercise, such as swimming, jogging and so on. In a word, We should develop a good habit of keeping healthy in this way, We can enjoy a happy life.
Presentation
Writing
Write-writing
Look and write.
佳作欣赏
How to Keep Healthy
It’s important for us to keep healthy. As middle school students, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Here are some suggestions.
First, we should do exercise at least one hour a day, such as running and walking. Second, have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Try not to eat junk food. Third, we’d better not spend too much time going online. It’s bad for our study and eyes. Fourth, go to bed early and don’t stay up too late because enough sleep is good for our health. Finally, be happy as possible as we can. Learn to smile at any time.
If we do so, I believe we can keep healthy.
Presentation
Writing practice
Write-writing
Look and write.
你的朋友Jack由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰酸背痛并且睡不好觉。请你写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况，并给出你对他的建议(最少三点)。
作文要求：
1.结构紧凑,语句连贯,内容包含提供的信息,可适当发挥；
2.词数80个左右。
体裁：　　
应用文
第一、第三人称
一般现在时
要点提炼：
健康问题与建议
Jack存在的健康问题
你的建议
总结
时态：
人称：　　
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Writing guidance
Write-writing
Look and write.
你的朋友Jack由于长时间玩电脑游戏,现在头痛、眼睛不舒服,腰酸背痛并且睡不好觉。
你对他的建议
(最少三点)
结尾
My friend, Jack, likes playing computer games. …
Here is some advice for Jack.
First，Jack should…
Next, Jack should (also)…
Besides , Jack should…
I believe that Jack will…
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佳作欣赏
Writing guidance
Write-writing
Look and write.
My friend, Jack, likes playing computer games…______
_______________________________________________
Here is some advice for Jack. First，Jack should…_____
_______________________________________________
Jack should also…________________________________
Besides , Jack should…____________________________
I believe that Jack will… _________________________
_______________________________________________
My friend, Jack, likes playing computer games. After playing computer games for a long time , Jack has a headache and a sore back . There’s something wrong with his eyes , too. And he can’t sleep well , either. He asked me for some advice.
Here is some advice for Jack. First，Jack should stay away from the computer . Jack should also have a good rest. Besides , If Jack doesn’t feel better after a rest , he should go to the doctor.
I believe that Jack will be better if he takes my advice and takes
good care of himself .
Presentation
Post-writing
Look and write.
Self Check
Write different
health problems
next to the body
parts. Then write
more health
problems you
know of.
Head: _________________________
Back: _________________________
Throat: ________________________
Tooth: ________________________
Stomach: _______________________
Other problems: __________________
have a headache\got hit on the head
have a sore back\ hurt one’s back
have a sore throat
have a toothache
have a stomachache
have a fever\have a nosebeed
cut oneself
Presentation
Post-writing
Put and make.
Self Check
2. Put these questions and answers in order to make a
conversation.
____ I hurt myself playing soccer. I have a sore leg.
____ What should I do
____ I think you should see a doctor and get an X-ray.
____ OK, thanks. I’ll do that now.
____ What’s the matter
____ Oh, that doesn’t sound good.
2
4
6
5
1
3
Presentation
Post-writing
Self Check
Put and make.
3. Write advice for these people.
1. Problem: Alan cut himself.
Advice: _______________________________
2. Problem: Cindy has a headache.
Advice: _______________________________
3. Problem: My cousins have bad colds.
Advice: ________________________________
4. Problem: Jack hurt his back playing volleyball.
Advice: ________________________________
Put a bandage on the cut.
Lie down and rest.
Go to a doctor.
Go to the hospital and get an X-ray.
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Emotion
Post-writing
Look and say.
What is the most important thing in life
money
friendship
love
healthy
study
…
I think ________is the most important.
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Homework
1. Write a conversation between a nurse and a student about health and first aid.
2. Remember the words, expressions and sentences in this unit.
3. Preview Unit 2 Section A (1a-2d).
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