(新课标)Unit11 Sad movies make me cry. Section B 3a-Self check 写作课优质课课件(共34张)

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Unit11 Sad movies make me cry.
Period 6 Section B 3a-Self check
写作课优质课
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Learning aims
1.掌握本课时和情感相关的重点词汇、短语以及句型“make＋宾语＋宾语补足语”用法。
2. 能够用英语讲述一些令你感到快乐或者悲伤的过去经历。并熟练运用本单元句型进行会话和写作，写成英语文章。
3. 对待生活中发生的对自己产生消极情绪的事情，保持积极乐观的心态。
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Retelling
Pre-writing
Fill and retell.
Peter ______________ the ground as he walked home, he was very upset because he had ____________ a goal in the soccer game and his team had lost, he was worried that his coach might ___________the team. When he got home, his feelings __________________ his face, his father noticed something was wrong so he went and had a talk with Peter. Peter told his father that he had failed his team, but his father told him not ______________himself. He said that soccer was about _________. He advised Peter ___________________ his teammates and ____________his mistakes.
The next day, Peter __________________ with courage _________fear in his heart. He told his teammates that if he ____________pull together, they could certainly win the next game. When all his teammates__________ agreement, Peter knew he was on the winning team because his team had a good __________.
kept his eyes on
missed scoring
kick him off
were written all over
to be too hard on
to communicate with
learn from
went to soccer practice
rather than
continued to
nodded in
team spirit
team effort
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Revision
Pre-writing
Look and say.
How does it make you feel when …
get good grades
It makes me happy.
It makes me upset.
you fail a test
It makes me sad.
you see someone
off
meet an old friend
It makes me excited.
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Revision
Pre-writing
Look and say.
How does it make you feel when …
you listen to rock music
It makes me excited.
The tidy room
makes me comfortable.
makes me feel comfortable.
The snake
makes me scared.
makes me cry.
make sb + adj. 使某人…样
make sb + do. 使某人做某事
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Warming up
Pre-writing
Watch and talk.
Look at the pictures and talk.
Why is the little boy so excited
Because he has got 100 points in the exam.
Getting 100 scores makes the little boy so excited.
Why is the little girl crying loudly
Because she has failed the exam.
Failing the exam makes the little girl cry loudly.
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Lead in
Pre-writing
Look and say.
Everybody must have some experiences that made him or her feel very happy or sad. Which experiences do you have Tell your partner about them.
What happened next
I failed in an English competition in Grade 8. It made me sad.
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Talking
Pre-writing
Look and say.
3a
Think of some experiences that made you feel very happy or sad. Tell your partner about them. Use the following ideas to help you.
● winning /losing a competition
● getting good/bad grades on an exam
● performing something well/badly in front
of a big group of people
● getting into a fight with your best friend
● your first trip outside your hometown
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Writing
While-writing
Look and write.
3b
Write a story similar to the one in 2b using your notes in 3a.
In your story, try to explain the following:
What happened
When did it happen
Where did it happen
How did it make you feel Why
What did you learn from the experience
failed in an English competition
last year
at school
sad, nervous;be afraid my parents blame me
listen carefully in class; do some difficult exercises
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
话题分析：本单元的话题以Feelings为话题，谈论事物对我们情绪的影响。写此类文章时，可运用本单元所学知识，谈论对某事物的看法和自己的观点，运用make 的用法表达事物对情绪的影响。本文根据要求是一篇记叙文。叙述性文章的逻辑线索主要包括：时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”（what, who, when, where, why ）和一个“ H ” (how)。
体裁：记叙文
时态：一般过去时
人称：第一人称和第三人称
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
写作指导
1. 常用句型：
① ... makes sb./sth. do sth.
② ... makes sb./sth. + adj..
2. 写作思路:
根据3b问题的提示写作思路，使用句型介绍这次经历发生的时间、地点、过程、对你造成的情感困扰及原因，最后说明从这件事中获得的教训。
注意：要恰当运用make句型，检查数、时态以及句子结构等是否正确。
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
写作模板
经验教训
情感影响
事件过程
In Grade Eight, I took part in an English competition at school. ...
Losing the competition made me sad and nervous. I was scared because my parents were very strict with me. I was afraid they punished me. However, ...
I have learned a lot from the thing.First, we must not play computer games or watch TV every day as students. Second, ...
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
One possible version
In Grade Eight, I took part in an English competition at school.During the period before the game, I played computer games in my room every day when I got home after school. But I told my parents I was studying in my own room. So I failed in the English competition. As a result,I got the last place in the exam.
Losing the competition made me sad and nervous. I was scared because my parents were very strict with me. I was afraid they punished me. However, they encourged me instead of punishing me. I cried. Later, I made a promise that I would study hard. Ever since then, I have studied hard.
I have learned a lot from the experience. First, we must not play watch TV or computer games every day as students. It must get in the way off our schoolwork.Second, we should listen carefully in class and do more difficult exercises after school.
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Writing practice I
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Look and write.
还记得发生在你身上最难忘的一次经历吗？某英文报纸正在以“An unforgettable experience”为题进行征文活动，请你写一篇短文描述一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
注意: 文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名，字数不少于60词。
1.同学一起郊游爬山，一开始很兴奋走得很快，后来又累又热，气喘吁吁地不想爬了，甚至想回家洗个痛快澡。
2.朋友Tom看到后陪伴我稍作休息，并鼓励我继续登山，最终登上山顶。
3.只有坚持才能得到自己想要的。
要点提示：
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
一、审好题，定方向
定主题 _________________________
定文体 _________________________
定要点
_________________________
定人称 _________________________
定时态 _________________________
和同学一起郊游爬山的事
记叙文
1.一开始很兴奋走得很快，后来又累又热，气喘吁吁地不想爬了，甚至想回家洗澡
2.朋友Tom看到后陪伴我稍作休息，并鼓励我继续登山，最终登上山顶
3.只有坚持才能得到自己想要的
第一人称、第三人称
一般过去时
写
作
步
骤
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Writing guidance
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二、谋布局，写好句
开篇引出话题
正文介绍经过
结尾表达感受
Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I will never forget the day I __________(郊游)with my classmates.
when and where:
the result
One Sunday last spring, our class went hiking in the mountains.
1. We walked fast ______________(兴奋的).
I gradually felt tired and started to _____________(气喘吁吁). ________________(所有我想做的) was to go home and enjoy a shower.
2. I _________(落在后面) others. Tom encouraged me_______________(继续爬山).
breathe heavily
All I wanted to do
with excitement
fell behind
to go on climbing
_________(最后), we all reached the top happily.
In the end
I ______________(感激)his encouragement. I can get _____ I want if I _________.
felt grateful for
what
hold on
went hiking
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Writing guidance
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三、巧衔接，成篇章
Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I will never forget the day I went hiking with my classmates.
One Sunday last spring, our class went hiking in the mountains. At first, my classmates and I walked fast with excitement. But later I gradually felt tired and started to breathe heavily. And I was so hot that I wanted to stop climbing. All I'd like to do was to go home and enjoy a shower. Soon I fell behind others. Just then, Tom came up to me and asked me how I felt and let me have a rest for a while. Besides, he told me not to give up and encouraged me to go on climbing. In the end, I reached the top happily together with my classmates. I felt grateful not only for his encouragement, but also for the lesson he taught me.
This experience taught me I can get what I want if I hold on. From then on, it always encouraged me to face the difficulties I met in my life.
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Writing practice II
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初中三年的校园生活精彩纷呈, 总有一些经历是令你难以忘怀的。学校英语报 English Learning 正在以 ”My Unforgettable Experience” 为主题向应届毕业生征文。请写一篇80—100词的英语短文，叙述你的一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你在其中的感悟和收获。 (文中不得出现真实的人名和校名)
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体裁：记叙文(narration)
时态：一般过去时(simple past tense)
人称：第一人称和第三人称(first/third person)
写作步骤(Writing steps)
1.定基调(set the tone)
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Writing guidance
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2. 列提纲、写句子(writing the outline)
列提纲 写句子
点题 (1)My unforgettable experience was arguing with my best friend Li Hua(我难忘的一次经历是和我最好的朋友李华发生争吵).
难忘的经历 时间及地点 One Saturday last term, Li Hua and I were studying together at his home.
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Writing guidance
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Look and write.
列提纲 写句子
难忘的经历 起因及经过 (2)_______________________________
______________________(李华和我对一道数学题有不同的看法).
The little thing caused an argument(争论) between Li Hua and I
Li Hua and I didn’t talk to each other.
(3)_________________________(我知道那是我的错), but I refused to say sorry to him because I didn’t want to lose face(丢脸).
(4)_____________________________________________(我没有意识到我们不会再见面) until I heard that Li Hua would move to another city with his parents.
Li Hua and I had different opinions about a math problem
I knew that it was my fault
I didn’t realize we wouldn’t see each other anymore
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Writing guidance
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Look and write.
列提纲 写句子
难忘的经历 结果 I said sorry to Li Hua.
Li Hua and I became friends again.
(5)__________________________________________________ (这使得我如释重负/开心).
启示 Everyone makes mistakes.
(6)__________________________________________(我们不应该害怕犯错).
When we realize our mistakes, we should correct them at once.
This made me feel a sense of relief/This made me feel happy
We shouldn’t be afraid of making mistakes
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Writing guidance
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Look and write.
3. 添加衔接词(add linking words)
在记叙难忘经历发生的起因、经过及结果时，同学们可以使用表示时间的词语from then on和two days before / on the day he left with his family/ two days later...来连接上下文，这样文章的脉络会更清晰。
4. 添佳句
No one is perfect. (人无完人。)
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范文欣赏
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My unforgettable experience was arguing with my best friend Li Hua.
One Saturday last term, Li Hua and I were studying together at his home. We had different opinions about a math problem. The little thing caused an argument between us. From then on, we didn’t talk to each other. I knew that it was my fault, but I refused to say sorry to him because I didn’t want to lose face(丢脸). I didn’t realize we wouldn’t see each other anymore until I heard that Li Hua would move to another city with his
parents. Two days before he left with his family, I said sorry to Li Hua. We became friends again. This made me feel a sense of relief.
No one is perfect. Everyone makes mistakes. We shouldn’t be afraid of making mistakes. When we realize our mistakes, we should correct them at once.What an unforgettable thing it is in my life!
My Unforgettable Experience
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Post-writing
Look and write.
1. Put the words in the appropriate place in the chart.
nervous unhappy
uncomfortable worried
comfortable relaxed
angry awful
happy uneasy Positive Negative
comfortable
relaxed
happy
nervous
unhappy
uncomfortable
worried
angry
awful
uneasy
Self Check
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Post-writing
Look and write.
Self Check
2. Write sentences using the words given.
sad movies/ cry_______________________
2. Speaking in front of many people/nervous
3. money and fame/ not always happy
4. soft piano music/relaxed
5. rainy days/stay at home and watch TV
Speaking in front of many people makes me nervous.
Sad movies make me cry.
Soft piano music makes me relaxed.
Rainy days make me want to stay at home and watch TV.
Money and fame don’t always make you happy.
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Post-writing
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Self Check
3. Number the things [1–6] (1 = least important, 6 = most important). Write a reason for each choice.
____ fame (名誉) ____ power (权力) ____ friendship (友谊) ____ wealth (财富) ____ health (健康) ____ family (家庭)
e.g. Fame is not very important at all. Being the center of attention makes me really nervous.
1
2
5
3
4
6
Power is not important to me, I don’t want to …
….
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Post-writing
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Self Check
Power is not important to me. I don’t like to control others.
Wealth is not very important. I prefer to live a simple life.
Health is important. A healthy body makes it possible for me to do many things in life.
Friendship is very important. Spending time with friends makes me happy.
Family is the most important to me. My family around me makes me feel comfortable and contented.
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Emotion
Post-writing
Look and say.
The effect of different feelings
我国中医：“怒则气上，喜则气缓，悲则气消，
恐则气下，惊则气乱，劳则气耗，思则气结。“
情绪影响人的个性发展、对自我的认知和评价；
情绪影响机体免疫力，可以治疗或者导致疾病。
可见，良好的情绪与人的身心健康密不可分。
所以请记住：好的心态是最佳的良药。
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Class test
一、用所给词的适当形式填空
Post-writing
1. What's the ___ _______(weigh) of the elephant
-About several tons.
2. Do you feel like _______ (go) to a movie with us tonight
3. You are lucky enough to be on a _________(win)team.
4. How did you deal with your___________(disappoint) in your life
5. There was great __________(friend) betwee the two families
weight
going
winning
disappointed
friendship
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Class test
Post-writing
二、 汉译英
1．轻音乐使他很放松。 ______________________
2．伤感电影总是使我想离开。 ______________________________
3．等待公共汽车使他们有些抓狂。 ____________________________
4．你对环境污染感觉如何？ ___________________________________？
5. 现在我们需要做的是团结起来。 ____________________________________________.
Soft music makes him relaxed.
Sad movies always make me want to leave.
Waiting for the bus drove them crazy.
How do you feel about environment pollution
What we need to do at this moment is to pull together
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Homework
1.Review the words and expressions of UNIT 11.
2.Perview UNIT 12.
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