(共34张PPT)
Why do you like
pandas
Unit 5
Section B 3a-self check
思维品质
语言能力
学习能力
文化意识
Ss can use what they have learned to write a passage
Ss can express the features and ways to protect animals
Ss can find out different features of different animals and can love & protect them.
Ss can know the order to introduce animals.
Objectives
Content
Lead-in
Presentation
Pre-writing
Post-writing
Summary
Exercises
While-writing
Homework
It’s beautiful.
It likes eating leaves.
It has a long neck(脖子).
It is very tall.
lead-in
It is very smart.
It’s one of Thailand’s symbols.
It has big ears and a long nose(鼻子).
lead-in
They are very cute.
They are black and white.
They like eating bamboo(竹子).
They are black and white.
They are from China.
lead-in
It’s kind of scary.
It likes eating meat(肉).
It runs fast.
It is the king of the forest(森林).
lead-in
It’s kind of small and lazy.
It sleeps in the day and gets up at night.
It likes eating leaves(树叶).
It is from Australia.
lead-in
It’s kind of scary.
It likes eating meat(肉).
It runs fast.
It’s from Africa.
lead-in
I like … because …
I don’t like … because …
cute interesting
fun friendly
smart beautiful
shy lazy scary
Talk about the reason why you like or dislike them.
lead-in
pre-writing
3a
Becky is Jill’s favorite animal. Fill in the blanks with the words in the box.
This is Becky. Isn’t she _________
She is from _________. She is twelve
__________ old. I _________
Becky _________ she is smart and
friendly. She _________ in
Blackwood Zoo.
like beautiful
Africa years
lives because
beautiful
Africa
like
because
lives
years
This is Becky. Isn’t she beautiful She is from
Africa. She is twelve years old. I like Becky
because she is smart and friendly. She lives in Blackwood Zoo.
Name(姓名)
From(来自哪里)
Age(年龄)
Personality(性格)/Reason(喜欢的原因)
Where(居住地)
pre-writing
3a
Becky is Jill’s favorite animal. Fill in the blanks with the words in the box.
3b
Write a description of a panda using the words in the box,
or write about your favorite animal using your own ideas.
Beibei years old China cute shy Beijing Zoo
While-writing
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A description
of an animal
name
country
what to eat
age
where to live
appearance
features
others
abilities
3b
What should we write in this passage?
While-writing
to describe an animal
name
age
country
features
abilities
what it eats
appearance
where it lives
China, South Africa, Australia...
cute, shy,beautiful,
friendly, scary, interesting...
run, jump, eat, swim, sleep...
bamboo, meat, little animals, leaves, rice, fish....
in the jungle,
in the forest,
in the lake,
in the zoo...
tall, small, big, strong,
black and white, big ears, long nose...
While-writing
1. Add more words in the chart. Then write at least five sentences using the words.
Animals Description words tiger really, kind of scary
koala, panda elephant, lion giraffe,
a little
so
very
quite
interesting, lazy
beautiful, smart
shy, big, tall, friendly, strong, fun tall,cute …
While-writing
1. Add more words in the chart. Then write at least five sentences using the words.
Animals Description words tiger really, kind of scary
koala, panda elephant, lion giraffe, cat dog… a little, so very, quite interesting, lazy, beautiful, smart
shy, big, tall, friendly, strong, fun tall,cute ...
主语 谓语 Animals because they're Adverbs Adjectives
I like don't like koala, panda elephant, lion giraffe, cat dog… a little, so very, quite interesting, lazy, beautiful, smart
shy, big, tall, friendly, strong, fun tall,cute ...
He, She likes doesn't like get tips if you need help~
While-writing
Writing Instructions
确定好写作大的基本框架
每个部分分别写什么内容?
While-writing
Writing Instructions
细节信息描写包含的方面:
写出每个部分可以使用的句型~
While-writing
1)表达喜好的句型:
I love many animals, I love...My favorite animal is...
I like ...very much.
2) 介绍动物产地的句型:
It/ He/ She is/ comes from...
3) 关于年龄、外貌、个性、才能等的句型:
It/ He/ She is ...years old.
It/ He/ She is beautiful/ big/ small.
It/ He/ She is (kind of/ very/ really) shy/ smart/ cute...
It/ He/ She can run fast/ draw well...
4) 表达情感态度的句型:
I like ...because it/he/ she...
5) 文章结尾:
呼吁式:We should save them.
期待式:I hope he lives happily...
感叹式: Isn’t she beautiful
Don’t you like her
While-writing
Let’s draft.
1
2
3
4
Write the topic or key sentences for four squares.
Winter
vacation
开门见山
保护动物
what
why
My favorite animal is an elephant in the Wild Animal World.
He comes from...He is very big and strong and he looks...He can play...He eats...
I like him because I think he is...
Elephants are in great danger now, so we should...
While-writing
Let’s edit.
1
2
3
4
Read and edit your writing. (passage & language)
Winter
vacation
开门见山
保护动物
what
why
My favorite animal is an elephant
in the Wild Animal World.
He comes from...
He is very big and strong and he looks...
He can play...
He eats...
I like him because I think he is...
Elephants are in great danger now, so we should...
My favorite animal is an elephant in the Wild Animal World. He comes from South Africa; he is 70 years old. I call him Mr. Smart.
While-writing
He comes from...
He is very big and strong and he looks...
He can play...
He eats...
Let’s edit.
1
2
3
4
Read and edit your writing. (passage & language)
Winter
vacation
开门见山
保护动物
what
why
My favorite animal is an elephant
in the Wild Animal World.
I like him because I think he is...
Elephants are in great danger now, so we should...
He is gray. He is very big and strong and he looks kind of shy. He is really smart. He can play soccer and music, and he draws well, too. He eats chicken raised by the zoo keepers.
While-writing
I like him because I think he is...
He comes from...
He is very big and strong and he looks...
He can play...
He eats...
Let’s edit.
1
2
3
4
Read and edit your writing. (passage & language)
Winter
vacation
开门见山
保护动物
what
why
My favorite animal is an elephant
in the Wild Animal World.
Elephants are in great danger now, so we should...
I like him because I think he is smart and beautiful. I go to see him every month and I have many photos of him.
While-writing
I like him because I think he is...
He comes from...
He is very big and strong and he looks...
He can play...
He eats...
Let’s edit.
1
2
3
4
Read and edit your writing. (passage & language)
Winter
vacation
开门见山
保护动物
what
why
My favorite animal is an elephant
in the Wild Animal World.
Elephants are in great danger now, so we should...
I know elephants are in great danger now, so we should do something to
protect them. I hope Mr. Smart is always happy.
While-writing
I like him because I think he is
smart and beautiful. I go to see him every month and I have many photos of him.
1
2
3
4
Read and edit your writing. (passage & language)
Winter
vacation
开门见山
保护动物
what
why
My favorite animal is an elephant in the Wild Animal World. He comes from South Africa; he is 70 years old. I call him Mr. Smart.
I know elephants are in great danger now, so we should do something to protect them. I hope Mr. Smart is always happy.
He is gray. He is very big and strong and he looks kind of shy. He is really smart. He can play soccer and music, and he draws well, too. He eats chicken raised by the zoo keepers.
While-writing
动物和人类共同生活在地球上,它们是人类的好朋友。请你以“My Favorite Animal”为题介绍你最喜欢的一种动物,70词左右。内容包括:
1.你最喜欢的一种动物以及喜欢它的原因;
2.介绍该动物的情况,包括居住地、外貌特征和生活习性等。
3.号召大家爱护动物,与动物和谐相处。
While-writing
My favorite animal is the panda. Beibei is a panda. It comes from Sichuan, China. Now it lives in Beijing Zoo. It is five years old. It is black and white with two big black eyes. I like Beibei very much because it look beautiful and cute. But sometimes it is kind of shy. It likes eating bamboos, and it likes sleeing in the day. Pandas are in danger and they are our good friends, so we should protect them.
使用一般现在时态,要注意人称的单复数与谓语动词的搭配要一致
时态:一般现在时 人称: 第三人称
开篇点题, 喜欢哪种动物
特征:国籍,居住地,年龄
喜欢的原因
动物是我们的朋友,呼吁保护动物
外貌特征
饮食特性
Sample例文
Let’s self-check.
项目 自评角度 完成任务打√,未完成任务打χ
整体 结构完整
要点齐全
细节 拼写
大小写
标点符号
人称时态
书写
Post-writing
审题 体裁 记叙文 话题 喜欢的动物
时态 一般现在时 人称 第三人称
段落 布局
开篇点题 My favorite animal is .... / I like ... best.
动物特征
国籍:They are from ....
年龄:... years old
习性:They like sleeping.
总结 ...be in danger ... They are our good friends,
so we should protect them.
外貌:black and white with ...
饮食:... are their fsvorite food.
Summary
Exercise
1. He is _____. He is very good at math.
A. busy B. lazy C. clever
2. — _____ doesn’t she go with you?
— Because she has much homework to do.
A. What B. Why C. When
3. Where do lions come_____?
A. from B. in C. into
C
B
A
一、单选题
1. If you get ______(迷路) in a new place, you can ask the policeman for help.
2. Hangzhou is a nice city ______(带有) many interesting places.
3. We all know tigers are in great _______(危险).
4. In some small villages, people ______ _____(砍下) many trees to make money.
5. My grandfather is _____(超过) 70 years old.
6. Look ! The desk is _____ _____(由……制成)wood (木材).
7. There is not enough fresh water in the world, so we must _____(节约) water .
lost
with
danger
cut down
over
made of
save
二、完成句子。
Homework
1. Polish(润色) your writing according to your peers’ and teacher’s advice.
2. Write a description of a panda .
3. Think and write: Rewrite your article and hand it in.
Thank you!
Unit 5
Section B 3a-self check