2014中考英语书面表达（2）及参考范文

2014中考英语书面表达（2）及参考范文
该精品精选了历年的联考、竞赛，中考模拟、真题中的以及2013年9月以后的一些书面表达，都有参考范文，该精品共31篇文章，共46页。
中考英语书面表达（1）
【2014广东省调研测试】
书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
成于勤俭，败于奢侈，这是我们的古人很早就提出来的警世箴言。近日习近平主席针对社会上很多人浪费粮食的现象，发出了“光盘行动”的指示，目的是为了让人们节约粮食、杜绝浪费。节约是一种美德，节约更是一种智慧。请你写一篇以“No Wasting”为题的短文。内容包括：
1．你对“光盘行动”的看法。
2．在生活中你看到了哪些不节俭的行为。
3．列举两件你在生活中所做的有关节俭的事。
4．号召大家参与到节俭活动中来。
作文要求：
1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；?
2．语句连贯，词数在80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
No Wasting
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【参考范文】
No Wasting
Ancient people told us that success lies in thrifty while failure lies in luxury. Chairman Xi recently has launched an action called “Empty your plate”, which aims at letting people cherish food and reduce waste.
In my opinion, I support the action, because we really need to know how bad it is to waste food. No wasting, start from myself. In our daily life, we can see different kinds of wasting. For example, some students often forget to turn off the electricity when they leave the classroom. Others even don’t turn off the tap after washing their hands.
As for me, I am trying my best to keep saving. When I go shopping, I use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. And I go to school on foot or ride bikes. Besides, I try to recycle the energy in my daily.
In a word, saving is necessary and important. I hope there will be more and more people to start saving from every little thing.
中考英语书面表达（2）
【2014浙江省学业水平考试】
梦想总是美好的，那么你该如何向着你的“梦想”前进呢？请根据下表提示，向朋友们说说你的梦想之路。
Dream
I want to ...
Reasons
be interest in it
...
Ways to achieve my dream
Work hard at school
find out how successful people did it
...
注意：短文必须包括三部分内容，需陈述理由（2条）和方式（3条）；表中右栏的信息仅供参考，也可自由发挥；词数80左右。
【参考范文】本大题总分为15分，按五个档次给分
My Dream
I want to be a writer when I grow up. Writing has been part of my life. Through writing I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others.
I can achieve my dream by reading widely and by working hard at school to learn as much as possible. It’s also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them. I’m determined to hold on to my dream till one day it comes true.
第一档（14—15分）能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。
第二档（11—13分）能写明大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文比较连贯，表达比较清楚。
第三档（8—10分）能写明部分要点，语言有较多错误，行文不太连贯，但尚能表达意思。
第四档（5—7分）能写明少部分或个别要点，语言错误较多，只有个别句子可读、可看懂。
第五档（0—4分）基本上没有写出内容要点，语言错误多，只有一些词汇堆积, 不知所云。
中考英语书面表达（3）
【发言稿】
假如你是张文，八年级四班的班长。你们班排练了一部英文课本剧（an English textbook play），准备本周六下午4:00在学校礼堂（the school hall）演出。请你用英语给学校的外籍教师Terry写一封80字左右的E-mail，邀请他来观看演出，并在演出结束时发言。
注意：1. 可增加细节，使文章连贯完整；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8.
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We are all looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Zhang Wen
【参考范文】
Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8. I would like to invite you to enjoy our play. Our class have practised an English textbook play. I think it is wonderful. It will be held in our school hall at 4. p.m. this Saturday. I hope you can come to see it. I believe you must enjoy it. At the ending of the play, we also hope you can give us a small talk. You can give us some advice about the English textbook play. I am sure we must improve our level.
We are all looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
中考英语书面表达（4）
【2013江苏省徐州市模拟A卷】
书面表达(满分20分)
如今，中学生的学习时间长，压力大。上周我校学生对如何减压放松进行了讨论。大家提
出了许多种减压放松的方法。请以How to Get Relaxed为题，根据下列信息写一篇短文。
注意：(1)短文必须包括以下要点，并谈谈自己的看法；
(2)词数90左右，文章题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How to Get Relaxed
Last week we had a discussion about the ways to get relaxed．_________________________________________
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【参考范文】
How to Get Relaxed
Last week we had a discussion about the ways to get relaxed. Some students thought we could get relaxed by communicating with parents and friends. And we could also go to the movies and go sightseeing to relax ourselves. Other students said they would like to have sports or listen to music to get relaxed. In my opinion, relaxing is important. When we are stressed out, we can’t study well. So we need to relax ourselves. We can do sports, play computer games or listen to music when we are under too much pressure. We can go shopping or take vacations, too. In this way, we can get better grades and enjoy the colorful life.
中考英语书面表达（5）
【2013浙江省宁波七中模拟试卷】书面表达（共15分）
每个人都有自己的梦想，努力坚持终能实现，请根据表格中所提供的信息写一篇文章
Li Guang
出身贫寒，付不起学费，但一直自学，考取了大学。
上大学时坚持打零工（part-time job）并照顾遭遇车祸的父母。
坚持梦想（follow one’s dream），拥有了自己的农场
You
你的梦想
……
如何实现你的梦想
勤奋学习
Everyone has his/her dream. The one who never gives up can achieve his/her goal. Li Guang is a very good example. He


【参考范文】（One possible version）
Everyone has his/her dream. The one who never gives up can achieve his/her goal. Li Guang is a very good example. He was born in a poor family. His parents didn’t have money to pay for his study so that he couldn’t go to school. He was very sad, but nothing could stop him from studying. He kept on learning by himself at home. At last, he got high grades and entered his ideal college. Unfortunately, a terrible accident happened to his parents. During the time he was at college, he did part-time jobs for a living and took good care of his parents. Because he followed his dream all the time, he became the owner of a large farm successfully.
I have my own dream, too. I want to be a teacher to help the children in poor areas. From now on, I must work hard, correct my own shortcomings and improve myself. I will never give up my dream whenever facing difficulties. I’m sure my dream will come true.
中考英语书面表达（6）
【2014模拟】书面表达（满分10分）
根据汉语提示和要求写一篇短文。
要点：
1、现在越来越多的人喜欢养宠物，宠物正受到很多人的青睐。
2、养宠物有什么好处？
3、养宠物应该注意什么？
注意：
1、词数80—100左右，须包括以上要点。
2、条理清楚，语句规范通顺，字迹工整。


















【参考范文】One possible version：
Now, more and more people keep animals as pets at home. They regard their pets as members of their families. Pets are loved more and more because they can give people a lot of pleasure and help a person feel less lonely.
We must keep our pet clean and healthy. If the pet is ill, we should take her to see the vet. We must try to prevent the spread of diseases that animals carry. If we do like this, the pet will give us pleasure rather than trouble.
评分要求：
第五档：10分 语言表述准确，层次分明，允许有1—2处小错误。
第四档：8—9分 语言基本正确，有少量错误，不影响语言表述。
第三档：6—7分 语言表述基本清楚，有5处以上错误。
第二档：3—5分 能表述部分要点，错误较多。
第一档：1—2分 表述个别要点，或写出正确的句子。
中考英语书面表达（7）
【请假条】
假如你叫张强，在昨天下午的篮球比赛中不小心伤了左臂，医生建议你在家休息两天, 因此你要向班主任赵老师请假。请根据以上信息写一则40词左右的请假条。
Asking for Leave
May 10th
Dear Miss Zhao,
I'm sorry to tell you that I can't go to school today.


Thank you!
Your student,
Zhang Qiang
【参考范文】One possible version:
Asking for Leave
May 10th
Dear Miss Zhao,
I'm sorry to tell you that I can't go to school today. I hurt my left arm (1分) in the basketball match (1分) yesterday afternoon (1分).The doctor told me to have a rest at home for two days (1分), so I will/ have to ask for two days’ / two-day leave (1分). I hope I’ll get well and return to school soon.
Thank you!
Your student,
Zhang Qiang
中考英语书面表达（8）
【2013北京市怀柔区模拟考试（二）】文段表达 （15分）
根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫李华，是美国中学生艾丽丝的朋友。你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。
Hi! Li Hua,
I am very upset and I need your help. I didn’t get on well with my best friend. I’m very worried because I have few friends. I don’t want to lose her. What should I do? Do you have the same problem?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Alice


Hi! Alice,
I’m glad to hear from you._____________________________________
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I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】One possible version:
Hi! Alice,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Yes, I sometimes have the same problem.
If you don’t want to lose your best friend, you should talk with her. Tell her what you think and your feelings. You can help each other and do the things together that you are interested in. You’d better learn how to get along well with your friends. I think communicating will make you become good friends again. A friend is a present which you give yourself.
书面表达评分标准
说明：先根据文章整体内容和语言表达确定档次，然后在该档次内评出分数。
第一档：（15—13分）
完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。
第二档：（12—9分）
基本符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。
第三档：（8—5分）
部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。
第四档：（4—0分）
与题目有关的内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理解。
中考英语书面表达（9）
【2013北京市通州区统一检测】
文段表达（共12分）
假设你叫林洋，收到了你的笔友Susan的一封信，请你给她写一封回信。在信中回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。
Dear Lin Yang,
I have a problem these days. My mother doesn’t allow me to watch TV even on weekends. She says as a middle school student, my job is to study. After I finish my homework, she says, I should read books and watching TV is bad for me. But I think I need a rest and watching TV helps me learn a lot too.
Do you have the same problem? What do you think of my mother’s decision? What should I do?
Yours,
Susan
【参考范文】One possible version:
I don’t have this problem. My mother allows me to watch TV after I have finished my homework.
I think your mother shouldn’t do like this. As a student, study is our main job, but it is not all of our life. We also need a rest and enjoy ourselves. Watching TV is a good way for us to relax. Besides, some TV programs are good for our study.
I think you should talk about it with your mum. Look for some information on the Internet to help you. You can also ask your father for help.
书面表达评分标准：
第一档：（12~10分）
完全符合题目要求，观点正确, 要点齐全，字数60词以上。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。
第二档：（9~7分）
基本符合题目要求，观点正确, 要点齐全，字数60词以上。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。
第三档：（6~4分）
部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。
第四档：（3~0分）
与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理解。

中考英语书面表达（10）
【2013东台市实验中学模拟】书面表达。（共1题，计15分）
新班规: 1. Don't listen to music or have snacks in the classroom;
2. You have to wear trainers in PE classes;
3. Don't stay at school after 5:00pm... 新班规实施前后，你的活动如下表：
Before the new rules
Listen to music after class, play basketball after school
After the new rules
Feel stressed, have no time for hobbies
Your ideas
… …
你打算给班长李明写一封信，告诉他：1.你的兴趣爱好2.你的烦恼；3.你对新班规的建议(至少两点)。 注意：1.词数90左右，收信人和写信人的姓名已给出，但不计入词数；
2.信中不能出现真实的学校，班级和姓名。 Dear Li Ming:
I am writing to you to tell you something about my worries.
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I’ll be very happy if I can hear from you soon.
Zhou Yang
【参考范文】书面表达：
Dear Li Ming
I am writing to you to tell you something about my worries.
I have a lot of hobbies. I like listening to music and playing ball games with my classmates. I spend much time on my study, so I can only listen to music after class and play basketball after school with my classmates.
But you see the new class rules have come out. I feel very stressed and worried now. I can’t find any time for my hobbies. I can do nothing but write to you about my ideas.
I agree that we shouldn’t have snacks in the classroom. We should wear trainers in PE lessons. I think we should be allowed to listen to music after class. We can relax ourselves and then we will focus on our study in class. You should allow us to play basketball after school. If you disagree, how can I find other time to do so?
I will be very happy if I hear from you soon.
Zhou Yang
中考英语书面表达（11）
假定你是李华，最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论，你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况，请你用英语写封回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果：
1.节水节电；
2.垃圾分类；
3.少用纸巾，重拾手帕；
4.步行，骑自行车或乘坐公交车。
参考词汇：低碳low carbon 纸巾tissue
注意：词数100以内(不含开头和结尾所给出的字数)；可适当增加细节了，以使行文连贯；开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
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Best wishes,
Li Bing
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. ln addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.
中考英语书面表达（12）
【2013福建省南安市质量检查】书面表达（15分）
众所皆知，节约是一种美德。但是如今，校园浪费也成为一个越来越严重的问题。粮食的浪费，资源的浪费，时间的浪费……同学们，让我们从小养成勤俭节约的好习惯，从我做起，抵制浪费。
请你以“Stop Wasting at School ”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，说说我们在校园里怎样减少浪费，制止浪费。
温馨提示：1、所给词不计入总词数。
2、语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯。
3、文中不能出现真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称等相关信息。
参考词汇：serious, resources (资源), save, reduce…
Stop Wasting at School
As we know, saving is a good behavior. But nowadays, wasting has become a


【参考范文】
Stop Wasting at School
As we know, saving is a good behavior. But nowadays, wasting has become a more and more serious problem.
When I pass the school dining hall, I can see there’s so much food left on the plates. Some students forget to turn off the tap after washing hands. Lots of paper which can be used is seen on the ground. Also, some students waste time playing computer games…
All these are harmful to us. As a student, we should have good habits of saving resources. We must set a good example to reduce waste at school. It’s our duty to let everyone know our country is lack of resources. So stop wasting from now on!
评分原则：
本题总分为15分，其中内容和语言占13分，词数占1分，书写占1分。按五个档次给分。
评分时，先根据短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。不少于70个单词，不多于100个单词，加1分。书写清晰、规范，加1分。
各档次的给分范围和要求：
第五档：（14-15分）能扣紧主题，语言基本无误；行文连贯；表达清楚。
第四档：（11-13分）能扣紧主题，语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯；表达基本清楚。
第三档：（8-10分） 语言有一些错误或较多错误；但仍能达意；行文不够连贯。
第二档：（4-7分） 离题，语言错误多或很多，影响意思表达或只有个别的句子可懂。
第一档：（0-3分） 词不达意，不能写出一个完整的句子；或只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词；
说明：若写出自己和老师的真实姓名或学校的真实名称酌情扣分。
中考英语书面表达（13）
【2013福建省泉州市质量检查】书面表达（15分）
好习惯成就美好的未来。你养成了什么样的好习惯呢？是坚持阅读，还是坚持锻炼？是助人为乐，还是关爱弱者？请你以“__________ is a good habit”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的想法。词数：80左右。
温馨提示：1、短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。
2、这些词汇也许对你有帮助：helpful, meaningful, care for, share
____________ is a good habit
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【参考范文】书面表达： （15分）
Reading is a good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. In my opinion, reading can not only improve our knowledge but also help us think over things more carefully. I often read books in my spare time. It makes my life colorful. What I like most are novels, because most of them are quite meaningful and interesting. I also like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates.
Since reading can help us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!
评分原则：
本题总分为15分，其中内容和语言占13分，词数占1分，书写占1分。按五个档次给分。
评分时，先根据短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
各档次的给分范围和要求：
第五档：（14-15分）能扣紧主题，语言基本无误；行文连贯；表达清楚。
第四档：（11-13分）能扣紧主题，语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯；表达基本清楚。
第三档：（8-10分） 语言有一些错误或较多错误；但仍能达意；行文不够连贯。
第二档：（4-7分） 离题，只写出一、两个句子；语言错误多或很多，影响意思表达或只有个别的句子可懂。
第一档：（0-3分） 词不达意，不能写出一个完整的句子；或只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词；
说明：若写出自己和老师的真实姓名或学校的真实名称酌情扣分。
中考英语书面表达（14）
人人都知道锻炼身体的重要性，可是有些人平时不愿意腾出时间来锻炼，到了生病时才意识到这一点，Mr. Kang 就是这么一个人。根据下面的漫画写一篇题为“Mr. Kang’s decision”的短文。（字数100词左右）
注意：1．简要叙述四幅图所表现的故事。2．就该故事发表自己的看法。
参考词汇：麻将mahjong
【参考范文】
Mr. Kang is a middle-aged man. One day, he didn’t feel himself and he thought it might be not enough exercise . So, on his way to hospital , he decided to have more exercise when he got over his illness. He was no less sure when he was lying in bed in the hospital .But when he did go out of the hospital ,he didn’t seem so certain as before . So ,when he is free ,he would still prefer to play mahjong with his friends rather than have sports ,though he still remembers his promise to himself.
As we all know, we can have good health if we keep on exercising .Without good health , nothing is possible for you.
中考英语书面表达（15）
【2013福建省泉州市泉港区质量检查】
书面表达（15分）
学会善待他人，用理性、善意、爱心和责任去面对生活的现实;善待他人，才能融入人群，获得友谊、信任、谅解和支持, 拥有充满快乐的感觉，踏入充满机遇的境界，走向充满希望的未来。请以“Be kind to others”为题，写一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
温馨提示: 1.短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。
2.这些单词也许对你有帮助：Learn , respect[尊重] others, Communicate with each other; feel happy, understand, share.
Be kind to others
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【参考范文】书面表达： （15分）
Be kind to others
As we know, students should learn how to be kind to others．But in what ways? First of all, we should respect others．Everybody has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other．Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness．What's more, we should offer necessary help to those who are in trouble．Then we will feel very happy.
In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way．Only in these ways can we win other's respect and friendship. My dear friends, try to be a kind person, the world will be nicer and nicer.
.评分原则：
本题总分为15分，其中内容和语言占13分，词数占1分，书写占1分。按五个档次给分。
评分时，先根据短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。不少于70个单词，不多于90个单词，加1分。书写清晰、规范，加1分。
各档次的给分范围和要求：
第五档：（14-15分）能扣紧主题，语言基本无误；行文连贯；表达清楚。
第四档：（11-13分）能扣紧主题，语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯；表达基本清楚。
第三档：（8-10分） 语言有一些错误或较多错误；但仍能达意；行文不够连贯。
第二档：（4-7分） 离题，只写出一、两个句子；语言错误多或很多，影响意思表达或只有个别的句子可懂。
第一档：（0-3分） 词不达意，不能写出一个完整的句子；或只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词；
说明：若写出自己和老师的真实姓名或学校的真实名称酌情扣分。
中考英语书面表达（16）
人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。
赞成的理由
反对的理由
你的看法
1．广交朋友
1．浪费时间
？
2．可自由表达思想
2．影响学习
3．有利于外语学习
3．可能上当受骗
注：字数100—120之间。（书写不整齐者，酌情扣分。）
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【参考范文】
Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies.
Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
中考英语书面表达（17）
【2013广东省联合三模】
书面表达（1小题，共10分）
4月20日，四川省雅安地区发生了一场大地震，那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法和感受。 　　要求： 文章语言流畅，逻辑清晰，用词准确，80—100字左右。
词汇参考： 地震earthquake 悲痛 sorrow 亲人 relatives
受到感动be deeply moved 重建rebuild
募捐 raise money for 　　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】作文：
参考范文：
　　On April 20th, a big earthquake happened in Ya’an, Sichuan. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.
　　A lot of people volunteered to help them. Some people raised money for them, some people bought something for them, some people went there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers helped them to save their relatives and rebuilt their homes Even foreign friends also gave them a hand.
I’m deeply moved by these people. So I’ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.
作文评分细则：
采用整体评分法。评分时， 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次， 然后以该档次的要求进行调整， 最后给分。
注意内容表达。评分时要重点看所传达的信息是否有效，即能否完成这篇短文的任务。
兼顾语言正确性、连贯性和得体性。语言正确性是基础， 连贯性和得体性是更高要求。
鼓励考生在完成任务前提的下适当发挥。
内容要点。地震发生的时间，地点及灾害程度， 全国人民的行动，自己的感受和举动
第一档： 内容交代清楚， 语言使用得当， 全文表达流畅。
第二档： 生平交代清楚， 内容有一定介绍， 全文表达比较流畅，意思比较连贯， 但有语法错误。
第三档： 写出了部分生平和内容介绍， 意思表达清楚， 但有较多语法错误。
第四档： 能写出与文章相关的词， 但不能表达完整意思。
中考英语书面表达（18）
【2013广东省珠海市香洲区二模】
书面表达（本题共15分）
最近你校进行了一次“说出你的烦恼” Speak out your worries 的调查活动，请你用英语写一篇短文。
要求：1、内容包括：调查结果（如图所示）、对老师和父母的建议。
2、词数80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。
【参考范文】One possible version:
Speak out your worries
Our school has made a survey — "Don't keep your worries"．Here are the results．
About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework．They have so much homework to do every day．And they feel stressed too much．About thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them （in their studies）．It's difficult for them to get along/on well with their parents．The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health．They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities．
Dear teachers, would you please give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves? Dear mom and dad, we want to take more exercise to keep fit/healthy,/stay healthy．We will try/do our best and we also want to play on our own．
中考英语书面表达（19）
【2013湖北省黄冈市模拟】
书面表达（共1题，满分10分）
温馨提示：“中国梦”是2013届中考文科命题最热的话题，如何依据考纲探索书面表达时政要闻和教材的切入点，本题作了点尝试……
情景设定：我市某校校刊《梦源》双语作文栏目组举办“中国梦·我的梦”征文竞赛活动，假如你是小明,请根据以下要点提示自拟题目撰文参加竞赛，词数80以上。
要点提示：1.What’s your dream?
2. Why is it your dream?
3. How are you going to do that?
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【参考范文】书面表达
My Dream
Everyone has his dream. Some people want to be a great businessman like Bill Gates. Some people want to be a super basketball player like Yao Ming. Others want to find a good job. My dream is to be a doctor. Why?
When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. I missed so many lessons. My parents were both worried. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. They told me to have good eating habits and take more exercise With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I'm in good health.
Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. I will study hard to get more knowledge in order to achieve my dream. I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day. What about you?
给分范围和要求：
A档：（10～12）80词左右；紧扣主题；内容充实；语言基本无误；行文连贯；表达清楚。
B档：（7～9）70词左右；主题明确；内容较充实；语言错误不多；表达较清楚。
C档：（4～6）60词以下；主题明确；内容单薄；语言错误多；表达有欠缺。
D档：（0～3）20词以下；只能写出少量语句；主题不明确；内容松散。
中考英语书面表达（19）【环境保护】
假如上周一你班举行了“爱护水、节约水”的主题活动，请你根据以下要点为你校校报写一篇活动报道。
活动内容
邀请王老师作报告；全班讨论如何节水和爱护水。
活动收获
我们知道我国一些地方水源受到污染；我市虽有一些河流和湖泊，但也缺水。所以……（节水和爱护水的方法至少各发挥一点)。
活动感受
……
注意：
1．词数不少于90。文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2．要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯。
3．文中不得真实的人名、校名。
Last Monday we held an activity
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【参考范文】One possible version:
Last Monday we held an activity about saving and protecting water.
Mr Wang was invited to give us a talk. After his speech, we had a discussion about how to save and protect water.
Now we know that some of the rivers are polluted in our country and that we are short of water although there are some rivers and lakes in our city. As a result, we need to protect and save water. For example, we shouldn’t leave water running after using it.Besides, we mustn’t throw rubbish into the rivers.
After taking part in the activity, we had a better understanding of the importance of protecting the environment and saving water.
中考英语书面表达（20）
【2013江苏省射阳中学第二次调研考试】
书面表达（共1题，计15分）
某报社正在举办以“保护自己，远离疾病”为主题的征文比赛，请你以“How to keep diseases away”为题，根据已提供的信息和要求写篇短文投稿。内容要点如下：
1．多参加体育锻炼；2．保持健康的生活习惯，尽量不要在外就餐；3．睡眠充足，多喝水，勤洗手，窗户要常打开。4．如果发烧、咳嗽，尽快就医。词数：80左右。
How to keep diseases away










【参考范文】书面表达（共1题，计15分）
作文满分为15分，按5个档次给分。
（一）评分原则：
为了培养学生的创新精神和语言实践能力，促进英语写作教学，要严格按5个档次给分。既要敢于打低分，更要敢于打高分；内容和语言共计13分，在评分时要以作文的整体谋篇和语言水平（看其是否地道）来评判。先确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，微调得分。最后，看其词数和卷面整洁程度。词数太少（不到40个词）或书写欠整洁的应酌情再扣1~2分，但不倒扣分。
（二）内容要点：
1．多参加体育锻炼；
2．保持健康的生活习惯，尽量不要在外就餐；
3．睡眠充足，多喝水，勤洗手，窗户要常打开。
4．如果发烧、咳嗽，尽快就医
（三）各档次的给分范围和要求：
第五档：（13～15分）　很好地完成了规定的写作任务。包含所有内容要点，结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯。使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇，语法和词汇错误极少，格式正确，书写规范。
第四档：（10～12分）　较好地完成了规定的写作任务。基本上包含所有内容要点，结构较为完整，语句完整，意思清楚。语法结构和词汇错误较少，格式基本正确，书写较为规范。
第三档：（7～9分）　基本上完成了规定的写作任务。包含主要内容要点，结构欠完整，少数语句不通顺，意思基本清楚。语法结构和词汇错误较多，格式基本正确，书写基本规范。
第二档：（4～6分）　未能按要求完成规定的写作任务。只包含少数内容要点，结构不完整，多数语句欠完整，意思不够清楚。语法结构和词汇错误较多，影响理解，格式不够正确，书写欠规范。
第一档：（0～3分）　未能按要求完成规定的写作任务。只写出个别要点，结构不完整，多数语句不完整或意思不明。语法和词汇错误很多，书写不规范。
参考范文 ：
How to keep diseases away
As a middle school student，what should we do to protect ourselves and keep healthy?First，
try to take exercise every day，such as walking，running，skating in winter or swimming in summer．Second，we should have healthy lifestyle and try not to go out for meals．Third，it’s necessary for us to have enough sleep every day．Besides，we should keep our windows open，drink more water and remember to wash our hands very often．What’s more，if we have a fever or get a cough unfortunately，we must go to the doctors as soon as possible．
I hope all of us keep healthy every day!
中考英语书面表达（21）
不论在家还是在学校，总是要吃午饭的。是吃中式盒饭还是西式快餐呢？就你所了解的情况，写短文一篇，说说为什么快餐非常受欢迎。
【参考范文】
Meals
Everybody must eat. But they have different ways.
America is a busy country. To save every second of time, people have to work faster and better. Usually Americans don’t have breakfast, and most of them don’t have enough time to have lunch, either. Fast food is their best choice. Fast restaurants are almost everywhere in America. Hamburgers, sandwiches, pizzas, potato chips etc., they are easy to get, and not expensive.
But in China, things are a little different. Most people like to have breakfast in snack bars, because it’s convenient and not expensive. But more and more people, especially in big cities, prefer to have fast food because of heavy work and busy time. But it’s quite different from American fast food. We call it “Hefan”, which means a share of meal. It saves time and is cheap. It can make people free from housework, too.
American fast food is getting more and more popular in China, I think.
中考英语书面表达（22）
【2013江苏省泰兴市洋思中学三模】
书面表达（20分）
近年来，传染性疾病不断发生，威胁人类的健康。例如有2003年的非典，2009年的甲型H1N1流感，2012年的H5N2高致病性禽流感，2013年3月底在上海和安徽两地率先发现H7N9型禽流感。作为中学生，为了使自己保持健康，远离疾病，我们在日常生活中应该怎样保持健康呢？请你以“Protect Ourselves from the Flu ”为题，根据提供的信息和要求写一篇短文。内容要点如下:
要求：1．词数100左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3．短文不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
4．补充内容至少一点。
Protect Ourselves from the Flu
The infectious disease influences our daily life and health. What’s more, it can make people die. What can we do to protect ourselves from the flu?__________________________________
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If we do like that, we’ll have a happy and healthy life.
【参考范文】书面表达
Protect Ourselves from the Flu
The infectious disease influences our daily life and health. What’s more, it can make people die. What can we do to protect ourselves from the flu? First, don’t be afraid of the terrible disease. We should have enough sleep and try to take more exercise. Second, we should clean our room every day and open the windows often. We must wash hands often, In public, we shouldn’t spit or throw litter . Next, We need to drink more water, never or seldom eat junk food but eat more vegetables and fruit. If we have a fever or a cough, we must go to the doctors as soon as possible.
If we do like that, we’ll have a happy and healthy life.
中考英语书面表达（23）
【2013江苏省泰州市姜堰四中5月适应性测试】
书面表达（20分）
请你写一篇介绍杨向明勇于救人的事迹，并谈谈自己的感悟。100词左右
人物
杨向明, 泰州的一位优秀教师，个子高大, 平时乐于助人，学生们有困难，他总是尽全力帮助解决。他的课生动有趣，深受学生喜爱。
事迹
5月1日下午3点左右，一名13岁的男孩不小心掉入河内，杨向明路过时听到求救声后，立即下车跳入河中施救。不幸的是，没能成功地救起小孩，结果两人一起丧生了。杨向明老师被誉为“泰州最美教师（the Nicest Teacher in Taizhou）”
感悟
……（至少两点）
Learn from Yang Xiangming
Yang Xiangming is an excellent teacher in Taizhou.





【参考范文】书面表达（满分20分）
Learn from Yang Xiangming
Yang Xiangming is an excellent teacher in Taizhou. He is tall and always ready/willing to help others. When students have difficulty/trouble, he always tries his best to help solve it. His classes/lessons are lively and interesting and loved by his students.
A thirteen-year-old boy fell into the river carelessly/because of carelessness at about 3 o’clock on the afternoon of May 1st. He heard the call for help when he passed by. He jumped into the river at once/immediately. Unluckily, he failed to save the boy. As a result, they both lost their lives. He was honoured with the Nicest Teacher in Taizhou.
I am moved by his behaviour/action. I think we should learn from him and work hard.
评分标准：
1．本题总分为20分，按５个档次给分。
2．评分时先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3．词数少于80从总分中减去1分。
4．书写潦草，卷面不整洁以至影响交际，从总分中减去1分。
5．各档次的给分范围和要求:
1) 第五档（很好）（17—20分）要点齐全，语言流畅，书写规范、工整，基本无语法或拼写错误。
2) 第四档（好） （13—16分）要点基本齐全，语言较流畅，有少量语法或拼写错误。
3) 第三档（适当）（9—12分） 要点基本齐全，语言欠流畅，有一些语法或拼写错误，但尚能达意。
4) 第二档（较差）（5—8分） 要点不全，语言不流畅，错误较多，影响理解。
5) 第一档（差） （1－4分） 仅写出１－２个要点。
6)０分：未写任何内容；内容太少无法评判；写的内容均与所要求的内容无关；所写内容无法看清。
中考英语书面表达（24）
【2013统练四】
书面表达（本题有2小题，76小题5分，77小题15分；共20分）
学校为了丰富学生假期生活，决定成立志愿者、旅游、音乐、运动等俱乐部，以下是志愿者俱乐部的招聘广告，请用英语帮助完成该则广告。相关内容如下：
①时间：一星期两小时 ②最后写一句话呼吁大家参加
Volunteer wanted
Do you want to do something meaningful to change your life? Would you like_________________ a volunteer? It will take you___________________________________.
There are many sick kids in the hospital. They need you to__________________________.
Volunteering is great! ____________________________________________________________.
77.我们班同学就“参加哪种俱乐部”进行了讨论，不同的同学有不同的想法，请你根据下表内容的提示，用英语写一篇短文，陈述同学们喜欢参加的俱乐部以及他们的理由，并谈谈你想要参加的俱乐部和理由。
俱乐部
理由
Jim
旅游俱乐部
◆开阔眼界，学习不同地方的文化
◆放松自己，有利于学习
Mary
志愿者俱乐部
◆把自己的爱好加以利用
◆认为成为一名志愿者很伟大
Lily
音乐俱乐部
◆喜欢音乐，欣赏不同类型的音乐
◆与喜欢音乐的人交朋友
I
…… (不要重复以上俱乐部)
……（至少两点）
注意：1. 文章必须包括表中全部内容，可适当增加细节；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数，你只需接着写；
3. 词数：80—100。
Recently, we have discussed what kind of club to join. Here is the result. Jim would like to join the travel club. ______________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Recently, we have discussed what kind of club to join. Here is the result. Jim would like to join the travel club. He believes traveling can open up his eyes and help him learn the culture in different places. At the same time, he can relax himself while traveling and it’s good for his study. Mary is a girl who always wants to put her love to good use. So she hopes to join the volunteer club. Also, she thinks being a volunteer is great. Lily loves music a lot. Therefore, she decides to join the music club, so that she can enjoy different kinds of music more often. The most important thing is that she can make friends with people who also like music.
As for me, I want to join the sports club. I like doing sports very much and it's a good way to keep healthy.
中考英语书面表达（25）
目前，越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这一现象，存在两种不同观点：
有些人认为有必要
另一些人认为没有必要
跟老师学比自己学好
可以巩固课堂所学内容
可以学到更多的东西
容易养成依赖习惯
学生需要时间休息
许多培训班和家教以赢利为目的
请您根据以上提示，以Is a Training Class of Family Teacher Necessary ?为题，写一篇120 词左右的短文，反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点。文章开头已给出， 不计入总字数。
要求：层次清晰，连贯流畅；表达灵活，不要逐字逐句翻译。
参考词汇：巩固strengthen；
Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.
Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, it’s more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what is learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another, students need time to relax from time to time. What’s more, the purpose of many training classes and teachers is to make money.
In my opinion, whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it’s OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.
中考英语书面表达（26）
【2013临沂市学业水平考试】
书面表达（计15分）
　　假定你是王林，你的英国笔友Helen在做有关世界各国中学生如何过周末的调查。她给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解相关情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据邮件中的内容和你的实际情况用英语回复，可以适当发挥。
注意：1. 不少于60词，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2. 回复中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分。
Subject: Weekends From: Helen
Dear Wang Lin,
I’m doing a survey on how students spend their weekends around the world. I need your help. Could you please answer the following questions?
● How do you usually relax yourself on weekends?
● Do you do chores at home? Why or why not?
● What do you want to do most? And why?
Thanks,
Helen
Subject: Weekends From: Wang Lin
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. I would like to answer your questions.
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Best wishes,
Wang Lin
【参考范文】书面表达
(一) One possible version
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. I would like to answer your questions.
I can do many things to relax myself on weekends. I often play table tennis, surf the Internet and watch TV. I usually do chores at home, because my parents are very busy and I want to help them. What I want to do most is going bike riding with friends. We have been to many beautiful villages. Next weekend, we are going to Mountain Meng. We always have fun.
Best wishes,
Wang Lin
(二) 评分说明：本大题共15分, 请按以下四档标准进行评分。
第一档：(15分) 符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确无误。
第二档：(11—14分) 符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺，语言基本无误。
第三档：(6—10分) 基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺，语言有部分错误。
第四档：(0—5分) 不符合题意要求，表达不够清楚，逻辑关系混乱，语言错误很多。
(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。)
中考英语书面表达（27）
【2013江苏省盐城市模拟】书面表达 （共l 题，计 15 分）
2013年4月22日是第44个世界地球日，今年的主题是：珍惜地球资源，转变发展方向(cherish Earth’s resource, change the development mode)。请以Making Every Day Earth Day为题，写一篇短文。
要点：1. 在世界各地，水污染和空气污染已经成为非常严重的问题。
2. 很多动植物面临灭绝危险。
3. 人类生存环境恶化。人类已经意识到问题的严重性并采取行动。
4. 为保护地球，我们应该发展低碳经济，过低碳生活。
5. 你的建议（1—2点）。
6. 我们应该把每一天都当做地球日，每天关爱地球。
参考词汇：低碳经济low carbon economy、低碳生活 low carbon life
要求：不要逐句翻译以上要点，可适当发挥。
词数：90词左右。不得在短文中透露考生姓名、学校等信息。
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【参考范文】书面表达
Making Every Day Earth Day
Now water pollution and air pollution have become very serious problems around the world. Many animals and plants are in danger. Some are disappearing fast. The environment around us is becoming worse.
Luckily, people have realized how serious it is and start to take action. To protect the earth, we should develop low carbon economy and live a low carbon life.
I think we should try our best to save electricity and plant more trees. We should make every day Earth Day and treat the earth with kindness.
中考英语书面表达（28）
【环境保护】
地球是我们人类共同的家园。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救）our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇70词左右的短文参评。
1.重要性：只有一个地球
2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难
3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然
参考词汇：disaster n.灾难 protect V. 保护
注意：(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名；
(2)文章标题已给出，但不计入总词数；
(3)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
Save Our Earth
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【参考范文】
We all live in the earth. The earth is our home. We have only one earth. We must take care of it. It gives us the best environment. If we harm it, it will be angry. And then we will have a terrible end. There are three problems in our earth, they are pollution, disaster and illness.
It’s our duty to protect our environment. So we must plant more trees, protect the flowers and the trees, reduce the pollution.
Protecting the nature is very important. It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy. If everyone makes a contribution to protect the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.
中考英语书面表达（29）
【2013广东省湛江市模拟】
作文（满分为20分）
湛江正在创建“全国卫生城市” 。作为21世纪的中学生， 我们应该如何尽我们的力量来为“创卫行动”添光彩呢？请根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。
要求： 1. 词数：80 左右
2. 要点完整，层次清晰， 语法正确，语言通顺流畅。
3. 文中不得提及考生所在的学校和本人姓名等真实信息。
提示： 1. 湛江是我们的家园， 保持干净、整洁是我们的责任。
2. 优美的生活环境可以使我们更好地享受工作和学习。
3. 不乱扔垃圾、不随地吐痰，空闲时清洁街道
4. 尊老爱幼、相互帮助、友好待人。
5. 发出号召。
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【参考范文】作文（满分为20分）
Zhanjiang is our home . It’s our duty to keep it clean and tidy . Everyone needs a clean place to live in . so that we can enjoy better life . Now , Zhanjiang is building a national advanced clean city. As middle school students , we should also try our best .
First， we ourselves should develop a good health habit. We are not supposed to litter about or spit all around . Second , we should keep our school and the neighborhood clean .we can also clean out the parks and the street on Sundays. What’s more , It's a traditional virtue to respect for the old and love for the young. As students , we should be kind to everyone else and ready help people in trouble.
Let’s use our hands to make this beautiful city of Zhanjiang more and more beautiful and cleaner .
中考英语书面表达（30）
【2014浙江省衢州市模拟】书面表达
以Peter Brown的名义给他的朋友Emma写一封短信，感谢她寄给过来一张全家福，并用以下表格中的信息及图片内容介绍自己。
字数50词左右。

姓名：Peter Brown 性别：男孩
年龄：14岁 电话：5070-9761
家庭成员：爷爷，奶奶，爸爸，妈妈，我，妹妹
82．
假如你叫小明，你现在给刚认识的笔友Tony写一封信。在信中你介绍自己的情况：八年级学生，家住衢州龙游；你的爱好是：收集赛车模型，喜欢运动，尤其是各种球类运动，对学习英语感兴趣，也会唱很多英文歌；将来想去英国参观、旅游或学习。
要求：字数70左右，表达要简洁、清晰、流畅
Dear Tony,
I am so glad to introduce myself to you._____________________________________
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_____________________________________________________________________________ Yours
Xiaoming
【参考范文】One possible version：
Dear Emma,
Thank you for sending me the photo of my family. I’m Peter Brown., a lovely boy. And I am 14 years old. There are six people in my family, my grandpa,grandma,my father,my mother, my sister and I .my father and my mother are teachers, and my sister and I are students, we are in the same class.
Peter Brown
中考英语书面表达（31）
最近，你班同学就“父母是不是最好的老师”这一话题展开了讨论。有些人认为父母是最好的老师，有些人认为也不尽然。请根据下表提示，写一篇短文介绍讨论结果以及你的个人观点。
观点
原因
同意
不完全同意
1
教会如何生活
过分溺爱
2
指出缺点，指明方向
强加兴趣、价值观
3
教会富有爱心
希望值过高
要求：1、根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文通顺连贯；
2、词数110左右；
3、开头已给出，不计入单词总数。
Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students……
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【参考范文】
Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes in their lives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life. What’s more, parents’ love helps to teach them how to love others. So parents are their most important teachers.
However, not all of us hold the same views. Some think that their parents give them too much love, and they are too eager to pass on their values and interests to them. Moreover, their parents sometimes expect too much of them, which makes them feel their goals too difficult to reach.
In my opinion, parents are our important teachers. But parents should also try to understand their children more and limit the generation gap.