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Which one do you like most
Lead-in
cake
milk tea
potato chips
barbecue
cereal milk
hotpot
Macaron
spicy strip
fresh vegetables
instant noodles
Read the passage quickly,match the subheadings with the paragraphs.
Para 1 A. Slow Eating is Good
Para 2 B. Reducing Sweets is Key
Para 3 C. The Real Killer is Sugar
Para 4 D. The Way You Look at Food is Most Important
Para 5 E. Keep It Fresh and Balanced
Fast reading
Put more simply, while people continue to argue over whether or not fatty food is dangerous, we already know that sugar is a killer.
In other words, if you want to be healthy, you have to cut down on desserts, and cut out sweet drinks altogether.
Finally,a fundamental key to healthy eating is to eat slowly
The ideal diet is a balanced one, without too much or too little of any one thing.
It is up to you to decide how you want to live, and to make the right decisions about your diet.
Introduce a topic or a phenomenon
Giving advice on healthy eating
Read for the structure
总
分
Read for the details
P33 2
A In other words, if you want to be healthy, you have to cut down on desserts, and cut out sweet drinks altogether.
B The ideal diet is a balanced one, without too much or too little of any one thing.
How does the author support each point
C A fundamental key to healthy eating is to eat slowly.
D It is up to you to decide how you want to live, and to make the right decisions about your diet.
A.In other words, if you want to be healthy, you have to cut down on desserts, and cut out sweet drinks altogether.
Detail :
The American Heart Association recommends that we limit ourselves to less than 100-150 calories a day from sugar, which is less than what is usually contained in one can of sweet drink or in a single candy bar.
Check your answers
B. The ideal diet is a balanced one, without too much or too little of any one thing.
Detail 1:Fruit and vegetables are full of vitamins and fibre.
Detail 2:Processed foods often contain less nutrition.
Detail 3:Have some meat,beans,or dairy products.
Official evidence
Give examples
C. A fundamental key to healthy eating is to eat slowly.
Detail 1:
Detail 2:
People who chew too quickly end up eating too much food because they still feel hungry.
Eating slowly also allows your body to digest your food better, and will allow you to enjoy your food more.
D.It is up to you to decide how you want to live, and to make the right decisions about your diet.
Detail:
Make a comparison
If you are using food mostly for nutrition,then you are on the right track with your diet.
However, if food has become the centre of your life, you might be on the road to bad health.
Make a comparison
Circle the linking words in the passage.
function linking words
introduce another way of saying what is already mentioned
show contrasting ideas are being introduced
however (然而)
put more simply (简而言之)
in other words (换句话说)
what this means (这意味着)
regardless of (不管, 不顾)
rather than (而不是)
rather (恰恰相反; 而是)
What can we use to make the text coherent
Para.1
Introduction
introduce the topic
Para.2
Para.3
Para.4
healthy eating
Supporting
details
Topic
sentence
Summary
Para.5
Giving suggestions
Official evidence
Give examples
Make a comparison
Discussion
What are bad eating habits Can you give some advice
Bad eating habits
Advice(Good eating habits)
1.eat quickly 2.consume too much desserts ...... 1.eat slowly
2. cut down on sweets
......
Bad eating habits
不吃早餐 skip breakfast
do sth without having breakfast
挑食 be picky/particular/fastidious about food
暴饮暴食 eat and drink too much
eat like a horse
Some advice (Good eating habits)
少油少盐 which be less in oil and salt
...including less oil and salt
cut down on oil and salt
按时吃饭 have meals regularly/on time
避免高脂肪食物 avoid the dishes with high calories
食用新鲜食物,减少加工或冷冻食物 Have fresh food while reducing processed or frozen food
假如你是李华,你发现学校里有一些学生有不良的饮食习惯,如不吃早餐、吃零食、挑食和暴饮暴食等;请你写一封建议信,让同学们养成健康的饮食习惯。
注意:1.词数80字左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作指导
仔细审题:体裁
人称
时态
While-Writing
建议信
第一人称
一般现在时
Para 1 Introduction
writing purpose
(or a phenomenon)
谋篇布局 Para 2 Body
(advice+ details)
Para 3 Conclusion
假如你是李华,你发现学校里有一些学生有不良的饮食习惯,如不吃早餐、吃零食、挑食和暴饮暴食等;请你写一封建议信,让同学们养成健康的饮食习惯。
注意:1.词数80字左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
不吃早餐 skip breakfast
without having breakfast
挑食 be picky/particular/fastidious about food
暴饮暴食 eat and drink too much
eat like a horse
少油 少盐 which be less in oil and salt
...including less oil and salt
cut down on oil and salt
按时 吃饭 have meals regularly/on time
避免高脂 肪食物 avoid the dishes with high calories
食用新鲜食物, 减少加工或 冷冻食物 Have fresh food while reducing processed or frozen food
Dear students,
Yours,
LiHua
...很重要
Useful expressions
Doing sth is of great importance /significance.
It is vital /significant/important that...
sth plays a very important/significant role in...
sth attaches great importance to...
建议...
My advice is that...
I think you ought to/should do...
I’d like to advise you to ...
It is suggested that you should...
You’d better...
as far as I know, ...
to my knowledge, ...
as far as I’m concerned, ...
as far as I can see, ...
according to my range, ...
据我所知...
对...有好处
be beneficial to ...
sth benefits sb
be of great benefit to...
it is good for ... that...
Exchange your draft with a partner
Use the checklist to help you review your partner’s draft.
1. Does the writer describe the bad eating habits
2. Does the writer give suggestions on healthy eating habits
3. Does the writer use appropriate linking words?
4. Does the writer use separate paragraphs, each with its own function
Post-Writing
Try to polish the writing by yourself .
Thank you!