(共26张PPT)
描写节日时, 主要写出节日名称、节日的重要性、节日日期以及活动等。
描写庆祝节日经历时, 主要描写活动和心情。
Share your experiences on a festival.
有关节日经历的记叙文
主题写作写作任务
假定你是李华,你的留学生同学Elvis想要了解中国的传统节日。请你写封电子邮件向他介绍中国的元宵节(the Lantern Festival).内容包括:
1.节日简介;2.风俗习惯;3.邀请他一起过节。
注意:1.词数100左右;有关节日的写作
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Elvis,
Yours,Li Hua
II写作思路(一审、二定、三明确、四分段)
(1)一审:确定写作体裁和主题体裁:应用文-电子邮件 主题:节日介绍
(2)二定(确定时态和人称)(与体裁和主题息息相关)时态:以一般现在时为主(介绍节日的情况),一般将来时为辅(邀请一起过节)
人称:以第一人称为主,第二人称为辅
(3)三明:确明确写作要点:了解对方要求→介绍元宵节情况→邀请对方共度节日
(4)四分段:黄金分段法则:结合文章要点采用三段式。
III(1)关键词语
the Lantern Festival,typical,traditional,lunar,represent,set off,firework,riddle,except for,folkperformance,look forward to
(2)完成句子
①知道你对元宵节感兴趣,我非常高兴写信告诉你关于元宵节的情况。(现在分词短语作状语)
Knowing that you are interested in the Lantern
Festival, I am really glad to write to tell you about it.
②作为一个典型的传统节日,元宵节是在农历正月十五。(as)
As a typical traditional festival,the Lantern Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month.
③在那一天,我们吃元宵,元宵代表着团聚,燃放烟花,欣赏灯笼和猜灯谜。(定语从句)
On that day,we eat yuanxiao which represents the reunion,setting off fireworks,enjoying lanterns and guessing lantern riddles.
④此外,还有舞龙和其他民间表演。(there be句型)
Apart from those,there is Dragon Dance and otherfolk performances.
⑤我想邀请你和我们一起过元宵节。(join)
I'd like to invite you to join us for the Lantern Festival.
IV连句成篇
Dear Elvis,
Knowing that you are interested in the Lantern Festival, I am really glad to write to tell you about it.
As a typical traditional festival,the Lantern Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month. On that day,we eat yuanxiao which represents the reunion, setting off fireworks, enjoying lanternsand guessing lantern riddles. Apart from those, there is Dragon Danceand other folk performances.
I'd like to invite you to join us for the Lanterm Festival. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
words and phrases
①____________ n.娱乐
②____________ n.庆祝;庆祝会
③____________ n.典礼;仪式,礼节
④____________ n.冠军
⑤____________ v.& n.欢呼,喝彩
⑥____________ vi.比赛,竞赛
⑦____________ n.竞争;竞赛
⑧____________ n.音乐会;演奏会
amusement
celebration
ceremony
champion
cheer
compete
competition
concert
⑨____________ n.事件;大事
⑩____________ n.盛宴,宴会
____________ n.节日;庆祝活动
____________ n.烟火 (pl.) 烟火表演
____________ vt.使相配
n.比赛,竞赛
____________ vi.参加,参与
event
feast
festival
firework
match
participate
____________________________在度假
____________穿上盛装;乔装打扮
__________________(节日等)是在(某天)
_________________期望,期待,盼望
____________________在特殊场合
_________________燃放鞭炮
be on holiday/leave/vacation
dress up
fall on (some day)
look forward to
on special occasions
set off fireworks
Words&phrases
①____________ adj.高兴的;满意的
②____________ vt.邀请
③____________ adj.愉快的;快乐的
④______________________探索外国文化
⑤_________________一个特殊的场合
pleased
invite
enjoyable
explore a foreign culture
a special occasion
⑥____________聚会; 联欢
⑦_________________传统食品
⑧____________参加
⑨__________________________________
独特的文化和迷人的风景
⑩____________ adj.(经历)难以忘怀的;
不会被遗忘的
get together
traditional foods
participate in
unique culture and attractive scenery
unforgettable
典例示范
假如你是May,在刚刚过去的春节里,你应邀前往中国与笔友一起欢度中国年。请你用英语写一篇100词左右的短文来记录这一段难得的异国经历和感受。内容包括:
1.春节期间你们参加了什么活动;
2.谈谈你的感受。
写作技巧
在写作时要注意以下几点:
1.仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息。
该写作要明确以下要点:春节期间你们参加了什么活动;谈谈你的感受。
2.提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定的逻辑关系来写。
本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。
3.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。
本文主要使用过去时。
4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,增加文章的亮点。
List the outline of the passage.
Paragraph 1:__________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:__________________________________________________________
Paragraph 3:__________________________________________________________
I was invited to enjoy the Spring Festival.
Describe the experience in detail.
Brief summary and the feelings.
【话题词汇】
1. on the New Year’s Eve 在除夕
2. have a get-together 聚会
3. drink to one’s health 祝某人身体健康
4. pay a visit to sb. 拜访某人
5. say “Happy New Year” to sb. 对某人说“新年快乐”
6. make paper cuts 做剪纸
7. have a good time 玩得开心
8. decorate vt. 装饰
9. do some cleaning 大扫除
10. be busy shopping 忙于购物
【话题句式】
1. 表达节日氛围
(1) Before the festival, people are busy shopping and cleaning their houses.
在节日前, 人们忙着购物和打扫他们的房子。
(2)On the New Year’s Eve, every family has a delicious feast.
在除夕, 每家都享用美味的大餐。
(3)When meeting, they send good wishes to each other by saying “Happy New Year! ”.
见面时, 他们会说“新年快乐”, 互相祝福。
(4)And people like to decorate their windows and doors using varieties of colorful paper cuts, which may be birds, animals or flowers.
人们喜欢用各种各样的彩色的剪纸装饰他们的窗户和门, 这些剪纸可以是鸟、动物或者花。
2. 表达经历和感受
(1)I learned paper cutting from my grandmother bit by bit, and finished a work eventually, which made me full of a sense of accomplishment.
我向祖母一点一点地学习剪纸, 终于完成了一个作品, 这使我充满了成就感。
(2)Every corner is filled with joy, so we feel happy.
每个角落都充满了快乐, 所以我们感到幸福。
(3)As we watched TV, we made dumplings.
我们一边看电视一边包饺子。
(4)I will never forget this festival because so many fascinating moments have left a deep impression on me.
我不会忘记这个节日, 因为许多精彩的时刻给我留下了深刻印象。
Sentences
①很高兴,我的一个中国笔友邀请我和她一起度过了上一个春节。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
②中国的春节是中国家庭团聚的特殊日子,所以我们一起拜访了她的一些家人和亲戚。(so)
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
I was pleased that one of my pen pals in China invited me to stay with her during the past Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families to get together so we visited some of her families and relatives together.
③此外,我们试吃了一些传统食物,看了舞龙舞狮,并参加了一些其他的庆祝活动,如庙会。(besides,such as)
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
④在我看来,探索外国文化确实值得。(worthwhile)
________________________________________________________________________
Besides,we tried some traditional foods,watched Dragon and Lion dance and participated in some other celebration activities such as a temple fair.
In my point of view,it’s indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.
I was so pleased that one of my pen pals in China invited me to stay with her during the past Spring Festival. That was really an enjoyable and unforgettable experience for me.
The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families to get together so we visited some of her families and relatives together. Besides,we tried some traditional foods,watched Dragon and Lion dance and participated in some other celebration activities such as a temple fair.
Greatly impressed by Chinese unique culture and attractive scenery,I have known further about China. In my point of view,it’s indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.
参考范文
【举一反三】
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华, 根据中国春节的传统, 2022年虎年春节前要装饰房间, 根据以下提示, 写一篇英语短文。
内容如下:
1. 你跟奶奶学做剪纸;
2. 装饰房间;
3. 表达你对民间剪纸文化的观点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已经给出, 不计入总词数。
4. 提示词: 剪纸paper cut精美的delicate
On February 2nd, I went to visit my grandma.
___________________________________________
【谋篇】
【遣词】
1. 拜访 _______________
2. 忙于做某事 ________________
3. 接近 _________
4. 迫不及待地做某事 ____________________
5. 在某人的指导下 ___________________
visit/pay a visit to
be busy doing sth.
approach
couldn’t wait to do sth.
with one’s instruction
6. 张贴 ______
7. 充满 ____________________
8. 感到骄傲 _________
9. 把……传承下去 _________
put up
be filled with/be full of
feel proud
pass. . . on
【造句】
1. 完成句子
(1)当我进入房间时, 随着新年的来临, 我发现她正忙着做剪纸。
When I entered the room, I _____________________________as the New Year
Day was approaching.
(2)被她的精美的作品所吸引, 我迫不及待地想试一试。
______________________________________________________
(3)在她的耐心指导下, 我学会了做剪纸的基本步骤和技巧。
With her patient instruction, I _________________________of making paper cuts.
(4)我把一些剪纸给了我们的邻居。
_________________________________________
(5)收到它们他们很高兴。
___________________________________
found her busy making
paper cuts
Attracted by her delicate works, I couldn’t wait to
have a try.
learnt the basic steps
and skills
I gave some of our paper cuts to our neighbors.
They were very happy to receive them.
2. 句式升级
(6)用现在分词作状语和with的复合结构改写句(1)
____________________________________________
Entering the room, I found her busy making paper cuts with the New Year Day approaching.
(7)用定语从句合并句(4)(5)
_____________________________________________
I gave some of our paper cuts to our neighbors, who were very happy to receive them.
【参考范文】
On February 2nd, I went to visit my grandma. Entering the room, I found her busy making paper cuts with the New Year Day approaching.
Attracted by her delicate works, I couldn’t wait to have a try. With her patient instruction, I learnt the basic steps and skills of making paper cuts. Soon my creations were “born”. Then eagerly, we put them up. With different designs on the windows, such as a tiger and the Chinese character “Fu”, our room was filled with a festival atmosphere. Besides, I gave some of our paper cuts to our neighbors, who were very happy to receive them. I felt proud when seeing their smiles.
Paper cutting is precious treasure of China so it should be passed on.