人教新目标2023中考英语书面表达高分秘诀三部曲

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中考作文高分秘诀（一）
句式多样化口诀：小被请小使祁连山比建，从不敢形动
NO.1【小被--被动语态句式】
In this way, your reading ability can be improved.(提高)
I’m writing to tell you that a music festival will be held in our school.
NO.2 【请--情态动词 should/shouldn’t =be supposed to do】
NO.3 【小使--使役动词 make】
It makes our life relaxed.
In order to make our country more beautiful,we should do something to protect the environment.
NO.4【祁--祈使句】
Try to do sth/ Try your best to do sth
Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.
Never keep silent about your problems.
NO.5【连--连接词，用逗号隔开】
As we all know , First， Besides(另外), What’s more,(而且) More importantly, (更重要的是，表递进) Finally , all in all,(总之) in the end 最后 in a word 总而言之
NO.6【比--比较级】
The number of elephants is becoming much smaller.
Try to speak Chinese as much as possible.
The more you speak,the better your spoken Chinese will be. (天花板)
Our environment is becoming worse and worse.
NO.7【建--提建议】
We’d /You’d better turn off the taps(水龙头). （天花板）
What/How about doing sth？ 3. Would you like to do sth 4. Why don’t we take some sandwiches
NO.8【从-从句】
I’m writing to offer you some advice on how to learn Chinese well. (定)
Can you tell me what your favorite festival is （宾）
You should tell others when you’re in trouble. (状)
No matter how many difficulties you have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.(让步状从)
NO.9【不-不定式】
It’s helpful to read some good Chinese newspapers and magazines. (不定式做真正的主语，it 是形式主语)
Listening to music is an interesting and relaxing way to improve your listening. （不定式做定语，修饰way）
As students,what can we do to protect the environment （不定式做目的状语）
To reduce white pollution ,we should use fewer plastic bags when going shopping.（不定式做目的状语）
It is good for health and it is a good way to relax from the busy study.
NO.10【敢-感叹句】
How excited and happy we are during the Spring Festival!
NO.11【形-形容词用高级词汇】
happy==excited good==great/fun/helpful / useful/unforgettable/ peaceful/wonderful/fantastic/amazing
NO.12【动-动名词做主语】
Keeping a diary in Chinese is surely a good way to improve your writing.
Exercising is good for our health,which keep our minds sharp and makes us confident(自信的) and happy.
中考作文高分秘诀（二）
一、征求、询问、邀请意见的邮件
【开头】
How is it going I know that you ...... I’m writing to invite you to join us...../
I wonder if you will.....(我想知道....)
Would you please give me some advice？
I’m writing to share ....with you。
二、介绍活动
...将被举办：...will be held +地点+时间 (at 10:30 a.m.,July2)
活动包含...: Students will give fantastic performances, including playing the violin,.....
(主+谓+宾，+including doing)
三、必备高频，高级词汇：
持续2小时 last about two hours
2.去旅行 take a trip to...(地点)
3.环保的 It’s environmentally friendly.
4.特别喜欢... be fond of / enjoy
5.能... be able to do
6.代替，反而 instead of doing
7.更有挑战性 It’s more challenging.
8.如果你...我们会很开心 We’ll be very glad if you can ...
9.即将到来的暑假 for the coming summer vacation
请求帮忙 ask for help
11.谈论... talk about
12.和...沟通 communicate with
13.提供建议 offer some advice to sb/on how to do sth
14.应该 be supposed to do
15.为了 in order to do
16.使...变得 ...makes me/us relaxed.
17.对..有影响 make a difference to
18.从...学到很多 learn more from.....
19.当....陷入困境 when sb is/are in trouble
20.对...有好处/害处 It’s good for sb./It’s harmful to sb/sth
21.参加各种活动 take part in all kinds of activities
22.在闲暇时间 in my free time/spare time
23.某人是乐于助人的 A is always ready to help B.
24.某人准备好做某事 sb is prepared to do
25.我认为... In my opinion,.............
26.提高能力，非限制性定语从句 主+谓+宾，which will help improve my listening and speaking skills.
27.做演讲 make a speech
28.对....有更好的理解 have a better understanding of sth
实现某人的梦想 achieve/realize one’s dream dream comes true
30.取得很大进步 make great progress
采取行动去做某事 take actions to do
31.解决问题 work out the problem
中考作文高分秘诀（三）---背
作文注意事项：一定要衡水体，衡水体，衡水体！！！
1.确定人称
2.确定时态
3.三段式
4.句式多样化（口诀：（小）被和（小）使祁连（山）比建，从不敢形动）
（详情见资料《中考作文高分秘诀（一）》
5.连词、过渡句.高级词汇的使用
6.每句话主干完整（主+谓+宾）
Unit 1 如何学习一门语言提出建议（听，说，读，写）
假设你是李华，John来自澳大利亚，是你的笔友，他对中文很感兴趣，写信向你询问如何学好中文。请你根据以下提示内容，给他写一封回信。
Suggestions 1.Read Chinese newspapers and magazines 2. Listen to Chinese songs
3. Speak Chinese as much as possible 4. Keep a Chinese diary
Dear John,
I'm glad to receive your letter.You mentioned that you are interested in learning Chinese.I'm writing to offer you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.
First,it is helpful to read some good Chinese newspapers and magazines.In this way your reading ability can be improved. Besides, listening to your favorite Chinese songs is actually an interesting and effective way to improve your listening.More importantly, try to speak Chinese as much as possible and don't be afraid of making mistakes.The more you speak, the better your spoken Chinese will be. Finally, I think keeping a diary in Chinese is surely a good way to improve your writing.
I hope the advice will help you learn Chinese well.
Unit 2 书面表达——介绍节日
假如你是Chen Jun,你的美国笔友Jim向你了解中国的传统节日———春节。现在请你用英文写一篇电子邮件，向他介绍春节。内容包含时间、庆祝活动、意义与感受等。
注意：1.邮件需涵盖以上所有要点，可适当发挥；2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息；3.词数80个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
（How are you ）I'm very glad to tell you something about our traditional festival-Spring Festival. （ It is one of the traditional Chinese festivals.）A few days before Spring Festival,we are busy getting ready for it. For example, we clean the house and sweep the floor. Besides, we have a traditional family dinner on the evening before Spring Festival. After the dinner,we watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.
As kids, we can get some lucky money from old people. How excited and happy we are during the Spring Festival! I wonder whether you like our Chinese Spring Festival. Please write to me soon.
（By the way, can you tell me what your favorite festival is I am looking forward to your reply.）
Yours,
LiHua
Unit 9 书面表达——电子邮件邀请他人参加活动（时间，地点，内容）
假如你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请你写封电子邮件邀请你的英国朋友David参加，因为你和David都是音乐爱好者，并请你说说中学生在生活中坚持爱好的好处。
写作要点：1.欢迎他表演节目；2.活动安排：3.时间：下周六下午3点开始；
地点：学校的礼堂；5.请穿正式的（formal）服装参加音乐节。6.说一说中学生在生活中坚持爱好的好处。
Dear David,
How is everything going I am writing to tell you that a music festival will be held in our school.We can take part in the music festival in the school hall next Saturday. It will begin at three o'clock. In the music festival, we invite some famous singers and pianists to perform, who will also give some lessons to the students.Please wear a formal dress for a music festival. If possible,you are welcome to perform in the festival, which will be a great experience. Hopefully,you can take part in it and don't miss the chance.
As middle school students, we should stick to our hobbies. It makes our life relaxed.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Unit 10 应该做与不应该做 be supposed to do
假如你是David，你的朋方变些要到一付美国朋友家里做客，但他不知道应该注意些什么，因此写信向你助。请你根据以下提示给他回信。
提示：1.买一件小礼物，比如一本漂亮的相册（album）或一束花；2.准时到达主人家里，不要提前也不要迟到；3.用餐时要表现出喜欢主人的厨艺；4.不要在主人家里待得太久，和主人告别时要致谢。
Dear Li Hua,
I'm very glad to hear from you.When you go to visit an American friend, you should follow these things.
First, you're supposed to bring the host a small gift,for example, a nice album or some beautiful flowers. Second, please arrive on time. You're not supposed to be there too early or too late.Both are impolite.Third,while eating,you're supposed to show you like the food.Finally, don't stay too long there.Before saying goodbye to the family, don't forget to thank them for their invitation.
I hope you'll have a nice time at your friend's home.
Yours,
David
Unit 13 环保话题
习主席在十九大报告中提出要建设美丽中国、推进绿色发展，解决环境问题，足见习主席对环保的重视！作为新时代的中学生，如何响应习主席的号召，从“我”做起保护环境？请用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。要求：（1）词数：80-100。（2）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清楚。（3）要有复合句表达。
范文（一）
The environmental problems are very serious these days. In order to①make our country more beautiful, we students should do something to protect the environment.②
I think/In my opinion,③ we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room. And when we brush our teeth ④, we'd better turn off the taps. Also, we should advise our parents to take⑤ the bus to work instead of driving⑥ and use reusable bags when shopping.
Only when we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference.（倒装句）How important it is for us to protect the environment!
范文（二）
为了保护环境、节约能源，越来越多的人选择低碳生活。作为中学生，我们能为环保做些什么呢？请你根据以下要点提示用英语写一份倡议书，呼吁你们班同学爱护环境、保护环境。
要点提示：1.少使用塑料袋；2.循环使用旧课本；3.少乘电梯，节约用水、用电；4.多植树；
5.最好步行或骑自行车上学。要求：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数80—100；书写规范。
Our environment is becoming worse and worse.（比较级） As students,what can we do to protect the environment （提出疑问，引出话题）
To reduce white pollution（动词不定式做目的状语）, we should use fewer plastic bags when going shopping. Use cloth bags instead.（祈使句） We should try to reuse old textbooks, so people needn't cut down more trees to make paper. In order to save energy, we should use the lift less and take the stairs （步梯）instead. We should also save water and electricity. And we should plant more trees so that the air will be fresher.（结果状语从句） Besides, it will be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.（条件状语从句）
In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a difference to （高级词汇，对....有影响）the environment. I believe that by working together we can make the world a better place to live in.（使役动词make）
Unit 14 “回首初中生活”
初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的时光一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的记忆，请你根据图表提示以“My Life in Junior Middle School”为题简要描述这段时间的学习生活情况。要求：（1）不少于100词。（2）语法正确，语句通顺、流畅。注意时态：用现在完成时
My Life in Junior Middle School
I have studied in my junior middle school for three years（现在完成时）. My life in junior middle school was rich and I have learned a lot.
There are many beautiful trees and flowers in it.I have made a lot of friends in my school.They often helped me when I was in trouble.Our teachers were friendly and patient, especially my English teacher. She often helped me with my English.So my favorite subject was English. I liked sports. In my free time, I often played basketball or football with friends. It was good for health and it was a good way to relax from the busy study.（it做形式主语句型）
In a word, (总而言之)my life in junior middle school was colorful and unforgettable.
假如你是李华，你们学校八月要举行毕业典礼，你想邀请你的朋友Bob参加。请用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
要点；
1.时间：8月3号上午九点
2.地点：学校操场
3.内容：（1）校长对孩子们表达祝福并提出2.在范文中找出优美句型、句式或其一些希望（如高中生活将是一个新的起点……（2）音乐会表演……（3）互送礼物，表达祝福……
Dear Bob,
How's it going
I would like to invite you to attend the graduation ceremony at our school.The ceremony will be on the morning of August 3rd.And it will be held on the playground of our school.
First of all,the headmaster will congratulate all the students who are there that day.He will tell us that the end of junior high school is the beginning of new life.
Secondly, we will enjoy our school concert. Our students are talented in singing and dancing. What's more, some students will preform plays in English.
Thirdly, we will exchange gifts to each other and express the feelings to each other.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
通知类作文
【范文一】
假如你是王芳，本周日由你组织国际交换生去少年宫参观。请用英语拟一份口头通知。内
容要点如下：1.集合时间和地点：上午九点，少年宫入口处； 2.观看舞蹈表演，学习剪纸，制作陶土作品； 3.自由活动一小时，可体验课程、拍照等，五点返校；
4.天气炎热，着轻便装。参考词汇：entrance n.入口处 paper-cutting 剪纸 clay piece 陶土作品
Hello, everyone! We are going to the Children's Palace this Sunday. Here are our plans that everyone needs to know. First,we will meet at the entrance of the palace at 9:00 a. m. Then,we are going to watch the dancing show,learn paper-cutting and make clay pieces. After that, you will be free for your own activities, such as experiencing different kinds of classes and taking photos. Remember that you're supposed to return to school at 5: 00 p. m. By the way,you'd better wear light clothes because of the hot weather. Hope you can enjoy yourselves.
Yours,
Wang Fang
【范文二】
假设你是李华，请给你们的美籍教师Bob写一封电子邮件，向他简要介绍你校即将举办的英语文化节（English Culture Festival)，邀请他参加本次活动，并请他在节目最后做一个关于如何学好英语的讲座。邮件还应包含以下内容：
1.活动时间：本周五下午14：30-17：30； 2.活动地点：报告厅（Lecture Hall）；
3.活动内容：学生演唱英文歌曲……
注意：1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear Bob,
How is it going An English Culture Festival will be held in our school. All of us students do hope that you could come and join us.
The activity will begin in the Lecture Hall at 14:30 this Friday and last about 3 hours. We've prepared many programs for it, for example, English songs. What's more, some students will perform plays in English.
As you know,many students in our school have difficulty in learning English well. So when the performance finishes, it would be very nice if you could give a talk and provide us with some practical advice.
Looking forward to your reply.