外研版必修1Module 4 A Social Survey -- My Neighbourhood Proof Reading & Writing名师课件(共16张PPT)
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高三英语复习课程
Proof Reading
&
Writing
Passage correction
Are you good at proofreading
Revision
Proof Reading
Xiamen is a beautiful city, which is locating in the southeast of Fujian Province.
It covers area of around 1699 km2
with a population of 3.67 million.
3. Famous sight include Gulang Island, as well as Nan Putuo Temple.
4. Tourists come to Gulang Island because we can enjoy a good view and learn about the history of pianos.
Proof Reading
located
∧an
sights
they
动词形
冠词连词须关注
名词数
代词格，细领悟
2 points each
Proof Reading
5.Besides places to visit, you certainly can’t miss local snacks such like sticky rice balls (麻糍) and fried oyster [' st ] (海蛎煎).
6.Xiamen also enjoys a reputation as a beautifully garden city.
7.Taking a walk around Gulang Island but visiting a local seafood market are among the activities that will get you a closer look at Xiamen.
Proof Reading
as
介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住
beautiful
还要注意形和副
and
冠词连词须关注
The useful expressions!
Xiamen is a beautiful city, which is located in the southeast of Fujian Province. It covers an area of around 1699 km2 with a population of 3.67 million.
Famous sights include Gulang Island, as well as Nan Putuo Temple. Tourists come to Gulang Island because they can enjoy a good view and learn about the history of pianos.
Besides places to visit, you certainly can’t miss local snacks such as sticky rice balls (麻糍) and fried oyster (海蛎煎).
Xiamen also enjoys a reputation as a beautiful garden city. Taking a walk around Gulang Island and visiting a local seafood market are among the activities that will get you a closer look at Xiamen.
underline and appreciate
Proofreading to a better writing
Xiamen is a beautiful city, which is located in the southeast of Fujian Province. It covers an area of around 1699 km2 with a population of 3.67 million.
Famous sights include Gulang Island, as well as Nan Putuo Temple. Tourists come to Gulang Island because they can enjoy a good view and learn about the history of pianos.
Besides places to visit, you certainly can’t miss local snacks such as sticky rice balls (麻糍) and fried oyster (海蛎煎).
Xiamen also enjoys a reputation as a beautiful garden city. Taking a walk around Gulang Island and visiting a local seafood market are among the activities that will get you a closer look at Xiamen.
Sentence Making
中国有着悠久的历史和文化。
2. 它位于亚洲东部，有着960万平方公里的疆域和13亿人口。
3.中国有着许多美丽的山川，以及丰富的自然资源。
4.长江是世界上最长的河流之一，长城是世界七大奇观之一。
5. 中国人民勤劳勇敢，他们的勤奋和智慧在过去的二十年里给中国带了巨大的变化。
6 minutes
5 points each
Share your sentences
Proofread the sentences!
1. My motherland---China is a great country _____ ___________ and ___________
rich culture.
with
a long history
2.It ___ in the east of Asia, ______________ 9,600,000 square kilometers and __________________ 1.3 billion
lies
with an area of
(with) a population of
3.________ many beautiful ___________________,
as well as _________________ in China. 4.The Yangtze
River, __ we all know, is among ________________in the
world, and the Great Wall is _____________________ on the
earth.
mountains and rivers
rich natural resources
as
the longest rivers
one of the seven wonders
There are
5.The Chinese people are ___________and _____ people.
Their _______and ________have brought ___________in China in
the past 20 years.
wisdom
great changes
diligence
hard-working
brave
Welcome to Guangyuan!
Introduce our city to the strangers, 50 words or so.
How to introduce a place
Brief introduction
Main body
Location and area
Population
Famous things and people
Conclusion
Your comments/feelings about
the city…
Show Time!
Share your writings!
10 points each
Personally, I think the passage by GROUP _______ is well written, because _________
needs improvement, because_________
it covers much information about Guangyuan. it is written in correct sentences and there are few mistakes in the passage. I get little information about Guangyuan from it.
there are still some mistakes in the passage.
Evaluation(评价）
3 points each
Benefit from proofreading
correct mistakes
write correctly
promote writing quality
higher marks
more
confidence
Practice makes perfect.
step
words and phrases
单词 词组搭配
sentences
句子
passages
短文
by
step
Homework
Welcome to Guangyuan!
Paragraph 1 -- General description
Paragraph 2 -- Tourist attractions
Paragraph 3 -- Local food
Paragraph 4 -- Other features
100 words or so
高三英语复习课程
Proof Reading
&
Writing
Passage correction
Are you good at proofreading
Revision
Proof Reading
Xiamen is a beautiful city, which is locating in the southeast of Fujian Province.
It covers area of around 1699 km2
with a population of 3.67 million.
3. Famous sight include Gulang Island, as well as Nan Putuo Temple.
4. Tourists come to Gulang Island because we can enjoy a good view and learn about the history of pianos.
Proof Reading
located
∧an
sights
they
动词形
冠词连词须关注
名词数
代词格，细领悟
2 points each
Proof Reading
5.Besides places to visit, you certainly can’t miss local snacks such like sticky rice balls (麻糍) and fried oyster [' st ] (海蛎煎).
6.Xiamen also enjoys a reputation as a beautifully garden city.
7.Taking a walk around Gulang Island but visiting a local seafood market are among the activities that will get you a closer look at Xiamen.
Proof Reading
as
介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住
beautiful
还要注意形和副
and
冠词连词须关注
The useful expressions!
Xiamen is a beautiful city, which is located in the southeast of Fujian Province. It covers an area of around 1699 km2 with a population of 3.67 million.
Famous sights include Gulang Island, as well as Nan Putuo Temple. Tourists come to Gulang Island because they can enjoy a good view and learn about the history of pianos.
Besides places to visit, you certainly can’t miss local snacks such as sticky rice balls (麻糍) and fried oyster (海蛎煎).
Xiamen also enjoys a reputation as a beautiful garden city. Taking a walk around Gulang Island and visiting a local seafood market are among the activities that will get you a closer look at Xiamen.
underline and appreciate
Proofreading to a better writing
Xiamen is a beautiful city, which is located in the southeast of Fujian Province. It covers an area of around 1699 km2 with a population of 3.67 million.
Famous sights include Gulang Island, as well as Nan Putuo Temple. Tourists come to Gulang Island because they can enjoy a good view and learn about the history of pianos.
Besides places to visit, you certainly can’t miss local snacks such as sticky rice balls (麻糍) and fried oyster (海蛎煎).
Xiamen also enjoys a reputation as a beautiful garden city. Taking a walk around Gulang Island and visiting a local seafood market are among the activities that will get you a closer look at Xiamen.
Sentence Making
中国有着悠久的历史和文化。
2. 它位于亚洲东部，有着960万平方公里的疆域和13亿人口。
3.中国有着许多美丽的山川，以及丰富的自然资源。
4.长江是世界上最长的河流之一，长城是世界七大奇观之一。
5. 中国人民勤劳勇敢，他们的勤奋和智慧在过去的二十年里给中国带了巨大的变化。
6 minutes
5 points each
Share your sentences
Proofread the sentences!
1. My motherland---China is a great country _____ ___________ and ___________
rich culture.
with
a long history
2.It ___ in the east of Asia, ______________ 9,600,000 square kilometers and __________________ 1.3 billion
lies
with an area of
(with) a population of
3.________ many beautiful ___________________,
as well as _________________ in China. 4.The Yangtze
River, __ we all know, is among ________________in the
world, and the Great Wall is _____________________ on the
earth.
mountains and rivers
rich natural resources
as
the longest rivers
one of the seven wonders
There are
5.The Chinese people are ___________and _____ people.
Their _______and ________have brought ___________in China in
the past 20 years.
wisdom
great changes
diligence
hard-working
brave
Welcome to Guangyuan!
Introduce our city to the strangers, 50 words or so.
How to introduce a place
Brief introduction
Main body
Location and area
Population
Famous things and people
Conclusion
Your comments/feelings about
the city…
Show Time!
Share your writings!
10 points each
Personally, I think the passage by GROUP _______ is well written, because _________
needs improvement, because_________
it covers much information about Guangyuan. it is written in correct sentences and there are few mistakes in the passage. I get little information about Guangyuan from it.
there are still some mistakes in the passage.
Evaluation(评价）
3 points each
Benefit from proofreading
correct mistakes
write correctly
promote writing quality
higher marks
more
confidence
Practice makes perfect.
step
words and phrases
单词 词组搭配
sentences
句子
passages
短文
by
step
Homework
Welcome to Guangyuan!
Paragraph 1 -- General description
Paragraph 2 -- Tourist attractions
Paragraph 3 -- Local food
Paragraph 4 -- Other features
100 words or so