名师作文课堂:如何写正反对比类议论文
议论文是通过剖析事物来论述事理,发表意见或提出主张的一种文体,要求作者通过摆事实,讲道理,辨是非,确定其观点的正确或错误,树立或否定某种观点或主张。正反对比类议论文是从正反两方面辩证地说明某个观点。
1.正反对比类议论文的结构通常为:①提出问题;②陈述不同的观点及其理由;③说明自己的观点。
2.要做到要点完整,条理清晰。各段之间层次清楚,以使文章显得有条理。从文章结构层次上讲,通常采用三段式。
3.正确定位时态,常用一般现在时。行文时要注意关联词的使用,并选择使用恰当的表达方式,如复合句、反问句、祈使句等,使文章不落俗套。
4.准确使用常用词汇与结构,使文章更地道。
1.开头时常用的表达方式:
①We have a discussion about ...
②We have had a survey on ...
2.分别论证时常用的表达方式:
①Opinions are divided on the question.
②Opinions are mainly divided into two groups.
③Others have different opinions.
④... percent of the students are for the idea, while ... percent of the students think otherwise.
⑤... percent of the students think it necessary to ..., but ... percent of the students don't think so.
⑥On the one hand ...On the other hand,...
3.在对某一观点作进一步论证时,可用下列句型:
①What's more,...
②Besides,...
4.在提出多个论据时,也可用First,... Second,...Third ...,来列举论据。
5.进行相似的比较用in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner等。
6.进行相反的比较时用on the other hand, while, instead, on the contrary, compared with ...
7.用于陈述个人观点/想法的常用句型:
①My own experience tells me that ...
②In my opinion, we should attach more importance to ...
③As far as I am concerned, I plan to ...
④In my view, both sides are partly right in that ...
⑤But for me, I would rather ...
⑥In conclusion, I support the statement that ...
[题目要求]
越来越多的孩子能使用网络。上网对孩子们来说既有优点,又有不利的地方。请根据下面表格写一篇议论文。并谈谈自己的看法。词数120左右。
益处 网络是一种很好的资源,孩子们可以通过网络来学习,交友,发送电子邮件,又可以通过网络了解外面的世界。
不利之处 网上有太多设计好的游戏。很多孩子经常上网、打游戏以至于不集中精力于学习。有些甚至不经家长允许而观看不健康图片和新闻。
你的看法 ……
一、对接单元词汇
1.可以使用:have access to
2.优点:advantage
3.设计:design
4.允许:permission
5.集中精力:concentrate on
6.经常:frequently
7.来源:source
8.不利之处:disadvantage
二、巧用单元句型、语法
1.越来越多的孩子能使用网络。
①More and more children have access to Internet.
②Internet is accessible to more and more children.
2.上网既有好处,也有不利之处。
①Surfing on line has both advantages and disadvantages.
②As for surfing on line, there are both advantages and disadvantages.
3.而且有些学生玩游戏那么频繁以至于不能集中精力学习,浪费了许多宝贵时间。
①And some students play games so frequently that they can't concentrate on their studies.
②What's more, some students play games too frequently to concentrate on their studies.
4.事情总是一分为二的,上网也一样。
①Every coin has two sides, so it is with surfing on line.
②Every coin has two sides. So does surfing on line.
③Every coin has two sides. It is the same with surfing on line.
三、尝试用单元所学知识连句成篇
Now more and more children have access to Internet. Surfing on line has both advantages and disadvantages.
Internet is a good information source. Children can not only get to know the world outside but also study on Internet. They can make friends on it and even send e mails to keep contact with their friends.
However, there are too many games designed for children. Some children play games so frequently that they can't concentrate on their studies. Some even watch unhealthy news and pictures without the permission of their parents.
We should say that every coin has two sides, so it is with surfing on line. On the whole, Internet will give you both good and bad things. The thing that matters much is how you make use of it.
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