2022~2023学年度第二学期高三期初测试
英语参考答案及评分建议
参考答案：
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21—25 BDBAC 26—30 DDCAD 31—35 BABDA 36—40 BCEFD
41—45 CBCDA 46—50 ABADB 51—55 DACDA
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61. has experienced 62. by 63. establishment 64. assisting 65. and
应用文
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
How are you Thank you for sending me the photos that bring back those wonderful
memories.
The time we spent together during the Spring Festival was just incredible. We woke up early
to see the sunrise over the sea. On the way back, we tasted the fine local food, which was
impressive indeed. And what was truly unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your
home. I really had a great time.
I’d like to invite you over this weekend. It will be a chance for you to meet my family.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
读后续写
One possible version:
But there was really no way out of the situation. In the end, I quickly rehearsed the speech
and got ready to go on stage for the presentation. I looked calm and collected but inside, I was a
trembling mass of jelly. Although they kept encouraging me, I still felt very worried that my poor
performance would cost us the opportunity to win an award. Not long after, I was called to do the
presentation. Having butterflies in my stomach, I walked onto the stage.
As I stood on the stage, my heart beat violently. My face turned pale, and my mind went
blank. I could not remember what I was supposed to say. I was at a loss what to do when I saw my
teammates smiling at me with trustful looks. It was then that I realized that I should try my best
for our team. Instantly, I reorganized my thoughts, and proceeded to speak into the microphone.
When I was finished, all my teammates stood up and applauded loudly.
录音原文：
Text 1
W: Look at the weather outside. This always happens when we plan a trip.
M: Let’s go anyway. The mountains are lovely in the snow. In fact, it’s better than seeing them in
the sun.
W: But the mountain rivers could flood if it turns to rain.
Text 2
M: Yes, we scored. That means our team is through to the final.
W: It’s sad for the other team, though. They played so hard. I bet they’re really tired.
M: Never mind about that. Football is all about winning.
Text 3
W: I’m sorry, but you’re not allowed to bring drinks into the library.
M: But I just bought this coffee. It was quite expensive.
W: Well, I suggest you drink it outside and then come back. We can’t risk having our valuable
books damaged by drinks.
Text 4
M: Parcel for Miss Simmons. Could you sign here, please Also, I’ll take a quick photo with my
phone.
W: Wow. I only ordered this yesterday. I thought I had to pay extra for one-day delivery.
M: I don’t know about that, Miss. All I do is deliver the parcels.
Text 5
W: Is this the right way to the theater I parked my car down the road. Am I walking in the wrong
direction
M: No, just take the next right and you’ll see it. Are you going to see The Rolling Stones
W: Yes, I’m really looking forward to the concert.
Text 6
M: Ah, you’re back. How was your business trip
W: It was great. I think we’ll get some new orders.
M: Excellent.
W: How did things go for you yesterday
M: The exam Oh, it was fine, although I was very tired.
W: You should get to bed earlier every night. 11:00 p.m. is too late. 10:00 p.m. or even 9:00 p.m.
would be better.
M: I know. I should do it, especially on exam days, but I always seem to end up going to bed at
11:00 p.m.
W: Maybe you should set an alarm clock for the time you have to go to bed.
M: That’s not a bad idea.
Text 7
W: Any luck yesterday, Clive
M: No. We looked at two apartments in the morning and three in the afternoon.
W: Didn’t you like any of them
M: We liked most of the apartments, but the prices were just out of our reach.
W: It’s a problem in this city, isn’t it How can people afford a place to live
M: In the past several years, prices have just gone crazy.
W: My sister has exactly the same problem. She wants to live nearer to work but can’t find a place
she can afford.
M: I really love my job, but I have to catch a train and two buses every morning to get there. I really
need to live nearer.
W: I’m lucky that I live near a railway that brings me straight here.
M: I love the place I live in now. I just wish it could be nearer to work.
Text 8
M: Good morning. Another busy day ahead.
W: Wow, look at you!
M: What do you mean
W: You know what I mean, Peter. I have never seen you wearing such a smart suit.
M: Well, now you have.
W: Do you have an interview lined up, or are you going to a wedding
M: Very funny.Actually, Angela, I thought it was time to smarten up my appearance at the office.
W: Why the sudden change
M: Well, I had a talk with Colin last week.
W: Colin — the big boss, you mean
M: Yes, we met by chance at a restaurant last weekend.
W: So, you had a chat with him
M: Yes, and he surprised me by saying he thought I would make a good manager.
W: Promotion That’s great.
M: It is, but he did suggest I should smarten up my appearance to make a better impression when I
apply.
W: Ah, I see. So, the new look.
M: Yes, I’ve taken his advice.
Text 9
W: How is it going
M: Not very well, I’m afraid. Some of these old words are hard to translate into Chinese.
W: Which book are you working on Is it the Jane Austen one
M: Yes, Pride and Prejudice.
W: Take your time. We don’t plan to publish it until next year. It only needs to be in the shops by
March.
M: I’ll get there in the end. It’s just hard work.
W: Can I help in anyway
M: Not really, but thanks for offering.
W: I suppose people lived much different lives when that was written.
M: They did, but the characters are surprisingly modern. I can understand them well. Plus, the
locations still exist today.
W: So, the language is the main problem
M: Yes. For instance, how do I explain mince pies and Stilton cheese in Chinese
W: Oh, I don’t think they should be a problem. Chinese people experience a lot of international
food these days, especially in the cities.
M: I suppose so, but accurate translations are hard to find online.
W: You know, I have a wonderful old dictionary which might solve a few of your problems.
M: Really
W: Yes, I use it all the time. It’s in my office. I’ll go and get it for you.
M: Thanks, that’s very good of you.
W: No problem. It’s my pleasure.
Text 10
Ladies and gentlemen, I’d like to talk to you tonight about friendship. Good friends are good
for you. Good friends bring happiness into your life by relieving stress, giving comfort, and
removing loneliness. Healthy friendships are also linked to a healthy heart, lower blood pressure,
less depression, and a longer life. So, as a medical professional, I always encourage people to
make friends, because I know it will do them good in more ways than one. A friend of mine was
lonely after his wife died. He loves books, so I suggested he join a book club at the local library. As
well as sharing what they are reading, the club members go out to dinner after each meeting. My
friend followed my advice and got to know several of his fellow readers and now they are good
friends. The club eased his grief and brought some new happiness into his life. He looks better and
you can bet he is healthier. So, if you find yourself alone and think you have no friends, go out and
find some. More people than you think are in just the same boat. Join a group or club where people
with interests like yours meet regularly: perhaps sign up for a class, learn a language, etc.
南通市 2023届高三第一次调研测试
写作评分说明
第一节： 应用文写作（满分 15分）
文章总共分三部分，包括（1）表示感谢; （2）回顾一起度过的时光；（3）邀请他周末
来家作客。如三个部分都涵盖，文章段落分明，书写清楚，字数达到要求，表达无太多错误，
得分则应在 10分以上。
一、评分原则
1. 本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量、确
定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于60或多于100的，酌情扣分。
4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上
下文的连贯性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档 (13-15 分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。完全达到了预期的写作目的。
1. 覆盖所有内容要点。
2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
3. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较
强的语言运用能力。
4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
第四档 (10-12 分) 完成了试题规定的任务。 达到了预期的写作目的。
1. 虽漏掉一、二个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
3. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
4. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
第三档 (7-9 分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
1. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
3. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
4. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
第二档 (4-6 分) 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
1. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
3. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
4. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
第一档 (1-3 分) 未完成试题规定的任务。 信息未能传达给读者。
1. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
3. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
4. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
不得分：（0 分）
未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容
无关或所写内容无法看清。
第二节 读后续写（满分 25分）
一、评分说明
1. 评分原则：
本题总分为 25分，按 5个档次给分。
给分公平、公正；宽严并济，不能过严或过松；得分有理，扣分有据。
2. 评分标准：立意积极、情节合理、语言水平及风格（语言风格与前文一致）、书写美观。
三个逻辑一致原则：续写部分与所给短文之间的逻辑；续写两段内容之间的逻辑；续写
部分与所给开头语之间的逻辑。
3. 评分程序:
阅读第 1遍：根据续写总体情节及重点内容描写，初步确定所属档次。
阅读第 2遍：根据写作语言（修辞、句式、词汇等），确定或调整档次。
阅读第 3遍：看词数（少于 130个，从总分中扣 2分）；
看书写（书写及卷面较差的建议降为三档或三档以下）。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
档次 描述
1. 与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。
2. 内容丰富。
第五档
3. 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义
（21—25）
表达。
4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。
1. 与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。
2. 内容比较丰富。
第四档
3. 所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义
（16—20）
表达。
4. 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写的短文结构紧凑。
1. 与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。
2. 写出了若干有关内容。
第三档
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不影响意义
（11—15）
表达。
4. 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
1. 与所给短文有一定的关系，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。
2. 写出了一些有关内容。
第二档
3. 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了
（6—10）
意义的表达。
4. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。
1. 与所提供短文和开头语的衔接较差。
2. 产出内容较少。
第一档
3. 语法结构单调，词汇项目很有限，有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严
（1—5）
重影响了意义的表达。
4. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯。
0 白卷、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。第二节（共 10小题；每小题 1.5分，满分 15分）
Home to the headwaters of the Yangtze, Yellow and Lancang rivers, the Sanjiangyuan area on
the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau(青藏高原) is known as “China’s water tower.” It is a ___56___(whole)
unique plateau wetland ecosystem and serves as ___57___ important ecological defense for the
country.
Decades ago, serious environmental degradation(恶化 ) in Sanjiangyuan, ___58___ was
caused by climate change and human activities, resulted in a large number of lakes drying out and
wildlife numbers falling sharply. In 2016, the pilot program for the Sanjiangyuan National Park
management system ___59___(launch). Through painstaking practice, development and
innovation, efforts have been made ___60___(turn) the park into a symbol of the progress of
China’s ecological civilization.
Over the past years, the ecological environment of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau
___61___(experience) comprehensive changes. Water conservation in the area has risen ___62___
11 percent every year, compared with 10 years ago.
Local residents enjoy the gifts given by nature, and the ___63___(establish) of the national
park has enabled them to transform from exploiting(开发) nature to becoming its protectors and
benefiting from it. Some work as tour guides, ___64___(assist) visitors from home and abroad.
Today, as people walk on the vast land of Sanjiangyuan, looking at the expansive mountains,
glaciers, lakes and pastures, ___65___ catching sight of wild animals and birds, they cannot help
be impressed by the vastness and beauty of nature.
第四部分 写作（共两节；满分 40 分）
第一节（满分 15分）
假定你是李华，春节期间你和朋友Mike 一起出游，你刚收到他发给你的照片。请你给
他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.收到照片表示感谢；
2.回顾一起度过的时光；
3.邀请他周末来家作客。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80左右；
2.请按如下各式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
Yours,
Li Hua
