人教版(2019) 选择性必修 第三册 unit2 Healthy Lifestyle关于健康生活的写作学案(Word版含解析)

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名称 人教版(2019) 选择性必修 第三册 unit2 Healthy Lifestyle关于健康生活的写作学案(Word版含解析)
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关于健康生活的写作
写作题目
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友John写信告诉你,近日他由于沉迷于网络游戏,健康受到了很大影响。请你给他写一封回信,为他提供一些建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear John,
                            
                            
                            
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
思路点拨
主题 网络游戏与健康 体裁 应用文
人称 以第一、二人称为主 时态 以一般现在时为主
布局 第一段:引出写信目的; 第二段:提出自己的建议; 第三段:表达美好祝愿。
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1.    adj.充满活力的;精力充沛的
2.    adj.身体的
3.    n.自制力
4.      下定决心
5.      控制
6.      好转
答案 1.dynamic 2.physical 3.discipline
4.make up one's mind 5.take control of
6.change for the better
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
(1)听说你沉迷于网络游戏,并且这已经严重影响了你的身体健康,我感到非常遗憾。
I'm sorry to hear that you are addicted to online games and that it has greatly affected your         .
(2)为了帮助你摆脱它们,我愿意给你一些建议。
To help you              them, I'm willing to give you some advice.
(3)首先,你应该控制你花在网络游戏上的时间。
First,you should              the time that you spend on online games.
(4)形成有规律的作息习惯也能帮助你变得更好。
To form a regular habit of getting up and going to bed can also help you                   .
(5)只要你下定决心并且自律,任何坏习惯都可以被戒除。
As long as you                   and have self-discipline, any bad habit can be kicked.
(6)我希望你能远离网络游戏,做一个积极乐观、充满活力的学生。
I hope that you can keep away from online games and                             .
答案 (1)physical health (2)get rid of (3)take control of (4)change for the better (5)make up your mind (6)be a positive and dynamic student
2.句式升级
(7)用so...that...结构改写句(1)
                            
(8)用过去分词短语作定语改写句(3)
                            
答案 (7)I'm sorry to hear that you are so addicted to online games that it has greatly affected your physical health.
(8)First, you should take control of the time spent on online games.
连句成篇
                            
                            
参考范文
Dear John,
I'm sorry to hear that you are so addicted to online games that it has greatly affected your physical health. To help you get rid of them, I'm willing to give you some advice.
First, you should take control of the time spent on online games. Besides, to form a regular habit of getting up and going to bed can also help you change for the better. As long as you make up your mind and have self-discipline, any bad habit can be kicked.
I hope that you can keep away from online games and be a positive and dynamic student.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作积累
关于健康生活的写作
一、常用词汇
1.take exercise锻炼
2.work out锻炼
3.develop a good habit养成好习惯
4.have a balanced diet均衡饮食
5.keep/stay physically and mentally healthy保持身心健康
6.early to bed and early to rise早睡早起
7.be good for 有利于
8.do harm to...损害……,伤害……
9.unhealthy living habits不健康的生活习惯
10.go to school without breakfast不吃早餐就去上学
二、常用句式
1.It is known to all that health is very important, without which we can hardly enjoy our life.
2.As we all know, good health lays the foundation for our future development.
3.When it comes to keeping healthy, playing sports enjoys widespread popularity among people.
4.Generally speaking, keeping a balanced diet and taking exercise regularly are recognized as a healthy lifestyle.
5.There is no doubt that a balanced diet is beneficial to our health.
6.Besides, we should take a positive attitude towards people around us so that we can keep mentally healthy.
7.Therefore, it's important for us to form healthy eating habits.
8.As far as I'm concerned, they should spend less time in front of a TV or a computer.
实战演练
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假定你是李华,你的外国笔友David来信,向你诉说体重问题带来的烦恼。请你给他写一封回信,提出自己的建议。要点如下:
1.注重身体锻炼;
2.注意健康饮食;
3.保障心理健康。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you are worried about your weight problem.                             
                            
                            
                            
Yours,
Li Hua
概要写作
写作题目
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
When Is the Mona Lisa Not the Mona Lisa
How many Mona Lisa paintings do you think there are in the world today Just one I don't think so. The truth is that there are probably many, many Mona Lisa paintings hanging on walls or in studios. Of course only one was painted by Leonardo da Vinci but the art of copying is very common in the art world.
In fact, it is true to say that artists have been copying from other artists for hundreds if not thousands of years. Traditionally, it was normal for artists to copy other artists' paintings. This was a way of making sure historical, religious and artistic traditions were available for future generations. It was considered normal for an artist in training to practise by copying the work of other great artists.
Historically, the purpose of art was for historical or religious reference. Most of the time no one cared who painted the paintings. This is why we find it difficult to identify the artists behind some of the greatest older paintings. Paintings were usually commissioned by the church or the state, not by individuals so the name of the artist was really unimportant.
However, from around the 16th century the church and the state became poorer and money found its way into the hands of rich individuals. These individuals, as a means of showing their place in society or a knowledge of art, drastically increased the demand for art. Suddenly more and more artists were needed and people competed to buy the paintings of certain individual artists. This created people whose job was to buy and sell paintings. It also created galleries and auction houses.
文本分析
Ⅰ.语篇解读
主题语境:画作临摹
语篇类型:说明文
文章大意:文章主要说明了画作临摹是普遍的,有很长的历史。在过去,艺术家临摹画作以继承传统。当时,艺术的目的是记录历史和宗教,所以艺术家是谁并不重要。从大约16世纪开始,富人出现了,对艺术品的需求增加了。绘画变成了一个行业,艺术家是谁开始变得重要起来。
Ⅱ.段落主题
  本文先提出画作临摹很普遍,然后介绍了过去进行画作临摹的目的,最后一段说明绘画变成了行业。全文共分四段,各段落主旨如下:
第一段:The art of copying is very common in the art world.
第二段:Traditionally, copying other artists' paintings was a way of making sure historical, religious and artistic traditions were available for future generations.
第三段:Historically, the purpose of art was for historical or religious reference. Most of the time no one cared who painted the paintings.
第四段:From around the 16th century, the church and the state became poorer and money found its way into the hands of rich individuals. Suddenly more and more artists were needed and people competed to buy the paintings of certain individual artists.
筛选、整合信息、转换表达
要点1 第一段主旨可概括为要点 1,第一句中的common可以同义转换为       。
要点2 第二段主旨可概括为要点 2,可使用时间状语in the past。第二段主要介绍画作临摹的目的,即艺术家临摹以继承传统,因此要点2可以整合为         。
要点3 第三段主旨可概括为要点 3,可使用时间状语at that time,说明在那个时候,艺术是用来记录历史和宗教的,所以谁是艺术家并不重要。因此要点3可以概括为               。
要点4 第四段主旨可以概括为要点4,from around the 16th century 可以同义转换为           ;the church and the state became poorer and money found its way into the hands of rich individuals可以提炼为                ;more and more artists were needed and people competed to buy the paintings of certain individual artists可以概括为            。
答案
要点1 widespread
要点2 In the past, artists copied to inherit the traditions.
要点3 At that time, art was intended to record history and religion, so who was the artist didn't matter.
要点4 from the 1500s;rich individuals appeared and the demand for art increased; who was the artist began to matter
连句成篇
                            
                            
                            
                            
                            
参考范文
Art copying is widespread and has a long history.(要点1) In the past, artists copied to inherit the traditions.(要点2) At that time, art was intended to record history and religion, so who was the artist didn't matter.(要点3) From the 1500s, rich individuals appeared and the demand for art increased, so who was the artist began to matter.(要点4)
写作积累
概要写作中常用的词与短语之间的转换
1.consider→take...into account考虑;2.join→take part in参加,参与;3.want→would like想要;4.can/could→be able to会,能够;5.because→due to/owing to/on account of因为;由于;6.alone→by oneself独自;7.actually→in fact事实上;8.also→as well也;9.then→at that time那时;10.happen→take place发生
答案全解全析
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you are worried about your weight problem. Here are some of my ideas about it, which I hope will be of some help.
It is important to make exercise a regular part of everyday activities, which will help you lose weight and offer some other benefits. A balanced diet is as important as exercising, because the right balance between fruit,vegetables, proteins and fats keeps you healthy and strong. Above all, good mental health is necessary, leading you to have an active life all along.
I hope everything will be fine.
Yours,
Li Hua
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