高考英语复习课件：专题三　短文改错(共72张PPT)

(共72张PPT)
1.命题形式
短文改错给出一篇约100个单词的短文,文中有10处错误,错误类型包括词法、语法、行文逻辑等。要求考生对每个句子进行判断,如有错则将其改正。
2010—2019年高考全国卷短文改错考情一览表
2.命题规律
该题型以记叙文为主,素材多来源于学生作文,篇章的主题多贴近生活,情境为广大考生所熟悉。学生平时在书面表达中常出现的错误也就是短文改错题要考查的重点。改错以句为单位,每句最多两处错误。全文通常为一处多词,一处缺词和八处错误。个别情况下答案不唯一。比如2004年全国1卷中的第九处错误,可以去掉but,也可以把but改为yet。2016年全国2卷的第八处错误,可以去掉can,也可以把can改为should。文中涉及的词法错误最多,包括名词的单复数、冠词、代词、形容词的比较等级、时态、语态和非谓语动词等;句法错误主要包括连接词和关系词的用法;逻辑错误主要涉及连词和过渡词的使用。
Passage 1
(2019·全国1,10分,难度★★)
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident.One afternoon where I was in primary school,I was walking by the school playground.Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me.I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground.To everyone’s surprising,the ball went into the net.All the football player on the playground cheered loudly,say that I had a talent for football.From now on,I started to play my football with classmates after school.I am a good player now.
football with classmates after school.I am a good player now.
【语篇导读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了小学时代的偶然事件让“我”喜欢上了踢足球。
第一处:interesting→interested　考查形容词。become interested in“对……感兴趣”。
第二处:where→when　考查定语从句。定语从句中不缺成分,先行词表示时间。故用when。
第三处:football前面加a　考查冠词。单数可数名词需要用限定词,“一个”足球,用a。
第四处:but→and　考查并列连词。刚好落在“我”面前并且差点击中了“我”。此处表示并列关系,用and。
第五处:hardly→hard　考查副词。hardly“几乎不”;hard“用力地”。“我”用力踢回去,用hard。
第六处:surprising→surprise　考查固定短语。to one’s surprise“让某人惊讶的是”。
第七处:player→players　考查名词。all“所有的”修饰名词复数,故用players。
第八处:say→saying　考查非谓语动词。句中已经有谓语动词cheered,应该用非谓语动词,say有宾语,用动词-ing 形式。
第九处:now→then　考查副词。此处表示从那时起,用from then on。
第十处:去掉football前的my　考查代词。play football为固定搭配,意为“踢足球”。
Passage 2
(2019·全国2,10分,难度★★)
Since I was a kid,I’ve considered different job I would like to do.First,I wanted to be a fireman,whose uniform looked so coolly.Then,when I was in the five grade,I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much.When I studied chemistry high school,I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor.They were two reasons for the decision.One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor.And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
第一处:job→jobs　考查名词单复数。job是可数名词,根据前面的different可知要用复数形式。
第二处:coolly→cool　考查形容词。look是连系动词,后面应用形容词做表语。
第三处:five→fifth　考查数词。根据语境以及grade可知,此处表示“第五”,应用序数词。
第四处:too→very/so　考查副词。此处表示“我非常喜欢我的英语老师”。too强调超出了必要的限度,所以应把too改为very或so。
第五处:chemistry后加in/at　考查介词。此处缺少表示“在……地方”的介词,由后面的high school可知,此处应加in或at。
第六处:or→and　考查连词。根据语境可知,reconsidered my goal和decided to be a doctor是并列关系,不是选择关系,所以应把or改为and。
第七处:They→There　考查固定句式。分析句子结构可知,本句是“There be...”结构,所以应把They改为There。注意首字母要大写。
第八处:amazing→amazed　考查形容词。amazed“惊奇的”,表示人的心理感受;amazing“令人惊奇的”,表示事物的特征。此处是修饰I,所以应用amazed。
第九处:删除more　考查比较级。better本身就是比较级,more多余。
第十处:is→was　考查时态。由全文时态可知,文章讲述的是过去发生的事情,所以应用一般过去时。
Passage 3
(2019·全国3,10分,难度★★)
I’ve had many dreams since I was a child.Now my dream is to opens a cafe.Though it may appear simple,it required a lot of ideas and efforts.What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one.I want my cafe have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”.In the cafe,customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them.If I succeed in manage one,I will open more.I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city.Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
【语篇导读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述“我”梦想在多个城市开办主题咖啡厅。
第一处:opens→open　考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知,此处不定式短语作表语。
第二处:required→requires　考查动词的时态。文章整体是以一般现在时为主,因此用一般现在时。
第三处:ordinarily→ordinary　考查形容词。此处用形容词修饰名词cafe。句意:我想要的不仅是一家普通的咖啡馆。
第四处:have前加to　考查非谓语动词。want sb./sth.to do为固定结构,句意:我想让我的咖啡厅有特殊的主题。
第五处:去掉as后面的like　考查介词。such as为固定搭配,所以应去掉后面的介词like。
第六处:yourselves→themselves　考查代词。句子主语是customers,所以应为enjoy themselves,表示顾客们可以在跟历史相关的氛围中玩得愉快。
第七处:what→that/which　考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知,先行词为名词environment,后面从句中缺少主语,故用关系代词that/which。
第八处:manage→managing　考查非谓语动词。succeed in doing sth.为固定搭配。
第九处:city→cities　考查名词。句意:我希望在不同的城市开设咖啡连锁店。故用复数形式。
第十处:an→a　考查冠词。unique第一个音素不是元音,故用a。
Passage 4
(2019·全国1,10分,难度★★★)
During my last winter holiday,I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.I find a big change there.The first time I went there,they were living in a small house with dogs,ducks and another animals.Last winter when I went here again,they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken.They also had a small pond which they raised fish.My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish.I felt happily that their life had improved.At the end of our trip,I told my father that I planned to return for every two years,but he agreed.
Passage 5
(2018·全国2,10分,难度★★)
When I was little,Friday’s night was our family game night.After supper,we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room.As the kid,I loved to watch cartoons,but no matter how many times I asked to watching them,my parents would not to let me.They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain.Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes.I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school.The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
Passage 6
(2018·全国3,10分,难度★★)
It was Monday morning,and the writing class had just begin.Everyone was silent,wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud.Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity;others were nervous and anxious.I had done myself homework,but I was shy.I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people.At that moment,I remembered that my father once said,“The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks,and mistake as well.”Immediate,I raised my hand.
Passage 7
(2017·全国1,10分,难度★★)
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday,I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car,I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders,so once I started the car,my mind goes blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The instructor kept repeating the word,“Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes late,the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.
Passage 8
(2017·全国2,10分,难度★★)
Mr.and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school,and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time,they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden,that is on the rooftop of their house.They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools.Beside,they often get some useful informations from the Internet.When summer came,they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!
Passage 9
(2017·全国3,10分,难度★★)
When I look at this picture of myself,I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically,and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took,I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time:car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
答案When I look at this picture of myself,I realize
Passage 10
(2016·全国1,10分,难度★★)
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big,but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead,he hopes that our business will grow steady.
the restaurant is popular in our area.
Passage 11
(2016·全国2,10分,难度★★)
The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home,it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case,we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad,we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many,yet we can still learn a lot.
Passage 12
(2016·全国3,10分,难度★★)
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first,I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However,my parents didn’t seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last,I will be on my own,but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
Passage 13
(2016·浙江,10分,难度★)
When I was a very young children,my father created a regular practice I remember well years late.Every time he arrived home at end of the day,we’d greet her at the door.He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they chat,my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge.It was both excited and frightening to be up there!My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
a drink while she prepared dinner and they would
Passage 14
(2016·四川,10分,难度★★★)
It is Mother’s Day today.Though it’s a western festival,it’s popular in China now.
Mom has a full-time job,so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house,and then went on shopping.When he came back,I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritest.At dinner,we said to her,“Happy Mother’s Day!”Mom was grateful and moving.
答案It is Mother’s Day today.Though it’s a western festival,it’s popular in China now.
shopping.
Passage 15
(2015·全国1,10分,难度★★★)
When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,we’ll live to regret it.
shown
Passage 16
(2015·全国2,10分,难度★★)
One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later,Tony saw parents.Mom said,“How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
much that he quickly walked into the shop.
Passage 17
(2015·浙江,10分,难度★★★)
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand side of the class,I could easy see the football field.In the mornings,it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance,I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom,I will never forget it.
enjoy the view of
Passage 18
(2015·四川,15分,难度★★)
Hi,Janice,
It’s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time,I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity!In fact,I don’t like to go anymore,so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do If you are me,would you talk to him
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
me and give me some advice.
Grace
Passage 19
(2015·陕西,15分,难度★)
My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world,so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party,my coach,with a biscuit in his mouth,asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
答案My soccer coach retired
last week.I wanted to do
Passage 20
(2014·全国1,10分,难度★★★)
Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果) in our back garden.Since then — for all these year — we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!
we have never had any disease or insect attack
Passage 21
(2014·全国2,10分,难度★★)
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn’t need to do so many homework.Therefore,we have more time with after-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on
Passage 22
(2014·四川,15分,难度★)
Hello,boys and girls!Today,I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off.If you hear the alarm,stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and classmate.Don’t panic or get out of line,and trying to remain quiet and calmly.Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire.If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire,your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt,tell your teacher immediately.
Passage 23
(2014·辽宁,10分,难度★★)
Dear Jeremy and Alice,
Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors,we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a word,your dog—Cleo.
We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking.It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.Beside,Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock.That is too much for us,considering how closely the houses are.
We appreciate our apologies and goodwill,but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.
Sincerely,
Jack and Rose
Passage 24
(2014·陕西,15分,难度★★)
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven.He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees.My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky—they were looked like rain!We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn’t learn much about animals,insects or trees,but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
答案My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven.He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees.My
Passage 25
(2014·浙江,10分,难度★★★)
I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
Before long,a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket,which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need,the world would be a better place to live in.
答案I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station.I
Passage 26
(2013·全国1,10分,难度★★)
I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.
he was strong and powerful.In
Passage 27
(2013·全国2,10分,难度★★)
The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800’s.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night.This custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting,it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器)industry.Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain,there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
答案The book I’m reading
talks about afternoon tea in
Passage 28
(2013·浙江,10分,难度★★★)
Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we move last week Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate,my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring,but I know I’ll never fall sleep.
Good night and remember,you,dear diary,is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
Yours,
Rosemary
答案Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles
away from our
Passage 29
(2012·全国,10分,难度★★★)
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the time I was about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my toy.I was happy when the toys worked,but when things did wrong,I got angry and broke it.For a while parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see which was happening.When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,“That’s it.No more toys to you.”My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.My attitude changed from then on.
Passage 30
(2011·全国,10分,难度★★)
My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
Passage 31
(2010·全国,10分,难度★)
My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US,which was very interested.One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help.As the old man looked over the things on the yard that were to be sold,he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees.On the box was a card say:“25 cents each.”“You will never sell these for that much.”he told Nick.Convinced,Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece.Without a moment’s delay,my neighbor picked up the box but announced “I’ll take them.”