外研版选修6 Module5 CloningWriting公开课课件(20张ppt)

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Book VI Module 5
Writing of Argumentation
　　议论文是高考书面表达常考体裁，文章以议论为主，通过摆事实、讲道理等方法，对客观事物进行评述或议论，以阐明作者的观点与主张，说服别人。议论文在内容上必须有论点(thesis)、论据(talking points)和论证(demenstration)三要素。
议论文写作基本要素
Structure of this kind of writing
Part 3 – Personal opinions and reasons.
Part 1 – Raise the topic
Part 2 – Give out different opinions of both
sides and their reasons.
学生作品1：
Compare with young teachers, I prefer elderly teachers. There are some reasons below.
For one thing, most of elderly teachers are patient in teaching. They not only spare no effort to teach the students, but also give classes carefully .They will do all they can to make the students understand the teaching content.What good teachers! For another thing, elderly teachers are full of teaching experience. This is also the most important, especially for us senior students.
This is only my opinion. I think young teachers are also good.
点评：
亮点：1、观点鲜明，词汇句型的运用比较灵活
2、过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯、条理清楚。
2、审题不全面，忽略了对青年教师这部分信息的处理。这一点是比较大的失误。
∧
1)
2)
3)
1) Compared
2) more
3) try to make the classes
lively and interesting
不足之处：
1、个别地方的表达需
要改进。
学生作品2:
Opinions are divided on this question.
Some students who like the elderly
teachers more than the young ones think that
the elderly ones are more patient in teaching,
more careful in explaining and also have a
lot of experience.
However, the others have a different
opinion. They think the teachers who are
young are full of energy. Besides, their
teaching is lively and they dare to bring in
the new ideas.
Well, in my opinion, I like both the elderly
teachers and the young ones because from
them we both can learn a lot.
点评：
亮点：
1、段落清楚，要点齐
全，句式表达比较灵
活，能适当运用复句。
2、过渡词运用也比较
熟练。
需要改进的地方：
1）
2)
3)
＼
4)
1) prefer the elderly
teachers to the
young ones
2) with explanations
3) the 去掉
4) The young
teachers
One possible version:
Opinions are divided on this question. Some students may like elderly teachers' teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations. However, I prefer to be taught by young teachers. Firstly, we students have much in common with them. So they are our friends as well as our teachers. Secondly, they are more .energetic and enthusiastic. Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting. Besides, they are more ready to accept or create new ideas, including teaching. Thirdly, most young teachers devote themselves to their work, making them teach creatively and effectively.
In a word, I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers.
Learning Goals:
Grasp the structure of an argumentation.
Summarize and grasp some necessary transitional words used in an argumentation.
Learn the criteria of a good composition.
Learn how to access a composition and improve it（or some sentences）.
词汇,句型 , 语法多样化
　 1.覆盖了所有的要点
2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑
要点全
连接词过度词
如何算是一篇好文章？
Transitional words
表递进(progress) 、强调(emphasis)关系的过渡词
表转折(adversative)、对比关系(contrast)的过渡词
表结果(result)的过渡词
表总结(conclusion)的过渡词
顺序(order)关系的过渡词
针对城市街道上出现的越来越多的宠物，21st Century Teens向你约稿，请你谈谈你校学生对“城市内是否可以饲养宠物”的看法。经过详细的问卷调查，你发现同学们对此态度泾渭分明：支持饲养宠物者认为宠物可以陪伴孤寡、空巢老人，可以……等；反对饲养动物者认为饲养宠物花费不菲，……
根据以上提示的部分问卷信息，请你适当增加信息内容，撰文介绍同学们的看法，并对此做出简要评论。
注意：1. 词数：100～120。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
　　　2. 内容丰富，行文连贯。
Recently we have carried out a detailed survey of whether people should keep pets in cities, ___________________________
【格式模板】
开 头：Recently we have carried out a survey of . . .
正文：The opinions among the students differ.
Some think. . . because. . .
The others think. . . because. . .
结 尾: I like. . . I don’t think it is . . .
【尝试运用】
　　1. 我们做了一项关于“城市内是否可以饲养宠物”的调查，学生们看法泾渭分明。
　　We carried out a survey. The survey was about whether people should keep pets in cities. We students hold entirely different ideas. (将三句话合并为一句)
　　We carried out a survey of whether people should keep pets in cities, which shows we students hold entirely different ideas.
2. 此外，与动物和睦相处可以使我们的生活充满乐趣。（翻译）
　 Besides, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting.
　　3. 更糟糕的是，宠物发出太多噪音，使四邻不安，甚至有时会袭击人。
　　What’s worse, pets may make too much noise and it disturbs the neighbors and they even attack people sometimes. （用分词形式合并句子)
　　What’s worse, pets may make too much noise disturbing the neighbors and even attack people sometimes.
针对城市街道上出现的越来越多的宠物，21st Century Teens向你约稿，请你谈谈你校学生对“城市内是否可以饲养宠物”的看法。经过详细的问卷调查，你发现同学们对此态度泾渭分明：支持饲养宠物者认为宠物可以陪伴孤寡、空巢老人，可以……等；反对饲养动物者认为饲养宠物花费不菲，……
根据以上提示的部分问卷信息，请你适当增加信息内容，撰文介绍同学们的看法，并对此做出简要评论。
注意：1. 词数：100～120。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
　　　2. 内容丰富，行文连贯。
Recently we have carried out a detailed survey of whether people should keep pets in cities, ___________________________
besides, in addition, moreover, furthermore ，what’s more，
what’s worse, worse still,
to make matters worse, indeed, certainly, surely, above all, as well等。
but, however, yet, instead (of), despite, in spite of, whereas, nevertheless, while, after all, otherwise,
on one hand, …on the other hand,…
on the contrary, Compared with, just like, unlike, in the same way, at the same time, meanwhile等。
so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that等。
in a word, in general, in short,
to sum up, finally, in conclusion, in summary 等。
for one thing, for another, shortly afterwards, after that, first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly,
above all, first of all, then, next, finally, in the end, at last, eventually等。