外研版选修7Module 2 Highlights of My Senior Year Writing公开课课件（35张ppt）
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(共35张PPT)
Welcome to my class!
Tips for English Essay Writing
高考作文写作指导
Learning goals:
1.Know about features of a good composition;
2.Master three necessary skills of writing a good
composition;
3.Practice writing a compostion using tips
learned in this class;
4.Discuss in groups to improve your cooperative
awareness.
Features of a Good English Essay
1.content:all the details
2.language:advanced vocabulary
various sentence patterns
proper linking words
3.structure:three paragraphs
(introduction、body、conclusion)
4.beautiful handwriting
neat paper appearance
高级的词汇
丰富的句式
恰当的连接词
Skills of a Good English Essay
1.Her dark eyes are very beautiful.
2.We all think he is a great man.
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
We all think highly of him .
A good idea occurred to me.
A good idea suddenly struck me.
Skill one: advanced vocabulay
Her dark eyes are very attractive.
4.Is the manager in
5.As a result ,the plan was a failure.
6.I happened to meet her a few days ago.
The plan turned out to be a failure.
Is the manager available
I happened to meet her the other day.
Skill one: advanced vocabulay
Skill two: various sentence patterns
感叹句
How happy I was when I received your letter!
What a kind boy he is!
2. 强调句
It was this young boy that helped me.
I do hope you can come if possible.
Skill two: various sentence patterns
3.倒装句
Only in this way, can you solve this problem.
Hardly had they got to the station
when they met the young man.
4.省略句
They read while (they are) walking or riding on a bus.
Come to visit me if (it is) necessary.
Skill two: various sentence patterns
5.with的复合结构 ：with +宾语+宾补
He came into the room with a lot of work to do.
with his nose bleeding.
with his hair tied at the back.
6. 定语从句
I have many friends, some of whom are businessmen.
They live in a room whose window opens to the south.
Taiwan belongs to China, as is known to all.
Tom was late for school again and again, which made his
teacher very angry.
Skill two: various sentence patterns
7.各种名词性从句
My suggestion is that we (should ) think it over before accepting it.
What made me happy was that I made much progress.
Skill two: various sentence patterns
8.各种状语从句
He tried his best to solve the problem, no matter how
difficult it was.
As/So long as we don't lose heart, we'll find a way to overcome the difficulty.
Young as he is, he can read and write in several foreign languages.
It will not be long before they understand each other.
Skill two: various sentence patterns
n./adj./adv./v +as/though +主语＋谓语
1.When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.
（使用V-ing形式, “一……就……”）.
2. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句)
On his arriving/ arrival, please give me an e-mail.
Weak as/though I am, I’ll make the effort.
Practice : various sentence patterns
n./adj./adv./v +as/though +主语＋谓语
3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)
4.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)
It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.
Practice : various sentence patterns
Singing and laughing, they went back to school.
5.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）
6.He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)
No sooner had he come back from Beijing
than he was sent abroad.
Study hard and you will make rapid progress.
Practice : various sentence patterns
1. 表示递进的
what’s more; besides; also; moreover; in addition；
furthermore; even；not only... ，but also...；等
2. 表示转折关系
but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand;
on the contrary；while; unfortunately等
3. 表示因果关系
since;now that; because(of ); so; thus; therefore;
as a result;owing to等
Skill three: proper linking words
4. 表示特定的顺序关系
first… next…and then…finally; meanwhile;
first… then…after that…finally; in the end等
5. 换一种方法表述
in other words; that is to say;namely等
6. 进行举例说明
for instance; for example; like; such as;
take …as an example 等
Skill three: proper linking words
7. 用于陈述事实
in fact; actually; as a matter of fact；
跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth等
8. 对一个话题进行总结
on the whole; in short; all in all; in general;
in a word；generally speaking;in brief;
in conclusion;to sum up等
9.用于陈述观点的
as far as I know; as far as I’m concerned;I prefer;
in my eyes/opinion/view;for my part;personally等
Skill three: proper linking words
近来，中学生普遍缺乏自我保护意识这一问题备受
关注，请你用英语写一篇短文：
1.概括中学生自我保护的重要性；
2.就如何保护自己谈谈你的看法（至少两点）。
Practice : proper linking words
for another thing, meanwhile, personally, above all,
for one thing， in a word， besides
Recently, it has been a great public concern that the
students lack self-protection awareness.
There is a lack of social experience among students
and therefore learning how to protect ourselves is of great
significance to us all.______________, security comes
first.Without security, we can achieve nothing and can’t
live up to parents’ expectations._______________, protect-
ing ourselves contributes to the healthy development of the
students, which is associated with the happiness of every
family.__________, it also helps to build a more harmoni-
ous society.
Discuss : proper linking words
For one thing
For another thing
Meanwhile
_________, in order to protect us students,_______
___, we should strengthen our security awareness.___
_______, when accidents occur, we should calm down and
turn to teachers or parents for help. The government also
plays a leading role in protecting students._________, only
by the combined efforts of every side involved can we
live and study in harmony.
Discuss : proper linking words
Personally
above
all
Besides
In a word
一、审题：体裁、人称、时态、内容(要点)
二、拟划要点
三、连词成句
①符合英语语法、英语表达习惯
②词汇短语丰富
四、连句成文
五、高级词汇、丰富句式、恰当连接词
六、检查修改、书写工整、卷面整洁
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
假设你是李华， 你的英国笔友Henry最近来
信，询问你高考后的暑期安排。请你根据以下要
点用英语回一封信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。
1.休息 2.读书 3.陪伴父母 4.参加社会活动
注意: 1.词数100左右；
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节；
3.参考词汇：
高考college entrance examination
社会活动 social activities
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
假设你是李华， 你的英国笔友Henry最近来
信，询问你高考后的暑期安排。请你根据以下要
点用英语回一封信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。
1.休息 2.读书 3.陪伴父母 4.参加社会活动
注意: 1.词数100左右；
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节；
3.参考词汇：
高考college entrance examination
社会活动 social activities
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
一、审题
1.本文属于________________;
2.时态以___________为主；
3.人称主要用______人称；
4.要点：暑期安排
_________________________________________
5.段落：三段式
Para1:寒暄语句，引出写信的目的
Para2:暑期安排
Para3:结束语句,祝愿
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
书信格式的应用文
一般将来时
第一
①休息 ②读书 ③陪伴父母 ④参加社会活动
暑期安排 arrangements/ plans for summer holiday
高考 the college entrance examination
休息 have a good rest /relaxation
get relaxed physically and mentally
读书 read books
陪伴父母accompany my parents
keep my parents company
参加社会活动take part in
participate in social activities
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
二、拟划要点：
三、连词成句(适当扩展)：
1.告诉你高考后的暑期安排
tell you something about arrangements/ plans for summer holiday
after the college entrance examination
2.一年的努力学习后，休息是必要的
After a year’s hard study,it is necessary/ a must to have a good rest
/relaxation/ to get relaxed physically and mentally
3.读书好习惯，增长知识，扩大视野，丰富人生
reading books is a good habit.
increase our knowledge/ broaden our horizens/ enrich our life
4.陪伴父母,与他们聊天，帮他们做家务，让他们高兴
accompany my parents/ keep my parents company
chat with them/ help them with housework/ make them happy
5.参加社会活动,学习实用技能，适应社会
take part in /participate in social activities
learn more practical skills / adapt to the society
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
四、连句成文：
Para1:寒暄语句，引出写信的目的
①I’m glad to hear from you/receive your letter.
I miss you very much. How are you
Thanks for your letter.
Does everything go well with you
②Now I’d to/ I am happy to tell you something
about arrangements/ plans for summer holiday
after the college entrance examination.
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
四、连句成文：
Para2:暑期安排
①After a year’s / a long period of hard study,it is necessary/ a must to have a good rest /relaxation/ to get relaxed physically and mentally.
②Reading books is a good habit./ is my favorite.
It can increase our knowledge, broaden our horizons and enrich our life.
③I will spend time accompanying my parents/ keeping my parents company.
I will chat with them,help them with housework and make them happy.
④If possible, I plan to take part in /participate in social activities to
learn more practical skills and adapt to the society .
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
四、连句成文：
Para3:结束语句,祝愿
①Such are my arrangements for the summer holiday.
So all above are my arrangements for the summer holiday.
②Looking forward to your early reply！
Please write to me soon.
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
Dear Henry,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now I’d to tell you something about my
arrangements for summer holiday after the college entrance examination.
__________, after a year’s hard study,it is necessary to have a good rest.
_________, I’m planning to read more books. _____________, it is a good habit,
_________ can increase our knowledge, broaden our horizons and enrich our
life. _________________, I’ll spend more time keeping my parents company,
__________( chat) with them, _________(help) them with housework and
____________(make) them happy. ____________, If possible, I’ll plan
to take part in more social activities , because I think _______________(越多）
practical skills I learn through them ,_________________（越容易）I can adapt
to the society .
So all above are my arrangements for the summer holiday.Looking forward
to your early reply！
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
Firstly
Besides
As we know
which
What’s more
chatting
helping
making
Lastly
the more
the more easily
六.检查修改、书写工整、卷面整洁
五、连句成文，使用高级词汇、丰富句式、恰当连接词
Summary about this class:
★Three skills of a good English essay;
★Six procedures for writing an English essay.
假设你是李华， 你的英国朋友Henry最近来
信，说他暑假想到北京大学留学，请根据以
下内容给他写一封回信，告知相关情况。
1.简单介绍北京大学；
2.生活便利，居民友善；
3.留学期间，愿意提供任何帮助。
注意: 1.词数100左右；
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节；
Homework:
Thanks for your
attention!
Welcome to my class!
Tips for English Essay Writing
高考作文写作指导
Learning goals:
1.Know about features of a good composition;
2.Master three necessary skills of writing a good
composition;
3.Practice writing a compostion using tips
learned in this class;
4.Discuss in groups to improve your cooperative
awareness.
Features of a Good English Essay
1.content:all the details
2.language:advanced vocabulary
various sentence patterns
proper linking words
3.structure:three paragraphs
(introduction、body、conclusion)
4.beautiful handwriting
neat paper appearance
高级的词汇
丰富的句式
恰当的连接词
Skills of a Good English Essay
1.Her dark eyes are very beautiful.
2.We all think he is a great man.
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
We all think highly of him .
A good idea occurred to me.
A good idea suddenly struck me.
Skill one: advanced vocabulay
Her dark eyes are very attractive.
4.Is the manager in
5.As a result ,the plan was a failure.
6.I happened to meet her a few days ago.
The plan turned out to be a failure.
Is the manager available
I happened to meet her the other day.
Skill one: advanced vocabulay
Skill two: various sentence patterns
感叹句
How happy I was when I received your letter!
What a kind boy he is!
2. 强调句
It was this young boy that helped me.
I do hope you can come if possible.
Skill two: various sentence patterns
3.倒装句
Only in this way, can you solve this problem.
Hardly had they got to the station
when they met the young man.
4.省略句
They read while (they are) walking or riding on a bus.
Come to visit me if (it is) necessary.
Skill two: various sentence patterns
5.with的复合结构 ：with +宾语+宾补
He came into the room with a lot of work to do.
with his nose bleeding.
with his hair tied at the back.
6. 定语从句
I have many friends, some of whom are businessmen.
They live in a room whose window opens to the south.
Taiwan belongs to China, as is known to all.
Tom was late for school again and again, which made his
teacher very angry.
Skill two: various sentence patterns
7.各种名词性从句
My suggestion is that we (should ) think it over before accepting it.
What made me happy was that I made much progress.
Skill two: various sentence patterns
8.各种状语从句
He tried his best to solve the problem, no matter how
difficult it was.
As/So long as we don't lose heart, we'll find a way to overcome the difficulty.
Young as he is, he can read and write in several foreign languages.
It will not be long before they understand each other.
Skill two: various sentence patterns
n./adj./adv./v +as/though +主语＋谓语
1.When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.
（使用V-ing形式, “一……就……”）.
2. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句)
On his arriving/ arrival, please give me an e-mail.
Weak as/though I am, I’ll make the effort.
Practice : various sentence patterns
n./adj./adv./v +as/though +主语＋谓语
3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)
4.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)
It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.
Practice : various sentence patterns
Singing and laughing, they went back to school.
5.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）
6.He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)
No sooner had he come back from Beijing
than he was sent abroad.
Study hard and you will make rapid progress.
Practice : various sentence patterns
1. 表示递进的
what’s more; besides; also; moreover; in addition；
furthermore; even；not only... ，but also...；等
2. 表示转折关系
but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand;
on the contrary；while; unfortunately等
3. 表示因果关系
since;now that; because(of ); so; thus; therefore;
as a result;owing to等
Skill three: proper linking words
4. 表示特定的顺序关系
first… next…and then…finally; meanwhile;
first… then…after that…finally; in the end等
5. 换一种方法表述
in other words; that is to say;namely等
6. 进行举例说明
for instance; for example; like; such as;
take …as an example 等
Skill three: proper linking words
7. 用于陈述事实
in fact; actually; as a matter of fact；
跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth等
8. 对一个话题进行总结
on the whole; in short; all in all; in general;
in a word；generally speaking;in brief;
in conclusion;to sum up等
9.用于陈述观点的
as far as I know; as far as I’m concerned;I prefer;
in my eyes/opinion/view;for my part;personally等
Skill three: proper linking words
近来，中学生普遍缺乏自我保护意识这一问题备受
关注，请你用英语写一篇短文：
1.概括中学生自我保护的重要性；
2.就如何保护自己谈谈你的看法（至少两点）。
Practice : proper linking words
for another thing, meanwhile, personally, above all,
for one thing， in a word， besides
Recently, it has been a great public concern that the
students lack self-protection awareness.
There is a lack of social experience among students
and therefore learning how to protect ourselves is of great
significance to us all.______________, security comes
first.Without security, we can achieve nothing and can’t
live up to parents’ expectations._______________, protect-
ing ourselves contributes to the healthy development of the
students, which is associated with the happiness of every
family.__________, it also helps to build a more harmoni-
ous society.
Discuss : proper linking words
For one thing
For another thing
Meanwhile
_________, in order to protect us students,_______
___, we should strengthen our security awareness.___
_______, when accidents occur, we should calm down and
turn to teachers or parents for help. The government also
plays a leading role in protecting students._________, only
by the combined efforts of every side involved can we
live and study in harmony.
Discuss : proper linking words
Personally
above
all
Besides
In a word
一、审题：体裁、人称、时态、内容(要点)
二、拟划要点
三、连词成句
①符合英语语法、英语表达习惯
②词汇短语丰富
四、连句成文
五、高级词汇、丰富句式、恰当连接词
六、检查修改、书写工整、卷面整洁
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
假设你是李华， 你的英国笔友Henry最近来
信，询问你高考后的暑期安排。请你根据以下要
点用英语回一封信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。
1.休息 2.读书 3.陪伴父母 4.参加社会活动
注意: 1.词数100左右；
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节；
3.参考词汇：
高考college entrance examination
社会活动 social activities
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
假设你是李华， 你的英国笔友Henry最近来
信，询问你高考后的暑期安排。请你根据以下要
点用英语回一封信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。
1.休息 2.读书 3.陪伴父母 4.参加社会活动
注意: 1.词数100左右；
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节；
3.参考词汇：
高考college entrance examination
社会活动 social activities
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
一、审题
1.本文属于________________;
2.时态以___________为主；
3.人称主要用______人称；
4.要点：暑期安排
_________________________________________
5.段落：三段式
Para1:寒暄语句，引出写信的目的
Para2:暑期安排
Para3:结束语句,祝愿
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
书信格式的应用文
一般将来时
第一
①休息 ②读书 ③陪伴父母 ④参加社会活动
暑期安排 arrangements/ plans for summer holiday
高考 the college entrance examination
休息 have a good rest /relaxation
get relaxed physically and mentally
读书 read books
陪伴父母accompany my parents
keep my parents company
参加社会活动take part in
participate in social activities
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
二、拟划要点：
三、连词成句(适当扩展)：
1.告诉你高考后的暑期安排
tell you something about arrangements/ plans for summer holiday
after the college entrance examination
2.一年的努力学习后，休息是必要的
After a year’s hard study,it is necessary/ a must to have a good rest
/relaxation/ to get relaxed physically and mentally
3.读书好习惯，增长知识，扩大视野，丰富人生
reading books is a good habit.
increase our knowledge/ broaden our horizens/ enrich our life
4.陪伴父母,与他们聊天，帮他们做家务，让他们高兴
accompany my parents/ keep my parents company
chat with them/ help them with housework/ make them happy
5.参加社会活动,学习实用技能，适应社会
take part in /participate in social activities
learn more practical skills / adapt to the society
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
四、连句成文：
Para1:寒暄语句，引出写信的目的
①I’m glad to hear from you/receive your letter.
I miss you very much. How are you
Thanks for your letter.
Does everything go well with you
②Now I’d to/ I am happy to tell you something
about arrangements/ plans for summer holiday
after the college entrance examination.
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
四、连句成文：
Para2:暑期安排
①After a year’s / a long period of hard study,it is necessary/ a must to have a good rest /relaxation/ to get relaxed physically and mentally.
②Reading books is a good habit./ is my favorite.
It can increase our knowledge, broaden our horizons and enrich our life.
③I will spend time accompanying my parents/ keeping my parents company.
I will chat with them,help them with housework and make them happy.
④If possible, I plan to take part in /participate in social activities to
learn more practical skills and adapt to the society .
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
四、连句成文：
Para3:结束语句,祝愿
①Such are my arrangements for the summer holiday.
So all above are my arrangements for the summer holiday.
②Looking forward to your early reply！
Please write to me soon.
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
Dear Henry,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now I’d to tell you something about my
arrangements for summer holiday after the college entrance examination.
__________, after a year’s hard study,it is necessary to have a good rest.
_________, I’m planning to read more books. _____________, it is a good habit,
_________ can increase our knowledge, broaden our horizons and enrich our
life. _________________, I’ll spend more time keeping my parents company,
__________( chat) with them, _________(help) them with housework and
____________(make) them happy. ____________, If possible, I’ll plan
to take part in more social activities , because I think _______________(越多）
practical skills I learn through them ,_________________（越容易）I can adapt
to the society .
So all above are my arrangements for the summer holiday.Looking forward
to your early reply！
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Procedures for Writing an English Essay
Firstly
Besides
As we know
which
What’s more
chatting
helping
making
Lastly
the more
the more easily
六.检查修改、书写工整、卷面整洁
五、连句成文，使用高级词汇、丰富句式、恰当连接词
Summary about this class:
★Three skills of a good English essay;
★Six procedures for writing an English essay.
假设你是李华， 你的英国朋友Henry最近来
信，说他暑假想到北京大学留学，请根据以
下内容给他写一封回信，告知相关情况。
1.简单介绍北京大学；
2.生活便利，居民友善；
3.留学期间，愿意提供任何帮助。
注意: 1.词数100左右；
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节；
Homework:
Thanks for your
attention!