(新课标)Unit3 Could you please clean your room Section B3a-Self check 写作课优质课课件(共46张)

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Unit 3 Could you please clean your room
Period 6 SectionB 3a-Self check
写作课优质课
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Learning aims
1.掌握下列词汇：fair, unfair
掌握句型：I think/ believe/ agree/ disagree that …
I think it is fair/ unfair for children to ... Could you take out the rubbish first Yes, sure. / Sorry, I can’t. I have to… Could I leave now Yes, you can.
2. 通过Sunday mail 邀请学生表达中学生是否应该做家务的导入，复习词汇和句型，为写作做好基础知识储备。
3.通过写作范例展示，由简入难，使学生逐步掌握写作技巧（审题、列提纲、组句组段组篇、美化文章）。能够写出一篇关于家务简单的议论短文,掌握议论文的写作方法。
4.通过本单元系统学习，写作应用，进一步帮助学生分担家务，承担责任的意识。
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Revision
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What chores do you often help your parents
Do chores
do the dishes
fold the clothes
sweep the floor
cook dinner
take out the rubbish
make the bed
wash the clothes
take the dog for a walk
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Revision
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常用句型：
I think/believe that students should help out with housework.
I agree/disagree that students should help out with housework.
It is fair/unfair for students to do chores by themselves.
I think students should wash their own clothes,because they can learn how to take care of their families from it.
常用短语：
做家务_______________
扔垃圾_______________
打扫房间_____________
打扫卧室_____________
折衣服_______________
扫地_________________
铺床_________________
遛狗_________________
洗衣服_______________
浇花_________________
买饮料和零食_____________________
do housework/chores
take out the rubbish
sweep the floor
clean the living room
fold the clothes
clean the room
make the bed
take the dog for a walk
wash the clothes
water the flower
buy some drinks and snacks
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Lead in
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Read and think about the structure of this article.
Opinion
Reason
Conclusion (结论)
Example
format 格式？
personal pronoun 人称？
tense 时态？
first person 第一人称
present tense
一般现在时
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Discussion
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How can we write an essay about expressing opinions
Should kids do chores
at home
Opinion
Reason
Conclusion
(结论)
Example
Agree
Disagree
I think/agree that…
I (don't) think/disagree that…
Because... First... Second... /What’s more...
Moreover/Besides/Last but not least...
For example, ...
In a word/All in all,
/Anyway, As a result...
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All in all,doing housework makes us happier and brings our family closer together.
Practice
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We live in one house with our parents ,we should know that everyone should do their part in keeping it comfortable and clean.
For example,our parents are always busy with their work, helping our parents with housework can save time for them to have a good rest.
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There is no need for kids to help with housework,because they already have too much homework to do,they need to have their own time to do what they love to do.
For example, my friend Mike has to do housework after school, so he doesn’t have enough time to do his homework, and he always feels tired in class.
All in all, houswork is a waste of kids’ time.
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Discussion
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3a
Do you think children should do some chores at home Why or why not Discuss this with a partner and take notes.
1. Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence.
2. Doing chores teaches them how to look after themselves.
3. Doing chores helps them to understand the idea of fairness.
4。Doing chores is good for their future.
2. Housework is a waste of children’s time.
Children already have enough stress
from school.
3.Their job now is to be students and they’ll have to do housework in the future.
4.It is the parents’ job to provide a clean and comfortable environment at home for their children.
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3b
Write a letter to the Sunday Mail and express your opinion.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I think/believe that ________________________.
I agree/disagree that _______________________.
I think it is fair/unfair for children to__________.
I think children should/should not _____________
because _________________________________.
For example, they should/should not ____________
because __________________________________.
Yours truly,
_______
the structure of the letter
称呼
署名
正文
结尾敬语
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The Sunday Mail magazine invited students to write about
whether they think young people should do chores at home.
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P. K
Pros 赞成
Cons 反对
01
develop our independence
02
learn a lot of things
03
make our bodies healthy\ strong
04
learn self-care(自理)
05
the idea of fairness
06
a sense of responsibility
(责任感) ……
01
a waste of time
02
…will have to do …when
03
spend more time on study
04
enough stress from …
05
it is parents’ job
06
……
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Writing
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Share your opinion
Your
opinion
Conclusion
Reason
I (don’t) think / believe that……
I agree / disagree that……
I think it is fair / unfair for children to……
Because…
Firstly/Secondly/Thirdly/Finaly…
On the one hand, … On the other hand, …
For example, they should /should not…
In a word/All in all, I think children should (not) ...
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Example
Dear Sir or Madam,
I think that doing housework is good for children. I disagree that doing chores at home is a waste of time. Doing chores helps to develop children's independence. And I think it's fair for children to help their parents do something at home, because their parents have to work hard all day, just the same as they have stress on study. Children these days need to get good grades and take good care of themselves as well.
提出观点
I think children should share some housework with their parents, because it's
a good way to learn how to look after themselves. For example, they should help their parents do some cooking, because when they are alone at home, they can get themselves something to eat.
All in all,doing housework makes us happier and brings our family closer.
Yours turly,
Li Hua
给出理由
得出结论
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Writing practice I
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请你就中学生是否应该做家务发表自己的观点，词数80左右，内容包括：
表明观点，我们是否应该做家务；
用三个或三个以上的证据来证明你的观点。
3.你在家一般会做哪些家务？
Step 1
细审题
Step 2
Step 3
Step 4
列提纲
连词成句；连句成段；连段成篇
做美化
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1. 细审题：审题要清
三审
体裁
人称
时态
议论文
第一人称
一般现在时
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2. 列提纲
这是一篇关于是否应该做家务的议论文，根据题目提示可考虑采用下面的提纲。
做家务
Topic sentence表明观点
Reasons/
facts论据
conclusion结论
原因
事实例子
So I agree that the earlier…
学会自理 First…(We can learn self-care)
保持健康 Second.…(make our bodies…)
学到东西 Also.…(learn a lot of things)
For example…
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sentence 1
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3. 连词成句
phrase 1
phrase 1
phrase 1
learn
self-care
make our
bodies
healthy
help us
learn a lot
of things
We can learn
self-care
by doing
chores.
We can make
our bodies
healthy and
strong.
Doing chores
can help us
learn a lot
of things.
sentence 2
sentence 3
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depend on too much
learn to be independent
do chores
develop their independence
It's fair for students to do …
live with their parents
understand the idea of fairness
have a lot of stress
It's unfair to do …
grades may drop
a waste of time
spend on
mind doing…
For
支持
Against
反对
词汇积累
短语箱
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连句成段，连段成篇
A. I think it’s necessary for us to do some housework at home.
B. By doing it we can learn self-care . We can make our bodies
healthy and strong. Doing housework can also help us learn a
lot of things. And it can make us understand our parents better. I always help my parents with housework. For example, I often wash the dishes and clothes at home.
C. In a word, I think the earlier the kids begin to learn to do chores , the better they will be in the future.
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1.The student have enough stress from school.
2.They don’t have time to study and do housework.
3. It’s a waste of time.
4.The students should spend time on schoolwork.
5. When they get older, have to do housework.
6. It’s the parents’ job to……
7. It’s not so difficult, I do not mind…
1.It’s not enough to get good grades.
2.They depend on their parents too much.
3.Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and teach them how to look after themselves.
4.Doing chores helps them to understand the idea of fairness.
5.They should do their part in keeping it clean and tidy.
6.The earlier, the better…
For
支持
Against
反对
句子积累
7. I often take out the rubbish, fold the clothes and do the dishes.
8. I often help my parents do some chores.
9. It’s necessary for kids to help with chores.
句子链
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连接词在英语作文中不可或缺的作用：
使得文章框架明晰，逻辑结构合理
I have many hobbies, such as playing basketball, …. First, my
hobbies can make me fit and healthy. Then, my hobbies bring me happy.
Next, … In a word, hobbies can …
起到承上启下，语篇连贯自然的作用。
指导前：I wrote the e-mails, sent two of them to you.
指导后：I wrote the e-mails, and then sent two of them to you.在两个先后连接的动作中加入and then来连接显得自然紧凑，使读者在阅读中不感到突兀。
I have some advice on how to learn English. You should listen to the teacher carefully in the class. You can read English in the morning. It’s a good idea to learn English from magazines and newspapers. These are my advice on learning English.
I have some advice on how to learn English. Firstly, you should listen to the
teacher carefully in the class. Secondly, you can read English in the morning.
Thirdly, ……Last but not least, it’s a good idea to learn English from
magazines and newspapers. These are my advice on learning English.
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使用连接词
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first, first of all, in the first place, to begin with; second,
what’s more, next, later, finally, in the end, …
①.表示并列或递进：and, both …and, not only …but also, neither …nor.
②.表示结果：so …that, too …to …, … …
③.表示转折：but, how ever, although …
④.表示因果：because, so, therefore, as a result …
⑤.表示条件：if, unless, …
⑥.表示对比：on the one hand …on the other hand …
⑦.表示举例：for example, such as …
⑨.表示目的：to, in order to, in order that….
⑩.表示结论：all in all, in a word… …
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连句成段，连段成篇
I think it’s necessary for us to do some housework at home.
In the first place, we can learn self-care by doing chores. Besides,
We can make our bodies healthy and strong. At the same time, doing
housework can also help us learn a lot of things. And it can make us
understand our parents better. I always help my parents with
housework. For example, I often wash the dishes and clothes at home.
It can make your parents feel Relaxing, why not go to do that
In a word, I think the earlier the kids begin to learn to do chores ,
the better they will be in the future.
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We think /believe it’s important for children to …. It’s not enough to….
First, children depend on…
Second, doing chores helps to …
What’s more, it also helps them to understand…
All in all/ In a word, I think the earlier…, the better….
I think kids shouldn’t help with housework
at home.
First, kids already have enough stress…
They don’t have time to…
Housework is a waste…
Second, they should spend time on…
Also, … What’s more,…
All in all/ In a word, I disagree kids do
chores at home.
In my opinion,
As for me,
增添连接词
For
支持
Against
反对
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4.做美化
避免重复使用同一词汇
NOTES
think
should
think
believe\suppose
had better…
be expected to do
As far as ,
Personally speaking
多用固定搭配和谚语
NOTES
a waste of time
spend time on…
It’s not enough …
There is no need to …
… …
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4.做美化
活用各种句式，连词
NOTES
it做形式主语，it is adj. for sb. to do sth.
感叹句：What a goo way to keep healthy ！
反义疑问句：It is …, isn’t it
There is no doubt that +句子
Nothing is more important than+n.\v-ing.
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美化文章
I think it’s necessary for us to do some housework at home.
In the first place, we can learn self-care by doing chores. Besides,
We can make our bodies healthy and strong. At the same time, doing
housework can also help us learn a lot of things. And it can make us
understand our parents better. I always help my parents with
housework. For example, I often wash the dishes and clothes at home.
It can make your parents feel Relaxing, why not go to do that
In a word, I think the earlier the kids begin to learn to do chores ,
the better they will be in the future.
As far as I know
What’s more
Last but not least
If we can
help them out with housework,
they will feel much better.
Therefore, I strongly believe that middle
school students should do some housework.
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Dear sir or madam,
Personally speaking, I think it’s necessary for us to do chores at home.
In the first place, we can learn self-care by doing chores. What’s more,
It can make our bodies healthy and strong, isn’t it At the same time, doing
housework can also help us learn a lot of things. Last but not least, if we can
help them out with housework, they will feel much better. I always help my
parents with housework. For example, I often wash the dishes and clothes at
home.What a good way to make my parents feel relaxed ！Therefore, I
strongly believe that middle school students should do some housework.
In a word, I think the earlier the kids begin to learn to do chores ,the better they will be in the future.
Your truly,
Linda
Topic sentence (论点)
Reasons / Facts (论据)
Conclusion (结论)
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范文借鉴
Dear Sir or Madam,
In my opinion , I think kids shouldn’t help with housework at home.
First, kids already have enough stress from school. They don’t have time to do housework. Housework is a waste of time. Second, they should spend time on schoolwork. Also / What’s more, it’s the parents’ job to provide a clean and comfortable environment at home for their children. For example, parents don’t mind doing the dishes for their children because it’s not difficult.
All in all/ In a word, I disagree kids do chores at home.
Topic sentence (论点)
Reasons / Facts (论据)
First, … …
Second, … …
What’s more, … …
For example. … …
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在英语课上，同学们就中学生是否应该做家务进行了激烈的讨论。有人认为我们应该做家务，有人认为我们没必要做家务。请写一篇短文Should Students Do the Housework 说明你支持哪个一个观点并阐述原因。
要求：100词左右。语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整。
一.审题： style(体裁) : __________
person (人称 ) : __________
tense(时态) : __________
议论文
第一人称
一般现在时
审
写作步骤：
列
扩
连
美
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二.列要点
不同的观点：
Some students think/agree with it . However, some students don’t think so/disagree with it.
Most of the students are for it. However, the others are strongly against it.
/don’t hold the same view.
Which side do you agree with
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如何引出话题呢？
Recently, we have a discussion/talk about whether students should do the housework.
用陈述句
三.扩写
Do you think children should do some chores at home
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As for me, I think/ strongly believe that students should help out with housework.
I agree/disagree that students should help out with housework.
In my opinion, it is fair/unfair for students to do chores by themselves.
/necessary
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如何结束话题呢？
All in all, it is meaningful and fair for students to do chores.
/In a word, /In short
The earlier kids learn to be independent, the better it is for their future.
I think it's fair and meaningful for students to do some housework.
再次重申自己观点，进行总结
/From what I have said
/To draw a conclusion,
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We have a talk about doing housework in an English class.
.Some students think we should do housework, , others believe we needn’t do housework.
, it’s necessary for us students to do some chores.
. , it’s our job to share housework, because we are a member of our family. , we can learn some life skills by doing housework. , the most important thing is that we can develop our independence.
, it’s necessary and helpful to do some housework.
Different people have different opinions.
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①篇章方面：布局是否完整？逻辑是否合理？要点是否齐全/丰富？
②句子方面：主谓是否一致？时态是否正确？句式是否多样？是否用到连词过度？
③词语方面：代词的主格、宾格等形式使用是否正确？名词单复数是否准确？动词搭配、动词的形式等是否正确？形容词、副词的使用是否达意，与修饰的对象是否相符？
④细节方面：单词拼写、标点符号、大小写等是否正确？
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Self Check
1 Make a list of chores using these verbs.
1. do _______________________________
2. clean _____________________________
3. make _______________________
4. fold ______________________________
5. sweep ____________________________
6. take out __________________________
do the dishes
clean the room
make the bed
fold the clothes
sweep the floor
take out the rubbish
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Self Check
2 Are these polite requests or permissions Write the numbers in the correct places in the chart.
1. Could you please do your homework
2. Could I watch TV
3. Could you take out the rubbish first
4. Could I use your computer
5. Could I leave now
6. Could you come back before nine
Requests Permissions
1
3
6
2
4
5
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Self Check
3 Use the questions in activity 2 to write a conversation.
A: Could I do the dishes
B: Sure, that should be OK.
A: Could you sweep the floor
B: OK, but I want to watch one show first.
A: … …
A: Could I watch TV after dinner I want to watch my favorite
program.
B: Well, have you finished your homework
A: Ah... no. I'll do my homework after watching the program.
B: I don't think that's a good idea. Could you do your homework first
A: OK. But I'll miss the first part of the program.
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Class test
Post-writing
一、根据句意和首字母提示完成单词。
1. He h_______ doing the dishes. He thinks it’s boring.
2. I n______ some help. Could you help me
3. To keep the floor clean, I usually s_____ the floor twice a week.
4. What a mess (杂乱)! Could you please f______ your clothes, David
5. She __________(借) a picture book from the library just now..
6. what’s wrong with your ________(手指), it’s bleeding.
ates
eed
weep
old
borrowed
finger
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Post-writing
2. Mr. White is a man who has a good sense of __________ (fair).
4. We should learn to be _____________ (independence). Do you think so
5. The man __________ (drop) from the top of the building and
hurt himself.
fairness
independent
3. Would you mind __________ (take) out the trash, Jerry
dropped
二、用括号内所给单词的适当形式填空
1. Now China is one of the __________________ (develop) countries in the world.
developing
taking
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Learning aims
1.认真完成3b的写作。
2.整理3单元所有重点句子及短语一遍。
3.预习4单元单词和重点句型。
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