2023届高三英语二轮复习读后续写写作练习-(含答案)

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读后续写练习写作:A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
读后续写(满分25分)
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The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 am. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
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Paragraph 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
Paragraph 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Knowing the situation, dad comforted the two immediately and asked, “Why not make your division of work clear ” Dad's words were like a hammer blow, reminding them what contributed to their former failure. It was their hurry and confusion that messed everything in the kitchen up. Having tidied up the stove, they assigned the tasks at a great lick—Jeff stared at the pot attentively; Jenna had another two slices of toast fried. Thankfully, at this time, they finished their cooking smoothly with dad’s patient guidance. When Jeff put shredded chicken onto the porridge and Jenna laid the toast on the place, they smiled into each other's eyes.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. With great bleary eyes, mom was surprised to find that her two children had prepared breakfast for her, not very delicious as it seemed. But her kids’ expectant faces seemingly added flavor to this breakfast as she had a taste of it. “Not bad.” She thought in mind, after a sip of the porridge. Finishing the breakfast, she expressed gratitude to her twins, moved and touched. They were also excited with their mom’s praise. They thought there was nothing to it when it came to making breakfast, but from the experience, they finally knew how laborious their mother was at ordinary times. Since then, the whole family became tightened and cherished each other all the more.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Glancing at the disordered kitchen, he grinned with joy. “Are you making breakfast for you mother, kids ” The twins nodded, “But all of our efforts were in vain.” Jenna sighed in frustration. “Don’t worry. You still have ample time.” The father said encouragingly. Under the instruction of the father, Jeff adjusted the fire carefully and put the porridge pot onto it. Next Jenna cut off another two slices of bread, immersing it into the egg mixture. While Jeff watching the stove carefully, Jenna fried bread to an appropriate color, which is so tempting. Finally, they put some chicken into the porridge and the breakfast was done.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Upon opening eyes, what greeted her instantly was a plate of hot and tasty breakfast. “Happy Mother’s Day!” exclaimed the kids excitedly. “Thank you. It’s really a big surprise!” said mom, as if choked to tears. With the company of the two kids, mom devoured the breakfast quickly. The fried French toast was soft and thick, while chicken porridge was warm and juicy. Hugging Jenna and Jeff tightly, mom smiled, “This is the best Mother’s Day”. With a heart filled with love, you are bound to give your beloved mother an unforgettable Mother’s Day surprise, no matter how arduous it might be.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Shocked by this terrible scene, father widened his eyes and asked in disbelief, “What on earth are you doing ” Jenna stuttered with timid voice, “We just want to give mom a surprise, but… we mess it up.” Dad checked Jeff’s hand first and let out a sigh of relief. “I’ll help.” Dad said, stroking Jenna’s head affection ally. The twins sprang to their feet and restarted all over again merrily. Under the dad’s guidance, they successfully prepared French toast and chicken porridge.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Rubbing her eyes unconsciously, their mother was a little bit confused to be awaken. Then the fragrance of the delicate breakfast floated into her nose. “Happy Mother’s Day. We love you forever!” The twins handed mom the plate with radiant smile. The moist red eye indicated mother’s happiness and pride. Seeing the splendid surprise and enjoying the delicious breakfast, four of the family eventually understood the meaning of family--everyone cherishes other’s devotion and is willing to show gratitude and pay back unconditionally.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
Their father seemed to understand exactly what had happened and what to do next. He grabbed the handle of the pan and slipped a bar of butter to melt before putting another slice of cup. Then he swiftly removed the burnt porridge away, and poured another cup of rice, starting to cook it all over again. In between, he kept silent and focused on what he was doing. The twins stood straight and awe, watching the hustle and bustle from their father. At 7 o’clock, everything was done and perfect. The twins took over the tray, feeling guilty about being over-confident about their competence in performing the house chores.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They presented the well-cooked breakfast in front of Mother. Their mother beamed from ear to ear, praising and appreciating children’s nice act of gesture. However, the twins lowered their heads, shoulders drooping down. It didn’t turn out as they had planned. Finally, Jenna broke out the silence, confessing “Mother, we have taken it for granted for so long that the breakfast that you make for us every morning is a super easy job. ” Jeff cut in “But it wasn’t.” Jenna continued “On this Mother’s day, we would like to thank you for your dedication and care for us.”’“And from tomorrow, we will learn to make our own breakfast in order to take back our responsibility from you. ” Mother’s eyes were welled up with tears and nodded.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Seeing the mess, their father froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground. But soon he realized their intention. In consequence, he joined the twins in preparing the Mother’s Day surprise. Though he had never been seen cooking, actually, he was expert in doing so. The twins assisted their father with the breakfast with great curiosity, and it was a pleasure to team up with their father. Eventually, they could smell how good the dishes were.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They said “Happy Mother’s Day”, with their eyes twinkling with excitement. Their father laughed heartily and told her the twins had prepared breakfast for her. Then the twins whispered to her that they loved her so much and they were eager to see her smile every day. Hearing the words, so glad was she that her face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room. At that moment, they all sensed how beautiful something living could be. What a sweet surprise!
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Seeing the black bread and the spilled porridge, Dad suddenly figured out their secret. A smile of understanding flashed across his face. Without a second thought, Dad offered to help. A ripple of excitement ran through them. They helped clean the kitchen while their father cooked a sandwich and some porridge skillfully. Soon, the delicious smell of breakfast filled the kitchen. Dad hinted to show that it was a secret and went back to the bedroom, asking the twins to go on to carry out their great plan.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They yelled “Happy Mother’s Day, darling Mummy! A big surprise for you!” When she saw the breakfast, her eyes widened up and twinkled with excitement. Dad was pretending to be surprised to see such delicious food. Mother hugged the twins and showed her thanks. She tasted and praised that it was the best breakfast she had ever had. The twins smiled to their father secretly. A feeling of love filled the whole room. What a beautiful surprise!
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their gloomy faces, he advised them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins immediately cheered up and did as told. Within half an hour, the kitchen was as clean as a new pin, and at the same time, Father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. Then he sneaked back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, adding a delicate card they had made, and then carried the tray upstairs to their parents‘ bedroom.
The twins carried the breakfast and woke their mother up. They hugged her and yelled “Happy Mother’s Day! Room service!” Mother hugged back the twins, sleepy-eyed. An inviting smell of breakfast hanging in the air, Mother’s eyes automatically rested on the breakfast tray. So sweet was the surprise that she excitedly shook Father, who was pretending to snore He feigned astonishment when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and exclaimed it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff instantly begged to have a bite. Jenna exchanged a glance with Father and they winked at each other secretly.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Secure in the knowledge that no blister was developing on Jeff's hand, father took command of the kitchen. Sweeping the stove clean, he grabbed a handful of rice into the pot and left it to simmer. Father then dipped two slices of fresh bread into the egg mixture, slipped them onto the pan and constantly flipped them until both sides were golden brown. As father was dancing around in the kitchen, Jenna and Jeff stood beside in awe, their eyes round in admiration. It was merely twenty minutes later that everything was set on a tray. Winking at the twins, father sank his voice to a whisper, "take it to your mother!"
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Rubbing her bleary eyes and sitting up, mother was greeted by a bowl of steaming porridge, two pieces of crunchy bread and some fruits, all neatly arranged on a tray. "Happy Mother's Day!" the twins presented the tray to their mother, a touch of shame etched on their smiling faces, "we never knew how hard it was for you to prepare meals for us every day. Thank you mum, for what you have done for us!" Hands tightly pressed on the chest, mum could hardly utter a complete sentence, her face streaked with tears of genuine happiness. It was truly the most delightful Mother's Day surprise.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Their father’s jaw dropped in amazement when he saw everything before him. Jenna explained to their father their plan for Mother’s Day and the accident that had just happened. Having handled Jeff’s injury, their father told him to rest for a while in the living room while Jenna continued to stay in the kitchen to help. They cleaned the messy stove, and after about an hour, the golden toast and the thick porridge were made. At that moment, broad smiles spread across their faces. (87 words)
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.“Mom, happy Mother’s Day!” they said with one voice. The mother looked at the sweet-smelling breakfast - the French toast and the chicken porridge, saying, “My God, you are so great!” Her voice shook with emotion, a wave of happiness flooding her. She suddenly felt her children had grown up! Seeing joy and pride on their mother’s face, Jenna and Jeff couldn’t hide their excitement. The Mother’s Day program also made them aware of the value of labor.(82 words) [169 words]
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. They pretended to be poised, trying to block the messy scene from his father’s sight. However, the odor of burning betrayed them. Questioned by his father, Jeff narrated the whole story, twiddling with his fingers nervously. “ Oh, man. You guys are so sweet. Now let’s get mom a surprise!” their father said in a soothing manner, his previous anger giving place to ecstasy. Without hesitation, their father guided them to prepare for the festive feast. Not long after that, an inviting cuisine was ready. Then their father retired into the bedroom.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. “Happy Mother’s Day!” the twins exclaimed together. Their mother got out of the bed, hardly able to believe the gift before her. She felt a warm upsurge in her heart, tears streaming down her cheeks. Stretching out her arms, she lapped them in her arms. “Thank you, sweethearts. It is the best meal I’ve ever had,” she said after savoring the sandwich.At that moment, proud and overjoyed, Jeff and Jenna stealthily winked at their father standing beside them.Actually, not only is the meal a surprise but a secret bonding the father with his twins.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Catching sight of their father, Jenna’s gloomy face turned into big smile while Jeff was trying hard to fight back tears. Confused about what had happened, the father darted to check Jeff’s hand and at the same time listened to Jenna’s explanation carefully. An expression of intense joy illuminating the father’s eyes after getting to know the lovely heart of his twins, he patiently guided them to make attempt once again. Within half an hour, sweet-smelling porridge and well-baked bread were lying on a delicate plate, on which a heart was drawn with some apple jam.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. “Happy Mother’s Day, dear Mom.” the twins whispered to their mother. With amber sunlight piercing through the window, the mother had a drowsy look at the twins and then glanced at the food in their hands, tears misting her eyes. She quickly took hold of the plate, put it on the table, and hugged the twins tightly in her arms, murmuring, “Thank you, my babies. You are my best gifts.” Just at that moment, the father tiptoed in, looking at the scene as if he had the whole world he wanted. Love may be clumsy, but beautiful indeed.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Spotting the messy situation, their father understood everything. Instead of blaming them for their carelessness, their father put on a bright smile and patted on their heads. “ Do you want to give your mother a surprise Let me help you fix it. ” Father said with a mischievous twinkle in his eyes. Hearing the words, the twins nodded their heads, their eyes shining with excitement. Under the father’s instruction, they first cleaned up the mess, and then they respectively took responsibility for French toast and chicken porridge. With the experience of failure, they accomplished their task perfectly this time. Looking at the inviting breakfast, they were deprived of all power of speech by excitement.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.The instant she noticed the breakfast was brought in bed, a ripple of excitement flashed through her face. Her eyes wandered between the breakfast and the twins as if she was asking what happened. “Happy Mother’s Day!” the twins exclaimed with one voice. The mother’s face beamed and her shining smile lit up the room. “Thank you my angles! Come here and give me a hug.”The twins rushed into their mother’s arms and just at that moment, their father stopped behind them. “Hey! Look here!” The mother and the twins turned their heads simultaneously. “Click-click.” Using the camera, the father recorded the memorable scene. What a Mother’s Day Surprise!
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.With tears in her eyes, Jenna ran to her father and explained everything. After confirming the burn on Jeff’s hand was well tended, their father cheered them up, helped them clean it up and prepared the breakfast all over again. It didn’t take him too long to fill a plate with toast and a bowl with porridge. “Let’s hope your mother is still fast asleep” prayed their father, “Bring it up and give her a big surprise.”
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.“What’s going …” their mother’s question was interrupted by the sweet scent of the breakfast. She exclaimed with disbelief, “Oh my God, thank you so much my children! This is the best Mother’s Day ever!” Then she slowly enjoyed every bit of the breakfast, with the twins excitedly telling her about their secret plan, their disappointing preparation and their father’s timely help. Their father went back to the bedroom when they just finished their story. “Darling, what do you think of the breakfast ” he asked. “Unique, because it tastes of love and care” she smiled along with the twins.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.With tears in her eyes, Jenna ran to her father and explained everything. After confirming the burn on Jeff’s hand was well tended, their father cheered them up, helped them clean it up and prepared the breakfast all over again. It didn’t take him too long to fill a plate with toast and a bowl with porridge. “Let’s hope your mother is still fast asleep” prayed their father, “Bring it up and give her a big surprise.”
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.“What’s going …” their mother’s question was interrupted by the sweet scent of the breakfast. She exclaimed with disbelief, “Oh my God, thank you so much my children! This is the best Mother’s Day ever!” Then she slowly enjoyed every bit of the breakfast, with the twins excitedly telling her about their secret plan, their disappointing preparation and their father’s timely help. Their father went back to the bedroom when they just finished their story. “Darling, what do you think of the breakfast ” he asked. “Unique, because it tastes of love and care” she smiled along with the twins.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Astonished, Father was rooted on the floor, staring at the scene with eyebrow frowning. When turning off the fire in tearing hurry, Jenna saw their father walking towards them with rage haunting. “What's up ” Dad questioned them in a cold voice. “We…We just want to make breakfast for Mom as Mother’s Day gift.” Jenna whispered. “I'm so sorry. Dad. We made a mess in the kitchen and Jeff had his hand burned." So ashamed was she that she shed guilty tears with head drooping. Only at this time did father realize that the twins were his precious treasure. Then, with Dad’s help, Jenna and Jeff prepared a hearty breakfast.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. As their mother opened her eyelids, a substantial breakfast caught her sight and a sweet smell wafted into her nose. “Happy Mother’s Day!” The twins congratulated. “We just want to make breakfast for you as you do that for us. Mom, we love you!” Mom kissed them and smiled dazzlingly “Oh dear, thank you my sweeties. What a big surprise!” Their father was standing beside the door, recording this touching scene. The whole room was bathed in a happy Mother's Day atmosphere.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. A disastrous kitchen greeting his eyes, Father was totally stunned, not uttering a single word. After calming himself down a moment later, he got to know what was going on. He smiled with rage choking back and said."Do you need a hand " The twins were filled with joy and tidied the kitchen up to restart cooking the dishes. This time, everything seemed to go smoothly without a hitch. The chicken and rice were dancing harmoniously in the boiling water pot and bread slices were showing off its most tremendous golden color. Despite the oil stains and holes on the twins aprons, nothing seemed imperfect, and all was ready except the most important one.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Rubbing her drowsy eyes, Mother let out a yawn. For what was almost simultaneous she opened her eyes widely and goggled at the twins and dishes they served. "Happy Mother's Day. Mommy! Why not try out today's special " Though still in her pajamas, Mother took a bite of the toast and sipped the hot porridge. Lost in the delicious breakfast and pure love from her son and daughter, she sobbed, with delightful tears streaming down her face. "Mom. why are you crying " the pair asked in confusion."Is the breakfast good enough " Melting her tears into smiles, she gave the twins a bear hug."The breakfast tastes so good! It's the most wonderful gift I've ever received!" The dawning sunshine lit up the whole room, with air being sweet.
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
Their father seemed to understand exactly what had happened and what to do next. He grabbed the handle of the pan and slipped a bar of butter to melt before putting another slice of cup. Then he swiftly removed the burnt porridge away, and poured another cup of rice, starting to cook it all over again. In between, he kept silent and focused on what he was doing. The twins stood straight and awe, watching the hustle and bustle from their father. At 7 o’clock, everything was done and perfect. The twins took over the tray, feeling guilty about being over-confident about their competence in performing the house chores.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They presented the well-cooked breakfast in front of Mother. Their mother beamed from ear to ear, praising and appreciating children’s nice act of gesture. However, the twins lowered their heads, shoulders drooping down. It didn’t turn out as they had planned. Finally, Jenna broke out the silence, confessing “Mother, we have taken it for granted for so long that the breakfast that you make for us every morning is a super easy job. ” Jeff cut in “But it wasn’t.” Jenna continued “On this Mother’s day, we would like to thank you for your dedication and care for us.” “And from tomorrow, we will learn to make our own breakfast in order to take back our responsibility from you. ” Mother’s eyes were welled up with tears and nodded.