Unit 4 Finding your way 单元主题范文精讲课件

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7B U4 写作讲解
句型积累，直击高分4
牛津译林七年级下册
Suzy’s Birthday Party
Suzy will be:13 years old
Date:July 10
Time:6:00p.m.
Place:Suzy’s home(在你的公寓对面乘坐6路公交车，到Spring Road下车。然 后你会看到一家银行，而我家就在银行的隔壁。路程约花费半个小时。)
Activities:品尝美食；
Peter将把他会唱歌、会讲话的鹦鹉带来；
还有…（内容自拟)
7月10日，Suzy将迎来她的13岁生日。她想邀请外教Miss Smith参加她的生日晚会。请根据提示内容帮Suzy写一封100词左右的邀请信。
注意：
1.邀请信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
2.邀请信须包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
3.邀请信中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
提示：鹦鹉parrot
Dear Miss Smith,
I will have my 13th birthday party in my house at 6:00 p.m.on July 10.I would like to invite you to the party.
This is how you can get to my house.
I am looking forward to seeing you at the party.
Yours，
Suzy
7B U2 写作讲解
句型积累，直击高分3
审题 体裁 说明文 话题 介绍邻居
时态 一般现在时 人称 第三人称
段落 布局 开篇交代写作目的——发出邀请，表明写信目的（第一段） 指明道路（第二段） 写明聚会上进行的活动（第三段） 表达期盼的心情（第四段） 基础范文
Dear Miss Smith,
I will have my 13th birthday party in my house at 6:00 p.m.on July 10.I would like to invite you to the party.
This is how you can get to my house.After you get out of your flat,take a No.6 Bus opposite your flat.Get off the bus on Spring Road.Then you will see a bank.My house is next to the bank.It will take you about half an hour.
At the party we can enjoy plenty of food and drinks.Peter will take his parrot.It can sing and speak.That's amazing!We will also play some games.
I am looking forward to seeing you at the party.
Yours，
Suzy
修改范文
Dear Miss Smith,
I will have my 13th birthday party in my house at 6:00 p.m.on July 10.I would like to invite you to the party.
This is how you can get to my house.After you get out of your flat,take a No.6 Bus opposite your flat.Get off the bus on Spring Road.Then you will see a bank.My house is next to the bank.It will take you about half an hour.
高分亮点：
插入情感关怀句
Be careful when you cross the road.
修改范文
Dear Miss Smith,
I will have my 13th birthday party in my house at 6:00 p.m.on July 10.I would like to invite you to the party.
This is how you can get to my house.After you get out of your flat,take a No.6 Bus opposite your flat.Get off the bus on Spring Road.Then you will see a bank.My house is next to the bank.It will take you about half an hour.
高分亮点：
介绍交通情况
The transportation is very convenient.
修改范文
Dear Miss Smith,
I will have my 13th birthday party in my house at 6:00 p.m.on July 10.I would like to invite you to the party.
This is how you can get to my house.After you get out of your flat,take a No.6 Bus opposite your flat.Get off the bus on Spring Road.Then you will see a bank.My house is next to the bank.It will take you about half an hour.
高分亮点：
插入高分句型
It is easy for you to reach my house.
修改范文
At the party we can enjoy plenty of food and drinks.Peter will take his parrot.It can sing and speak.That's amazing!We will also play some games.
I am looking forward to seeing you at the party.
高分亮点：
插入比较级
Nothing is more interesting than to....
高分范文
Dear Miss Smith,
I will have my 13th birthday party in my house at 6:00 p.m.on July 10.I would like to invite you to the party.
This is how you can get to my house.After you get out of your flat,take a No.6 Bus opposite your flat.Be careful when you cross the road.Get off the bus on Spring Road.Then you will see a bank.The transportation is very convenient.My house is next to the bank.It will take you about half an hour.It is easy for you to reach my house.
At the party we can enjoy plenty of food and drinks.Nothing is more interesting than to have fun with our friends. Peter will take his parrot.It can sing and speak.That's amazing!We will also play some games.
I am looking forward to seeing you at the party.
Yours，
Suzy
Thanks！