牛津译林七年级下册7B U2 Neighbours 单元主题范文精讲课件

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7B U2 写作讲解
句型积累，直击高分2
B.写作（满分20分）
假如你是李明，是一名七年级学生，你所居住的“幸福社区”正在评选“最美邻居（The Nicest Neighbour）"，你准备推荐你的邻居王阿姨。请根据以下信息给社区中心负责人张先生写一封推荐信，向他介绍王阿姨的情况及你推荐的理由。
要求：1.表达清楚，语句通顺流畅，意思连贯；
2.须包括图表中的所有信息，并根据要求适当发挥；
3.词数不得少于80，开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数；
4.不得出现真实的姓名、班级及学校等信息。
Dear Mr Zhang,
I am writing to recommend my neighbour Aunt Wang as“The Nicest Neighbour”.
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I hope that you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
The Nicest Neighbour Who Aunt Wang
30 years old
A cook,works...
lives...
Why Kind:a volunteer...
Helpful:cook for...
To me,like a mother...
审题 体裁 说明文 话题 介绍邻居
时态 一般现在时 人称 第三人称
段落 布局 开篇交代写作目的——推荐王阿姨获奖（第一段） 介绍王阿姨职业、兴趣爱好（第二段） 介绍王阿姨品质并举例说明，表达自己感受（第三段） 点题，表达来信愿望（第四段） 基础范文
Dear Mr Zhang,
I am writing to recommend my neighbour Aunt Wang as "The Nicest Neighbour".
Aunt Wang is my neighbour.She's about 30 years old.She is a cook and works in a restaurant.She lives on the ninth floor in our flat.Every morning,she goes jogging in the park next to our neighbourhood.
Aunt Wang is kind and helpful.She is a volunteer in our community centre.Every weekend,she makes nice cakes and shares with us.When my mother is busy with work and goes back home late,she invites me to her home for dinner.She cooks me nice dishes and sometimes helps me with my homework.It's lucky of me to have a neighbour like Aunt Wang.She is like my mother.I like her very much.
I hope that you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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Dear Mr Zhang,
I am writing to recommend my neighbour Aunt Wang as "The Nicest Neighbour".
Aunt Wang is my neighbour.She's about 30 years old.She is a cook and works in a restaurant.She lives on the ninth floor in our flat.Every morning,she goes jogging in the park next to our neighbourhood.
高分亮点：
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What/How...!
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Aunt Wang is kind and helpful.She is a volunteer in our community centre.Every weekend,she makes nice cakes and shares with us.When my mother is busy with work and goes back home late,she invites me to her home for dinner.She cooks me nice dishes and sometimes helps me with my homework.It's lucky of me to have a neighbour like Aunt Wang.She is like my mother.I like her very much.
I hope that you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
高分亮点：
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As far as I know,...据我所知
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Aunt Wang is kind and helpful.She is a volunteer in our community centre.Every weekend,she makes nice cakes and shares with us.When my mother is busy with work and goes back home late,she invites me to her home for dinner.She cooks me nice dishes and sometimes helps me with my homework.It's lucky of me to have a neighbour like Aunt Wang.She is like my mother.I like her very much.
I hope that you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
高分句型：
插入感叹句
How kind she is!
修改范文
Aunt Wang is kind and helpful.She is a volunteer in our community centre.Every weekend,she makes nice cakes and shares with us.When my mother is busy with work and goes back home late,she invites me to her home for dinner.She cooks me nice dishes and sometimes helps me with my homework.It's lucky of me to have a neighbour like Aunt Wang.She is like my mother.I like her very much.
I hope that you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
高分句型：
插入万能句
As far as I concerned，...
在我看来，...
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Aunt Wang is kind and helpful.She is a volunteer in our community centre.Every weekend,she makes nice cakes and shares with us.When my mother is busy with work and goes back home late,she invites me to her home for dinner.She cooks me nice dishes and sometimes helps me with my homework.It's lucky of me to have a neighbour like Aunt Wang.She is like my mother.I like her very much.
I hope that you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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衔接句
What’s more，...
此外，...
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Aunt Wang is kind and helpful.She is a volunteer in our community centre.Every weekend,she makes nice cakes and shares with us.When my mother is busy with work and goes back home late,she invites me to her home for dinner.She cooks me nice dishes and sometimes helps me with my homework.It's lucky of me to have a neighbour like Aunt Wang.She is like my mother.I like her very much.
I hope that you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
高分句型：
插入万能句
There’s no doubt that...
毫无疑问...
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Aunt Wang is kind and helpful.She is a volunteer in our community centre.Every weekend,she makes nice cakes and shares with us.When my mother is busy with work and goes back home late,she invites me to her home for dinner.She cooks me nice dishes and sometimes helps me with my homework.It's lucky of me to have a neighbour like Aunt Wang.She is like my mother.I like her very much.
I hope that you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
高分亮点：
万能句
As far as I know,...据我所知
高分句型：
感叹句
How kind she is!
高分句型：
万能句
As far as I concerned，...
高分句型：
万能句
There is no doubt...
毫无疑问...
高分句型：
衔接句
What’s more，...
高分范文
Dear Mr Zhang,
I am writing to recommend my neighbour Aunt Wang as "The Nicest Neighbour".
Aunt Wang is my neighbour.She's about 30 years old.She is a cook and works in a restaurant.She lives on the ninth floor in our flat.Every morning,she goes jogging in the park next to our neighbourhood.What a healthy lifestyle she has!
Aunt Wang is kind and helpful.As far as I know,she is a volunteer in our community centre.Every weekend,she makes nice cakes and shares with us.How kind she is! As far as I concerned,a nice neighbour is always ready to give us a hand when we need him or her.When my mother is busy with work and goes back home late,she invites me to her home for dinner.What’s more,she cooks me nice dishes and sometimes helps me with my homework.It's lucky of me to have a neighbour like Aunt Wang.She is like my mother.I like her very much.I think if everyone learns from him,our neighborhood will be better.There is no doubt that Aunt Wang should earn the title.
I hope that you agree with me
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Thanks！