中考二轮专题复习 话题写作教学课件

课件24张PPT。By Chen Meixia
from Changxing Experimental Middle SchoolwritingDISCUSSION: What words or phrases can you think of when you see the word “ Internet”?buylearnmoviesfast usefulenjoyEnglishinformationgetclothesMake sentences with the words or phrases1.On the Internet，we can enjoy movies.2. The Internet is fast and useful. 3. We can get information that we need. 5. We can learn English on it.4. We can do shopping and buy a lot of things on the internet.Sentences we possibly write:(2012年湖州中考)
随着时代的发展，因特网已经成为我们生活中必不可少的一部分，请结合实际写一篇题为“on the internet”的短文。内容可包括学习、娱乐和生活等。
要求：1.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。2.词数80~100，短文题目和开头已给出，不计入词数。
参考词汇： learn，enjoy，do shopping
On the Internet
The internet is becoming more and more important in our daily life.________________
____________________________________ Jack’s writing:
The Internet is fast and useful. On the Internet，we can enjoy movies. We can get information that we need. We can do shopping and buy a lot of things. We can learn English on it.Cathy’s writing:
The Internet plays an important part in our life.
It is not only fast but also convenient. We can do a lot on the internet. First of all,we can enjoy movies on the internet. Secondly, We can find and download the information that we need. What’s more, we can do shopping and buy the stuff we like. We can even learn a lot on it.
In a word, we can’t live without the Internet.
Tip 1:Write the topic sentence and the conclusion.How to write a better paragraph?Compare two writings:
1.Underline the topic sentence of Cathy’s writing.2.Underline the conclusion of Cathy’s writing.The Internet plays an important part in our life.In a word, we can’t live without the Internet.Examples for topic sentences:
…plays an important party in our life.
It’s important/ necessary /…for us to…
It’s our duty to…Examples for conclusions:
In a word , we should/can/must…
Let’s …together.
Let’s try our best to…
Tip 2: Add link words or phrases.How to write a better paragraph??The Internet plays an important part in our life.
It is not only fast but also convenient. We can do a lot on the internet. First of all,we can enjoy movies on the internet. Secondly, We can find and download the information that we need. What’s more, we can do shopping and buy the stuff we like. We can even learn a lot on it.
In a word, we can’t live without the Internet.
Circle the link words and phrases in Cathy’s writing.Let’s tryWe like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking.
He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert ______.
_____________ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.
_____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. ____________, he smiled.
ThoughAlthoughinsteadsuch asFirstNextFinallyAt lastTip 3:Choose better words and sentence patternsHow to write a better paragraph?Rewrite the underline word or phrase to make it betterWe can get the information that we need.
we can do shopping and buy a lot of things.
find and downloadThe stuff we likeHe is throwing litter.
He is dropping litter out of the trash bin.
He is dropping litter outside the trash bin and the ground looks dirty.He is dropping litter.Tip 4:Give examplesHow to write a better paragraph?I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.
We should do what we can to make our school more beautiful. For example, we can clean the school yard, plant more trees and stop walking on grass.(2013 湖州中考)和谐，雨润心田；文明，风暖校园。
请结合下面所提供的漫画和提示词，
以“Doing Our Part”(从我做起)为题写一篇短文，内容必须 包括：1．简单描述图中人物行为，并简述你的看法； 2．发表你的校园文明倡议。 提示词：talk loudly；drop litter；save food；get along well with It’s your turn to write! The topic sentence:
As middle school students, it is our duty to make our school more beautiful.supporting details:
We shouldn’t talk loudly in public. Dropping litter is not allowed in or out of school. Never waste food while eating in the dining room. Also we are supposed to get on well with the classmates. Being polite to teachers is also very important.The conclusion:
In a word, if everyone can do our part, we can make our school more and more beautiful. Don’t miss the points!和谐，雨润心田；文明，风暖校园。
请结合下面所提供的漫画和提示词，
以“Doing Our Part”(从我做起)为题写一篇短文，内容必须 包括：1．简单描述图中人物行为，并简述你的看法； 2．发表你的校园文明倡议。 提示词：talk loudly；drop litter；save food；get along well with I think what he does is wrong.Magic for learning English:Practice makes perfect.
Hard work leads to success.紧张而又忙碌的初中生活即将结束，请以My unforgettable(难忘的) Middle School Life 为题写一篇短文。短文首句已给出。
参考词汇： learn, spend, be interested in, be busy with.
My Unforgettable Middle School Life
How time flies!______________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________Homework:(2011湖州中考)
Secrets of learning English:Practice makes perfect.
Hard work leads to success.Thanks for listening!