课件13张PPT。聚焦中考——英语（普版）第47讲
书面表达(2013，云南)
A Talk to Myself
提示：在初中三年的学习和生活中，你有许多快乐，也有许多遗憾。在即将毕业之际，你想对自己说点什么呢？请根据所给题目用英语写一篇短文。
要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60；
2．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
One__possible__version：
A__Talk__to__Myself
How time flies! I'm leaving school soon.I really have a lot to talk to myself.
Luckily，my teachers are very friendly.They not only give me knowledge but also tell me how to be a man.And my classmates are helpful.We share happiness and sadness in our school life.
However，I'm also upset sometimes.I don't take part in outdoor activities quite often because of too much homework.I know it's not good for me.I'll try my best to join in more.
I believe that my life in the future will be more and more beautiful.书面表达题主要考查学生在特定的语境中综合运用语言进行表达的能力；同时，还考查学生英文书写的规范性、美观性等。
一、常见的书面表达题型
1．根据文体归类：日记、书信、通知、便条、启事、贺卡、发言稿、调查报告、记叙文、说明文及议论文等。然而许多试题都将记叙、议论、说明等表达方式融为一体，形成复合型的写作。
2．根据所提供的材料：图画作文、图表作文、提纲作文及命题作文等。这样的测试形式既有一定的控制性，又有一定的开放性，为考生展示其写作能力提供了发挥的空间。
二、如何写出优美的文章
1．选准词语。
①语言是交流的工具。要使用通用的、合乎习惯的词语，切忌使用生僻的词汇。
②选词要达意，英语有许多同义但用法不同的词汇或短语，切忌混淆用法。③用词要简明扼要，宁可用常用词简单明了地表达信息。
2．写好句子。
①运用所学词汇、短语，结合一定的语法知识，按照句子的结构特点，直接用英语写出相应句子。
②运用固定句式表达信息，把比较复杂的句子分成两个或两个以上的句子，减少写错句的几率。
③把两个简单句用一个复合句或较复杂的简单句表达出来，这样可提高文章的可读性，但在没有把握的情况下慎用。
④遇见生词或不熟悉的表达时，可以在保持原意的基础上，用不同的表达方式写出来。3．设计段落。
一个完整的段落要有主题句、拓展句及结尾句。正确运用连接词使语言衔接自然、行文流畅。
4．书写规范、卷面整洁。
三、如何提升写作
1．熟悉五种基本句式及一些使用频率较高的句式。
2．收集优秀范文并大声朗读来扩展思路及培养语感。
3．坚持常规练习。即：词——词组——句子——段落——篇章。切记：简单句是主菜，要做到运用自如；复杂句是佐料，有之增色，缺之乏味，但不可舍本逐末，以免弄巧成拙。
4．仔细审题，要点齐全，人称及时态正确运用。【例1】 假设你和朋友将在今年暑假，组队参加以“拥抱大自然”为主题的户外拓展夏令营，其中包括小组自由活动。请你为你们小组设计一个活动方案。
提示词语：climb mountains；go fishing；pick fruits；have a campfire (篝火晚会)
要求：1.写明你们组计划要做的具体活动，并给出理由；
2．提示词语仅供参考，可增减内容；
3．词数80～100。开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名与地名。
We are going for a camp this summer.I'm glad to make a plan for our group.________________________________________________________________________
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________________________________________________________________________解析：第一步：认真仔细地阅读提示，思考所提供的信息，计划文章大致内容。第二步：根据信息要求遣词造句，连句成文。第三步：通读全文，纠正错误，书写整洁。
写作要点：1.具体的活动要丰富多彩。2.写出安排这些活动的理由。
注意：此文是计划打算，应用将来时态。切忌写成流水账。
参考范文：
We__are__going__for__a__camp__this__summer.I'm__glad__to__make__a__plan__for__our__group.
First of all，we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.After that，we'll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls，which will help us know each other better.What's more，there will be a campfire.We can enjoy ourselves by singing，dancing and telling stories.Won't it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends?We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busy work at school，and I believe we'll have a wonderful time together.
精彩再现：
①文章内容完整，叙述清楚，要点一目了然。
②使用了first of all，after that，what's more表顺序的副词来使文章条理更清晰，更流畅。
③经典句型：?we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.?Won't it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends？?I believe we'll have a wonderful time together.
【例2】 (2013，宁波)近来，“光盘行动(Clean Plate Campaign)”悄然流行，提倡“节约型社会(economized society)”已成共识。请你根据下列表格中的信息，用英语为某英语报社写一篇短文，谈谈作为一名中学生，在日常生活中应该如何勤俭节约、反对浪费，并作简要评论。注意：(1)短文须包括上述要点，应适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(2)词数：80词左右，短文的标题和开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
Let's Start with the Things Around Us!
Recently，the “Clean Plate Campaign” has been very popular with many people.Our government is doing its best to build an economized society.
As a middle school student，I think ________________________________________________________________________
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________________________________________________________________________解析：第一步：认真阅读题目要求，仔细观察表格中的内容。第二步：根据提示内容，把握好文章的中心，适度发挥。选用合适的副词使文章条理清晰。第三步：通读全文，检查要点是否遗漏，纠正错误，书写要整洁。
注意：不仅要写出生活中“勤俭节约，反对浪费”的实例，更重要的是“作简要评价”，这才是文章的点睛之笔。参考范文
Let's Start with the Things Around Us!
Recently，the__“Clean__Plate__Campaign”__has__been__very__popular__with__many__people.Our__government__is__doing__its__best__to__build__an__economized__society.
As__a__middle__school__student，I__think we should join in the campaign.We can start with the things around us.Firstly，make sure that the lights are turned off when we finish our work and leave the room.Secondly，we can save as much paper as possible.Thirdly，it is important for us to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used.What's more，we must not spend money buying unnecessary things.When we eat，we'd better not use one-off chopsticks and we mustn't waste food.
In a word，saving energy is very important.Let's work together from now on!
精彩再现：
①整篇文章内容完整，叙述清楚，要点一目了然。
②层次清晰。先表明自己观点，后用firstly，secondly，thirdly，what's more表顺序的副词把作者观点一一陈列，清楚明了，条理分明。后又用in a word作出总结。
③经典句型：?We can save as much paper as possible.?It's important for us to… ?saving energy is very important.
考点跟踪突破47 书面表达
(一)(2013，北京)
根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
上学期间，学校的某些场所一定给你留下了美好的记忆，如教室、阅览室、操场等。某英文报纸正以“My Favourite Place at School”为题征文，请你投稿。描述一个你最喜欢的地方，并说明原因。
提示词语：classroom；reading-room；playground；bright；quiet；large；help；improve
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(二)(2013，杭州)
请以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语短文，供英语课上交流。
Dream
I want to...
Reasons
be interested in it
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Ways to achieve
my dream
work hard at school
find out how successful people did it
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注意：1.短文必须包括三部分内容，需陈述理由(2条)和方式(3条)；
2．表中右栏信息仅供参考，也可自由发挥；
3．词数80左右。
My Dream
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(三)(2013，沈阳)
某英文网站的中学生栏目就报刊阅读这一话题展开调查。请你以“It Is ________ to Read Newspapers”为题写篇小短文，谈一谈你的看法(词数80～100)。步骤与要点如下：
1．确定主题，并在文中说明原因；
2．围绕主题，进行叙述；
3．讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历。
要求：1.补全标题(参考词汇：important；interesting；useless；boring等)；
2．字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范；
3．鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用原文中的句子；
5．文中不要出现考生的真实校名和姓名。
It Is ________ to Read Newspapers
Though Internet is popular，we still read newspapers.In my idea，it is ________________________________________________________________________
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(四)(2013，嘉兴、舟山)
你校组织的英语夏令营向学生提供了两种住宿方式。有的学生喜欢单住，有的喜欢合住，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文，向夏令营简报English Camp投稿，选择你喜欢的一种住宿方式，并阐述理由。
Living alone
Living with roommates
◆quiet
◆feel free
◆live comfortably
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◆cheap
◆feel happy
◆help each other
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注意：(1)依据你选择的住宿方式，将标题补充完整；
(2)理由必须包括表中你所选择的住宿方式的相应内容，可适当发挥；
(3)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
(4)词数：80～100。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Living ________
Some students prefer to live alone，while others may want to share their rooms with their roommates.The way I like is________________________________________________________________________
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(五)(2013，广东)
大千世界，无奇不有。相信同学们也遇到过这类谎言、骗局或谣言。假设你叫李明，是红星(Hongxing)中学九(1)班的学生，请你写一篇发言稿。内容包括：
1．自我介绍；
2．描述一次类似的经历，并说说你当时的感受；
3．以后再经历这样的事，作为学生，我们该怎么做？请提出两个建议或做法。
作文要求：
1．不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；
2．语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning，everyone！Let me introduce myself first.________________________________________________________________________
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That's all.Thank you.
(六)(2013，青岛)
同学们，三年的初中生活就要结束了，在我们的成长过程中，既有快乐，也有烦恼。请用英文写一篇短文，内容包括：
1．你在学校或家里曾经遇到的最大问题或烦恼；
2．你解决问题或烦恼的过程；
3．你的感想。
要求：
1．词数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。
My middle school life is coming to an end.During the three years，not only did I have happy time，but I had kinds of problems.My biggest problem was________________________________________________________________________
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(七)(2013，山西)
学生综合素质评价的方式多种多样，同伴互评是其中较为有效的方式之一，它可以让学生不断体验成长和学习过程中的进步，并正确认识自我，保持自信。
某班一个小组正在进行阶段性同伴互评活动，如果你是该组组长，请结合本组讨论情况，为本组某位同学写一份激励性评价报告，内容须包含以下要点：
● the skill/the advantage/the personal quality the student has
●one thing the student did
●some advice for the student
要求：
1．词数80词左右；
2．不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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(八)(2013，济南)
根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。
参考词汇：blind adj.盲的，瞎的 stick n．拐杖
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考点跟踪突破46 书面表达
(一)
One possible version：
My Favourite Place at School
My favourite place at school is the reading-room.It's very big and bright.There are many kinds of books，newspapers and magazines.
I like reading newspapers and books there because they not only provide me with much knowledge，but also help me learn a lot about what is happening around the world.Sometimes，I even feel I can have a talk with the people in the books.
I can also relax myself in the peaceful environment there.When I feel tired or unhappy，the reading-room is the best place to go to.Reading helps me forget all my troubles.
For me，the reading-room is the place I like best.
(二)
One possible version：
My Dream
I want to be a writer when I grow up.Writing has been part of my life.Through writing I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others.
I can achieve my dream by reading widely and by working hard at school to learn as much as possible.It's also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them.I'm determined to hold on to my dream till one day it comes true.
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略
(四)
Possible version 1：
Living Alone
Some_students_prefer_to_live_alone,_while_others_may_want_to_share_their_rooms_with_their_roommates.The_way_I_like_is_living alone. First，living alone is quiet.I can study and read books in a quiet environment.It can make me sleep well at night.Second.I feel free when I am alone.I need not worry to trouble my roommates even when I want to study late into the night.Also，I can enjoy a comfortable life and there is no need to share the bathroom with other students.Besides，it is easier to keep the room tidy if I live alone because less rubbish is left.
Given the reasons above, I choose to live alone.
Possible version 2：
Living with Roommates
Some_students_prefer_to_live_alone，while_others_may_want_to_share_their_rooms_with_their_roommates.The_way_I_like_is living with roommates.First，living with roommates is cheaper.I can share the cost of living with other students.It saves money for my parents.Second，living with roommates makes me happy.We can study and play games together.I will have more chances to communicate with others so that I can make friends easily.Besides，when I am in difficulty，my roommates will help me，so I will feel safer when living with others.There is no need to be afraid of living in a new environment any more.
Given the reasons above，I choose to live with roommates.
(五)
One possible version：
面对谎言
Good_morning，everyone！Let_me_introduce_myself_first.My name is Li Ming，a student from Class One，Grade Nine，Hongxing Middle School.Yesterday afternoon，the student on duty said he had to see the doctor.I offered to do the cleaning for him.Later I found him playing basketball on the playground.I was quite unhappy. He needn't tell the lie.I would do the duty for him if he asked.
As students，we should always tell the truth even if others might not agree with us.When others tell lies，we'd better make them understand that honesty is the best policy.
That's_all.Thank_you.
面对骗局
Good_morning，everyone！Let_me_introduce_myself_first.My name is Li Ming，a student from Class One，Grade Nine，Hongxing Middle School.Last year，I received a chain letter saying that only kind people could receive the letter.If I sent it to as many people as possible，I would get good luck.But if I didn't，I would die the next day.I was so scared that I sent it to some of my friends.
As students，we shouldn't forward such chain letters.If we don't know how to deal with them，we'd better ask our teachers or parents for help.
That's_all.Thank_you.
面对谣言
Good_morning，everyone！Let_me_introduce_myself_first.My name is Li Ming，a student from Class One，Grade Nine，Hongxing Middle School. I heard a rumor of the same kind this year.It is said that a Chinese medicine called Banlangen could kill the flu of H7N9 or some diseases like that.So it was sold out in our city very soon.I thought it was so silly and I didn't believe it at all.I would rather ask the doctor for advice than buy the medicine.
As students，we should keep calm when we face such rumors.Besides，we shouldn't believe or spread them.
That's_all.Thank_you.
(六)
Possible version 1：
My_middle_school_life_is_coming_to_an_end.During_the_three_years，not_only_did_I_have_happy_time，but_I_had_kinds_of_problems.My_biggest_problem_was too much homework.Homework seemed endless for me.It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better，even the best in my lessons.
How can I deal with the problem？On the one hand，I concentrated more on my study in class.On the other hand，I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent-minded.As a result，I spent less time on homework，and I wasn't frustrated any more.
As we all know，practice makes perfect.Complaining or waiting can't help.Instead we should be active to face our problems.
Possible version 2：
My_middle_school_life_is_coming_to_an_end.During_the_three_years，not_only_did_I_have_happy_time，but_I_had_kinds_of_problems.My_biggest_problem_was from my parents.They wanted me to spend all my time on my lessons.They didn't allow me to play computer games or have outdoor activities with my friends.
I couldn't stand the strict rules! So I wrote a letter and told my parents I knew it was important to do well in schoolwork.I would make good use of the time and try to do well in schoolwork first. After a long talk with my parents，they agreed that I could have spare time and do something I like.
Now I have realized communicating with our parents is a good way to solve our problems.
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One possible version：
Han Mei is an easygoing girl who gets along well with everyone.She is also talented in performing.What's more，she is warm-hearted.
Once she knew a girl in her neighbourhood had so serious an illness that a large amount of money was needed.She put forward a suggestion calling on all the kids to give away pocket money to the unlucky girl.Besides，she organized a charity show to raise more money.When the girl and her parents got the money，they were really moved.
Han Mei should also put more time and energy into study and try to be a student with both a kind heart and good grades.
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One possible version：
Last weekend Xiaoming went to the park with his mother and sister.It was sunny and there were some people and traffic on the road.They played very happily.When they wanted to take photos，Xiaoming saw an old blind man far from them.He was walking with a stick alone.Xiaoming thought it was very dangerous for the old man.So he ran quickly to the man and helped the man walk on by catching the stick.When the blind man's daughter found him，she thanked Xiaoming and praised him.At this moment，the photographer took the precious photo.
