人教版七年级下册Unit 5 Why do you like pandas单元书面表达提分攻略课件(共15张PPT)

(共15张PPT)
Unit 5　
Why do you like pandas
单元话题写作
——喜爱的动物
【写作任务】
请根据方框内的提示词语写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的动物大熊猫。
Beibei, five years old, China, cute, shy, Beijing Zoo
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁：说明文 时态：一般现在时
人称：第三人称
2. 谋布局，写句子
完善P2
谋布局 写句子
介绍大熊猫 产地 及居 住地 (1) 贝贝是一只大熊猫，它来自中国四川。
Beibei is a panda. It ________________ Sichuan, China.
(2) 它目前在北京动物园生活。
Now it ____________ Beijing Zoo.
is / comes from
lives in
谋布局 写句子
介绍大熊猫 年龄、外貌、性情 (3) 贝贝五岁了，它很大。
Beibei is ______________. It’s very big.
(4) 它黑白相间，并且有一双大眼睛。
It’s _________________ with two big eyes.
(5) 它看起来很漂亮也很可爱，但有时它有点害羞。
It _____________________. But sometimes it’s ______________________.
five years old
black and white
looks beautiful and cute
kind of shy
谋布局 写句子
习性 (6) 它喜欢吃竹子。
It ____________ bamboo.
(7) 它也喜欢在白天睡觉。
It ________________ in the day.
总结全文 (8) 我喜欢大熊猫，我认为我们应该保护大熊猫，因为它们是我们的朋友。
__________________. I think we should protect pandas because _________________.
likes eating
also likes sleeping
I like pandas
they are our friends
3. 巧衔接
在介绍某种动物时，应重点写它的产地、外貌、性情、习性等方面。这是通过语义相关联的方式使全文语义具有明显的统一性和连贯性。
4. 成篇章
Beibei is a panda. It comes from Sichuan, China. Now it lives in Beijing Zoo. It’s five years old and very big. It’s black and white with two big eyes, and it looks beautiful and cute. But sometimes it’s kind of shy. It likes eating bamboo, and also likes sleeping in the day. I like pandas. I think we should protect pandas because they are our friends.
Practice makes perfect！
　　某英文杂志向中学生征稿,请同学们以"My Favorite Animals"为题,根据以下提示,介绍一下自己最喜欢的动物。
1.What animals do you like best
2.Why do you like them
3....　
要求:
1.词数70左右;
2.短文意思连贯、符合逻辑;
3.所给提示词仅供选用。
提示词:cute, clever, helpful, friendly
人称:第三人称为主
时态:一般现在时
【谋篇布局】
开头:介绍自己最喜欢的动物
①Of all the animals,... are my favorite animals.
②I like...best.
正文:介绍喜欢这个动物的原因
①I like... best because ...not only ..., but also ...
②They are so ... that they can...
③And some ... can help ..., even ...
结尾:总结全文
①In a word, I really like ...
②...are really our good friends.
【句子升格】
1.I like dogs best because they can help guard our houses and they are our good friends.(用"not only...but also..."升格)

2.They are very clever and they can understand you when you talk to them. (用"so...that..."升格)

【范文赏读】
My Favorite Animals
　　Of all the animals, dogs are my favorite animals.
　　I like dogs best because they can not only help guard our houses, but also be our good friends. They are so clever that they can understand you when you talk to them. And some dogs can help blind people in many ways, even save their lives when they are in danger.
　　In a word , dogs are my favorite animals, and they are our friends in my heart.
because引导原因状语从句,提升句子档次。
"not only... but also..."连接两个并列成分,其中also可省略。
"so... that..."意为"如此……以至于……",引导结果状语从句。
"in a word"总结全文,使文章脉络清晰,类似的用法还有"all in all"。
【学以致用】
　　我们的世界因各种生物而丰富多彩,妙趣横生。保护它们就是守护我们的未来。下面,让我们一起来听听熊猫惜惜的倾诉吧!
假如你是熊猫惜惜,请根据以下信息给人类朋友写一封70词左右的书信。
要求:1.信中包含所给信息;
2.适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
注意:书信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:destroy (v.破坏),bamboo(n.竹子), reserve(n.自然保护区)
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi.
Yours,
Xixi
1.基本信息:13岁,来自四川,中国的象征;爱好……;
2.我的烦恼:朋友少,家园常常遭到破坏……;
3.我的愿望或建议……
答案
【句子升格】
1.I like dogs best because they can not only help guard our houses, but also be our good friends.
2.They are so clever that they can understand you when you talk to them.
【学以致用】
答案
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi. I come from Sichuan. I'm the symbol of China. I like eating bamboo very much. However, I have few friends for some people destroy our homes. Our living places are becoming fewer and fewer. And we can't find enough food to eat. So the number of us is falling quickly.
We are good friends of humans. I hope humans will stop cutting down the bamboo and set up more reserves for us. Then we will have enough bamboo to eat. We'll be able to live in peace and enjoy our lives happily.
Yours,
Xixi