人教版七年级下册Unit 1 Can you play the guitar ？单元书面表达提分攻略(共12张PPT)

(共12张PPT)
Unit 1　
Can you play the guitar
Writing
【写作任务】
做一张海报，为你校音乐节招募“小小音乐家”。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁：应用文
时态：一般现在时
人称：第二人称
2. 列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
招募要求 (1) 你放学之后有空吗？没空？
______ ______ ______ after school No？
(2) 你会拉小提琴吗？
______ ______ ______ ______ ______ (3) 你会敲鼓吗？
______ ______ ______ ______ ______ (4) 那么来加入音乐节吧！
Then ______ ______ ______ the music festival!
Are you free
Can you play the violin
Can you play the drums
come and join
列提纲 写句子
参加活动的意义 (5) 你在这里能过得很愉快。
You ______ ______ ______ here.
(6) 你也能在这里交到朋友。
You ______ ______ ______ ______ here.
联系方式 (7) 请给我发电子邮件到Jimmy627@。
Please ______ ______ ______ Jimmy627@.
(8) 请拨打758-4139找我。
Please ______ ______ ______ 758-4139.
can have fun
can also make friends
e-mail me at
call me at
3. 巧衔接
(1) 在海报中，可以使用相同句式(一般疑问句)，如: Are you free after school ，这能提高读者阅读海报的兴趣，也能使文章节奏匀称，使全段结合成一个有机整体，使语言的连贯性增强。
(2) 当两句之间为递进关系时，可用and ... also连接两个句子。如: You can have fun and you can also make friends here.。
(3) 当连接句中两个选择项时，可用or。如: Please e-mail me at Jimmy627@. or call me at
4. 成篇章
Musicians Wanted for School Music Festival
Are you free after school No Can you play the violin Can you play the drums Then come and join the music festival! You can have fun and you can also make friends here. Please e-mail me at Jimmy627@ or call me at 758-4139.
Practice makes perfect！
　　假设你叫陈飞,想参加你们学校的音乐俱乐部,请你用英语给俱乐部的负责人(Miss Black)写一封信,表达你想要参加该俱乐部的意愿。信中必须包括如下内容:
　　1.你的个人信息;
2.你在音乐方面的特长;
3.你的联系方式(Tel: 686-5158; E-mail:chenfei123@)。
要求:
1.词数60左右(已给出部分不计入总词数);
2.可适当发挥。
Dear Miss Black,

　　Best wishes.
Chen Fei
时态:一般现在时
人称:第一人称
体裁:应用文
【谋篇布局】
开头:自我介绍
①My name is ...
②I’m...
③I’m...years old.
④I’m in Class ...,Grade ...
正文:详细介绍特长并表达意愿
①I like...very much.
②I can...
③I’m good at ...
④I like making friends with...
⑤So I want to ...
结尾:告知联系方式
①Please call me at...
②My e-mail address is...
【句子升格】
1.I can play the piano well.(用短语be good at升格)

2.I can sing and dance. I like making friends with other people.(用what’s more升格)

【范文赏读】
Dear Miss Black,
My name is Chen Fei. I’m 12 years old. I’m in Class Three, Grade Seven. I like music very much. I can sing and dance. And I’m also good at playing the piano. What’s more, I like making friends with other people. So I want to join the music club. Please call me at 686-5158. My e-mail address is chenfei123@.
　　Best wishes.
Chen Fei
【学以致用】
　　[2020湖南张家界中考]请根据下面的提示为学校读书俱乐部写一篇招新广告。
要求:1.内容必须包含所提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不少于50词。

Book Lovers Wanted

答案
【句子升格】
1.I am good at playing the piano.
2.I can sing and dance. What’s more, I like making friends with other people.
【学以致用】
Book Lovers Wanted
We need four book lovers for the book club in our school. The students must love reading books first. And they want to make more friends in the book club. They should be helpful and kind. They are always ready to help other readers in time. We have many activities here such as reading books together, sharing ideas about books and so on.
Do you want to join us Call me at 929-3160.