Unit 4 Don’t eat in class.-初中英语人教版七年级下册单元书面表达提分攻略(共14张PPT)

(共14张PPT)
单元话题写作
-规则
Write a letter to Dr. Know. Tell him about all the rules and how you feel about them.
体裁：应用文(书信)；
信的主体部分为说明文
时态：一般现在时
人称：第一人称
写作框架
Salutation Dear __________
Paragraph
1) Main idea Can you help me I’m not happy because there are too many rules:
2) Supporting details I have to / must _________.
I can’t ____________.
3) Final sentence I never have fun. What can I do
Closing _______________________
Dear Dr. Know,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ken Li
There are too many rules in my life!
At home, I have to help my mom and dad to the dishes every day. And I have to clean my room on Saturdays. I can’t go out with my friends on weekends.
At school, we can’t eat in class. We have to wear a school uniform. And we can’t be noisy in the hallways.
How can I relaz with so many rules What should I do
Practice makes perfect！
单元主题写作
——规则
【谋篇布局】
开头:开篇点明家里有很多家规
①My name is ...
②There are too many rules in my family.
③I have to follow many rules in my family.
正文:具体介绍自己需要遵守的家规及自己的感受
①I have to/must ...every day.
②My parents ask me (not) to ...in my free time.
③Besides, I can't ...
④I feel ...but I ...
⑤I think my parents are too strict with me.
结尾:提出自己解决的办法
①I often talk with my parents about ...
②And I often help them do housework.
③These are my good ways to get on well with them.
【句子升格】
1.My family has many rules.(用there be句型升格)

2.I often talk with my parents.(增加谈论的内容,扩写句子)

【范文赏读】
My name is Susan. There are too many rules in my family.
I have to clean the room every day. My parents ask me not to play computer games in my free time. Besides , I can't go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored. But I understand they really love me.
I often talk with my parents about my happiness and sadness. And I often help them do housework. These are my good ways to get on well with them.
there be句型的使用丰富了文章的句式结构。
besides用来引出更多的内容,使文章连贯。
be strict with sb.为本单元所学新知,能够达到学以致用的目的。
【学以致用】
　　[2021贵港中考改编]近来,为了进一步加强学生在校的管理,许多学校制定了新的校规。假如你是李华,请你根据下面表格的内容提示,用英文给你的笔友Mark写一封信,介绍你校的新校规,并谈谈你对新校规的看法。
写作要求:
1.内容必须包含所给要点,并适当发挥;
2.词数70左右。开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Mark,
　　How's it going I'm glad to share my new school rules with you.
　　What about your school rules Please write soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
作业 按时完成 手机 禁止进校
睡眠 约9小时 阅读 一周一本好书
锻炼 一天1小时 安全 1.不打架
2.……(至少补充一点)
你的看法 ……
答案
【句子升格】　
1.There are many rules in my family.
2.I often talk with my parents about my happiness and sadness/about my friends and studies/about my life and my dreams...
【学以致用】　
答案
Dear Mark,
How's it going I'm glad to share my new school rules with you.
We must finish our homework on time. We can't bring mobile phones to school. We had better get about 9 hours' sleep a day. We must read a good book once a week. Doing exercise is also important. We must do exercise an hour a day. We must keep safe first. Don't fight with each other and never go swimming alone. I think these school rules are good for us. We must follow them.
What about your school rules Please write soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
六、书面表达(20分)
假设你将在英语课上交流新型冠状病毒肺炎(COVID-19)的防护措施和抗击疫情给你的启示(至少两点), 请根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿。
要求:1.写作内容应包含所给提示中的信息,并适当发挥;
2.词数70左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
　　Hello, everyone. I'm glad to give a talk about how to prevent COVID-19.
Follow WOMEN & MEN to prevent(预防) COVID-19
W — Wash hands with soap(肥皂)...
O — Obey social distance(距离) (1-2 meters apart)
M — Masks
E — Exercise...
N — Never touch MENwith dirty hands
答案
【范文赏读】
　　Hello, everyone. I'm glad to give a talk about how to prevent COVID-19. We should follow some rules. First, we must wash hands with soap. Second, we should obey social distance (1-2 meters apart). Third, we should wear masks when we go out. Fourth, we'd better do some exercise to keep healthy. Last but not least, never touch our mouth, eyes and nose with our dirty hands. All these are important to everyone.