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Unit 3 Could you please clean your room
人教新目标版 八年级下
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Learning objectives
1. To review the passage in 2b.
2. To improve the writing skills by making sentences and coopertion.
3. To learn to express your opinion about the topic"Chores & Housework"
4.To learn to share the housework with our parents and communicate with them.
Warming-up
Revision
What can you know about the passage
There are _________ letters from The Sunday Mail magazine.
The letters were written by
___________ and __________.
The topic of the letters is about
________________________________.
two
Ms. Miller
Mr. Smith
whether young people should do chores at home.
Main view
Reasons
Facts
conclusion
Con
反方
Main view
Reasons
conclusion
Con
反方
Main view
Reasons
conclusion
I do not understand why _____________
________________________________
_________________________________
some parents
make their kids help with housework
and chores at home.
1. Kids have _______________ from school.
2. They _________________ to do homework
3. Houdework is ___________.
4. Kids should _____________________ school work.
Kids
enough stress
don't have time
Parents
Their job is to _______________________
___________________________________
provide a clean and comfortable
environment at home for their kids.
She thinks doing chores is ___________________.
She doesn't mind _____________.
not so difficult
a waste of time
spend their time on
doing chores
Pro
正方
Main view
Reasons
Facts
conclusion
Main view
Reasons
conclusion
Facts
Main view
Reasons
conclusion
Pro
正方
Facts
It's important for children to __________
___________and___________________________.
1.It helps to________________________________ and _____________________________________.
2. It also helps them to ____________________________.
3.They should know that ______________________________ __________________________.
It wants to show us that it's not enough ______________
Kids need to know _________________________
learn how
help their parents
to do chores
with housework
develop children's independence
teaches them how to look after themselves
understand the idea of fairness
everyone should do their part in
keeping it clean and tidy
to get good grades
how to take care of themselves.
___________kids learn to be independent,
___________ it is for their future.
The earlier
the better
Do you think children should do some chores at home Why or why not Discuss this with a parnter and take notes.
3a
Children should do chores because... Children should not do chores because...
Share your opinion
Because... (Firstly/Secondly...)
Opinion
I agree/disagree that... , I (don't) think....
Reasons
In a word/All in all, ...
Example
For example, ...
Conclusion
I think children should/should not_______________
because__________________________________.
For example, they sould/should not________________.
In a word, __________________________.
My report
Write a letter to the Sunday Mail and express your opinion.
3b
Dear Sir or Madam,
I think/believe that ____________________________.
I agree/disagree that___________________________.
I think it is fair/unfair for children to_______________.
I think children should/should not___________________
because _______________________________________.
For example, they should/should not _________________
because _______________________________________.
Yours truly,
_______
Dear Sir or Madam,
I think/believe that ________________________.
I agree/disagree that _______________________.
I think it is fair/unfair for children to__________.
I think children should/should not _____________
because _________________________________.
For example, they should/should not ____________
because __________________________________.
Yours truly,
_______
the structure of the letter
称呼
署名
正文
结尾敬语
一、审题干：正确审题，确定写作基本模式。
体裁__________ 人称_________时态____________
书信/观点类
第一人称
一般现在时
写作迷宫大探险
A journey in writing
体裁：文章的形式和风格
二、思路点拨
Topic sentence论点
Reasons/
facts论据
conclusion结论
原因
事实例子
I think/believe children should do chores .
Because…
For example…
So I agree that the earlier…
First…
Second.…
Also.…
… …
depend on too much
learn to be independent
do chores
develop their independence
It's fair for students to do …
live with their parents
understand the idea of fairness
...
have a lot of stress
It's unfair to do …
grades may drop
a waste of time
spend on
mind doing…
For
支持
Against
反对
三、素材积累
短语箱
1.The student have enough stress from school.
2.They don’t have time to study and do housework.
3. It’s a waste of time.
4.The students should spend time on schoolwork.
5. When they get older, have to do housework.
6. It’s the parents’ job to……
7. It’s not so difficult, I do not mind…
1.It’s not enough to get good grades.
2.They depend on their parents too much.
3.Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and teach them how to look after themselves.
4.Doing chores helps them to understand the idea of fairness.
5.They should do their part in keeping it clean and tidy.
6.The earlier, the better…
For
支持
Against
反对
三、素材积累
8. In fact, I hate to do some chores.
9. I’ll help them to do chores only after I finish my homework.
7. I often take out the rubbish, fold the clothes and do the dishes.
8. I often help my parents do some chores.
9. It’s necessary for kids to help with chores.
句子链
We think /believe it’s important for children to …. It’s not enough to….
First, children depend on…
Second, doing chores helps to …
What’s more, it also helps them to understand…
All in all/ In a word, I think the earlier…, the better….
I think kids shouldn’t help with housework at home.
First, kids already have enough stress…
They don’t have time to…
Housework is a waste…
Second, they should spend time on…
Also, … What’s more,…
All in all/ In a word, I disagree kids do chores at home.
In my opinion,
As for me,
四、增添连接词
For
支持
Against
反对
Dear Sir or Madam,
As for me，I think /believe it’s important for children to do chores. It’s not enough to get good grades.
First, children depend on their parents too much. Second, doing chores helps to develop children’s independence. What’s more, it also helps them to understand the idea of fairness. For example, because they live with their parents, it’s necessary for them to keep the house clean and tidy.
All in all/ In a word, I think the earlier kids learn to be independent, the better it is for their future.
Yours truly,
____________
五、范文借鉴一：
For
支持
Topic sentence (论点)
Reasons / Facts (论据)
Conclusion (结论)
五、范文借鉴二：
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours truly,
____________
In my opinion , I think kids shouldn’t help with housework at home.
First, kids already have enough stress from school. They don’t have time to do housework. Housework is a waste of time. Second, they should spend time on schoolwork. Also / What’s more, it’s the parents’ job to provide a clean and comfortable environment at home for their children. For example, parents don’t mind doing the dishes for their children because it’s not difficult.
All in all/ In a word, I disagree kids do chores at home.
Against
反对
Topic sentence (论点)
Reasons / Facts (论据)
Conclusion (结论)
In my opinion,/ I think/agree … …
First, … …
Second, … …
What’s more, … …
For example. … …
All in all,/ in a word, I think… …
1、时态人称体裁不正确或前后不一致。
2、中心不突出，层次不分明.
3、句子的语法错误，单词拼写错误。
4、字数不够，内容不充实。
5、卷面不整洁，字迹潦草。
对症：
下药：
审题不严密。
列提纲或分段落要到位。
句子的基本结构不会，词汇积累记忆不好。
举例子，加细节，添感受。
缺乏书法练习，态度不认真，草稿没打好。
写作中经常出现的问题:
1．加强词汇、句型、语法等语言基础的学习和积累。
2．坚持写英文日记及其它各种文体的写作练习。
3．注意积累优美的英文词句、段落和篇章。
怎样提高英语写作水平？
写作口诀：
英文写作并不难，
多背多记重语感。
妙笔生花在勤奋，
厚积薄发是宝典。
1. do ______________ 2. clean ______________
3. make ______________ 4. fold ______________
5. sweep ______________ 6. take out _________________
1. Make a list of chores using these verbs.
the dishes
the room
the bed
the clothes
the floor
the rubbish
2. Are these polite requests or permission Write the numbers in the correct places in the chart.
1. Could you please do your homework
2. Could I watch TV
3. Could you take out the rubbish first
4. Could I use your computer
5. Could I leave now
6. Could you come back before nine
Requests Permission
1, 3, 6
2, 4, 5
3. Use the questions in activity 2 to write a conversation.
A: ____________________________________________
B: ____________________________________________
A: ____________________________________________
B: ____________________________________________
A: Could I watch TV after dinner I want to watch my favorite
program.
B: Well, have you finished your homework
A: Ah... no. I'll do my homework after watching the program.
B: I don't think that's a good idea. Could you do your homework
first
A: OK. But I'll miss the first part of the program.
Example
假如你是王明，你将代表学校参加郴州市中学生英语演讲比赛。演讲的题目是We should help parents do houseork. 请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要点提示：
现象 你常做的家务 你的体会和看法
许多学生懒惰，不愿做家务。 整理床铺 浇花 打扫房间 倒垃圾 …… ……（至少两点）
Exercises
参考词汇：lazy, chores, make the bed, water flowers, clean the room, take out the trash, relaxing, interesting, proud, pleased, duty
要求：1. 短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、校名和地名。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! I’m Wang Ming. It's my honor to give you a speech. My topic is We should help parents do housework. _______________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
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