外研版（2019）必修 第一册Unit 5 Into the wild Developing ideas-writing名师课件(共24张PPT)

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教学教材：外研版高中英语新教材必修一
教学内容：Unit 5 Into the wild
第六课时: Writing: write an animal fact file
Lesson 1
Starting out & vocabulary
与动物有关的英文习语、英国人饲养宠物的情况
Lesson 2
Reading
黑脉金斑蝶的迁徙
Lesson 3
Using language
中国熊猫出访荷兰
Lesson 4
Listening & speaking
关于动物园圈养动物的辩论
Lesson 5
Reading
一次惊心动魄的拍摄经历
Lesson 6
Writing
创建动物档案
Lesson 7
Presenting ideas & reflection
介绍一个表现人与动物关系的电影或故事
课时设计与衔接
树立人与动物和谐相处的意识，关爱动物，尊重动物，保护动物。
大观念：通过以上内容的学习旨在帮助学生了解动物习性、特征等相关知识，引导学生深入思考人与动物的关系，使学生最终形成关爱动物、与动物和谐相处的正确的、可持续发展的观念。
思考人和动物的关系
感知人与动物之间的和谐相处
Unit 5
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Period 6 Writing
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The objectives of the lesson
Generalize the structure of writing animal introductions;
Write your own animal fact file;
Improve your writing based on the scoring criteria and sample essay.
Brainstorm
ideas
Structure
contents
Use accurate & advanced language
Enhance writing effectively
Multiple
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1. What animal does the video introduce
2. What is the current number of the animal in the world
3. Why was the animal endangered
Watch the video and answer the questions
Answers:
The video introduces the red-crowned crane, a longevity bird cherished by the Chinese people.
There are only two thousand red-crowned cranes left in the world.
The red-crowned crane was endangered because its natural habitat had been fast disappearing.
adj. 濒危的
n. 长寿
n. 栖息地
What does the red-crowned crane look like
Where can you find it
Where does it migrate to
What does it eat
What symbolic meaning does the red-crowned crane have in Chinese culture
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Read the paragraph and answer the questions
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3 mins to write down your answers
It has white feathers except for some black ones on its face, neck and wings. It also has bright red skin on the top of its head.
It can be found in China, Russia, Mongolia, Japan and the Korean Peninsula.
It migrates to east-central China when the weather gets cold.
It eats fish, snails and water plants.
It has a symbolic meaning of long life and good luck in Chinese culture.
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Check your answers to the questions
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Appearance
Habitat
Migration
Red-crowned crane
one of the largest, 150 cm tall
feathers as white as snow, some black ones on its face, neck and wings
bright red skin on top of its head
Diet
Other information
China, Russia, Mongolia, Japan and the Korean Peninsula
Warmer months in the rivers and wetlands in the north-east
Migrates to east-central China when the weather gets cold
Fish, snails and water plants
A symbol of long life and good luck
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Read the paragraph again and summarize the outline
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Brainstorm and develop your writing outline
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Appearance
Habitat
Migration
Diet
Other information
Size, weight, color, body structure…
Countries and regions, climate, landforms…
Destination, migration route, time…
Vegetables, meats, balanced diet…
Origin, history, how do you think of it…
Choose an animal and draw out your own fact file outline!
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An example of outline
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Siberian crane 白鹤
Appearance
140 cm tall
Feathers all white, except for some small black ones only seen in flight
Featherless and reddish face
Habitat
East Asia
Its numbers known as the eastern populations
Other information
A symbol of elegance, purity, good fortune and long life in China
Diet
Good and diverse food structure
Fish, insects, roots, tubers of water plants
Migration
Most of them migrate to China in winter
Smaller populations migrate to Iran in winter
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Appearance
Habitat
Migration
Diet
Other
information
Writing an animal fact file
It is tall/short/heavy/light...
It gets its name from…
Its unique feature is…
It lives in…
Its food includes…
It is a symbol of…
Useful expressions
Construct your contents with useful expressions
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Review topic-related words
Categories Parts of speeches Usages Words
Creatures Nouns can be used to name different animals monarch butterfly, whale, caterpillar, eagle
Nature-themed descriptive words Adjectives can be used to describe nature or animals’ characteristics, appearances, lifestyles, impression on people, etc. Atlantic, annual, amazing, breathtaking, chemical
Actions Verbs can be used to describe animals’ behaviors, actions or states migrate, seek, measure, determine, destroy, survive, recover, brave the elements, concentrate, freeze, stare
Mix of other key words Nouns, adverbials frequently used in topic-related discussions and writings position, mystery, effect, variety, after all, reaction, etc.
Can you add more words to the list
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Linking words and phrases
Cause & effect（因果） so, therefore, thus, hence, accordingly, consequently, as a result
Condition（条件） As (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless
Parallelism（并列） First, second, third... ; firstly, secondly, thirdly;
First, next, then...; in the first place, in the second place... ;
for one thing, for another thing...
Transition（转折） however, nevertheless, nonetheless, though, yet, otherwise
Contrast （对比） on the contrary, in contrast, by contrast, in comparison, by comparison
Progression（递进） also, further, furthermore, likewise, similarly, moreover,
in addition, what’s more
Illustrations（解释举例） for example, for instance, in fact, actually
Summary（总结） in conclusion, in short, to sum up, to conclude, in a word
然而
因此
2 mins to take down some notes
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Imitate and translate the sentences
The red-crowned crane is one of the largest cranes in the world, standing at about 150 cm tall. (非谓语动词作状语）
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仿写：蓝鲸是世界上最大的动物之一，其重量可达数百吨。
The blue whale is one of the largest animals in the world, reaching a weight of hundreds of tons.
Its unique feature, from which it gets its name, is the bright red skin on the top of its head.
(介词+关系代词引导的定语从句）
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仿写：变色龙以特殊的皮肤而闻名，其皮肤的颜色可随环境的变化而变化。(变色龙: chameleon)
The chameleon is known for its special skin, the color of which can change with the environment.
The red-crowned crane is a symbol of long life and good luck in Chinese culture.
(介词短语 a symbol of…）
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仿写：众所周知，在中国文化中，龙象征着权力与威信。
As is known to all, the dragon is a symbol of power and authority in Chinese culture.
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Combine the sentences using relative clause
The earthworm lives beneath the soil.
The earthworm absorbs nutrition there.
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The earthworm lives beneath the soil, where it absorbs nutrition.
The swallow will migrate south in winter.
The weather gets cold in winter.
Monarch butterflies are decreasing.
Human activity is the main reason.
There may come a time.
The number of species will increase again.
The swallow will migrate south in winter, when the weather gets cold.
Human activity is the main reason why monarch butterflies are decreasing.
There may come a time when the number of species will increase again.
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Write a short paragraph within 100 words
While you’re writing, please pay attention:
The structure should be complete and clear
The contents should be rich and meaningful
The grammar and spelling mistakes should be limited as much as possible
Try to use some advanced words and sentences
After your finish your writing, please:
Upload your writing onto the Grammarly website: https://app.grammarly.com/ or 批改网, or use the word document to edit your essay
Remember to retain the editing marks
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Self-check through grammarly
https://www.grammarly.com/
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Self-check through pigai webpage
https://www.pigai.org/
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Learn about the scoring criteria
Structure
Content
Is the structure complete
Is the structure clearly organized
Are all the required content points included
Are the contents accurate
Are the contents coherent and logical
Language
Are the words and grammar structures rich and diversified
Is the usage of the words and grammar structures accurate
What is the complex level of the words and grammar used
A well-written essay should be clearly-structured, delivering complete and coherent contents, and applying advanced and accurate language.
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Appear-
ance
Attributive clauses
Advanced words and phrases
Habitat
Migrations
Diet
Symbol
Clear Structure
Rich contents
Good language
Appreciate the sample writing
The Siberian crane is also known as the snow crane. It is about 140 cm in height, generally shorter than the red-crowned crane. Its feathers are nearly all snowy white except for some black ones that are only visible in flight. Its featherless face is reddish in colour. The Siberian crane is usually found in East Asia, where its numbers are known as the eastern populations. These migrate to China in winter. Other much smaller populations migrate to Iran in winter. The snow crane has a good and diverse appetite, including fish, insects, the roots and tubers of water plants and so on. In Chinese culture, the snow crane is a symbol of elegance, purity, good fortune and long life.
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Summarize the writing class
In this class, we have…
Read and analyzed a paragraph about red-crowned crane
Summarized the structure of an animal fact file
Reviewed topic-related words and mastered useful expressions
Created an animal fact file by ourselves
Learnt about the scoring criteria and appreciated the sample writing
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Edit and finalize your writing according to the sample essay (either hand-written or written in a word document);
Create a poster on an animal fact file (either drew by hands or on a computer). Please pay attention:
The poster needs to include the contents of your writing on the animal fact file;
The poster needs to convey the idea of harmony between humans and animals.
Please complete the above two assignments by February 27th and send electronic copies (either photos or word/pdf documents) to 13001271477@.
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Let’s appreciate a beautiful song together!
A true story
《一个真实的故事》
It tells a story about a girl named Xu Xiujuan (徐秀娟) sacrificing her own life to save a red-crowned crane. The song is devoted to honoring and commemorating
(纪念) the kind girl.
Thank You!