外研版（2019）必修第一册 Unit5 Into the wild 写作素养练（有答案）
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Unit 5写作素养练
I.作文句式运用（根据汉语提示及所给词汇，仿写本单元重点句式）
1.我正到处寻找我的钥匙。（in search of）
_______________________________________________________________
2.我读了许多艺术家关于绘画的书。（过去分词作定语）
_______________________________________________________________
3.玛丽三年前决心成为医生，现在她的梦想实现了。（be determined to）
_______________________________________________________________
4.伦敦位于泰晤士河畔（the River Thames），人口700万。（have a population of）
_______________________________________________________________
5.他在狗狗丢失的公园找到了狗狗。（where）
_______________________________________________________________
6.我能努力自己做一切事情。（manage to do）
_______________________________________________________________
7.他越忙越高兴。（the+比较级）
_______________________________________________________________
8.年轻人应该尊敬老人。（show respect to）
_______________________________________________________________
9.别责怪他，毕竟他还是个孩子。（after all）
_______________________________________________________________
10.昨天晚上是我父亲在实验室做的实验。（强调句）
_______________________________________________________________
II.应用文写作
假定你是李华。上周末学校组织了一次到野生动物园的研学活动（field trip）。请给你的英国朋友Alice写封信，介绍这次活动。
内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动内容；
3.收获与感受。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
III.读后续写
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A
A Vacation with My Mother
I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother—loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again Finally，the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mum had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mum was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout（放哨）while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids ” “What ! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in range city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mum suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mum never could understand our objections（反对）. If a strange family showed upon her front doorstep, Mum would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the day.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
B
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled（骑行）along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）.
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
IV.概要写作
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Have you ever been involved in animal rescue This is what happened to Winter the dolphin. Winter was found off he coast of Florida in December of 2005. She was just a few months old, alone, and caught in a crab trap. The ropes from the trap were wrapped tightly around her body.
The fisherman who found her called for help, and the rescue team soon arrived. The ropes had cut off the blood circulation to her tail. She was badly hurt. Her rescuers didn’t think she would survive. Hoping for a miracle and racing against time to save her, the rescuers transferred（转移）her to the Clearwater Marine Aquarium in Florida.
The doctors managed to save Winter, but sadly, not her tail. His tail flukes were too damaged and had to be re moved so Winter could live.
The little dolphin Winter survived against all odds, but she would never be able to swim normally without a tail. Thankfully the story doesn’t end here. Winter was able to swim, but not very well. Because she didn’t have a tail. She moved her body in a side-to-side motion like a shark. But doctors at the aquarium were worried that unconventional moment would hurt her spine（脊柱）.
Kevin Carroll heard Winter’s story and for thought, he would could help. He is a specialist who designs and provides prostheses（假体）for people. If he could help people why not help a dolphin He started working with Winter and came up with a solution to the new fluke and tail section.
Kevin designed a stretchy（有弹性的）sleeve to fit winter’s body and protect her skin. Then a tail made of silicone and plastic was made to tightly fit over the sleeve. Now winter can swim like other dolphins. And she is a great inspiration to people who struggle with their own in Junes.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
I. 1. I am looking everywhere in search of my key.
2. I have read a number of books about painting written by artists.
3. Mary was determined to become a doctor three years ago and now her dream comes true.
4. London lies on the River Thames and has a population of seven million.
5.He found his dog in a park where it lost.
6. I can manage to do everything by myself.
7. The busier he is, the happier he feels.
8. The young should show respect to the old.
9. Don’t blame him. After all, he's only a child.
10. It was my father who did the experiment in the lab yesterday evening.
II. One possible version
Dear Alice,
How are things going I am writing to tell you about the field trip I went on with my classmates last Saturday. We went to a wildlife park located in the mountains.
The activity aims to improve the students’ awareness of wildlife protection. On arriving, we attended a lecture given by an expert on rare animals and their habitats. Next, we watched a short video about the endangered animals. What attracted me most was the visit to the panda research centre, where I saw several newly-born baby pandas. They were so cute! All of us found the activity educational, inspiring and highly rewarding.
How about your school field trip Hope you can write and share with me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本篇写作为一封信。信的内容为：上周末学校组织了一次到野生动物园的研学活动（field trip）。请给你的英国朋友Alice写一封信介绍这次活动。内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.收获与感受。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：field trip（研学活动），located in（坐落于），awareness of（……的意识），attend a lecture（参加讲座），rare animals（稀有动物），endangered animals（濒危动物），educational，inspiring and highly rewarding（有教育意义的、鼓舞人心的、非常值得的）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面非常重要。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：I am writing to tell you about the field trip I went on with my classmates last Saturday.运用了定语从句；What attracted me most was the visit to the panda research centre运用了主语从句。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
III. A One possible version:
Paragraph 1:
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. We decided to camp along the river. The views there were surprisingly beautiful-the warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clean water, We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. However, when Dad was about to put up our tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel. Well, Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping.
Paragraph 2:
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. Every time we got to a new place, Mum would cheer up like a child. She would get off the car excitedly, laughing and dancing around. Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature. When we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit, Mum would hug us and kiss us on our faces. How sweet she was! Absent-minded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to express her love to us.
B One possible version:
Paragraph 1:
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac rushed down from his bicycle and waved at the people inside the car for help. Paul and Becky inside the car got out immediately to help him climb into the car, in spite of the danger that the fierce wolf was running near. They quickly pushed Mac into their car and closed all the doors as hard as possible, legs trembling and breathless. Seeing this, the wolf still howled outside the car for some time and then left unwillingly.
Paragraph 2:
A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived. Mac’s friends were shocked to hear the story and very grateful to the young couple. Mac invited all of them back to his home for dinner and he introduced his wife and daughters to his two new friends who saved his life. During the dinner they recalled the adventure and talked about the ways to deal with such dangerous situations.
【审题】
文章题材和野外生活相关，故事具有冒险性。主人公Mac在和朋友一起外出骑车旅游时不幸遭遇饿狼的故事。就在最危险的时候Paul和 Becky驱车走
近。这样，精彩的故事进一步展开。本文故事设计有很大发展空间。
【写作要点】
根据文章的第一段提示句可知，本段应该描述Paul和 Becky是如何帮助Mac脱险的。根据第二段的提示句可知，本段应该是Mac的朋友到来之后发生的事。考生可以根据自己的理解和想象进行合理的续写。一定要注意续写内容的合理性，不可脱离原文的故事无限发展。
【提分词汇】
rushed down, in spite of，as hard as possible, were shocked to, very grateful to, recalled the adventure dangerous situations.
IV. One possible version:
It is about an inspiring rescuing a dolphin Winter found trapped in ropes by a fisherman. Badly injured, she had to be transferred to an aquarium where doctors saved her but her damaged tail was removed. Luckily, a specialist Kevin designed an artificial tail for her，helping her swim normally again.
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇记叙文。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：inspiring（鼓舞人心的），transfer（转移），badly injured（严重受伤），an artificial tail（人造尾巴）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面非常重要。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：Badly injured, she had to be transferred to an aquarium where doctors saved her but her damaged tail was removed.用了定语从句；Luckily, a specialist Kevin designed an artificial tail for her, helping her swim normally again.运用了非谓语动词。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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I.作文句式运用（根据汉语提示及所给词汇，仿写本单元重点句式）
1.我正到处寻找我的钥匙。（in search of）
_______________________________________________________________
2.我读了许多艺术家关于绘画的书。（过去分词作定语）
_______________________________________________________________
3.玛丽三年前决心成为医生，现在她的梦想实现了。（be determined to）
_______________________________________________________________
4.伦敦位于泰晤士河畔（the River Thames），人口700万。（have a population of）
_______________________________________________________________
5.他在狗狗丢失的公园找到了狗狗。（where）
_______________________________________________________________
6.我能努力自己做一切事情。（manage to do）
_______________________________________________________________
7.他越忙越高兴。（the+比较级）
_______________________________________________________________
8.年轻人应该尊敬老人。（show respect to）
_______________________________________________________________
9.别责怪他，毕竟他还是个孩子。（after all）
_______________________________________________________________
10.昨天晚上是我父亲在实验室做的实验。（强调句）
_______________________________________________________________
II.应用文写作
假定你是李华。上周末学校组织了一次到野生动物园的研学活动（field trip）。请给你的英国朋友Alice写封信，介绍这次活动。
内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动内容；
3.收获与感受。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
III.读后续写
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A
A Vacation with My Mother
I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother—loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again Finally，the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mum had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mum was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout（放哨）while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids ” “What ! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in range city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mum suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mum never could understand our objections（反对）. If a strange family showed upon her front doorstep, Mum would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the day.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
B
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled（骑行）along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）.
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
IV.概要写作
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Have you ever been involved in animal rescue This is what happened to Winter the dolphin. Winter was found off he coast of Florida in December of 2005. She was just a few months old, alone, and caught in a crab trap. The ropes from the trap were wrapped tightly around her body.
The fisherman who found her called for help, and the rescue team soon arrived. The ropes had cut off the blood circulation to her tail. She was badly hurt. Her rescuers didn’t think she would survive. Hoping for a miracle and racing against time to save her, the rescuers transferred（转移）her to the Clearwater Marine Aquarium in Florida.
The doctors managed to save Winter, but sadly, not her tail. His tail flukes were too damaged and had to be re moved so Winter could live.
The little dolphin Winter survived against all odds, but she would never be able to swim normally without a tail. Thankfully the story doesn’t end here. Winter was able to swim, but not very well. Because she didn’t have a tail. She moved her body in a side-to-side motion like a shark. But doctors at the aquarium were worried that unconventional moment would hurt her spine（脊柱）.
Kevin Carroll heard Winter’s story and for thought, he would could help. He is a specialist who designs and provides prostheses（假体）for people. If he could help people why not help a dolphin He started working with Winter and came up with a solution to the new fluke and tail section.
Kevin designed a stretchy（有弹性的）sleeve to fit winter’s body and protect her skin. Then a tail made of silicone and plastic was made to tightly fit over the sleeve. Now winter can swim like other dolphins. And she is a great inspiration to people who struggle with their own in Junes.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
I. 1. I am looking everywhere in search of my key.
2. I have read a number of books about painting written by artists.
3. Mary was determined to become a doctor three years ago and now her dream comes true.
4. London lies on the River Thames and has a population of seven million.
5.He found his dog in a park where it lost.
6. I can manage to do everything by myself.
7. The busier he is, the happier he feels.
8. The young should show respect to the old.
9. Don’t blame him. After all, he's only a child.
10. It was my father who did the experiment in the lab yesterday evening.
II. One possible version
Dear Alice,
How are things going I am writing to tell you about the field trip I went on with my classmates last Saturday. We went to a wildlife park located in the mountains.
The activity aims to improve the students’ awareness of wildlife protection. On arriving, we attended a lecture given by an expert on rare animals and their habitats. Next, we watched a short video about the endangered animals. What attracted me most was the visit to the panda research centre, where I saw several newly-born baby pandas. They were so cute! All of us found the activity educational, inspiring and highly rewarding.
How about your school field trip Hope you can write and share with me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本篇写作为一封信。信的内容为：上周末学校组织了一次到野生动物园的研学活动（field trip）。请给你的英国朋友Alice写一封信介绍这次活动。内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.收获与感受。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：field trip（研学活动），located in（坐落于），awareness of（……的意识），attend a lecture（参加讲座），rare animals（稀有动物），endangered animals（濒危动物），educational，inspiring and highly rewarding（有教育意义的、鼓舞人心的、非常值得的）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面非常重要。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：I am writing to tell you about the field trip I went on with my classmates last Saturday.运用了定语从句；What attracted me most was the visit to the panda research centre运用了主语从句。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
III. A One possible version:
Paragraph 1:
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. We decided to camp along the river. The views there were surprisingly beautiful-the warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clean water, We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. However, when Dad was about to put up our tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel. Well, Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping.
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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. Every time we got to a new place, Mum would cheer up like a child. She would get off the car excitedly, laughing and dancing around. Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature. When we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit, Mum would hug us and kiss us on our faces. How sweet she was! Absent-minded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to express her love to us.
B One possible version:
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The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac rushed down from his bicycle and waved at the people inside the car for help. Paul and Becky inside the car got out immediately to help him climb into the car, in spite of the danger that the fierce wolf was running near. They quickly pushed Mac into their car and closed all the doors as hard as possible, legs trembling and breathless. Seeing this, the wolf still howled outside the car for some time and then left unwillingly.
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A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived. Mac’s friends were shocked to hear the story and very grateful to the young couple. Mac invited all of them back to his home for dinner and he introduced his wife and daughters to his two new friends who saved his life. During the dinner they recalled the adventure and talked about the ways to deal with such dangerous situations.
【审题】
文章题材和野外生活相关，故事具有冒险性。主人公Mac在和朋友一起外出骑车旅游时不幸遭遇饿狼的故事。就在最危险的时候Paul和 Becky驱车走
近。这样，精彩的故事进一步展开。本文故事设计有很大发展空间。
【写作要点】
根据文章的第一段提示句可知，本段应该描述Paul和 Becky是如何帮助Mac脱险的。根据第二段的提示句可知，本段应该是Mac的朋友到来之后发生的事。考生可以根据自己的理解和想象进行合理的续写。一定要注意续写内容的合理性，不可脱离原文的故事无限发展。
【提分词汇】
rushed down, in spite of，as hard as possible, were shocked to, very grateful to, recalled the adventure dangerous situations.
IV. One possible version:
It is about an inspiring rescuing a dolphin Winter found trapped in ropes by a fisherman. Badly injured, she had to be transferred to an aquarium where doctors saved her but her damaged tail was removed. Luckily, a specialist Kevin designed an artificial tail for her，helping her swim normally again.
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇记叙文。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：inspiring（鼓舞人心的），transfer（转移），badly injured（严重受伤），an artificial tail（人造尾巴）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面非常重要。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：Badly injured, she had to be transferred to an aquarium where doctors saved her but her damaged tail was removed.用了定语从句；Luckily, a specialist Kevin designed an artificial tail for her, helping her swim normally again.运用了非谓语动词。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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