08：【好题精选】写作-2023年九年级下学期英语专题周周练（第一期）（海南）（含答案）

08：【好题精选】写作 -2023年九年级下学期英语专题周周练
（第一期）（海南）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．光阴似箭，转眼又快初中毕业了。回顾过去的三年，你一定也会感觉到自己在某些方面发生了很大的变化。请结合自己的体会，用英语写一篇短文，从外貌、个性和学习等方面来谈谈这些变化，参加你校开展的以“How I Have Changed”为主题的征文活动。
要求：
1.条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2.必须包含所给内容，并做适当拓展；
3.词数 80 左右。（文章题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数）
参考词汇：used to, quiet, schoolwork, spend
How I Have Changed
How time flies! It has almost been three years since I came to this school. Great changes have taken place in my life and my study …__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、材料作文
2．近年来，全球自然灾害(disaster) 频发，极端天气频频出现。环境恶化给全球带来的危害正日益凸显。你作为一名中学生，应该为环境保护做出哪些贡献呢？请以保护环境为主题写一篇不少于 80 词的短文。向同学们发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，尽最大努力保护环境！
On the way 1. take parents’ electric cars or bikes 2. ...
In the shops 1. only buy the things that we want most 2. ...
At home 1. turn off lights when we leave a room 2. ... 3. …
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 所有提示须全部用上，并作适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。 As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．我校下周要进行“我劳动，我快乐”为主题英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇英语演讲稿。
要点：
1.分享你最难忘的劳动经历；
2.谈谈劳动的感受；
3.表达你的观点并发出建议。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
2.根据提示进行写作，并做适当发挥。
3.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名。
4.词数80左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词)
Hello, everyone. It’s my honor to share my labor experience.
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As teenagers, we should take action to do what we can to help for our family!
4．一个人的成功离不开勤奋努力，也离不开良好的习惯。有人每晚睡前读一会书，有人坚持早起锻炼身体……生活与学习习惯对我们的成长很重要。请选择一个你以前做得不好、但现在已养成的好习惯，写一篇80词左右的短文，谈一谈你养成这个习惯的过程与收获。开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数内。
提示：Good habits：Learning habit；eating habit；sleeping habit；exercise habit. . .
I think developing good habits is important in our life. Many years ago, I used to_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The earlier we get into good habits, the happier life we will have. Let’s take action!
5．江苏锡山唐江澎校长的一席话发人深思：教育应该培养终身运动者、责任担当者、问题解决者和优雅生活者！请以“How to Be a Better Person” 为话题开展征文活动，从你的角度写一篇短文，谈谈做法和想法：
要点提示：
1.健康生活（食物、运动、睡眠……）；
2.不怕挑战（尽力解决学习、生活中的问题……）；
3.对人友善（乐于助人、与人和睦相处……）；
4.牢记责任（照顾父母，帮助弱者）。
提示词: responsibility 职责
要求:
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。
2.所有提示须全部用上，并作适当发挥。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
4. 80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
How to Be a Better Person
As a middle school student, I quite agree with Mr. Tang’s opinions. To be a better person, I think I should do the following things.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、电子邮件
6．为了丰富学校课程，目前海南省的大部分学校都开展了研学旅行(study trip)。假如你是李华，请根据以下表格内容给你的美国笔友Steven写一封电子邮件，分享你参加的一次研学旅行经历。
时间、地点 2022年2月26日；海口市
活动 参观五公祠、博物馆和火山口公园，观看琼剧……
收获 了解海南历史和文化……
感受 累并快乐着……
参考词汇：五公祠the Five-lord Temple；火山口公园Volcano Park；琼剧Qiong Opera
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；
2. 可适当发挥，文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Steven,How is it going I’m glad to tell you something about my last study trip.
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．李华是一名九年级的学生，他在学习和生活中有着一些困惑。请你仔细阅读下面这封李华写给心理老师Judy的电子邮件。并按照表格信息，以Judy的身份给李华回信。开导李华向父母和老师敞开心扉，勇敢面对各种困难。
Problems Suggestions
English Study ask…for…, make a plan,…
How to get along with parents talk with, your dream,…
… …
要求：1.要点齐全，适当发挥；2.行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；4.词数：80词左右。（开头句和末尾句已给出，不计入总词数。）
Dear Li Hua,Thanks for your letter. I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble in your life at the moment. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes to you!
Judy
四、书信作文
8．假设你是李华，即将进入高中学习。请根据下表提示写一封信给你的英国笔友 Linda，谈谈你对高中生活的向往和担忧，并请她给出建议。
Wishes Worries
school big and clean, ... …
people help each other, ...
others ...
要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 必须包含提示内容，并做适当发挥；
3. 词数 80 词左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Linda,How is everything going I’ll go to senior high school in two months. ...
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、讲稿
9．中考在即，如何应对考试的压力且高效保质备考，相信你积累了不少经验。请根据以下提示，以How to prepare for the coming high school entrance exam 为题写一篇发言稿，谈谈你在备考中的做法以及收获并在英语论坛上与他人分享。
要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。
2. 所有提示须全部用上，并作适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
4. 80词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)
The high school entrance exam is around the corner. All of us are working hard to prepare for it. So am I. ...
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10．老师委派你主持班级安全教育主题班会，请你根据下面《青少年自我保护手册》中的部分文字和图片写一篇发言稿来谈谈你的看法。至少三点。
Handbook of Self—protection for teenagers
Safety Problems Opinions
√ follow the traffic rules × run the red light× ride side by side
√… × swim alone
… √… ×…
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。
2.所有提示须全部用上，并作适当发挥。
3.文中不得出现真实人名、班级。
4.80词左右文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe.
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In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.
参考答案：
1．例文
How I Have Changed
How time flies! It has almost been three years since I came to this school. Great changes have taken place in my life and my study.
I grow taller and thinner. I used to have long hair, but now I have short hair. I used to be quiet. I didn’t use to answer questions in class, but now I don’t waste any chance to give my opinions. My schoolwork is getting heavier. I spend most of my time either having tests or studying for the tests. Time for sports, friends and hobbies is getting shorter and shorter. However, I am finding myself better prepared for any difficulties in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求根据自身的经历，谈谈自己在外貌、个性和学习等方面发生的变化，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单问候，并直入主题（已给出）；
第二步，承接短文开头，接下来从“外貌、学习、个性等”方面详细描述自己的变化；
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
③either...or...要么……要么……
④prepare for为……做准备
[高分句型]
①I used to have long hair, but now I have short hair.（but连接的并列句）
②Time for sports, friends and hobbies is getting shorter and shorter. （“比较级+and+比较级”结构）
2．例文
Dear friends,
As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters have happened on the earth. As a result, we should take steps to protect the environment.
First, when we go to school, we’d better take parents’ electric cars or bikes. Besides, we can ride bikes or take a bus to school. Second, while we are shopping, we should make a list and only buy the things that we want most. And it’s necessary to use recycled bags because plastic bags are harmful to the environment. Third, we can do a lot at home. For example, turn off lights when we leave a room, and divide the waste into different groups before throwing it away. What’s more, use things for as long as possible.
If everyone starts to do something, the world will be saved.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，要求写一篇倡议书；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：这是一篇材料作文，写作时应围绕材料给出的内容写作，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接文章开头，指出环境问题带来的危害，及保护环境的紧迫性；
第二步：按照材料给出的框架写出保护环境的具体措施；
第三步：最后进行简单的总结及对未来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① as we know众所周知
② take steps to do sth采取行动做某事
③ be harmful to对……有害的
④ divide…into…把……分成……
[高分句型]
① First…Second…Third…What’s more…的使文章层次鲜明，条理清晰
② If everyone starts to do something, the world will be saved.（用if引导的条件状语从句写出对未来的期待）
3．例文
Hello, everyone. It’s my honor to share my labor experience.
Last weekend, I got up early and cooked noodles for my parents. First, I boiled some water. Then I put some noodles into the pot. About five or six minutes later, I placed them in the bowls and added some salt and oil. When my parents got up, they were surprised and praised me with a big smile.
It was the first time for me to cook for them, a little bit tired but happy. I felt proud of myself because I could take care of my parents. From this unforgettable experience, I’ve also got a deeper understanding of my parents.
I think it’s our duty to share some housework. Besides, doing some hard housework is a kind of physical exercise. As teenagers, we should take action to do what we can to help for our family!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍自己的劳动经历
第三步，介绍自己的感受以及观点。
[亮点词汇]
①put...into把……放进……
②be proud of以……为傲
③take care of照顾
④a kind of一种
[高分句型]
①When my parents got up, they were surprised and praised me with a big smile（when引导时间状语从句）
②I think it’s our duty to share some housework（省略that的宾语从句）
4．例文
I think developing good habits is important in our life. One cannot succeed without hard work and good habits. Some people read a book before going to bed every night, and some people insist on getting up early to exercise. Living and studying habits are very important to our growth. Many years ago, I used to do my homework before going to bed. And I had to stay up to finish my homework. The next morning, I felt sleepy in class. As a result, I did badly in my exams. Luckily, my father told me what to do after he learnt my problem. I tried to make a timetable and stuck to it. Little by little, I found it easier to deal with my homework and I made great progress. Now I have enough time to enjoy my life. I am happier and more confident than before.
The earlier we get into good habits, the happier life we will have. Let’s take action!
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，描述自己以前做的不好的一件事情，而现在已经养成了很好的习惯，并谈论养成好习惯的过程和收获，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
5． How to Be a Better Person
As a middle school student, I quite agree with Mr. Tang’s opinions. To be a better person, I think I should do the following things.
First of all, we should keep a healthy life. We need to have a balanced diet and do exercises regularly. We ought to sleep at least eight hours a day.
What’s more, we should not be afraid of challenges. We are supposed to solve the problems in our studies as well as our lives. Furthermore, we should be helpful and friendly to others. Getting on well with others is important in life.
At last, we are shouldered with responsibility. It’s our duty to take care of our parents and give a hand to the weak at any time.
To be a better person, to live a happy life!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料写作，根据所给提示写一篇短文。在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段介绍健康生活、不怕挑战以及对人友善等方面内容；第三段阐述牢记的责任，最后发表倡议，总结全文。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，注意对应情态动词的准确应用；要将材料所给提示充分利用，采用多样的句型结构，保证条理清晰。
6．例文
Dear Steven,
How is it going I’m glad to tell you something about my last study trip.
We went to Haikou city for our study trip by bus on Feb 26th 2022. It was a three-day trip. First we visited the Five-lord Temple. Then we went to Haikou Museum. We saw many old things on show. At last we visited Volcano Park and watched Qiong Opera. We also ate lots of delicious food and learned a lot.
During the trip, I learned more about the history and the culture of Haikou. Although I was tired, I had a good time.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的活动时间，地点，交通方式；
第二步，介绍活动，收获以及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①at last最后
②lots of许多
③look forward to doing sth期待做某事
[高分句型]
①Although I was tired, I had a good time. （although引导让步状语从句）
7．例文
Dear Li Hua,
Thanks for your letter. I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble in your life at the moment. Now here are my suggestions.
In your spare time, I think you can choose proper ways to relax yourself, such as running, listening to light music and so on. Relaxing yourself can make you get energy or become happy soon. As for your English reading, why not ask your teachers for help What’s more, it’s a good idea to make a plan to recite the words and do some English reading every day. If you make a good plan, I think you will have spare time to take part in some activities you like. For example, try to do volunteer work, play football and have a picnic and so on.
At home, you should have a good talk with your parents and tell them about your worries, your feelings and your dream. I’m sure they will understand you and support you forever. You know, parents are the people who always love their kids, right In a word, different people have different pressure. No matter what pressure it is, we should face it bravely.
Wish you all the best!
Judy
【详解】1.题干解析：本文是一篇邮件写作。要求写一篇80词左右的英语短文给自己的朋友李华回信，解答他在学习和生活中遇到的问题。题干表格中给出的内容需要全部包括，文章开头和结尾已给出，要注意上下文衔接。
2.写作指导：本文时态主要使用一般现在时，人称不限。文章可以分为四段，第一段点题，第二段对英语学习提出建议，第三段对和父母相处提出建议，第四段总结。适当使用短语和句型，增加文章亮点，不要出现单词和语法错误。
8．One possible version
Dear Linda,
How is everything going I’ll go to senior high school in two months. Everything is new to me. First, I hope my school is big and clean with a large library. You know I’m a person who always lose myself in reading. Second, I expect to get along well with my new teachers and classmates. No matter who has problems, we can help each other. Besides, I also wish to do better in my study. But I’m afraid I will have problems learning English. Most people say English is more difficult in the high school. Meanwhile, whether I can look after myself well is another worry of mine. You know, in China, most high school students are required to live in the school. Could you give me some advice I’m waiting for your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点中的省略号部分，需要根据要点进行适当的发挥，以丰富文章内容和层次。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写出自己对高中生活的希望；
第二步，谈谈自己对高中生活的担忧；
第三步，请求对方给予建议，期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
① lose oneself in ... 全神贯注于……之中
② get along well with 与……相处融洽
③ look after 照顾
[高分句型]
① Second, I expect to get along well with my new teachers and classmates.（expect to do sth. 期望做某事）
② No matter who has problems, we can help each other. （no matter who引导的让步状语从句）
③ But I’m afraid I will have problems learning English.（have problems doing sth. 做某事有困难）
④ You know, in China, most high school students are required to live in the school. （一般现在时的被动语态）
9．One possible version
The high school entrance exam is around the corner. All of us are working hard to prepare for it. So am I. It’s true that I feel stressed. To solve it, I do something useful to keep calm. I think listening to music, playing ball games and having enough sleep are all good ways to reduce pressure. When I’m nervous and upset, they really make me relaxed and happy. Secondly, it’s a good idea to make full use of our time. After finishing my homework every day, I make a plan for the subject that I’m weak in. I go over the notes and do more practice. Whenever I have a question, I ask my teachers and classmates for help. Last, I never think too much about the marks. I believe all the mistakes are making a better myself. I’m sure, “No pain, no gain”.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。以“如何准备即将到来的中考”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。文章开头已给出，接下来就如何准备中考提出几点建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
10．例文
Hello, everyone. Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe.
First, I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red light. Don’t run the red light. When the traffic light is red, I won’t go until it turns green. I always cross the zebra crossing because it’s safe. Don’t ride side by side. It is very dangerous. Second, I often eat healthily and safely. It’s important to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating too much fast food will do harm to my body. Third, I never meet strangers alone especially friends who I make on the Internet. At the same time, if we are true friends, we should help each other. What’s more, I’d like to give you some advice. Now summer is coming. It’s dangerous for us to swim alone especially in deep lakes or rivers. So we don’t do that.
In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于演讲稿写作。写作时注意一定要紧紧围绕“青少年自我保护”这一主题展开叙述。内容要包括遵守交通规则等应该做的和不应该做的，即题目要求的内容都要写到，并有所补充。内容要积极向上，条理要清晰。
写作指导：本文写作应该使用第一人称。时态应根据情境运用一般现在时和一般将来时。可以根据要求分三部分叙述。第一段开门见山，提出青少年要学会保护自我；第二段根据要求展开，分述如何保证自我安全，要具体；第三段总结全文，表达感受，感情升华。可适当运用祈使句，should等情态动词以及条件状语从句等。