外研版（2019）必修 第二册Unit 3 On the move解透单元写作学案（含答案）

Unit3 解透单元写作
主题写作—运动与健身
1.写作任务
假定你是李华，你的班级将于下周举行以“运动的好处”为主题的演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿。
（1）运动使人消除紧张感，变得更加自信；
（2）运动增强体质，减少疾病；
（3）运动对你的社交网络很重要。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Benefits of Exercise
Dear classmates,
The title of my speech today is “Benefits of Exercise”. As for exercise, I think that
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all Thank you for your listening.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.写作思路（一审、二定、三明确）
（1）一审：体裁、结构与主题
体裁：应用文—演讲稿
结构：三部分
第一部分：运动对人心理的影响
第二部分：运动对人身体的影响
第三部分：运动对你的社交的影响主题：运动的好处
（2）二定：时态与人称
时态：以一般现在时为主
人称：以第二人称与第三人称为主
（3）三明确：明确写作要点
第一部分：运动使人消除紧张感，变得更加自信
第二部分：运动增强体质，减少疾病
第三部分：运动对你的社交网络很重要
3.素材整理
（1）关键词语
physically/psychologically身体/心理上地
malnutrition营养不良
healthy健康的
energetic/vigorous精力充沛的
tired/exhausted/worn out疲倦的
take. For example以……为例
the primary goal首要目标
be involved in sports参与运动
public health公共卫生
as well as和，还
reduce one’s tension减少某人的紧张感
lose weight减肥
inspire sb.to do sth.激励某人做某事
lead a healthy life过健康的生活
improve the quality of life提高生活质量
cultivate/develop healthy habits in daily life在日常生活中培养健康的习惯
to one’s heart’s content尽情地
build up one’s body/improve one’s health强身健体
take/do regular exercise定期锻炼
be good for/do good to对…有益处
heart and lungs心肺
pump用泵（或泵样器官等）输送
physical and mental condition身体与精神状况
（2）完成句子
①Sports can make your tension disappear, ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________运动可以让你的紧张感消失，激励你变得更加自信。
② In a sense, doing sports is ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________.从某种意义上说，运动是件生死攸关的事情
③________ ________ related data, doing sports ________ ________our bodies and reduces diseases.根据相关数据，做运动能强身健体、减少疾病。
④When doing sweaty exercises ________ ________ ________ ________, such as skipping, surfing ________ ________ ________keeping your balance on the bar, you’re pushing your heart and lungs to work faster with stronger power, ________ ________ ________ ________. 当你尽情地做汗流浃背的运动时，比如跳绳、冲浪以及在杠上保持平衡，你都在推动你的心肺以更强的力量工作得更快，让你更
有活力。
⑤________ playing basketball ________ ________. It will bring you a sense of teamwork, ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________以打篮球为例，它会给你带来团队合作的意识，这对你的社交网络很重要。
Keys: ①inspiring you to become more confident② a matter of life and death ③ According to, builds up ④to your heart’s content, as well as, making you more energetic ⑤Take, for example; which is important for your social network
4.高分作文（注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇）
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、要点全面的短文。
Benefits of exercise
Dear classmates,
The title of my speech today is “Benefits of Exercise”. As for exercise, I think that sports can make your tension disappear, inspiring you to become more confident.
In a sense, doing sports is a matter of life and death. According to related data, doing sports builds up our bodies and reduces diseases.
When doing sweaty exercises to your hearts content, such as skipping, surfing as well as keeping balance on the bar, you’ re pushing your heart and lungs to work faster with stronger power making you more energetic.
Take playing basketball for example. It will bring you a sense of teamwork, which is important for your social network.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening.
Yours,
Li Hua
第一段第二句中用现在分词短语 inspiring you to become more confident作伴随状语。
第二段中用动名词短语doing sports作主语，谓语动词用单数形式。
第三段中用when引导的时间状语从句的省略句式 When doing sweaty exercises，現在分词短语making you more energetic作结果状语。
第四段中用 which引导的非限制性定语从句which is important for your social network对先行词 a sense of teamwork迷行补充说明。
5.佳作背诵
假定你是李华，你的朋友 David来信询问你对踢足球的看法，请你给他回一封信，要点包括:
（1）踢足球帮助增加肺活量，减少紧张感
（2）踢足球的人更注重防守、进球和团队合作；
（3）夺冠使人坚持目标。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I’m glad to hear from you. Here are my interpretations for playing football _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear David,
I’m glad to hear from you. Here are my interpretations for playing football.
In my opinion, playing sports benefits me a lot. Take playing football for example. Tired and sweaty as I am, it can not only help me increase my lung power but also reduce my tension. Research data shows that people playing football are more focused on defending, scoring goals and teamwork Besides, winning the championship ultimately after tough training does inspire us to stick to our goal. In turn, losing games teaches us never to give up or lose heart.
In short, playing football to my hearts content makes me healthier and more e along! Lets play football together and enjoy a healthy life, shall we
Yours,
Li Hua
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