Unit 1 Section B 3a –3b writing课件（人教版八年级下）

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Section B
3a –3b Writing
Unit 1
What's the matter
all kinds of illnesses
Pre-writing
have a cold
have a stomachache
have a fever
have a headache
have a backache
have a toothache
have a sore throat
have a cough
have a nosebleed
have a sore leg
have the flu
have a sore neck
…should/shouldn't do…
You'd better do…
It's best to do…
It's a good idea/way to do…
It's important/necessary to do…
Why not do/How about doing…
Why not do sth.
Why don’t you do sth.
Give advice
Pre-writing
Treatment
Pre-writing
Should
Shouldn`t
go to the doctor
see a dentist
do more exercise
get an X-ray
take some medicine
lie down and rest
take your temperature
drink more hot water put on warm clothes
sleep earlier
…
eat too much junk food
get angry easily/candies/meat
be nervous
stay up too late
be stressed out
drink cold water/cola
use mobile phones too much
talk too much
play computer games too much
work/study for a long time
…
Writing Topic
Pre-writing
假如你是Martin, 你的笔友Alice在给你的来信中说
她经常生病，情绪低落。请你给她写一封信，告诉
她应该怎么做。词数80词左右
参考词汇：balanced diet(平衡的饮食), stress(压力)
Person(人称）
The second person
Tense(时态）
The simple present tense
Text(文体）
A letter
Details(细节）
1.write a letter
(show the phenomenon(现象),
give your advice)
2.80 words
What should we think about
Pre-writing
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
What should we think about
Pre-writing
Beginning:
Lead to the topic.
Make a wish
Give your advice
I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well and feel unhappy. Here is some advice …
It's a pity that … I ‘d like to give you some suggestions.
Long time no see. I hear that you are not very well and feel unhappy thes days. I have some advice for you.
Beginning: How to lead to the topic
Body: How to give advice
…should/shouldn't do…
You'd better do…
It's best to do…
It's a good idea/way to do…
It's important/necessary to do…
Why not do/How about doing…
I hope you can have a healthy lifestyle. In this way, you can be healthier and healthier.
I hope you will be better and enjoy your life.
I believe if you take my advice, you will be happy and healthy.
Ending: How to make a wish
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Write a passage in 8 minutes
While-writing
Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
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For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs.(1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic. (1 point)
Para : I have written at least three advice(4 points)
Para : I have made a wish(1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
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Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense correctly. (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher.(1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. For example，You'd better… It's necessary to do sth (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
3
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15
80
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Sharing Time
Evaluate(评价) your group members’ compositions, then show them to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. language(语言)
6.fluency( 流畅）
Show Time
Post-writing
Summary
1.Person
2.Tense
3.Text
4. Details
5.Structure
Before writing
Focus on
Summary
Evaluation
1. structure
2. handwriting
3. points
4. grammar
5. language
6.fluency
Focus on
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
Post-writing
Sample
Dear Alice,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well and feel unhappy. Here is advice about how to keep healthy.
A balanced diet can help you to keep in good health.You'd better eat more healthv food.It is good for you to eat a lot of vegetables, fruit and drink milk every dav. Besides, you should do more exercise, such as playing ball games , running , swimming and so on. Good food and exercise will be helpful.In addition, you also need enough sleep.It is really important. What 's more , keep yourself happy.Try to smile every day
In a word, I hope you will be better and enjoy your life.
Yours,
Martin