Marking Ladders
Name
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content, grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic (1 point)
Para : I have written my opinion (1) I have written at least 3 reasons (3)
Para :I have made a summary (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense correctly. (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total score
What can I do to improve my composition next time Unit 3 Could you please clean your room
Section B 3a-3c Writing
Name
Ⅰ.Writing topic
A study from Harvard University shows that children who love to do
housework are more likely to be happy.So should children do the chores
What are your opinions and reasons Please write a passage within 80 words.
Ⅱ.Analyse the topic
Person: Tense：
Text: Details：
Structure：
Beginning:
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Body:
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Ending:
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Ⅲ.Finish the First draft
Ⅳ.Finish the second draft(共23张PPT)
Unit 3
Could you please clean your room
writing
Do you often help your parents do the chores
What do you often do to help your parents
What do you often do to help your parents
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do the dishes
sweep the floor
take out the rubbish
make the bed
fold the clothes
clean the living room
Pro(正方观点）
develop children's
independence
(独立)
teach them how to look
after themselves
help them understand the idea of fairness(公平)
everyone should try to keep the environment clean and tidy
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cons(反方观点）
housework is a waste of time
children have enough stress at school, they have to study hard
it's the parents' job to provide a clean and comfortable environment
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Writing Topic
A study from Harvard University shows that
children who love to do housework are more likely
to be happy.So should children do the chores
What are your opinions and reasons Please write a
passage within 80 words.
Person(人称）
The first person
Tense(时态）
The simple present/future tense
Text(文体）
A passage
Details(细节）
1.write a passage
（opinions and reasons）
2.80 words
What should we think about
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
What should we think about
Beginning:
Lead to the topic.
Make a summary
show reasons
(show opinions)
(repeat opinions)
Beginning:
1.As a middle school student, I think it's necessary
for us to do the chores. Let me tell you my reasons.
2.Some people think that children needn't do any
housework. Different people have different ideas.
I think/believe that ...
3.Nowadays many children don't like doing chores.
In my opinion, I think children should/shouldn't ...
/I think it's fair/unfair for children to...
Body:
1.I think children should/shouldn't ...
because... /For example...
2.It's good/bad for children to do the chores. ...
First... Second... What's more/Besides...
In addition...Finally/At last...
3.If childern do/don't do the chores, they will...
Ending:
1.In a word, I think it's good/bad for children to do
the chores...
2.All in all, I think we should.../ I don't think we
should ....
3.I think it's our duty to do the chores.../I think it's
not necessary for us to do the chores...
Write a passage in 15 minutes
While-writing
Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
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For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group
check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure
and
content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs.(1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic. (1 point)
Para : I have written my opinion(1)
I have written at least 3 reasons(3)
Para : I have made a summary(1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
3
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1
1
2
4
3
1
1
1
Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense correctly. (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher.(1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
3
1
1
1
15
80
1
Sharing Time
Evaluate(评价) your group members’ compositions, then show them to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. language(语言)
6.fluency( 流畅）
Post-writing
Summary
1.Person
2.Tense
3.Text
4. Details
5.Structure
Before writing
Focus on
Summary
Evaluation
1. structure
2. handwriting
3. points
4. grammar
5. language
6.fluency
Focus on
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
Post-writing
Sample
Some people think that children needn't do any housework.
Different people have different ideas. I think that it's necessary for
children to do the chores.
First, doing chores helps to develop children's independence and
teaches them how to look after themselves. Second, it also helps
them to understand the idea of fairness. What's more, children should
know that everyone should try to keep the environment clean and tidy.
At last, doing some housework can keep you healthy and strong.
In my opinion, it is important for kids to do the chores. The earlier
kids learn to be independent, the better it is for their future.
Post-writing
Sample
Some people think that children needn't do any housework.
Different people have different ideas. I think that it's not necessary for children to do the chores.
First, these days children already have enough stress from school and they have to study hard. Second, housework is a waste of time. It's not important for kids to learn to do housework now. When they get older, they will have to do chores. Finally, it's the parents' job to provide a clean and comfortable environment.
In my opinion, it is not important for kids to do the chores. Now,the most important thing for them is to study hard.
