Unit4 Why don’t you talk to your parents
Section B 3a-3c Writing
Name
Ⅰ.Writing topic
Nowadays, more and more children take part in after-school classes,
should children take part in after-school classes What are your opinions
and reasons Please write a passage within 80 words.
Ⅱ.Analyse the topic
Person: Tense：
Text: Details：
Structure：
Beginning:
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Body:
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Ending:
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Ⅲ.Finish the First draft
Ⅳ.Finish the second draftMarking Ladders
Name
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content, grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic (1 point)
Para : I have written my opinion (1) I have written at least 3 reasons (3)
Para :I have made a summary (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense correctly. (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total score
What can I do to improve my composition next time (共22张PPT)
Unit 4
Why don’t you talk to your parents
writing
problems in life
don’t get enough sleep
have too much
homework
have too many after-school classes(课外课)
…
get into a fight
with classmate
quarrel(争吵) with friends
get low grades
in exams
advice
don’t get enough sleep
have too much
homework
have too many after-school classes(课外课)
…
get into a fight
with classmate
quarrel(争吵) with friends
get low grades
in exams
Writing Topic
Nowadays, more and more children take part
in after-school classes, should children take part
in after-school classes What are your opinions
and reasons Please write a passage within 80
words.
Person(人称）
The first/third person
Tense(时态）
The simple present/future tense
Text(文体）
A passage
Details(细节）
1.write a passage
（opinions and reasons）
2.80 words
What should we think about
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
What should we think about
Beginning:
Lead to the topic.
Make a summary
show reasons
(show opinions)
(repeat opinions)
Beginning:
1.As a middle school student, I think it's necessary
for children to...Here are my reasons.
2.In my opinion, it is important for children to...
3.I don't really agree with...let me tell you my reasons.
Body:
1.I think children should/shouldn't ...
because... /For example...
2.First... Second... What's more/Besides...
In addition...Finally/At last...
3.If children ..., they will...
Ending:
1.All in all, in order to be a successful person, I
believe ...
2.In a word, I think it's useful for children to...
because as the saying goes “Practice makes perfect!”
3.In my opinion, I believe how to learn and how to
be a happy learner are more important than taking
after-school classes.
Write a passage in 15 minutes
While-writing
Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
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For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group
check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure
and
content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs.(1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic. (1 point)
Para : I have written my opinion(1)
I have written at least 3 reasons(3)
Para : I have made a summary(1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
3
1
1
1
2
4
3
1
1
1
Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense correctly. (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher.(1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
3
1
1
1
15
80
1
Sharing Time
Evaluate(评价) your group members’ compositions, then show them to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. language(语言)
6.fluency( 流畅）
Post-writing
Summary
1.Person
2.Tense
3.Text
4. Details
5.Structure
Before writing
Focus on
Summary
Evaluation
1. structure
2. handwriting
3. points
4. grammar
5. language
6.fluency
Focus on
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
Post-writing
Sample
Nowadays, it's common to take after-school classes. In my opinion,
students should take after-school classes so that they can be more
excellent.
First, it can help students study better. Sometimes we may forget
what we learned in class. After-school classes can help us study them
again. Second, students can study more by taking after-school classes.
Many after-school classes train childern's special skills. At last, It's a
good way for children to improve their grades as quickly as possible.
In a word, I think it's useful for children to take after-school classes.
because as the saying goes “Practice makes perfect!”
Post-writing
Sample
Nowadays, it's common to take after-school classes. But I don't think children should take after-school classes. Let me tell you my reasons.
First, most parents hope that their children can improve their grades by taking after-school classes, but they don't realize their children can get good grades by listening to the teacher carefully in class and finding a good way of learning.What's more, I think children's health and happiness are more important. So I don't think parents should push their children so hard. Finally, children need enough time to relax, because they already have much stress at school.
All in all, to be a successful person, I believe how to learn
and how to be a happy learner are more important than
taking after-school classes.
