Marking Ladders
Name
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content, grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para ______ : I have led to the topic.Introduce the name of the book. (1 point)
Para ______: I have written the process including name, writer, main character, main plots and comments. . (3 points)
Para _:I have showed the feelings (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense correctly. (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. (2 points)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total score
What can I do to improve my composition next time Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet
Section B 3a-3c Writing
Name
Ⅰ.Writing topic
英语周报即将开设一个“书籍”的专栏，现向全校学生征稿。请你写一篇80词左右的英语书评，用英语介绍一本自己喜欢的书并投稿。
问题提示：
1.What's your favorite book
2.Who is the writer of the book
3. Who is the main character of the book
4.What’s the book about
5. What do you think of the book
Ⅱ.Analyse the topic
Person: Tense：
Text: Details：
Structure：
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Ⅲ.Finish the First draft
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(
)Ⅳ.Finish the second draft(共19张PPT)
Unit 8
Writing
Do you like reading books
What books do you know
Treasure Island 《金银岛》
Alice in Wonderland 《爱丽丝梦游仙境》
Little Women 《小妇人》
Oliver Twist 《雾都孤儿》
Robinson Crusoe 《鲁滨逊漂流记》
Tom Sawyer 《汤姆.索亚历险记》
Harry Potter 《哈利.波特》
...
Analyze the structure: how to write
Do you know Harry Potter
It’s one of my favorite books and it’s written by J.K.
Rowlng. Harry Potter is the main character in this book. He
is a magical school student who wears glasses and has no
parents. At school, he has two good friends, there are Rone
and Henry. This book mainly talks about Harry’s school life
and adventure(冒险) story. He is brave and is known by
everyone because he is the only person who will not die by
devil(魔鬼). The book is so educational that I’ve read it
twice. When I meet difficulities in my life, Harry’s spirit will
encourage me to overcome the difficulties.
If you haven’t read this book yet, I hope you can have a
try. After reading it, you will find a wonderful world.
the writer of the book
the name of the book
the main character of the book
what the book is about
what the writer thinks of the book
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）
show the feelings
Analyze the language: what to write
Do you know Harry Potter
It’s one of my favorite books and it’s written by J.K.
Rowlng. Harry Potter is the main character in this book. He
is a magical school student who wears glasses and has no
parents. At school, he has two good friends, there are Rone
and Henry. This book mainly talks about Harry’s school life
and adventure(冒险) story. He is brave and is known by
everyone because he is the only person who will not die by
devil(魔鬼). The book is so educational that I’ve read it
twice. When I meet difficulities in my life, Harry’s spirit will
encourage me to overcome the difficulties.
If you haven’t read this book yet, I hope you can have a
try. After reading it, you will find a wondrful world.
the book is written by... 这本书是...写的
object clause 宾从
be known by sb.被某人知道
so...that太...以至于...
If 引导的条件状语从句
What’s your favorite book
Who is the writer of the book
What is the book about
What do you think of the book
name&writer
main plots(情节)
comments(评论)
Who is the main character of the book
main character
How(思维导图）
英语周报即将开设一个“书籍”的专栏，现向全校学生征稿。请你写一篇80词左右的英语书评，用英语介绍一本自己喜欢的书并投稿。
Writing Topic
Person(人称）
The third/first person
Tense(时态）
The simple present tense
Text(文体）
A book review
Details(细节）
1.write a book review
(name/writer/main character/
main plots/comments)
2.80 words
What should we think about
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
What should we think about
Beginning:
(introduce the name of the book)
Your feelings
Comments
Main Plots
The writer
Lead to the topic.
Write a passage in 15 minutes
While-writing
已开始计时
时间到
Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
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For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group
check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure
and
content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic. Introduce the name of the book.
(1 point)
Para : I have written the writer and the main character of the book, main plots and comments
(3 points)
Para : I have showed my feelings (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
3
1
1
1
2
4
3
1
1
1
Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense correctly.
(3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses.
For example, I like…best ,the reason is that…. I like…best ,one of the main reasons is that…. I like…best, because…
(1 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
3
1
1
1
15
80
1
Sharing Time
Evaluate(评价) your group members’ compositions, then show them to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. language(语言)
6.fluency( 流畅）
Post-writing
Summary
1.Person
2.Tense
3.Text
4. Details
5.Structure
Before writing
Focus on
Summary
Evaluation
1. structure
2. handwriting
3. points
4. grammar
5. language
6.fluency
Focus on
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
Post-writing
Sample
Books are the ladder of human progress. I like reading. And My favorite book is
Harry Potter. Do you want to know more about it Let me tell you.
It’s one of my favorite books and it’s written by J.K. Rowling. Harry Potter is the
main character in this book. He is a magical school student who wears glasses and
has no parents. At school, he has two good friends, there are Rone and Henry. This
book mainly talks about Harry’s school life and adventure(冒险) story. He is brave
and is known by everyone because he is the only person who will not die by devil(魔
鬼).The book is so educational that I’ve read it twice.
When I meet difficulties in my life, Harry’s spirit will encourage me to overcome
the difficulties. If you haven’t read this book yet, I hope you can have a try. After
reading it, you will find a wonderful world.Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet
Writing (Questionnaire)
What's your favorite book
_________________________________________________.
Who is the writer of the book
_________________________________________________.
Who is the main character of the book
__________________________________________________.
What’s the book about
__________________________________________________
__________________________________________________
__________________________________________________.
What do you think of the book
__________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________.
