外研版（2019）必修第二册 学案Unit5 On the road 解透单元写作讲义
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Unit5解透单元写作
主题写作——旅行与见闻
1.写作任务
假定你是李华。你的美国网友Eric打算下个月到中国来旅游。最近，他来信向你询问来中国旅游时的注意事项。请你用英语给他回封邮件，就以下问题给他提出建议：
（1）交通工具的选择；
（2）购物付款方式；
（3）天气、住宿等。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll visit China next month.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hoping my suggestions will be helpful to you and looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.写作思路（一审、二定、三明确）
（1）一审：体裁、结构与主题
体裁：应用——求助信
结构：三段
第一段：导入+写信目的（提供建议）
第二段：具体建议
第三段：结束语
主题：中国旅游时的建议
（2）二定：时态与人称
时态：现在时态
人称：第一人称和第二人称
（3）三明确：写作要点
第一段：导入+写信目的（向Eric提供中国旅游时的建议）
第二段：具体建议（交通工具的选择；购物付款方式；天气、住宿等）
第三段：结束语
3.素材整理
（1）关键词语
determine the route确定路线
keep.in mind记住
an increasing number of越来越多的
see sb. off为某人送行
contribute to引起，导致
cut down减少
put up sb.留某人住宿
on holiday（在）度假
say goodbye to sb.与某人道别
pack up收拾行李
transfer from.to..把……换为
be struck by…被…迷住
have a good trip旅行顺利
masses of大量的
tourist attraction旅游景点
get close to nature接近大自然
arrange accommodation安排住宿
broaden one’s horizon开拓视野
a dream trip梦想之旅
a summer resort避暑胜地
appeal to对…有吸引力
dramatic landscape壮丽的风景
travel brochure旅行指南
beyond description难以形容
book a single/double room预订一个单人/双人房间
carry out实施
check in登记入住
catch one’s eye吸引某人的眼球
have a good time/have fun玩得很开心
improve traffic safety awareness提高交通安全意识
fall in love with爱上……，喜欢上
travel agency旅行社
can’t wait to do.迫不及待做
（2）完成句子
① ________ ________ ________you should ________ ________ ________and the vehicle ________ ________.首先，你应该提前确定路线和车辆。
② Only in this way ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________.只有这样，你才能欣赏到激动人心的景色。
③You can ________ ________ ________ ________ boat and then hike to your destination.你可以由飞机转乘船，然后步行到目的地
④When buying some souvenirs ________ ________ ________, any method of payment will do, such as WeChat cash, credit card, etc.当你想在你的预算内买一些纪念品，任何一种付款方式都可以，如微信、现金、信用卡等。
⑤It is necessary to ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________. 注意当地的天气是有必要的
⑥ There will be ________ ________ ________ ________ and small restaurants for you to check in and buy food.有大量的连锁酒店和小餐馆可以供你登记住宿和购买食物。
Keys: ① To begin with; determine the route; in advance② can you enjoy the dramatic landscape ③ transfer from flight to ④in your budget ⑤pay attention to the indigenous weather ⑥ masses of hotel chains
4. 高分作文（注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇）
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、要点全面的短文。
Dear Eric,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll visit China next month. Here are some of my suggestions for you.
To begin with, you should determine the route and the vehicle in advance. Only in this way can you enjoy the dramatic landscape. For example, you can transfer from flight to boat and then hike to your destination. Secondly, when buying some souvenirs in your budget, you can choose any method of payment, such as WeChat, cash, credit card, etc. Thirdly, it is necessary to pay attention to the indigenous weather. Besides, there will be masses of hotel chains and small restaurants for you to check in and buy food
Hoping my suggestions will be helpful to you and looking forward your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
第一段：写信目的
第二段：具体建议
第三段：结束语
only+状语（in this way）位于句首，主句用部分倒装结枸的倒装语序
when引导的时间状语从句的省略句式
it is necessary to do sth，it是形式主语，to do sth.是真正的主语。
5.佳作背诵
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将到北京进行为期一周的旅游，他发邮件给你请你推荐合适的交通方式及北京的一些景点。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括:
（1）推荐合适的交通方式
（2）推荐两到三处北京的景点；
（3）表达祝愿
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear Terry,
Knowing that you’re going to Beijing for vacation, I’m more than pleased to give you some advice.
___________________________________________________________________________________
I can t wait to meet you! May you have an unforgettable experience!
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Terry,
Knowing that you’ re going to Beijing for vacation, I’m more than pleased to give you some advice.
I suggest taking the flight to Beijing and then transfer to the indigenous vehicle to your hotel chain. On your arrival I recommend hiking to the Great Wall with a professional tour guide, a symbol of ancient Chinese civilization to enjoy its dramatic landscape along the way. Of course, it is necessary to plan the route well ahead of time The next destination is the Summer Palace, which is the largest and best-preserved royal garden in the world. I bet you will fall in love with it.
I can’t wait to meet you! May you have an unforgettable experience!
Yours,
Li Hua
20 / 20
主题写作——旅行与见闻
1.写作任务
假定你是李华。你的美国网友Eric打算下个月到中国来旅游。最近，他来信向你询问来中国旅游时的注意事项。请你用英语给他回封邮件，就以下问题给他提出建议：
（1）交通工具的选择；
（2）购物付款方式；
（3）天气、住宿等。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll visit China next month.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hoping my suggestions will be helpful to you and looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.写作思路（一审、二定、三明确）
（1）一审：体裁、结构与主题
体裁：应用——求助信
结构：三段
第一段：导入+写信目的（提供建议）
第二段：具体建议
第三段：结束语
主题：中国旅游时的建议
（2）二定：时态与人称
时态：现在时态
人称：第一人称和第二人称
（3）三明确：写作要点
第一段：导入+写信目的（向Eric提供中国旅游时的建议）
第二段：具体建议（交通工具的选择；购物付款方式；天气、住宿等）
第三段：结束语
3.素材整理
（1）关键词语
determine the route确定路线
keep.in mind记住
an increasing number of越来越多的
see sb. off为某人送行
contribute to引起，导致
cut down减少
put up sb.留某人住宿
on holiday（在）度假
say goodbye to sb.与某人道别
pack up收拾行李
transfer from.to..把……换为
be struck by…被…迷住
have a good trip旅行顺利
masses of大量的
tourist attraction旅游景点
get close to nature接近大自然
arrange accommodation安排住宿
broaden one’s horizon开拓视野
a dream trip梦想之旅
a summer resort避暑胜地
appeal to对…有吸引力
dramatic landscape壮丽的风景
travel brochure旅行指南
beyond description难以形容
book a single/double room预订一个单人/双人房间
carry out实施
check in登记入住
catch one’s eye吸引某人的眼球
have a good time/have fun玩得很开心
improve traffic safety awareness提高交通安全意识
fall in love with爱上……，喜欢上
travel agency旅行社
can’t wait to do.迫不及待做
（2）完成句子
① ________ ________ ________you should ________ ________ ________and the vehicle ________ ________.首先，你应该提前确定路线和车辆。
② Only in this way ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________.只有这样，你才能欣赏到激动人心的景色。
③You can ________ ________ ________ ________ boat and then hike to your destination.你可以由飞机转乘船，然后步行到目的地
④When buying some souvenirs ________ ________ ________, any method of payment will do, such as WeChat cash, credit card, etc.当你想在你的预算内买一些纪念品，任何一种付款方式都可以，如微信、现金、信用卡等。
⑤It is necessary to ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________. 注意当地的天气是有必要的
⑥ There will be ________ ________ ________ ________ and small restaurants for you to check in and buy food.有大量的连锁酒店和小餐馆可以供你登记住宿和购买食物。
Keys: ① To begin with; determine the route; in advance② can you enjoy the dramatic landscape ③ transfer from flight to ④in your budget ⑤pay attention to the indigenous weather ⑥ masses of hotel chains
4. 高分作文（注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇）
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、要点全面的短文。
Dear Eric,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll visit China next month. Here are some of my suggestions for you.
To begin with, you should determine the route and the vehicle in advance. Only in this way can you enjoy the dramatic landscape. For example, you can transfer from flight to boat and then hike to your destination. Secondly, when buying some souvenirs in your budget, you can choose any method of payment, such as WeChat, cash, credit card, etc. Thirdly, it is necessary to pay attention to the indigenous weather. Besides, there will be masses of hotel chains and small restaurants for you to check in and buy food
Hoping my suggestions will be helpful to you and looking forward your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
第一段：写信目的
第二段：具体建议
第三段：结束语
only+状语（in this way）位于句首，主句用部分倒装结枸的倒装语序
when引导的时间状语从句的省略句式
it is necessary to do sth，it是形式主语，to do sth.是真正的主语。
5.佳作背诵
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将到北京进行为期一周的旅游，他发邮件给你请你推荐合适的交通方式及北京的一些景点。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括:
（1）推荐合适的交通方式
（2）推荐两到三处北京的景点；
（3）表达祝愿
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear Terry,
Knowing that you’re going to Beijing for vacation, I’m more than pleased to give you some advice.
___________________________________________________________________________________
I can t wait to meet you! May you have an unforgettable experience!
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Terry,
Knowing that you’ re going to Beijing for vacation, I’m more than pleased to give you some advice.
I suggest taking the flight to Beijing and then transfer to the indigenous vehicle to your hotel chain. On your arrival I recommend hiking to the Great Wall with a professional tour guide, a symbol of ancient Chinese civilization to enjoy its dramatic landscape along the way. Of course, it is necessary to plan the route well ahead of time The next destination is the Summer Palace, which is the largest and best-preserved royal garden in the world. I bet you will fall in love with it.
I can’t wait to meet you! May you have an unforgettable experience!
Yours,
Li Hua
20 / 20