Unit5 Writing 主题写作讲与练
一、写作题目
假定你是李华,在海南旅游了不到七天,收到朋友Sam的来信,询问你的旅游经历。请用明信片的方式给他介绍旅游情况。
注意:
(1)词数100左右:
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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思路点拨
主题 旅游行程 体裁 应用文
人称 以第一人称为主 时态 以一般过去时时态为主
布局 第一段:介绍旅游经历; 第二段:介绍个人感受。
遣词造句
一、用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1.________n.(陆上的)风景,景致
2. ________n.大量,许多
3. ________此刻,当时
4. ________迫不及待做某事
二、本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
(1)我和家人在海南旅行了不到七天。
I ________ ________ ________ ________ ________for less than seven days in Hainan with my family.
(2)那段时间,我待在三亚。它位于中国的南部。
During that period of time, I was staying at Sanya. It ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________.
(3)下飞机后,我们迫不及待地欣赏美丽的景色。
After we ________ ________ ________ ________ couldn't wait to enjoy the beautiful landscape.
(4)当我在海滩附近的一家海鲜餐厅吃午饭时,我与一个来自非洲的年轻人成为朋友。
When I ________ ________ ________ at a seafood restaurant near the beach, I made friends with a young man from Africa.
(5)他被中国文化吸引,已经游览了几处名胜古迹。
He ________ ________ Chinese culture and had travelled several ________ ________ ________.
2.句式升级
(6)用定语从句改写句(2)
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(7)用定语从句合并句(1)和句(6)
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(8)用状语从句的省略改写句(4)
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(9)用定语从句合并句(5)和句(8)
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连句成篇
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二、实战演练
假定你是李华,你和父母正在英国伦敦进行为期一周的旅游。你的新西兰笔友Eric想知道你的旅途见闻。请你根据以下提示制作一张明信片寄给他,内容包括:
(1)概述旅行的景点;
(2)分享照片。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
(3)明信片的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
10 May
Dear Eric,
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Li Hua
参考答案:
遣词造句
一、用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1.landscape 2.mass 3.at the moment
4.can't wait to do sth.
二、本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
(1)have been on a trip
(2)lies in the south of China
(3)got off the plane
(4)was having lunch
(5)was attracted to; places of interest
2.句式升级
(6)During that period of time, I was staying at Sanya which lies in the south of China.
(7)I have been on a trip for less than seven days in Hainan with my family, during which I was staying at Sanya which lies in the south of China.
(8)When having lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach, I made friends with a young man from Africa.
(9)When having lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach, I made friends with a young man from Africa who was attracted to Chinese culture and had travelled several places of interest.
连句成篇
参考范文
5 May
Hi Sam,
I have been on a trip for less than seven days in Hainan with my family, during which I was staying at Sanya which lies in the south of China. We went thereby plane. After we got off the plane, we couldn't wait to enjoy the beautiful landscape. You could see a mass of visitors on the island. We were excited to see some special trees and plants along the road. When having lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach, I made friends with a young man from Africa who was attracted to Chinese culture and had travelled several places of interest.
It is definitely an exciting trip. If I have a chance, I will be more than happy to visit the place again.
Li Hua
二、实战演练
One possible version:
10 May
Dear Eric,
I am having a one-week trip in London with my parents now. We're having a great time during the trip. We visited the British Museum on the first day, which had a great number of amazing collections. We also went to Buckingham Palace, which every traveler couldn't miss when visiting London. Tomorrow we plan to go to Hyde Park and have a picnic there. So many famous attractions in London!I sent you an email last night with some photos of my trip that I'd like to share with you. I hope you have received it.
Li Hua
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