10【好题精选】书面表达 2023年九年级下学期英语专题周周练(第一期)(四川成都)(含解析)

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10:【好题精选】书面表达 -2023年九年级下学期英语专题周周练(第一期)(四川成都)
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
一、话题作文
1.Due to the popularity of smart phones, it’s more and more convenient to use phones to do many things. With the help of free WIFI, people are used to using smart phones to chat, looking up the information they need or going shopping. But there are also some disadvantages or risks of doing so. Please write an article to talk about your opinion of using smart phones with free WIFI and your own experience should be included.
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二、材料作文
2.每年的6月6日是全国爱眼日,请你结合学校英语社的爱眼宣传海报,写一篇文章,结合学生近视现状,分析近视的原因,介绍良好习惯并推荐专家建议,号召同学们养成良好的用眼习惯,保护好视力。
注意:
1.你的文章应包含以上所有信息;
2.不能出现真实校名和姓名;
3.词数:100词左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:myopia (n.) 近视:nearsighted (adj.) 近视的;regular (adj.) 定期的
For a More Beautiful World in Your Eyes
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3.从小学到现在,我们一直在变化中成长。请你创造一个节日,来庆贺自己的积极成长或者改善自己的消极变化。请以自己创造的节日名称为文章标题,结合图示内容,写一篇作文。
提示:
1.只需从众多变化中选择一个来作为自己创造节日的依据;
2.图示中的所有信息都需要谈论到;
3.字数不超过200词。
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4.现在有很多学校给班级提供了一块菜地,培养学生们吃苦耐劳的精神。请你结合下图,写一篇短文,并谈谈劳动带给家长和学生的变化。
参考词汇:劳动labor 校园农场school farm
要求:1. 短文应包含以上所有信息和图片中的相关要点;
2. 短文应格式正确,语句通顺,句式多样;
3. 词数100词左右。首句已给出,不计入总词数。
These days, many schools provide each class with a piece of field to plant vegetables to help more students get hard-working spirit. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、电子邮件
5.树德实验中学学生会面向初三学生招聘学习部长(the minister of learning)。假如你是李华,你认为自己有能力胜任此项工作。请根据以下思维导图提示给学生会主席(the chairman of the Student Union)写一封邮件,向其表达竞聘意愿,要求包括所有要点。
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四、看图作文
6.最近,某网站针对人们最常用的手机应用程序(app)做了调查,下图是相关的统计结果。请根据结果显示,简要说明各类app的使用情况,谈谈你的看法并介绍自己最常用的app。
要求:
1. 逻辑清晰,语言连贯,语法正确;
2. 100词左右。
What apps do you often use
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7.假设你是李华,你的笔友Mike对中国传统文化十分感兴趣,他尤其喜欢中国传统工艺品木雕。他将在明年到中国学习,为了让他更好地解中国,请结合下图给他写一封信介绍中国近年来的发展变化并且简单介绍木雕。
Payment Communication
In the past
Now
木雕 wood carving
历史 4000多年
制作 过程 雕刻→打磨→上色
寓意 ……
要求:
1. 注意呈现主题句
2. 短文涵盖图表所有内容
3.110词左右(格式已给出,不记入总词数)
参考词汇:雕刻carve;微信WeChat;现金cash
Dear Mike,
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五、书信作文
8.你即将成为一名高一的新生,你所在的高中为了新生的多元发展,想开设一些学生社团,喜欢发展兴趣爱好的你向校长写了一封信件,申请创建一个俱乐部,内容包括。
要求及注意事项:
1. 文段的开头已经给出,请你补出标题、续写剩余部分(主体和结尾);
2. 参考提示内容,可适当取舍并发挥;
3. 书写工整,语言正确,语句通顺,语篇前后连贯且合乎逻辑;
4. 文中不得出现与你身份相关的真实个人信息;
5. 词数:不少于70词。
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9.假如你是李华,你三年没见的美国笔友Tony,打算春节到成都旅游,他将于2023年1月15日上午10点到达成都双流国际机场。你到时会穿着红色外套在1号出口处等他。在你给他的回信中还会包括以下内容,同时为了提升你的英语,请在信中礼貌地向他请教两条提升英语的方法。
注意:
1.词数:100左右;
2.开头已经给出,不计入总词汇之中。
3.参考词汇:成都双流国际机场 (Chengdu Shuangliu International Airport),1 号出口处 (Exit 1)
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
10.虽然疫情还没有结束,第31届大运会将于6月26日在成都举行。届时来自不同国家的大学生们将在这里一展身手。假如你是李华,组委会正在招募志愿者,请以Volunteer for the Universiade为题,根据以下图示向组委会写一封应聘信。
要求:
1、文章应涵盖所有要点。内容简洁明了,衔接过渡自然。
2、文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称
3、词数:100词左右。
参考词汇: World University Games / Universiade 世界大学生运动会
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六、讲稿
11.这学期,同学们体验了不一样的学习方式。英语课上,老师请你作为班级代表发言交流。请根据以下图示,写一篇英文发言稿分享你的心得体会。
注意:
1.请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格。(一空一词);
2.须全面反映图文信息;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.词数80-100字。
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12.上周末,你班各小组就“How to get on well with others ”开展线上讨论,不同的人有不同的观点或做法。请你根据下面WeChat群聊页面信息在本周一的主题班会上做汇报发言。
Group(5) Afternoon 3:32 Jean I think understanding others is very important because different people have different ways to do things. Victor I should be not only a good listener but also a good speaker, so I can share both happiness and sadness with others. Emily I believe being honest with others is the key point, because a good relationship with others is based on honesty. Billy I must be careful enough not to trouble others because bad behaviors hurt the relationship between others.…
要求:
1. 陈述图表中不同观点或做法及理由;
2. 表述你的两个观点或做法及两点理由(须与图中不同)。
注意:
1. 须全面反映图表信息,但不能完全照抄;
2. 文中不能出现真实校名和地名;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 词数100左右。
Dear classmates, Good afternoon! I’m honored to report my group’s online discussion to you about how to get on well with others. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案:
1.例文:
Due to the popularity of smart phones, it’s more and more convenient to use phones to do many things. However, everything has two sides.
On one hand, with the help of free WIFI, we are used to using smart phones to chat, looking up the information we need or going shopping. Smart phones are used to store more personal information, too. Even we can use them to put some money into your account instead of going to the bank. It’s more popular to use smart phones to listen to songs and watch TV plays.
On the other hand, smart phones expose some disadvantages and risks to us. It’s bad for our study, work and bodies if we watch mobile phones too long. I also think we had better not use smart phones in public. It’s impolite to play with the smart phone in public. Once I had a party with my friends. I was watching a play on my mobile phone when my friend talked to me. I didn’t hear him. I didn’t know it until a friend next to me told me about it. I felt very embarrassed. What’s more, sometimes it’s dangerous to use smart phones, too. Some strangers always cheat others with smart phones. So don’t lend money to strangers on the Internet.
In a word, we should use smart phones properly.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为话题作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“英文信息提示”中关于“your opinion of using smart phones with free WIFI and your own experience”的要点及图画中的提示词,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“Due to the popularity of smart phones, it’s more and more convenient to use phones to do many things.”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体描述写作内容。从“使用智能手机的优势:聊天、查信息、购物、存钱、听歌、看电视;使用智能手机的弊端:不利于学生的学习和身体、公共场合最好不使用手机及我在公共场合使用手机的尴尬的例子、使用手机的危险等”几个方面重点介绍我对免费WIFI下使用智能手机的观点及自己使用智能手机尴尬的经历;
第三步,书写结语。表达“我们应正确使用智能手机”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① due to 由于
② more and more convenient 越来越方便
③ on one hand, on the other hand 一方面,另一方面
④ with the help of 在……的帮助下
⑤ be used to doing 习惯于做某事
⑥ had better not do sth 最好不要做某事
⑦ What’s more 而且
⑧ in a word 总之
[高分句型]
① It’s more and more convenient to use phones to do many things. (it’s + 形容词 + to do sth. 形式主语句型)
② Smart phones are used to store more personal information, too. (“be + 过去分词” 含被动语态的句子)
③ I didn’t know it until a friend next to me told me about it.(not ... until句型)
2.参考范文
For a More Beautiful World in Your Eyes
June 6 is National Eye Care Day. A survey shows a bad situation: about 38% of fourth graders are nearsighted, about 68% for eighth graders and about 81% for those in high school.
Bad habits cause myopia. Using phones in bed hurts eyes. Lying on the sofa while reading is also harmful.
We should develop good habits for a change. Let’s do eye exercises often and have regular eyesight tests. We should follow the 20/20/20 rule: After 20 minutes of computer use, we should look at something green 20 feet away for 20 seconds.
It’s time to take action for a more beautiful world in our eyes. (词数108)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据海报中的“信息提示”分析当前的学生近视现状,及原因,并给出建议,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍调查的结果;
第二步,分析学生近视的原因;
第三步,就“保护视力”提出建议;
第四步,呼吁大家行动。
[亮点词汇]
①on the sofa在沙发上
②develop good habits养成好习惯
③do eye exercises 做眼保健操
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①Lying on the sofa while reading is also harmful.(动名词作主语)
②It’s time to take action for a more beautiful world in our eyes.(it固定句型;动词不定式作主语)
3.例文
Laughter Festival
From primary school to now, we have been growing in change. I’m tall now. I am also very outgoing now. I like reading. I think reading can help me learn a lot of knowledge. I also like playing basketball very much now. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. All of these bring me much happiness, so I want to name June 6 as Laughter Festival. On this day, no matter what happens or who we meet, we should laugh to express our joy. Because there is nothing happier than laughter. I want to express our feelings and relax ourselves through laughter.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:本文以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍自己发生的变化以及自己创造的节日,可适当增加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己发生的变化都有哪些;
第二步,介绍自己创造的节日,包括节日的名字、日期、活动以及背后意义。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
②play basketball打篮球
[高分句型]
①I think reading can help me learn a lot of knowledge. (省略that的宾语从句以及动名词作主语)
②If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball.(if引导的条件状语从句)
4.例文
These days, many schools provide each class with a piece of field to plant vegetables to help more students get hard-working spirit.
In the past, parents paid more attention to their children’s grades, but now they often encourage their children to do housework. As for the students, they used to study hard every day, and there was no time for them to develop their hobbies or relax. But now students have less homework, and they can take up their hobbies, exercise and so on in their spare time or weekends. Now students have an extra labor class. Through this, students can master many useful life skills. In addition, they can also experience the hard work of farmers. At home, helping parents do housework can reduce the burden of parents.
In a word, labor is beneficial and honorable, and it is of great benefit to our growth.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示写一篇作文,介绍劳动带给家长和学生的变化。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍父母和学生以前以及现在的变化;
第二步,具体介绍通过劳动学生可以获得什么;
第三步,最后表达你的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
③in addition此外
[高分句型]
①But now students have less homework, and they can take up their hobbies, exercise and so on in their spare time or weekends.(and连接两个并列结构)
②helping parents do housework can reduce the burden of parents.(动名词作主语)
5.例文
Dear chairman,
I’m writing this email to apply the position—the minister of learning.
My name is Li Hua. I like reading all kinds of books from which I get much knowledge. My favourite subject is maths because I’m interested in those numbers. As a student of Junior Grade 3, I’m more confident and helpful than before. I’ve made great progress in my study, and I have more time and energy to help other students. If I get the position, I will divide my classmates into different study groups. They can help and encourage each other in this way. Besides, I will share my ways of study to help those who have difficulty in learning the subjects well. At last, I have some questions about the interview. What should I do to perform well in the interview and what kind of clothes should I wear
I’m looking forward to your reply and I hope you can give me a chance. Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是篇应用文写作,需写为邮件格式;
② 时态:时态为一般现在时;
③ 提示:写作主题已给出,写作时注意根据思维导图里的提示要点展开叙述,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明来信目的;
第二步,详细介绍自己兴趣、进步、计划等内容;
第三步,书写结语,表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
① be interested in对……感兴趣
② have difficulty in在……有困难
③ look forward to期望
[高分句型]
① My favourite subject is maths because I’m interested in those numbers.(原因状语从句)
② If I get the position, I will divide my classmates into different study groups.(条件状语从句)
③ Besides, I will share my ways of study to help those who have difficulty in learning the subjects well.(定语从句)
6.例文
Recently, a survey was done about the top 4 kinds of apps that people use the most often. Here are the results. People who are teachers and students use education apps a lot. Most of young girls like using photo and video apps. Many office ladies are fond of shopping apps like Amazon. A large number of young people like communication apps best, such as Ding talk. It’s clear that the mobile phone is used as not only a communication tool, but also a wonderful way to make people’s life more convenient and interesting.
As for me, I spend one hour a day learning English on an education app. With its help, I have made great progress in English.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为看图作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求根据调查结果,简要说明各类app的使用情况,最后不要忘记“谈谈自己的看法及介绍自己常用的app”,注意逻辑清晰,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据调查结果,介绍各类app的使用情况;
第二步,谈谈自己的看法;
第三步,介绍自己常用的app。
[亮点词汇]
①be fond of喜欢
②a large number of很多的
③make great progress取得很大进步
[高分句型]
①It’s clear that the mobile phone is used as not only a communication tool, but also a wonderful way to make people’s life more convenient and interesting.(not only...but also连接两个并列成分)
②With its help, I have made great progress in English.(with独立结构作原因状语)
7.例文
Dear Mike,
Nice to hear from you. Great changes have taken place in China in recent decades. Our living standards have greatly improved. For example, we used to pay paper money when shopping. Now we have WeChat and Alipay. You can pay with your mobile phone. In the past, we used to communicate face-to-face. Now we can communicate with WeChat and QQ. Chinese wood carving has a history of more than 4000 years. It needs to be carved, polished and colored. In fact, it is people’s good expectation and wish for life. It also represents China’s national culture.
In addition, I’m not very good at English listening and writing. Can you give me some good ways to learn them
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为看图作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,从支付以及交流方式两方面介绍过去和现在的不同;
第二步,介绍木雕的有关情况。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②for example例如
③used to do sth过去常常做某事
④in fact事实上
[高分句型]
①For example, we used to pay paper money when shopping(动词不定式作宾语)
②Can you give me some good ways to learn them(动词不定式作定语)
8.参考例文
Dear headmaster,
This is Danny. I want to apply to the school for a new club—English club, because we don’t have much time to use English in our daily life. I want to increase the opportunities for students to use English through the activities in this club. Anyone who loves English or wants to improve his or her English can join us, no matter which grade he or she is in. We plan to hold some activities related to English learning in the small meeting room in the school library from 7:30 to 9:30 every Friday night. We will organize this club in many ways, with a group of leading students organize every activity properly.
I really hope our English club can be started with the support of the school. Thank you!
Yours,
Danny
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封申请信,属于书信作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明写信意图,说明申请什么社团;
第二步,根据要点提示,分别阐述开办社团的原因、谁可加入、何时何地举办何种活动以及如何运营社团等,可列举具体的事例;
第三步,表达希望学校支持的希望并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①related to与……有关的
②organize every activity properly尽善尽美地组织每次活动
③with the support of在……的支持下
[高分句型]
①I want to apply to the school for a new club—English club, because we don’t have much time to use English in our daily life.(because引导原因状语从句)
②Anyone who loves English or wants to improve his or her English can join us, no matter which grade he or she is in.(who引导限制性定语从句;no matter which引导让步状语从句)
9.例文:
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you. We haven’t seen each other for three years. How is it going I have changed a lot since three years ago. You know I used to be short and heavy, but I am tall and thin now. I am more outgoing than I was three years ago. I also study harder and I get better grades now. What about you Do you have any changes
I am glad that you are going to take a trip to Chengdu during the Spring Festival. You will get to Chengdu Shuangliu International Airport at 10 a.m. on January 15th, 2023, I will meet you then at Exit 1 and I will wear a red coat.
During your visit, you will visit places of interest in Chengdu with me and taste different Sichuang food. It is really delicious. Of course, we will eat dumplings on the Spring Festival, the most important festival in China. Family will get together happily and enjoy a big meal during it.
I believe you will have a good time. By the way, can you teach me two ways to improve my English I look forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时,一般过去时,一般将来时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“请在信中礼貌地向他请教两条提升英语的方法”一项,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山介绍两人三年没见,自己的变化;
第二步,阐明对方将要来很开心,将会去机场接他,并制定了旅行计划,也向对方简单介绍春节;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的祝福,并顺便请教学好英语的方法。
[亮点词汇]
① used to 曾经
②get together团聚
③have a good time玩得开心
④by the way顺便问一下
[高分句型]
①I am more outgoing than I was three years ago. (运用形容词比较级)
②We haven’t seen each other for three years. (运用现在完成时)
10.例文:
Volunteer for the Universiade
Dear Organizing Committee,
I know that the Universiade will be held here soon. I want to apply to be one of the volunteers. I am a Junior High School student. I am good at English, especially oral English. I like sports. I often play basketball with my friends in my spare time. I’m also in the Green Earth Club at my school. We often share some knowledge about environmental protection with other students.
If I can become a volunteer, I will communicate with college students from other countries in English, so that they can better understand our city. I will also tell the knowledge of protecting the earth to them, so that they can become an environmentalist during the Games.
I hope the organizing committee can agree with me to become a volunteer. I believe I will do better. I also hope that the Universiade can be held successfully in Chengdu.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文,应聘志愿者的文章;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,包括自己能做什么、计划以及原因等。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的个人信息以及能做的事情;
第二步,具体介绍成为志愿者的一些计划及原因;
第三步,最后是叙述自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① be good at擅长
② share sth with sb和某人分享某物
③ communicate with与……交流
[高分句型]
① I also hope that the Universiade can be held successfully in Chengdu.(that引导的宾语从句)
② If I can become a volunteer, I will communicate with college students from other countries in English(if引导的条件状语从句)
11.A possible version:
Hello, everyone! Today I will talk about online learning.
It has many advantages. When we are ill, we can study at home. Besides, we can watch the video again when meeting problems.
However, there are some problems. Students are sometimes late for classes and some even play computer games in class. Some have arguments with their parents. To be good learners, we should follow rules of online learning. We’d better keep a balance between learning and playing. If necessary, have proper communication with parents.
Hope everyone can be a good learner. Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据图示内容,介绍在线学习的相关内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明谈论的主题是在线学习;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,介绍在线学习的优点和问题并给出建议;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①talk about谈论关于
②be late for迟到
③have arguments with sb与某人争论
④keep a balance保持平衡
[高分句型]
①When we are ill, we can study at home.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Students are sometimes late for classes and some even play computer games in class.(and连接并列句)
12.例文
Dear classmates,
Good afternoon! I’m honored to report my group’s online discussion to you about how to get on well with others.
Different people have different opinions on it. Jean usually understands whatever others do because it’s reasonable for them. Victor believes a good speaker is as important as a listener, so he shares happiness and sadness with others. Emily says being honest plays a main role as a good friendship is based on trusting each other. Billy always tries not to trouble others since a friendship is hurt by bad behaviors.
For me, I always smile at my friends because it can make them comfortable. Besides, I usually try to help them, which can make them feel warm.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文,为演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求根据线上讨论的结果,谈谈大家对“如何与人相处融洽”的不同观点,以及你自己的观点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,陈述图表中不同观点及理由;
第二步,表述你的观点及两点理由;
第三步,书写结语。感谢大家的聆听。
[亮点词汇]
①be reasonable for对……来说是合理的
②as...as和……一样
③share...with...与……分享……
④be based on以……为基础
⑤smile at朝……微笑
[高分句型]
①Jean usually understands whatever others do because it’s reasonable for them.(because引导的原因状语从句;whatever引导的宾语从句)
②Billy always tries not to trouble others since a friendship is hurt by bad behaviors.(since引导的原因状语从句)
③Besides, I usually try to help them, which can make them feel warm.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)