外研版（2019）必修 第二册Unit 4 Stage and screen解透单元写作学案

Unit4 解透单元写作
主题写作—舞台与荧屏
1.写作任务
假定你是李华，学生会组织同学们观看了一位女导演编导的电影“Hi, Mom”（《你好，李焕英》），请为校刊“英语天地”投稿，主要内容包括：
（1）影片内容简介；
（2）你对这部电影的评价；
（3）你的感悟。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Madam or Sir，
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2.写作思路（一审、二定、三明确）
（1）一审：体裁、结构与主题
体裁：应用文—影评
结构：三段
第一段：影片内容简介
第二段：电影评价
第三段：你的感悟
主题：观影通知
（2）二定：时态与人称
时态：以一般现在时为主
人称：第三人称
（3）三明确：写作要点
①影片内容简介
②电影评价
③你的感悟
3.素材整理
（1）关键词语
box office票房
box office receipts票房收入
box office attraction票房吸引力
get across解释清楚，传达
ever-increasing ady.不断增长的
first-rate adj.第一流的；质量最优的
appeal to吸引
well-received ad.受到欢迎的
live up to符合（标准）；不辜负（他人的期望）
adapt to适应于…
be aware of意识到
be classified as..被归类为
be devoted to专心于，献身于
be ignorant of对…不知道，不了解
broaden one's horizon拓宽某人视野
in favor of有利于；支持，赞同
tick all the right boxes事情发展如人所愿，一切顺利
release the pressure释放压力
result in导致
we cannot ignore the fact that.我们无法忽视……这事实
there is no denying the fact that.不可否认
there is no doubt that/undoubtedly毫无疑问be believed to被认为…
（2）完成句子
①Written and directed by a female director, Hi Mom fictionalizes a time-travel story to ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ her late mother Li Huanying.
《你好，李焕英》由一位女导演自编自导，通过一个穿越的故事来表达自己对已故母亲李焕英的情感。
② In the cinematic plots, ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ is that the director arranged for her mother to ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ life.
在电影的情节中，吸引我们的是导演安排她的母亲改变她“令人尴尬和失望”的生活。
③But the mother said, “Speaking of my future daughter. I just want her ________ ________ ________ ________ ________.”
但这位母亲说：“谈到我未来的女儿，我只想让她健康快乐就行了。”
④________ ________ ________ ________, the film, which is a tearjerker, absolutely ________ ________ ________ the audience.
尽管是一部喜剧，但这部催人泪下的电影绝对不会辜负观众。
⑤I wish all the parents of the world ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ for ever.
我希望世界上所有的父母永远都能一切顺利。
Keys: ①get across her emotion to ② what is appealing us; transform her “awkward and disappointing” ③to be healthy and happy ④Comedy as it is; lives up to ⑤tick all the right boxes
4. 高分作文（注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇）
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、要点全面的短文
Dear Madam or sir,
Written and directed by a female director, Hi, Mom fictionalizes a time-travel story to get across her emotion to her late mother Li huanying.
In the cinematic plots, what is appealing to us is that the director arranged for her mother to transform her awkward and disappointing” life. But the mother said, "Speaking of my future daughter, I just want her to be healthy and happy. Comedy as it is, the film, which is a tearjerker absolutely lives up to the audience.
I wish all the parents of the world tick all the right boxes for ever
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第一段：影片内容简介句型：第一句，使用了过去分词短语 Written and directied by…作状语。
第二段：对这部电影的评价。
第三段：威悟。
第二句使用了what引导的主语
从句 what is appealing to us（wat在主语从句中作主语）及that引导的表语从句 that the director arranged for her mother to transform her"awkward and disappointing"je（that在表语从句中不作成分，无词义，不可省略）；第四句，使用了as引导的让步状语从句的倒装句 Comedy as it is；并且使用了 which引导的非制性定语从句 which is a tearjerker，饰先行词 the film。
5.佳作背诵
（1）佳作
假定你是李华，看到你校英语刊物关于“影视作品对青少年的影响”的征稿启事。请你写一封稿件，内容包括以下几点：
①大数据时代，青少年群体从一些方面深受影响；
②影视作品对青少年产生较大的影响；
③在大数据时代，社会、学校、家长应齐心协力，促使青少年形成正确的影视观。
注意：①词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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One possible version:
In the era of big data, young people are absolutely affected from several aspects. With their vivid plot evolution exaggerated techniques, epic wonderland and profound emotional interaction film and television works form an explosive and incredible attraction to teenagers.
In the era of big data, society, schools and parents should shoulder the responsibility to create film and television works living up to the society.
Schools should also set up film and television courses to get across a correct view of film and television works. We should overcome the negative influence and provide a healthy film and television culture for teenagers.
（2）佳作二
假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Tom一直喜欢中国功夫。请你写信邀请他来参加武术文化节，并告知他具体的活动内容，例如时间、地点等。
注意：①词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’m extremely glad that you are interested in Chinese Kungfu, so I invite you to take part in the appealing martial Arts festival.
The festival will be held in the tv studio hall next Saturday. First, we can visit an epic exhibit, from which we can watch a documentary about the history of Martial Arts Festival. Besides, there are several Martial Arts performances and competitions worth appreciating. Having finished that we will taste some super local snacks, such as xiaolongbao Shaanxi liang pi, Lanzhou ramen and so on.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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