外研版（2019）必修 第二册Unit 6 Earth first Writing 主题写作讲与练学案（含答案）
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Unit6 Writing 主题写作讲与练
应用文写作
一、写作题目
1.假定你是李华，你校即将举行主题为“Let's go green now”的英语演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，要点包括：
（1）倡导绿色生活的原因；
（2）实践途径（至少三点）。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
Boys and girls,
I'm honored to give the speech.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you.
思路点拨
主题 环境保护，绿色生活 体裁 应用文
人称 第一、三人称 时态 以一般现在时为主
布局 第一部分：说明倡导绿色生活的原因； 第二部分：提出实践途径（至少三点）。
遣词造句
一、用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1.________……的数量
2. ________造成
3. ________提高人们的……意识
4. ________为了
5. ________v.排放
二、本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
（1）随着社会和经济的发展，私家车的数量正在以惊人的速度增长。
________ ________ ________ ________the society and economy, the number of private cars is ________ at surprising speed.
（2）众所周知，汽车排放二氧化碳，这会造成全球变暖、自然灾害频发、疾病等。
As we all know, cars ________ carbon dioxide.It causes ________ ________, frequent natural disasters, diseases and so on.
（3）为了保护我们的地球，到了我们环保的时候了。
________ ________ ________ protect our earth, it is time for us to go green.
2.根据汉语意思翻译句子
（4）首先，我们应该提高人们对环保的重要性的意识。
_____________________________________________________________________
（5）其次，使用公共交通或骑自行车而不开私家车对这个问题有很大作用。
_____________________________________________________________________
（6）我们应该充分利用水、电、纸张、食物等。
_____________________________________________________________________
（7）在我们日常生活中把垃圾分类并将其回收利用是个好主意。
_____________________________________________________________________
3.句式升级
（8）使用现在分词作结果状语改写句（2）
_____________________________________________________________________
（9）使用“It's high time that…”句式升级句（3）
_____________________________________________________________________
连句成篇
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
二、实战演练
近日你所在的学校开展了一项以“为建设节约型社会献一计”为主题的活动，同学们提出了许多建议。假如你是学生会主席李华，请你针对此次活动发表一篇演讲，要点包括：
（1）不浪费粮食和纸张；
（2）尽量不使用一次性筷子、塑料袋；
（3）毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节；
（3）开头已经为你写好，不计人总词数。
参考词汇：一次性筷子disposable chopsticks
Dear teachers and fellow students,
I'm honored to give the speech. _____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
概要写作
一、写作题目
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
A 7. l-magnitude quake toppled（使倒塌）houses, cut off power and first-aid materials' supply in Yushu, Qinghai Province on Wednesday.
Rescuers have set up more than 40 tents for survivors in the Gyegu Town, near the epicenter（震中）in the Tibetan Autonomous Prefecture of Yushu in southern Qinghai. But the effort seems far less than enough for the area inhabited（居住于）by some 100,000 people. Many people sought temporary shelters in buildings that remained unaffected by the tremor（轻微地震）. In the yard of Yushu's Sports Committee, nearly 1, 000 people were sitting or lying on the ground in sheer（完全的）darkness. Some wrapped themselves up with quilts taken out from the debris（残骸）. Some brought their own tents and others turned on the lights of motorcycles.
The National Meteorological Station forecast on Wednesday that temperatures may hit minus 3 degrees Celsius at night and 15 degrees Celsius in the daytime in the coming days. The town will see strong winds and sunny weather in the coming days, providing favorable conditions for rescue operations.
The town is located in a remote area in Qinghai and the quake and ensuing（随后发生的）landslides have damaged roads, causing great difficulties for rescuers and, especially, machines to enter the region. In addition, rescuers may easily get exhausted
（筋疲力尽的）working at a place with an altitude （海拔）of above 4,000 meters. Thousands of rescuers and medical staff are rushing to Yushu from many regions of China, bringing machines, disaster-relief materials and medicines to the quake-hit town. The government, organizations, enterprises and individuals are offering donations of money and materials to the region.
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
文本分析
（1）语篇解读
主题语境：人与社会——社会救助
语篇类型：新闻报道
文章大意：该新闻报道了青海玉树地震发生后的灾民状况、天气条件以及救灾情况。
（2）段落主题
该篇文章是一个总分的结构，第一段陈述发生的事件，下面四段分别从几个方面详细阐述该事件。各段的主旨大意如下：
第一段：A 7.l-magnitude quake occurred in Yushu, Qinghai Province on Wednesday.
第二段：The survivors relied on the tents. But because there were not enough tents, many people sought temporary shelters or even sat or lied on the ground in darkness.
第三段：The weather provided favorable conditions for rescue operations.
第四段：The damaged roads caused great difficulties for rescuers and machines to enter the region. The high altitude made rescuers easily get exhausted.
第五段：A lot of rescuers, medical staff and disaster-relief materials are being sent to Yushu.
筛选、整合信息、转换表达
1.第一段的主旨大意可以概括为要点1。其中的occurred in可以转换表达为________，表示“产生不好的影响；打击”。
2.第二段的主旨大意可以概括为要点2。结合第二段的主旨大意来看，the survivors有三种状态，即________、________和sat or lied on the ground in darkness，sat or lied on the ground in darkness即待在外面，用英文表述为because there were not enough tents是一个because引导的原因状语从句，可以转换表达为because of短语，not enough可以转换表达为________，表示“有限的”。
3.第三段和第四段的主旨大意可以概括为要点3。第三段描述的是救援的有利因素，第四段描述的是救援的不利因素，重点是突出不利因素的展示，所以有利因素可以用“介词despite+宾语”来表示，不利因素有两方面，即________和________这两方面的不利因素对救援活动造成了很大的困难。
4.第五段的主旨大意可以概括为要点4。要点4是在陈述希望，所以可以用________与要点3衔接。
连句成篇
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、实战演练
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
In our modern world, when s something wears out, we throw it away and buy a new one. The problem is that countries around the world have been growing mountains of rubbish because people are throwing away more rubbish than ever before.
How did we become a throwaway society First of all, it is now easier to replace an object than to spend time and money repairing it. Thanks to modern manufacturing（制造业）and technology, companies are able to produce products quickly and inexpensively. Products are plentiful and cheap.
Another cause is our love of disposable products. As busy people, we are always looking for ways to save time and make our lives panies produce thousands of different kinds of disposable products: paper plates, plastic cups, and disposable plastic bags, to name a few.
Our appetites for new products also contribute to the problem. We are addicted to buying new things. Advertisements persuade us that newer products are better and that we will be happier with the latest products. The result is that we throw a away useful possessions to make room for new ones.
All a around the world, we can see the consequences of this throwaway lifestyle. Mountains of rubbish just keep getting bigger. To decrease the amount of rubbish and to protect the environment, more governments are requiring people to recycle materials. However, this is not enough to solve our problem.
Maybe there is another way out. We need to repair our possessions instead of throwing them away. We also need to rethink our attitudes to repairing. Repairing our possessions and changing our spending habits may be the best way to reduce the amount of rubbish and take care of our environment.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
应用文写作
遣词造句
一、用本单元所学单词或短语填空
答案
1.the number of... 2.cause 3.raise people's awareness of...
4.in order to 5.release
二、本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
（1）With the development of; increasing
（2）release; global warming
（3）In order to
2.根据汉语意思翻译句子
（4）Firstly, we should raise people's awareness of the importance of going green.
（5）Secondly, using public transportation or riding bicycles instead of using private cars can make a great difference to the problem.
（6）We should take full advantage of water, electricity, paper, food and so on.
（7）It is a good idea to classify our rubbish and recycle it in our daily life.
3.句式升级
（8）As we all know, cars release carbon dioxide, causing global warming, frequent natural disasters, diseases and so on.
（9）In order to protect our earth, it is high time that we went green.
连句成篇
参考范文
Boys and girls,
I'm honored to give the speech. With the development of the society and economy, the number of private cars is increasing at surprising speed. As we all know, cars release carbon dioxide, causing global warming, frequent natural disasters, diseases and so on. In order to protect our earth, it is high time that we went green.
Firstly, we should raise people's awareness of the importance of going green. Secondly, using public transportation or riding bicycles instead of using private cars can make a great difference to the problem. What's more, we should take full advantage of water, electricity, paper, food and so on. Last but not least, it is a good idea to classify our rubbish and recycle it in our daily life.
Thank you.
二、实战演练
One possible version:
Dear teachers and fellow students,
I'm honored to give the speech. Recently, there has been an activity of "Providing advice for building an energy-saving society" in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.
Some students suggest that we shouldn't waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown away but be recycled.
Actually, there are still quite a lot of things that we can easily do. For example, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.
Thank you.
概要写作
筛选、整合信息、转换表达
1.hit
2.relied on the tents; sought temporary shelters; stayed outdoors; limited
3.the damaged roads; the high altitude
4.Luckily
连句成篇
参考范文
A 7.1-magnitude quake hit Yushu, Qinghai Province on Wednesday.（要点1）The survivors relied on the tents, and because of limited tents, many people sought temporary shelters or stayed outdoors.（要点2）Despite the favorable weather conditions, the damaged roads and the high altitude caused great difficulties for the rescue work.（要点3）Luckily, a lot of rescuers, medical staff and disaster-relief materials are being sent to Yushu.（要点4）
二、实战演练
语篇内容解读
本文是一篇议论文，主题语境是人与自然，主题语境内容是环境保护。文章主要论述了在现代社会，人们往往会把用坏的东西扔掉，主要原因有三个方面：1.更换比修理更方便，更经济；2.我们对一次性产品的偏爱；3.我们容易对新事物上瘾。为了保护环境，我们应倡导使用可循环利用的材料，少购买多维修，改变消费习惯。
文章脉络分析
One possible version:
With more things thrown away, there is an increasing amount of rubbish worldwide.（要点1）Some factors may account for this phenomenon. （要点2）Firstly, compared to repairing, substituting an item is easier due to abundant and cheap goods available. （要点3）Secondly, our preference for disposable and new products also worsens the problem.（要点4）The solution lies in recycling materials and fixing broken objects. But more importantly, we should change our consumption habits.（要点5）
写作建议
本题要求学生在正确理解文章的基础上，在不改变原文中心的前提下，用简明、精炼的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。对于概要写作的文章主要从以下几个方面进行评价（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；（3）上下文的连贯性；（4）对各要点表达的独立性情况。在概要写作中，拼写与标点符号被视为评价语言准确性的一个重要方面，而书写较差将直接影响评分档次。
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应用文写作
一、写作题目
1.假定你是李华，你校即将举行主题为“Let's go green now”的英语演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，要点包括：
（1）倡导绿色生活的原因；
（2）实践途径（至少三点）。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
Boys and girls,
I'm honored to give the speech.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you.
思路点拨
主题 环境保护，绿色生活 体裁 应用文
人称 第一、三人称 时态 以一般现在时为主
布局 第一部分：说明倡导绿色生活的原因； 第二部分：提出实践途径（至少三点）。
遣词造句
一、用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1.________……的数量
2. ________造成
3. ________提高人们的……意识
4. ________为了
5. ________v.排放
二、本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
（1）随着社会和经济的发展，私家车的数量正在以惊人的速度增长。
________ ________ ________ ________the society and economy, the number of private cars is ________ at surprising speed.
（2）众所周知，汽车排放二氧化碳，这会造成全球变暖、自然灾害频发、疾病等。
As we all know, cars ________ carbon dioxide.It causes ________ ________, frequent natural disasters, diseases and so on.
（3）为了保护我们的地球，到了我们环保的时候了。
________ ________ ________ protect our earth, it is time for us to go green.
2.根据汉语意思翻译句子
（4）首先，我们应该提高人们对环保的重要性的意识。
_____________________________________________________________________
（5）其次，使用公共交通或骑自行车而不开私家车对这个问题有很大作用。
_____________________________________________________________________
（6）我们应该充分利用水、电、纸张、食物等。
_____________________________________________________________________
（7）在我们日常生活中把垃圾分类并将其回收利用是个好主意。
_____________________________________________________________________
3.句式升级
（8）使用现在分词作结果状语改写句（2）
_____________________________________________________________________
（9）使用“It's high time that…”句式升级句（3）
_____________________________________________________________________
连句成篇
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
二、实战演练
近日你所在的学校开展了一项以“为建设节约型社会献一计”为主题的活动，同学们提出了许多建议。假如你是学生会主席李华，请你针对此次活动发表一篇演讲，要点包括：
（1）不浪费粮食和纸张；
（2）尽量不使用一次性筷子、塑料袋；
（3）毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节；
（3）开头已经为你写好，不计人总词数。
参考词汇：一次性筷子disposable chopsticks
Dear teachers and fellow students,
I'm honored to give the speech. _____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
概要写作
一、写作题目
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
A 7. l-magnitude quake toppled（使倒塌）houses, cut off power and first-aid materials' supply in Yushu, Qinghai Province on Wednesday.
Rescuers have set up more than 40 tents for survivors in the Gyegu Town, near the epicenter（震中）in the Tibetan Autonomous Prefecture of Yushu in southern Qinghai. But the effort seems far less than enough for the area inhabited（居住于）by some 100,000 people. Many people sought temporary shelters in buildings that remained unaffected by the tremor（轻微地震）. In the yard of Yushu's Sports Committee, nearly 1, 000 people were sitting or lying on the ground in sheer（完全的）darkness. Some wrapped themselves up with quilts taken out from the debris（残骸）. Some brought their own tents and others turned on the lights of motorcycles.
The National Meteorological Station forecast on Wednesday that temperatures may hit minus 3 degrees Celsius at night and 15 degrees Celsius in the daytime in the coming days. The town will see strong winds and sunny weather in the coming days, providing favorable conditions for rescue operations.
The town is located in a remote area in Qinghai and the quake and ensuing（随后发生的）landslides have damaged roads, causing great difficulties for rescuers and, especially, machines to enter the region. In addition, rescuers may easily get exhausted
（筋疲力尽的）working at a place with an altitude （海拔）of above 4,000 meters. Thousands of rescuers and medical staff are rushing to Yushu from many regions of China, bringing machines, disaster-relief materials and medicines to the quake-hit town. The government, organizations, enterprises and individuals are offering donations of money and materials to the region.
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
文本分析
（1）语篇解读
主题语境：人与社会——社会救助
语篇类型：新闻报道
文章大意：该新闻报道了青海玉树地震发生后的灾民状况、天气条件以及救灾情况。
（2）段落主题
该篇文章是一个总分的结构，第一段陈述发生的事件，下面四段分别从几个方面详细阐述该事件。各段的主旨大意如下：
第一段：A 7.l-magnitude quake occurred in Yushu, Qinghai Province on Wednesday.
第二段：The survivors relied on the tents. But because there were not enough tents, many people sought temporary shelters or even sat or lied on the ground in darkness.
第三段：The weather provided favorable conditions for rescue operations.
第四段：The damaged roads caused great difficulties for rescuers and machines to enter the region. The high altitude made rescuers easily get exhausted.
第五段：A lot of rescuers, medical staff and disaster-relief materials are being sent to Yushu.
筛选、整合信息、转换表达
1.第一段的主旨大意可以概括为要点1。其中的occurred in可以转换表达为________，表示“产生不好的影响；打击”。
2.第二段的主旨大意可以概括为要点2。结合第二段的主旨大意来看，the survivors有三种状态，即________、________和sat or lied on the ground in darkness，sat or lied on the ground in darkness即待在外面，用英文表述为because there were not enough tents是一个because引导的原因状语从句，可以转换表达为because of短语，not enough可以转换表达为________，表示“有限的”。
3.第三段和第四段的主旨大意可以概括为要点3。第三段描述的是救援的有利因素，第四段描述的是救援的不利因素，重点是突出不利因素的展示，所以有利因素可以用“介词despite+宾语”来表示，不利因素有两方面，即________和________这两方面的不利因素对救援活动造成了很大的困难。
4.第五段的主旨大意可以概括为要点4。要点4是在陈述希望，所以可以用________与要点3衔接。
连句成篇
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、实战演练
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
In our modern world, when s something wears out, we throw it away and buy a new one. The problem is that countries around the world have been growing mountains of rubbish because people are throwing away more rubbish than ever before.
How did we become a throwaway society First of all, it is now easier to replace an object than to spend time and money repairing it. Thanks to modern manufacturing（制造业）and technology, companies are able to produce products quickly and inexpensively. Products are plentiful and cheap.
Another cause is our love of disposable products. As busy people, we are always looking for ways to save time and make our lives panies produce thousands of different kinds of disposable products: paper plates, plastic cups, and disposable plastic bags, to name a few.
Our appetites for new products also contribute to the problem. We are addicted to buying new things. Advertisements persuade us that newer products are better and that we will be happier with the latest products. The result is that we throw a away useful possessions to make room for new ones.
All a around the world, we can see the consequences of this throwaway lifestyle. Mountains of rubbish just keep getting bigger. To decrease the amount of rubbish and to protect the environment, more governments are requiring people to recycle materials. However, this is not enough to solve our problem.
Maybe there is another way out. We need to repair our possessions instead of throwing them away. We also need to rethink our attitudes to repairing. Repairing our possessions and changing our spending habits may be the best way to reduce the amount of rubbish and take care of our environment.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
应用文写作
遣词造句
一、用本单元所学单词或短语填空
答案
1.the number of... 2.cause 3.raise people's awareness of...
4.in order to 5.release
二、本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
（1）With the development of; increasing
（2）release; global warming
（3）In order to
2.根据汉语意思翻译句子
（4）Firstly, we should raise people's awareness of the importance of going green.
（5）Secondly, using public transportation or riding bicycles instead of using private cars can make a great difference to the problem.
（6）We should take full advantage of water, electricity, paper, food and so on.
（7）It is a good idea to classify our rubbish and recycle it in our daily life.
3.句式升级
（8）As we all know, cars release carbon dioxide, causing global warming, frequent natural disasters, diseases and so on.
（9）In order to protect our earth, it is high time that we went green.
连句成篇
参考范文
Boys and girls,
I'm honored to give the speech. With the development of the society and economy, the number of private cars is increasing at surprising speed. As we all know, cars release carbon dioxide, causing global warming, frequent natural disasters, diseases and so on. In order to protect our earth, it is high time that we went green.
Firstly, we should raise people's awareness of the importance of going green. Secondly, using public transportation or riding bicycles instead of using private cars can make a great difference to the problem. What's more, we should take full advantage of water, electricity, paper, food and so on. Last but not least, it is a good idea to classify our rubbish and recycle it in our daily life.
Thank you.
二、实战演练
One possible version:
Dear teachers and fellow students,
I'm honored to give the speech. Recently, there has been an activity of "Providing advice for building an energy-saving society" in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.
Some students suggest that we shouldn't waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown away but be recycled.
Actually, there are still quite a lot of things that we can easily do. For example, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.
Thank you.
概要写作
筛选、整合信息、转换表达
1.hit
2.relied on the tents; sought temporary shelters; stayed outdoors; limited
3.the damaged roads; the high altitude
4.Luckily
连句成篇
参考范文
A 7.1-magnitude quake hit Yushu, Qinghai Province on Wednesday.（要点1）The survivors relied on the tents, and because of limited tents, many people sought temporary shelters or stayed outdoors.（要点2）Despite the favorable weather conditions, the damaged roads and the high altitude caused great difficulties for the rescue work.（要点3）Luckily, a lot of rescuers, medical staff and disaster-relief materials are being sent to Yushu.（要点4）
二、实战演练
语篇内容解读
本文是一篇议论文，主题语境是人与自然，主题语境内容是环境保护。文章主要论述了在现代社会，人们往往会把用坏的东西扔掉，主要原因有三个方面：1.更换比修理更方便，更经济；2.我们对一次性产品的偏爱；3.我们容易对新事物上瘾。为了保护环境，我们应倡导使用可循环利用的材料，少购买多维修，改变消费习惯。
文章脉络分析
One possible version:
With more things thrown away, there is an increasing amount of rubbish worldwide.（要点1）Some factors may account for this phenomenon. （要点2）Firstly, compared to repairing, substituting an item is easier due to abundant and cheap goods available. （要点3）Secondly, our preference for disposable and new products also worsens the problem.（要点4）The solution lies in recycling materials and fixing broken objects. But more importantly, we should change our consumption habits.（要点5）
写作建议
本题要求学生在正确理解文章的基础上，在不改变原文中心的前提下，用简明、精炼的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。对于概要写作的文章主要从以下几个方面进行评价（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；（3）上下文的连贯性；（4）对各要点表达的独立性情况。在概要写作中，拼写与标点符号被视为评价语言准确性的一个重要方面，而书写较差将直接影响评分档次。
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